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12bara

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Ye kahani meri bewakufi Ko darsati hai kuch bewakuf mere jaisy bhi hote hain Jo sabkuch chhod ke Nikal jate hain.bad me unhe ahsas hota hai kitni badi lagti kar di..maine bhi ki hai kahani me dhere dhere sab samjh ajayega...ye meri pahli khani hai isliye bahot mistek milenge so please maff karna .

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Pure 10 saal Baad tu gaon Aya hai.ye chamtkar kaise ho Gaya bhai .han Sahar walo Ko gaon wale Kahan ache lagte Hain..ary didi aap bhi kaisi bat karti ho.aap Ko to pata hi hai pahle school,board classes fir entrance ki tyari Kahan time milta hai.entrance clear nhi ho paya to ek saal barbad make college hi join kar liye.ab entrance wale sab lafde chodh diye ab main khud Ko time Dena cahta hu.jo likha hoga Naseeb me wo ban jaunga bahot ji liye kaid khane me.bas kar bhai ab rulayega kya.didi ne mujhe gale se Laga Liya aur hasne lagi.lagbhag 10 saal bad main Apne gaon Aya hua tha.gaon me tau ji ki family rahte hain aur meri family sahar me.naukri ki wajh se, Saadi se pahle hi Papa Sahar me rahne Lage thy aur Saadi ke bad bhi papa ne Sahar me Rahna caha.
Naukri ki wajh se ye unki majburi thi ya icha ye to unhe hi pata hoga.lekin Sabse Abhi bhi yahi kahte hain kaam ki wajh se unhe gaon jaane ka time nhi mil pata. aisi bhi konsi Naukri hai jisme time hi nhi milta kabhi.meri bat alag hai main padai ki wajh se kahin ana Jana nhi cahta tha.
Lekin papa aur mujhe chodha ke maa,didi aur bhaiya jabhi koi function hota tau ji ke ghar me pahunch jate thy gaon.
Pata nhi kya lagaw hai unhe gaon se.lekin in teeno ki wajh se papa aur mujhe badi dikat Hoti thi.kuinki khana aur ghar ki saaf Safai aur Sara kaam hum dono baap Bete Ko hi karna padta tha jab tak ye ghumakad family ghar wapis nhi aa jate.saal me ek chakar tau ji aur tai ji ka bhi lag jata tha.ghar me koi chota function ya Pooja hota to tau ji ki puri family samail Hoti thi.Papa aur tau ji me bahot pyaar hai Lekin aaj tak samjh nhi Aya Papa gaon Kam kuin jate thy
Ab aate hain kahni par. Ridhi didi tau ji ki Sabse badi beti hain mujhe gale lagaye has Rahi thi.unhe bada hairani aur khusi ho rahi thi. main itno saal ke bad gaon aya hu.aur wo bhi akela unhe ye kisi chamtkar se Kam nhi lag Raha tha.ye hairani sirf unko hi nhi tauji ki family me sabka ho Rahi thi ki ye mr.home aaj ghar se bahar Nikal kar gaon tak kaise agaya.ridhi didi se main baat kar hi Raha tha tabhi ek ladki Ridhi ridhi chilate hue aai aur didi ke gale lag gai aur didi ke haal chum liye. yaar tu kaal centre kuin nhi aai mujhe tujhse jaruri bat karni thi.tujhe pat hai wooo....itna kaha hi tha uski najar mujhpe padi pahli bar ek dum se khamos hogai Saram aur nervous se usne chera turant hi usne mod Liya aur didi ka hath pakad ke bahar legai kaano me kuch kahte hue..wo bahar to Chali gai didi Ko sath le ke.Lekin is 1-2 minute me hi main khud Ko bhul Chuka tha Dil ki dhakan kisi rail gaadi ki trah teji se dhak dhak karke ke dhadk Raha tha. Kano me uski madhur awaj ki recording bar bar sunai de Rahi thi.ankho me bas uska hi chera ghumne lag tha uske uski hirni ankhe uske gulabi hoth surahi si lambi garden ...uff..ffff...(.haal mara puchte ho ek bar tum dekhte fir main puchta) uska khule lambe Baal ..itna hi kafi tha mere Dil Ko Ghayal karne ke liye .Lekin uska sakpakaya hua Saramile chare ne to meri halat hi kharab kar di..mujhe samjh nhi a Raha tha ye mujhe achanak kya hogaya hai .aaj se pahle kabhi to Aisa hua nhi..sarmakar bhag wo gai thi aur halat meri kharab ho rhi hai.meri bechani fir ek dum se bad gai kuinki mujhe Wahi madhur awaj fir se sunai Deni lagi.uski khilkhilti hasi aur awaj sunai de Rahi thi.mere kadam kamre se bahar niklne ke liye uthna cahte thy, Lekin main utha nhi pa Raha tha.mera haal Aisa ho Raha tha jaise kisi ne mere pairo Ko bandh diya hai aur is kamre ki saari oxygen Nikal di ho .aur main bahar nhi Nikla to mar jaunga.lekin himat nhi ho rhi thi bahar niklu.
School me meri bahot ladki friend thi college me bhi class ki lagbhag har ladki se meri achi bat Hoti hai.kisi bhi anjan ladki se bat kar lu itna confidence bhi hai.lekin yahan to bat karna dur kamre se nikalne me bhi fat Rahi thi meri.yash Chail pi lo dever ji ye awaj pahli bar sunai di mujhe is 10-15 minute mache Toofani halchal ke bad.ab wo awaj wo khilkhilti hasi kuch bhi sunai nhi de Raha tha.
Jaise hi maine kamre se bahar aya aise lagne laga jaise yahan anjan si khamoshi chai.
Har traf Jane pahchane apno ke chere hain fir bhi ye khamosi kaisi hai.kuch der pahle is ghar me uthi ek halchal to saant hogayi Lekin mere dilo dimag me Jo halchal suru hogaya tha uska main kya karta.kis se puchta us hawa ke jhokhe ke bare me Jo pal bhar ke liye aya aur mujhe Hilla Gaya . Bhabhi ne mujhe chai ka chup dete hue pucha.yash kya hua bade bechan lag Rahe ho.
Yahi to khasiyat hai meri pyaari bhabhi me Jo ek najar me mujhe pad leti hain.
Payal bhabhi aur mera rista dever bhabhi ka hai Lekin wo mujhe apna chota bhai manti hain aur ek maa ki trah pyaar Karti hain.vikram bhaiya(tau ji ke ladke)ke sath inki sadi 5 saal pahle hui thi.lekin saadi me main aur didi nhi ja paye kuinki mere 10th bord ke exam chal Rahe thy.Saadi thi isliye papa aur mumy Ko Saadi me Jana jaruri tha isliye Priya didi ko mere wajh se ghar me rukna pada aur Priya didi ne mujhe bahot kosa bhi tha tab.Pure ek din muh fulaye baithi Rahi khana bhi mujhe hi banana pada tha.lagta hai Saadi wale din to ji bhar ke gali diya hoga didi ne mujhe.bechari didi 3-4 month pahle se hi Saadi ki tyari me lagi hui thi .Lekin jab mere exam date aye to gaon Jane se pahle tak roj ek Mahabharat hota tha rat me bhaiya didi aur mumy me ki kon rukega yahan mere sath.un dino Ko yaad karke ek sukun milta hai Dil ko.aap bhi soch Rahe honge main Kahan bhabhi ki bat karte karte didi par pahuch Gaya .kya Karu purani bate yaad karta hu to aur nai nai yaade judne lagti hai.han ata hu ab bhabhi pe.saadi ke bad pahli bar bhabhi and puri tau ji family hamre ghar aai thi.bhabhi se jab pahli bar mujhe milwaya gaya tha tab bhabhi ne mere Mathe Ko chumkar kaha main Apne ghar ke ekloti thi mujhe humse ek bhai ki jarurat thi aur aaj mujhe mera chota bhai mil Gaya hai.tab se aaj tak mera bhabhi se ek alag lagao hai.bhabhi ne besak mujhe kabhi Rakhi nhi bandha Lekin har rakshabandhan pe mere liye kuch na kuch bhejti rahti thi.jab Pari ka Janam hua to bhi main ja nhi paya tha kuinki is bar bhi mere exam chal Rahe thy.lekin is bar papa Ruk Gaye mere sath waise bhi unhe Naukri aur ghar ke alawa kahin aur Jana Pata nhi kuin acha nhi lagta tha.maine pahli bar bhabhi aur apni gudiya ke liye apni pocket money se kuch bhijwaya tha.bhabhi ke liye ek photo frame aur pari ke liye 2 Jodi choti choti jurab.jab maine jurab maa Ko dete hue kaha tha ye mera gift bhabhi ko Dena to.maa aur didi ka has has ke bur haal hogya tha ..mujhe bada gussa araha tha maa aur didi Ko Aisa hasta dekh ke.maine maa se jurab chinana caha to didi ne mujse chin ke Apne pas rakh Liya.aur fir hasne lagi ...ary yaar main bhabhi ke bare me Bata Raha tha Kahan pahuch gaya Abhi to bahot kuch hai batane Ko beech beech me batata rahunga.maine bhabhi se cup le kar kaha main thik hu.baithe baithe kamar dukh rahta tha.main thoda upar chat me tahal leta hu thakan dur ho jayegi.main jaise seediyon se upar chadne hi Laga tha ki bhabhi ne kaha sahi me tum thik ho na.maine kaha Han bhabhi main thik hun.par dhyaan Aya bhabhi Aisa kuin kah Rahi hain.bhabhi ke dusre hath me plate tha jisme pakode thy.aur bhabhi Ko pata tha mujhe chai aur pakoda kitna pasand hai aur pakoda dekh kar bhi Bina liye ja Raha tha.
sorry maine dekha nhi aur fata fat niche Aya aur bhabhi se plate le ke chat ke traf daud pada kahin bhabhi fir se na kuch bol de

Dil ki tadap chupun kaise haal-e Dil baton kaise.

Saam ka samye tha upar se Suhana mossam na garmi na sardi.ghar ke piche khet aur udhar se aati thandi hawa ke jhokhe. Tadap aur intjaar ki ahmiyat ek mahboba a se jyada koi nhi samjh sakta.lekin thoda thoda mujhe ab is tadap aur intjaar ka gyaan hone Laga tha main chat ke Charo traf is umeed se dikh Raha tha ki sayad is traf se wo dikh jaye Lekin Dil ki kya okat waqt aur Naseeb ke aage .kafi uchal kud macha kar apne Naseeb Ko koskar main baith Gaya ek kone me .khud Ko gali dene Laga kitna fatu hu.
Ghar se bahar Nikal kar usy dekhne ki himat nhi hui aur ab usy idhar udhar dund Raha hu.
Ab fir se ek alag kahani suru hogai man mastik me.
khud se sawal kar Raha tha kya wo dubara ayegi,kahin dikhegi, nhi aai to ,kya mujhe pyaar hogaya hai.wo kon thi,kab ayegi,koi apni reletives to nhi hai,kisi Ko pata chal Gaya to,main kya bat karunga...uff main pagal ho jaunga.ek saath kitne bate dimag me chal Rahe thy...main apne mathe pe muka mar kar aage dekha to bhabhi mujhe hi dekh Rahi thi.
Main sakpaka Gaya unhe Apne aur dekhte hue aur jhat se khade ho kar kaha bhabhi aao dekho kitna acha mossam ho Raha hai.aur main unse najar bacahne ke liye chat ke kone me pahuch kar kheto ki traf dekhne laga.bhabhi mere paas aai aur mere sar pe hath fer kar kaha kuch batana caho to bata sakte ho.secret hi rakhungi main kisi Ko nhi batungi. maine bhi has kar kaha nhi bhabhi aisi koi bat nhi aur main unki traf dekhne Laga taki unko mujh par bharosa ho ..fir main sochne Laga maine to Abhi Aisa kuch Kiya nhi ki bhabhi mujhse ye sab puch Rahi hai.fir maine bhabhi se pucha aap Ko Aisa kuin lag Raha hai ki mera koi secret hai ya mujhe kuch kahna hai.tum jo wahan baith kar apni ankhe band kar ke bar bar Apne Mathe me muke mar mar ke kuch mantar Jaap kar Rahe thy,to socha kuch secret wali bat hi hogi. Oo Teri to matlab bhabhi wahan kafi der se khadi thi aur meri harkato Ko dekh Rahi thi.main ab kya jawab deta bhabhi ko.lekin ab chup bhi nhi rah Sakta tha Ary bhabi wo sar me thoda halka Dard ho Raha tha islye maar Raha tha.bhabhi muskurane lagi aur boli chalo bamb Laga deti hu.ab thik hogaya hai bhabhi hai ab koi Dard nhi.itni jaldi ye bolkar bhabhi fir se muskurane lagi aur mere sar pe hath fer ke niche Chali gai.
Ab jake mere Jaan me Jaan me aai thi.kuch der bhabhi aur yahan rahti to jarur main fas Chuka hota.kuinki main jyaada jhut nhi bol pata tha aur ghabrane lagta tha.vikram bhaiya bhi chat par agye mujhse gale lakar mile.unhe hairani ho rhi thi main kaise agaya gaon aur Aya bhi to akele.bhaiya ki khusi unke ankho aur bato se jhalk Rahi thi mujhe bar bar dekhte.mera hath unhone pakda hua tha aur ghar me sab ka haal chal puch Rahe thy.unhone bhabhi Ko awaj Laga ke upar Bulaya aur bhabhi se bolne lage.aaj to tumhara chota bhai pahli bar ghar Aya hai to kya Bana Rahi ho khane me.
 
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aapka narration style ka main fan ho gaya... mujhe nahin lagta kee yeh aapki pehli kahani hain,,, jitni behtar tarike se aap likh rahe ho,,, aise koi manjha hua hi kar shakta hain,,, aur agar wakai mein yeh pehli baar hain toh hats off to you brother/sister...

vartaman ke drishyo ke beech mein jo kuchh ateet kee jhalkiya dikha ke dono bhaag ko jorte ho wo beyhad anutha hain... lachhedaar shabod ka bhi badhiya prayog kiya hain... mehboob ke dil ka haal toh iase bata rahe hain janaab jaise nabj khud ke tatole jaa rahe hain...

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thora paragraphs ke beech mein space ka dhyan rakhe,,, update kaafi achhi lenght kee bhi thee lekin spacing kam hone kee wajah se chhoti lagi..

ab aate hain kahani ke kirdaaro pe,,, ab bewakoof,, kya kahe insaan apni zindagi mein aisi kayee galtiya kar deta hain jiski ta umra usse pachhtawa rahta hain... kabhi kisi adhure pyaar ka izhaar toh kabhi,,, kisi apne ka dil dukhana... kuchh yaado se insaan aage nikal jata hain,,, lekin kuchh aise hote hain jinhe bhulaye nahin bhool paate hain... jaisa pehla pehla pyaar... agar mukammal hua toh theek agar na hua toh wo ek khas jagah mein band rahta hain saheje hue dil ke kisi kone mein...

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shayad yahee yaad karne kee kosis kar raha hain hamare kahani ka nayak,, yash.... apne janm se hi sehri mahaul mein pala badha toh ladkio ke saath ghulne milne mein itni pareshani na hain koi,,, lekin kuchh aise khas hote hain jinke aage haath paon kaam karna band kar deta hain,,, agar wo dil ko chhu jaaye toh... behti hawa sa tha wo 3- idiot ka yeh famous gana,, yehan pe thee wo... jo aaye aur ek aise sugandh chhor gayee jo iske nasho mein sama chuka hain...

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ek hi chhoti bhent ne iske saare taar ko chher diya,, kabhi dil bahar jaane se dar raha hain aur ab dil bahar na jaane kee wajahs se dar raha hain,,, kaheen doobara mil payenge ya nahin... ab puchhe bhi toh kisse akhir ladki ke mamle mein sawal karne par bhabiya aksar bahot kheenchai karti hain... aur yeh bhabhi ko toh behen sa maan rakhha hain toh thori aur jyada mushkil ho rahi hain...

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khair gaon itne saalo baad aaya hain toh thore din rukega,,, aur ab toh ek aur wajah mil gayee hain,,, kya pata wo jhonka phir se apni chhap chhorne aa jaaye...

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beautiful update...
 
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aapka narration style ka main fan ho gaya... mujhe nahin lagta kee yeh aapki pehli kahani hain,,, jitni behtar tarike se aap likh rahe ho,,, aise koi manjha hua hi kar shakta hain,,, aur agar wakai mein yeh pehli baar hain toh hats off to you brother/sister...

vartaman ke drishyo ke beech mein jo kuchh ateet kee jhalkiya dikha ke dono bhaag ko jorte ho wo beyhad anutha hain... lachhedaar shabod ka bhi badhiya prayog kiya hain... mehboob ke dil ka haal toh iase bata rahe hain janaab jaise nabj khud ke tatole jaa rahe hain...

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thora paragraphs ke beech mein space ka dhyan rakhe,,, update kaafi achhi lenght kee bhi thee lekin spacing kam hone kee wajah se chhoti lagi..

ab aate hain kahani ke kirdaaro pe,,, ab bewakoof,, kya kahe insaan apni zindagi mein aisi kayee galtiya kar deta hain jiski ta umra usse pachhtawa rahta hain... kabhi kisi adhure pyaar ka izhaar toh kabhi,,, kisi apne ka dil dukhana... kuchh yaado se insaan aage nikal jata hain,,, lekin kuchh aise hote hain jinhe bhulaye nahin bhool paate hain... jaisa pehla pehla pyaar... agar mukammal hua toh theek agar na hua toh wo ek khas jagah mein band rahta hain saheje hue dil ke kisi kone mein...

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shayad yahee yaad karne kee kosis kar raha hain hamare kahani ka nayak,, yash.... apne janm se hi sehri mahaul mein pala badha toh ladkio ke saath ghulne milne mein itni pareshani na hain koi,,, lekin kuchh aise khas hote hain jinke aage haath paon kaam karna band kar deta hain,,, agar wo dil ko chhu jaaye toh... behti hawa sa tha wo 3- idiot ka yeh famous gana,, yehan pe thee wo... jo aaye aur ek aise sugandh chhor gayee jo iske nasho mein sama chuka hain...

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ek hi chhoti bhent ne iske saare taar ko chher diya,, kabhi dil bahar jaane se dar raha hain aur ab dil bahar na jaane kee wajahs se dar raha hain,,, kaheen doobara mil payenge ya nahin... ab puchhe bhi toh kisse akhir ladki ke mamle mein sawal karne par bhabiya aksar bahot kheenchai karti hain... aur yeh bhabhi ko toh behen sa maan rakhha hain toh thori aur jyada mushkil ho rahi hain...

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khair gaon itne saalo baad aaya hain toh thore din rukega,,, aur ab toh ek aur wajah mil gayee hain,,, kya pata wo jhonka phir se apni chhap chhorne aa jaaye...

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beautiful update...
Pahle to main aap ko thanks kahna cahunga,ki aap Ko Abhi tak ki meri story achi lagi aur aap ne mujhe jo sujhao deye hain unpe 100% amal karunga.maine ye pahla update mobile pe hi likha hai isliye paragraph sahi se adgust nhi kar paya..I hope aap aage bhi mujhe aise hi sujhao dete rahnge taki main apni is pahli khani Ko sahi tarike se sabke samne rakh saku...
 
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:congrats:bhai Nwa estory ke liye
 
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Pahle to main aap ko thanks kahna cahunga,ki aap Ko Abhi tak ki meri story achi lagi aur aap ne mujhe jo sujhao deye hain unpe 100% amal karunga.maine ye pahla update mobile pe hi likha hai isliye paragraph sahi se adgust nhi kar paya..I hope aap aage bhi mujhe aise hi sujhao dete rahnge taki main apni is pahli khani Ko sahi tarike se sabke samne rakh saku...
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Update 2

Abhi to kheer Bana Rahi hi hu.Aap ja ke dukan se matar aur paneer le aana,matar paneer banungi. Bhabhi kuch der hamare sath khadi rahi aur bhaiya se kuch bat Karti rahi.main bhi unki bate sun ke bich bich me muskura deta, bhabhi ne bhaiya se chai ka cup Liya aur unhe dukan bhi Jana hai matar paneer ke liye bol ke niche Chali gai. Vikarm bhaiya aur bhabhi ki love marriage hui thi. Bhaiya gaon se thodi hi dur ek govt college hai wahan padte thy . Bhabhi bhi unki hi class me padti thi aur dhire dhire dono me pyaar hogya . college khatam hote hi bhabhi ke liye ristey aane chalu ho Gaye thy.bhabhi ne bhaiya se Kai bar kaha ki wo jaldi Apne gharme bataye aur aakar unke maa baap se bat kare.lekin bhaiya bechare kaise kahte Apne maa baap se ki wo kisi se pyaar karte hain unhe Abhi Saadi karni hai. Abhi abhi to unki college puri hui thi. Na koi Naukri hai na koi dhandha hai. Bhaiya har bar bhabhi se thoda time mangte rahte thy, idhar bhabhi ke maa baap ristedar bhabhi ke piche pade thy.Lekin bhabhi ke man me ek naari Saram tha, kaise kahti Apne maa baap se ki wo kisi se pyaar Karti hai aur sirf usi se saadi karengi.lekin ek din bhabhi sidhe bhaiya ke ghar pahuch gai, aur bhaiya Ko dekh ke bhabhi rone lagi, bhaiya ne bhabhi ka hath pakda aur Apne kamre me le Gaye. Tau ji tai ji to bas hairani se ek dusre Ki traf dekh Rahe thy aur ishare se puch Rahe thy,ye kya Majra hai. Lekin bhaiya bhabhi ke alawa yahan iska kisi ke pass jawab Kahan tha. Thodi der bad bhaiya bhabhi Ko kamre se bahar le kar aye aur aaye aur tau ji tai ji Ko bataya ki wo bhabhi se pyaar karte hain aur Saadi karna cahte hain. Tau ji ne tai ji traf dekha fir bhabhi se kaha beta bahu banana hai to pahle hum dono Ko ek ek cup chai Pilani hogi. Aur tau tai dono hasne lage. Bhabhi ke us udas chere pe aaj pahli bar ek sukun aur Santi thi muskan ubhar aai thi aur bhabhi bhaiya ki traf dekhne lagi , bhaiya ne isare se bataya kitchen kidhar hai aur bhabhi ke saath kitchen ke ander ghus Gaye. Aur bhabhi ne chai Bana ke sabko pilao. Aur jab bhabhi Apne ghar jaane ke liye nikli to tau ji ne bhabhi ke sar pe hath rakh ke ashirwad dete hue kaha ki wo kal unke maa baap se Milne ayenge Saadi ka rishta le ke.agle din tau tai ji bhabhi ke ghar Gaye rista le ke pahle to bhabhi ke maa baap ne Mana kar diya kuinki bhaiya ke pass abhi koi kaam dhandha Naukri kuch nhi tha.koi maa baap kaise uski saadi aise ladke se karenge jo abhi kuch karta nhi hai. Aur waise bhi unke pass unki beti ke a liye ek se badkar ek risty aye thy. Koi Sarkar Naukri wala tha koi fauj me tha a koi bada karobari tha.lekin jab pata chala bhabhi bhaiya se pyaar Karti hai to unhone bhi Saadi ke liye Han kar di.karte bhi kuin nhi bhabhi unki ekloti Santan thi.bhabhi ki har icha unhone puri ki thi.unhe pata chal Gaya tha bhabhi isliye Saadi ke liye mana Karti Rahi ab tak kuinki unki cahat to koi aur hai.fir wo din bhi Aya jab bhaiya bhabhi ki dhum dham se Saadi hui. mujhe Priya didi ki wajh se pata chala bhaiya aur bhabhi ki love story ke bare me jo apni ek friend Ko Bata Rahi thi.ye mujhe ne pata didi ye baate apni friend Ko kuin Bata Rahi thi,Lekin ye Payal bhabhi ki story thi isliye maine bhi sunane me interest liya.kamine Teri wajh se maine Saadi miss ki, ye bol ke Priya di ne mere pith pe ek muka mara aur main uiiii uiii karta hu unke traf dekha aur jibh se chidkar hasta huwa unke kamre se bahar bhag Gaya.kya itni Asani se kisi berojgar ki love story itni jaldi success bhi ho Sakti hai.mere hissab se to Vikram bhaiya kismat wale thy.khair Saadi ke kuch mahine bad hi bhaiya ki sichai vibhag me Sarkari Naukri lag gai thi. Isme bhaiya ki padai aur unki mahnat thi to kuch yogdan unke sasur ka bhi tha jinhone Apna source Laga ke bhaiya Ki naukri me aanewali sari rukawat dur karwa Diya tha. Ary bhaiya Kahan hai main idhar udhar dono traf dekha piche palat ke dekha. bhaiya to kab ke niche ja chuke thy. Main Apne yaado me is kadar Magan tha ki mujhe kuch hosh hi nhi Raha. Main bhi ab niche Jana chata tha.kafi der se chat pe tha aur jis umeed se aya tha wo to puri hui nhi. Jaisy hi main seedi ke pass pahucha,mere Kano me Ridhi di awaj aai aur mere kadam wahin Ruk Gaye kya wo bhi aai hogi,mere kaan us awaj Ko sunane ke liye ab tadap uthye thy .har bitaye sec. ke sath bas yahi umeed uth Rahi thi Dil me ab uski awaj sunai degi ab sunai degi. kismat me tadapna hi likha tha. Hum to pal, pal tadpe harpal tadpe Lekin uski awaj nhi aai .Lekin is bich yash..yash..bhabhi ki awaj jarur sunai di jo neeche seediyon me khade mujhe hi dekh Rahi thi. Main bhi muskurate hua neeche utarne Laga.lekin neche badte har kadam ke sath ek dar, bechaini,utsukta aur tadap bhi thi.us shakhs ke liye jisy Abhi adhe ek ghante pahle hi dekha tha wo bhi muskil se 1 minute Rahi hogi mere samne. Saala main jhandu hu chutiya hu khud ko gaali de Raha tha.wo to sukar tha Ridhi di mujhe neeche mil gai nhi to na jaane kitni aur kon kon se gaali khud Ko de Chuka hota main. Di Ko akele neeche dekh ke confirm hogaya tha Is najar Ko jiski talsh thi wo...Mistry girl.. missing hai. Ab maine ye soch Liya tha ye bekar ka chapter ko close kar Dena cahiye. Mai Ridhi Di ke paas ja ke baith Gaya.aur jhuta naraj hote hue bola, kya didi aap to mujhe akela choda ke chale gaye thy.ary nhi bhai wo kuch jaruri kaam tha islye main bahar gai thi.main man hi man me sochne Laga te to Bata deti didi ki jiske sath aap bahar gai thi wo ladki aap ki friend hai to bol deti mere friend Ko kuch tha isliye gai thi ,ya apni koi relative hai.to koi rista jod deti.friend thi to naam hi bol deti. mujhe Naam hi pata chal jata uska. Lekin aap ne bat bhi batai jo mere kisi kaam ka nhi mere ek sawal ka jawab bhi usme nhi hai.ab main kaise uske baare me apse puchu. Ye Kaya Abhi to is chapter ko close Kiya tha maine ,fir se Wahi bakchodi .lanat ho tujhpe Yash.kuch der pahle hi to maine khud Ko samjhaya tha.lekin fir Wahi jo mere sath hi nhi kaiyo ke sath hai.apne Waade,irade faisle sab bhul Gaya.man bichlit hoke do hisso me Bat Gaya tha. ek jo kuch talsh me tha aur dusra jo usy Aina dikha Raha tha ki ye to bachkani bewakufi bakchodi wali harkat kar Raha hai tu. Chacha Chachi kaise hain aur Priya di kaisi hain.Mujhe apne anterman se bahar nikalna pada kuinki di mujhse kuch puch Rahi thi.sab thik hai didi.Priya didi aapko bahot miss Karti hain.To leke kuin nhi aya Apne sath di ko.maine to bola tha chalne ke liye Lekin unhone kaha wo Dec me ayengi aapke birthday me.mera birthday girft leke Aya hai Na tu.Didi aapka birthday do dec.me hai fir gift Abhi kuin du.Dec me tu aane se Raha is bar pata nhi kaisa chamtkar hu ki tumhare kadam yahan pade.mujhe to Abhi bhi yakin nhi ho Raha tu yahan hai.mere kadam ab yahan pad Gaye hain to ab aap tension mat lo ab humesha padte hi rahenge .chalo dekhte hain Dec me ata hai ki nhi agar nhi Aya to soch liye wahin pahuch ki Teri khatirdari karungi.abhi hamari ye bat chal hi Rahi thi ki bhaiya ek hath me thaila aur dusre se pari ka hath pakde ghar ke andar ate dikhe.
 
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Aakash.

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 

Aakash.

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).


"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 
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