Awesome narration.....
Perfectly blended three scenes
1. Chamanlal uneasyness
2. Sadi anxiousness
3. Sonu and Poonam foreplay - Sonu's excitement, Poonam hesitation and shyness but at the same time she's opening both verbally and practically - good she has no guilt what she is going to do
4. Let this time Chamanlal car gets puncherd or broken and he arrive after one and let his mobile also not working - don't want a spoil iin Sonu and Poonam love making......
Rest up to you - your story imagination is better than us - just a suggestion from readers end.....
Thank you.........