Adultery BHABHI MAA (Completed)

[Arvind274]

yeh kahani ab padhne layak nahi rahi. itna time kisike paas nahi hain. kya subject hai aur kya likh raha hain. bye bye

Aisa nhi h yr hamare dr.shahb thoda apni line aur lenth bhatak gy the jaldi hi wo purane lay me nazar aayenge .sbrr rakho

 

[Rajesh]

Nice update

 

[sharaabi]

Ab majja suru hone wala he

 

[Ben Tennyson]

अब होगा असली मैच चल तिवारी .... खेल खेलते हैं

 

[Aakash.]

Purvi is right, Tiwari is shocked and annoyed to hear Purvi. Purvi's character appears to us as a true policeman and if Tiwari gets trapped, what better than that. I am so glad that Kajal and Dr. Sahab are coming back. Now it will be fun gradually.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

 

[Chutiyadr]

Nice

dhanywad kai bhai

 

[Chutiyadr]

yeh kahani ab padhne layak nahi rahi. itna time kisike paas nahi hain. kya subject hai aur kya likh raha hain. bye bye

mat padho bhai , tumhare samjh bhi nahi aayegi
tum jakar devar bhabhi wali sex story padho wahi tumhare liye sahi rahega

 

[Chutiyadr]

Awesome update
Ab kahani apne asali rang me aa rahi hai .

dhanywad tony bhai

 

[Chutiyadr]

Wah kya gajab ka update diya he. Lo ji hi gayi Purvi, Vikash, Kajal aur apne dr. sahab ki entry. Lekin ye Vedant koi naya chuza lagta he purvi ka. Purvi ne to mantri ki jalti hui me aur petrol daal diya. Ab ye log sath kaam karenge ya fir dr. aur kajal ek taraf aur ye 3no ek taraf. Aur sabse badi baat dr. aur kajal ko to Monika bhi jaanti he.
Waiting 4 next update

dhanywad aka bro
bro jo in cherecter ke bare me pahle padha tha wo sab purani chij hoi gayi , inhe naye sire se gadh raha hu , kajal-visal (patipatni) aur purvi vedant , visal ke sath kaam karne wale log ...inki ek alag story launga bad me ..abhi bas ye cherecter role me hi rahege

 

[Chutiyadr]

Good

dhanywad neha ji