Adultery BHABHI MAA (Completed)

[Chutiyadr]

pahli baar doctor ki story padhkar lag hi nahi raha ki wo likh rahe hain

koi nahi ek do update se lagne lagega
aise jab shanti jayda ho tabhi tufan aane ki sambhawna jyda hoti hai

 

[Chutiyadr]

भाई जी सब यहाँ मनोरंजन के लिए आते है डॉ साब की कहानी पर खुल कर कमेंट भी कर देता हु लेकिन कहानी का कोई मजा नहीं है

इस बार प्यार की गाली नहीं दूंगा क्यों की मज़ा ही नहीं आया कहानी एक आत्मा की तरह भटक रही है बस डॉ के नाम को पढ़ लेता हु अब चाहे काजल चुड़ वाये या फिर भाभी

जिस का अपना घर लूट गया जो वो दोस्ती की माँ बहिन कर रहा है बदलाव तो जादू की लकड़ी में भी आये थे जिस में सब से बड़ा पापी साधु बन गया था

abhi tak jadui lakdi ke efect se bahar nahi aaye sandy bro
ab itane dur aa hi gaye ho to thoda dhair aur dhar lo

 

[Chutiyadr]

Aacha update tha dr.sahab........ye kay bichare Akki ki prem kahani suru hone ke pahale hi khatam kar di ....... Par ye aacha huwa usne hope to nahi choda...... Lage rahane do Akki ko bhi .... Try try but....... Aur ye pawan sir 3 ghanto se sneha madam se reproduction ka chapter shik rahe the ya sneha ko shikha rahe the...

dhanywad sam bhai
reproduction ka chapter
bad me pata chal jayega dost

 

[Chutiyadr]

सुपर फैंटास्टिक बहुत बढ़िया dr. साब मज़्ज़ा आ गया

dhanywad thor bhai

 

[Chutiyadr]

Wah yaar jya update di hy... love you

dhanywad king bhai

 

[Chutiyadr]

Bilkul sahi .y lekhni dr ki nhi lagti

kuchh update ruk jao lagne lagunga
aise writing style to wahi hai yar bas story ka contest change kiya hai , asal me meri adhikter story ek hi type ki ho ja rahi thi isliye ye thoda alg lag raha hai ..
aur shayad jo logo ne socha tha waisa bilkul nhi ho rha hai isliye ajib lag rha hai ..
sabhi ne socha hoga ki bhabhi aur dever ka kuchh hoga lekin dur dur tak uska koi chance nahi dikh raha hai , aise yahi to hamari khasiyat hai jo dikhta hai wo hota kabhi nahi , aur jo hoga wo koi soch nahi payega

 

[Chutiyadr]

I do not even know where Madam's house is. Well, love also taught Aakash a detective today and Sonu got caught in it. You are showing the feelings of Aakash very well. Looks like you will break my heart again. Dr.Chutya's name surfaced once again. Dr. Sahab, helps everyone except me. There is also love with nervousness and restlessness. At least have a conversation between them.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

dont worry bro is bar to rani aap hi le jaoge , lekin kaise wo dekhne wali bat hogi
dhanywad akki bro

 

[Chutiyadr]

Superb update bro

dhanywad rajesh bhai

 

[Chutiyadr]

amazing update dr sahab,
kya se kya ho gaya bechare akki ke pyaar par pawan sir daaka daal kar le gaya,
yaa phir koi aur hi baat hai,
kyonki abhi tak sneha mam ke saath uske baare mein confirm kuchh pata nahi chala hai,
ye monika bhi lagta hai dr ki shagird hi banane wali hai jo unhe example de rahi hai,
neha ne tution ka idia bahot hi shandaar nikala hai, aur isme shayad uska bhi kuchh fayda hai,
shayad vo ankit se najdikiyan badhana chahti hai,
vahi sneha mam ke bhi chahre par bhi akki ke ghabrahat ko dekh kar muskan aa gayi hai,
ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

dhanywad aman bhai
monika dr ki shagird naya idea

 

[Chutiyadr]

Nice update bhai

dhanywad BW bro