Fantasy Betrayal

[Smith_15]

Update

 

[Smith_15]

Either reply or tell us when will the update come.

 

[Naik]

Update please brother

 

[Smith_15]

I think writer has no time to reply wheather he will continue the story or not.

 

[Naik]

Next update please brother

 

[Nightwolf_17]

Bhai atleast itna to bata do ki aage likhoge ki nahi

 

[Isaac]

Bhai log story mere dil ke karib hai ... But update nahi de paata hun i know .... Aaj mai update dunga .... Or badhiyan dunga ... But iske baad kab dun i dont know .... Mai story complete karunga ...... Jisko padhni hai padho ... But i garentee ki apko mazza ayege .
... Aaj ka update before 1 am

 

[Isaac]

Update 5 ..

Recape ..
Nishas ekk ladke ka gala pakde hui thi or mai uska hanth pakde hue tha ....

Abb aage ..

Nisha lagatar mujhe ghur rahi thi ... Or mai usse .... Tabhi bich mai naina aa jati hai or woh humme agal karti hai ....

Naina - bus bohot hua ... Abb chodo or mera or nisha ka hanth chhoot jaata hai ... Or naina nisha ko leke wahan se chali jati hai ....

Mai uss ladke ko sambhalta hun jo saala bilkul admara ho gaya tha
.. Mai usse pani pilata hun ... To thoda thik hone ke baad woh mujhse bolta hai ...

Ladka - thankyou bhai jo tune bachha liya .. Warna woh saali to aaj maar hi deti ...

Mai - koi baat nahi itna asaan hai kissi ko marna ..

Ladka - waise pehli baar tumhe dekha hai ... Naam kya hai tumhara ...

Mai - mera naam ADI hai . mai new addmission hun ... Or ajj pehla din hai mera ... But pehle din hi aisa kuch dekhna padega socha nahi tha ... Waise tera kya naam hai ...

Ladka - mera naam Akash hai .... Mere dad yahan ke mla hai ...

Mai - mla ke ladke se aisi harkat ... Kissi bade ghar ki ladki ko ched diya kya ...

Akash - cheda nahi yaar . i really love her ... Aaj tak kissi ladki ke taraf dekha tak nahi kewal padhai pe hi dhyan diya but pehli baar kissi pe dil ayya hai
... Or jab usse bola to dekho kya hua ....

Mai - koi nahi sab thik hoga .... Waise mera bhi aaj pehla hi din hai collage mai
..
Akash - chal aaj se tu mera dost ... Tujhe koi bhi jarurat ho mujhe batana

Maine ekk second uski tarak dekha or man mai khub hassa

Mai - chal mai thodi der mai milta hun tujhse

....

After some time ....

"" aaj ke baad plzzz mere kaam ke bich maat anna aap ,"""

Yeh nisha thi jo abhi gusse mai mujhe dekh rahi thi ....

Waise dekha jaye to galti uski bhi nahi thi .... Usko patta tha ki agar uss time woh aisa react nahi karti to ... Akash ki body abhi zameen se 4 feet andar hoti ...
Mai laggatar usse dekh raha tha or suddenly uski kamar pakadke apni taraf kicha or usse kiss karne lagga ...


Pehle to usne rokne ki koshish ki but phir woh bhi sath dene laggi

Thodi der mai hamari kiss shant hui to woh boli


Nisha - promise me ki aab uss ladke ke sath kuch bhi galat nahi karenge ...

Mai thoda sa smile ke sath ...

Devil ka law to tum janti hi ho ... Ankh ke badle ankh ... Kaan ke badle kaan ... Or behen ke badle ....


Or itna bolke mai zor zor se hansne laga .... Hahahahaahahahahahaha




...

 

[Naik]

Update 5 ..

Recape ..
Nishas ekk ladke ka gala pakde hui thi or mai uska hanth pakde hue tha ....

Abb aage ..

Nisha lagatar mujhe ghur rahi thi ... Or mai usse .... Tabhi bich mai naina aa jati hai or woh humme agal karti hai ....

Naina - bus bohot hua ... Abb chodo or mera or nisha ka hanth chhoot jaata hai ... Or naina nisha ko leke wahan se chali jati hai ....

Mai uss ladke ko sambhalta hun jo saala bilkul admara ho gaya tha
.. Mai usse pani pilata hun ... To thoda thik hone ke baad woh mujhse bolta hai ...

Ladka - thankyou bhai jo tune bachha liya .. Warna woh saali to aaj maar hi deti ...

Mai - koi baat nahi itna asaan hai kissi ko marna ..

Ladka - waise pehli baar tumhe dekha hai ... Naam kya hai tumhara ...

Mai - mera naam ADI hai . mai new addmission hun ... Or ajj pehla din hai mera ... But pehle din hi aisa kuch dekhna padega socha nahi tha ... Waise tera kya naam hai ...

Ladka - mera naam Akash hai .... Mere dad yahan ke mla hai ...

Mai - mla ke ladke se aisi harkat ... Kissi bade ghar ki ladki ko ched diya kya ...

Akash - cheda nahi yaar . i really love her ... Aaj tak kissi ladki ke taraf dekha tak nahi kewal padhai pe hi dhyan diya but pehli baar kissi pe dil ayya hai
... Or jab usse bola to dekho kya hua ....

Mai - koi nahi sab thik hoga .... Waise mera bhi aaj pehla hi din hai collage mai
..
Akash - chal aaj se tu mera dost ... Tujhe koi bhi jarurat ho mujhe batana

Maine ekk second uski tarak dekha or man mai khub hassa

Mai - chal mai thodi der mai milta hun tujhse

....

After some time ....

"" aaj ke baad plzzz mere kaam ke bich maat anna aap ,"""

Yeh nisha thi jo abhi gusse mai mujhe dekh rahi thi ....

Waise dekha jaye to galti uski bhi nahi thi .... Usko patta tha ki agar uss time woh aisa react nahi karti to ... Akash ki body abhi zameen se 4 feet andar hoti ...
Mai laggatar usse dekh raha tha or suddenly uski kamar pakadke apni taraf kicha or usse kiss karne lagga ...


Pehle to usne rokne ki koshish ki but phir woh bhi sath dene laggi

Thodi der mai hamari kiss shant hui to woh boli


Nisha - promise me ki aab uss ladke ke sath kuch bhi galat nahi karenge ...

Mai thoda sa smile ke sath ...

Devil ka law to tum janti hi ho ... Ankh ke badle ankh ... Kaan ke badle kaan ... Or behen ke badle ....


Or itna bolke mai zor zor se hansne laga .... Hahahahaahahahahahaha




...

Badhiya
Mazedaar update
Bahen peeta bhai n bachaya or bola h ager tujhe koyi zaroorat ho tow batana use yeh nahi pata ki uske saath mia hone wala h
Baharhal dekhte h aage kia hota
Shaandaar update bhai

 

[Hardwrick22]

Awesome story waiting for next update