Nice update
कहानी में तो बहुत उठा पटक हुआ है और शिवा जी ना जाने किस बेहोशी में लीन है सम्पत जीवा को ठोकने वाली तो भाभी होगी लगता है कहानी में अच्छा खासा शार्ट कट मार दिया गया है और बिना तफ्सील बताये ही मामा की जोड़ी को टपका दिया गया
wow to sonu ki behoshi mein bhabhi ne sampat aur jiva ko maar diya bas ab bacha hai to tiwari
lekin flashback mein details bhi dalna
One of the best update in this story
Great, doctor sahab....
Waiting for next
Sonu has returned to the city. By the way, when Neha returned, I felt very bad, really. Today's update was very dangerous, Sonu's condition is very bad, Ajju and Akki were also trying their best. Only a true friend helps a friend in trouble. Looking at Sonu, it seems that he is still not well, but when Sonu faints, I am desperate to know what happened.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Nice
Super update
ye kya ho rha hai. kuch samajhme nhi aaraha hai....shiva ka nam lekar koun mar rahe hai logo ko.....
waiting for next update
ab ye jiva -sampat ko shiva ke nam se bhabhi ne mara ..............ya neha ne
komal ne ya mahima ne
sala katilon ka khandaan hai pura
aur bechara tiwari..............akela shikaar bacha hai
amazing update hai dr sahab,
sonu ke jakhmi hone ke baad bhabhi ne to shahar mein khoon ki nadiyan baha di hai,
sampat aur jiva donon gaye kaam se,
ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Lagta hai Bhabi action me aagai hai
Chutiyadr bohat hi umda update bhai.. Aur story to matlab dhasu hi jaa rahi hai... Pata nahini a shiva ka case kab suljhega... Kyun ki lagbhga Sare main khiladiyon khatam ho gaye ab sirf tiwari bacha hai.... Par abhi tak khulashs nahini hua.. Chalo dekhte hai kya hota hai aakhir kaarkaa
Lgtaaaa hai Sonu ko Marne ki sazaa babi nay Di hai in logo ko
kahaani ka ant nikat pratit ho raha hai bhai
एक दोस्ती के जज्बे से भरा हुआ अपडेट।
दोस्त पर गुस्सा होते हुए भी उसके लिए जान देने का फैसला, दिल को छू गया।
वैसे शायद कहानी को समेटने का काम शुरू कर दिया है, ऐसा लग रहा है।
आई होप ऐसा ना हो भाभी ने ये कत्ल ना किये हो
Mast update
Dr Sahab ya bhut Alla hogya hero par hamla phr fight phr hero ka behosh ho Jana phr jab gosh aya to shehar ka naksha hi badal gya. Mera khyal sy ya bhabhi ka kaam ha Jo hero my na milny ki waja sy by-kabuu hogai
Nice update
Waaah dr sahab aapne to khoon kharaba karwa diya is baar,,,,
Ajju aur akki mil kar akhir ankit ko bacha gaye magar jiva aur sampat ka ram naam satya kisne kar diya.? Kahi bhabhi maa ne shakti ka roop dhar ke unka kalyaan to nahi kar diya,,,,
Sir ji wo sex seen chor kar best he story
Nice update
बहुत ही शानदार अपडेट भाई गजब का साहस दिखाया लौंडों ने दोस्त के जान दांव पर लगा दी......
nice update sir jee waiting for next update
sonu pe hamla kiya badle mein aarti bhabhi urf shiva ne jiva aur sampat ka kissa hi khatam kar diya...ab bas tiwari bacha hai...
aaj presonal reply nahi kar raha hu dosto ..Nice update
Waiting for the next update
dr sahab 500 page tak is kahani ko kheench pane ke liye apko
1000 pages tak pahunche................... yah ichha hai.........meri
Dr.Sir congratulation for 500 page
for 500 pages
congratulations doctor bhai 500 page ke liye
dostofor 500 Pages
koi baat nhi bhaiaaj presonal reply nahi kar raha hu dosto ..
aap sabhi ko thanks
yha bhi kya ho rahe hai...samajhna mushkil ho geya hai....ha kareem ke uper jane ke ticket ho geya lagta hai.....or tiwari or mahima ke bich relation hai lagta hai.....or wo aurat koun hai... lagta hai yaha bhi kuch baat jarur hai....Update 63Mahima abhi ek table me chhati ke bal bandhi hui thi, jism par koi bhi kapda nahi tha aur wo roye ja rahi thi lekin uski sunne wala koi bhi nahi tha ,
“us din to tu bach gayi thi lekin aaj tujhe koun bachayega “
Ek kamini si hansi sunkar mahima ki ruh tak kaanp gayi thi ,
“pls kareem bhai mujhe chhod do , maine aapka kya bigada hai “
Mahima ki bat sunkar kareem joro se hans pada
“tune nahi meri jaan teri is bhari hui jawani ne bigada hai , tere pati ko hamne thikana laga diya lekin tujhe naa pa sakne ki dard main nahi bhool paya , mera janwar aaj bhi tujhe pane ke liye mara ja raha hai ye dekh “
Kareem ne apne nange latakte hue ling ko mahima ke pichhwade par gadaya
“nahi ………”
Mahima ki kanpati hui aawaj nikali jise sunakr kareem ka ling aur bhi funkaar marne laga , mahima majboor thi kareem ne uski beti ko kidnap kar liya tha aur use badale me mahima ki jawani chahiye thi , kareem ki sabse badi kamjori thi jawan ladkiya thi, jo use pasand aa jati use wo bhog kar hi rahta tha , lekin mahima ko Tiwari ke wachan ne us din bacha liya tha , satya ne apni jaan ke badale mahima ki ijjat aur apni beti ke bhawishya ka souda kiya tha , lekin kareem ke man me ye mahima ko bhogane ki ikkha rah gayi aur wo sirf bhogta hi nahi tha balki noch dalta tha , wo janwar tha jo apne shikar ko puri tarah se noch noch kar khata tha ..
Aur ye bat sari duniya ko pata thi , mahima ko bhi ye bat pata thi , Dr. jaise hi apne kaamo me wayast hua aur Tiwari ka thoda dhyan hata waise hi kareem ne mahima ki dukhti hui rag uski beti Neha par hath mara aur use kidnep kar liya tha ,
Ab wo Tiwari ke bolne par bhi mahima ko nahi chhodne wala tha lekin Tiwari ke man me mahima ke liye ab bhi koi soft corner moujud tha , usne kareem ko mana liya tha ki wo kareem ki bhookh mitane ke liye ek ladki use lakar dega badale me kareem mahima ko chhod dega , mahima ko kewal Tiwari ka hi bharosha tha , uske pati ke jane ke bad bhi Tiwari ne use support kiya tha lekin aaj ..
Aaj to mahima ko lag raha tha ki Tiwari bhi uski ijjat nahi bacha payega ..
“mujhe chhod do Tiwari ji aate hi honge “mahima ne apne bachaw me kaha
Wahi kareem joro se hans pada
“tujhe kya lagta hai ager main Tiwari ke aate tak rukunga , mujhe pata hai ki us sale chutiye Tiwari ka dil tujhpar aa gaya hai , us din bhi usne tujhe bacha liya aur aaj bhi bacha hi lega , isliye uske aane se pahle hi main tujhe noch dalunga, “
Kareem ki bat sunkar mahima fir se kaanp gayi thi
“nahi ….”
Usne apne kanpate hue swar me kaha tha
“chup kar warna teri beti ka gala tere samne hi kaat dunga , lao re iski beti ko uske samne hi iski maa ka balatkar karenge “
Kareem ki bat sunkar mahima sakte me aa gayi
“nahi nahi mere sath jo karna hai wo karo lekin meri beti ko kuchh mat karna ,main .. main ab kuchh nahi kahungi jo karna hai kar lo “
Kareem ke chahre me ek kamini si muskan aa gayi thi
“are meri jaan machhali chatpatayegi nahi tab tak maja kaise aayega “
Kareem ne apni ungali mahima ke yoni par chala di , mahima bas dabe hue swar me chuhak uthi thi ..
Kareem ne bade hi itminan se mahima ki yoni ki gahraiyo me apni ungaliya chalani shuru ki , mahima bas ro rahi thi wo koi bhi pratikriya nahi kar pa rahi thi ..
“chhi is Sali randi ko to kuch karne me maja hi nahi aa raha hai , lao se iski beti ko “
“nahi nahi tum jo bologe main wo karungi lekin beti ko nahi “
Mahima chhatpatai
Wahi kareem joro se hans pada
“Sali kutiya tu ager aise hi sust padi rahegi to mujhe kaise maja aayega , tujhe dard de kar chodunga tabhi to mujhe sukun aayega “
Kareem ne mahima ke yoni ko joro se apni muththi me daba diya tha ,
“aaaahhh nahi “ mahima chilla uthi thi
“ab aaya na maja , ab dekh kutiya “
Kareem ne pas hi rakha apna belt utha liya aur joro se mahima ke pith me de mara
“aahhh “
Mahima chilla uthi thi , kareem ne ishara kiya aur uske logo ne Neha ko bhi uske samne lakar uske samne ek kanch ki diwar ke us par khada kar diya , mahima ko laga jaise uski duniya hi lut gayi ho , Neha bas apni maa ko nahi dekh pa rahi thi lekin wo mahima ki ankho ke samne thi , wahi kareem joro se mahima ko belt se maare ja raha tha aur fir jab uska man bhar gaya usne apna ling mahima ki yoni me ghusa diya , mahima dard se chilla rahi thi aur jitana wo chillati kareem ko utana hi maja aata tha , kareem tab tak nahi ruka jab tak ki usne apna pura viry mahima ki kokh me nahi dal diya ……….
Kareem ke bad uske sabhi khas log bhi mahima ko lalchi najro se dekh rahe the , wo sabhi use noch kar khana chahte the lekin abhi kareem ka dil nahi bhara tha ……
Tabhi wanha Tiwari aa gaya, uske sath ek aur ladki thi ..
Tiwari bhi kareem ke aage majboor tha lekin Tiwari ne kareem ko mana liya ki kareem ko jab bhi jarurat hogi mahima uske pas aa jaayegi , aur abhi ke liye kareem aur uske gang ke baki logo ki bhookh ye ladki mitayegi …
Shart ye thi ki mahima ko baki ke logo ke samne na parosha jaye aur haiwaniyat na dikhai jaaye .. kareem man gaya tha kyoki use ab nayi machhali mil gayi thi jo ki aur bhi jyda chhatpta rahi thi , mang me sindur bhare wo nayi ladki aisi lag rahi thi jaise uski abhi abhi nayi nayi hi shadi hui ho , jawan aur bahut hi khubsurat , kareem ko ab mahima hi feeki lagne lagi thi …
Ab mahima ki jagah par us ladki ko lita diya gaya tha , aaj kareem aur uske sathi milkar us ladki ke chithade noch dalne wale the , lekin mahima ki jaan bach gayi thi , mahima ne kapde pahne aur Neha ke sath bahar aa gayi , Neha ne ek bar us aourat ko dekha jo ki table me bandhi hui thi aur uske muh par kapda thunsa gaya tha , wo lal rang ki saree me thi, hatho me bhari hui lal chudiya aur gahare lal rang ka sindur se bhari hui mang …
‘ye kitani sunder hai ‘ Neha ke dimag me aaya tha ..
“main is janwar ko jinda nahi chhodungi , ye to aapko bhi kuchh nahi samjhta “
Wanha se nikate hi mahima ne Tiwari ko kaha tha ..
“aaj ke bad nahi , bahut ho gaya tumpar hath dalkar isne mere sabra ki sima ko bhi tod diya hai , ab ise rashte se hatana hi padega “
Tiwari jaise khud me hi bunbhunaya aur usne phone ghuma diya ……………….
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Neha ke pure chahre me pasina tha , wo abhi hospital me mere baju me baithi thi , usne apne sapne me wo dekha tha jise dekhkar uski ruh kanp gayi thi , kal hi to mahima ne use bataya tha ki wo Tiwari ki itani tareef kyo karti hai , kal hi mahima ne Neha ko mujhse dur rahne ke liye kaha tha aur apni kahani batai thi , lekin Neha mujhe aisi awashtha me nahi chhod sakti thi , main abhi bhi koma se bahar aaya hi tha lekin koi mujhse jyda bat nahi karta tha , kabhi bhabhi to kabhi Neha rat rat bhar mere baju me baithe rahte the , mujhe bataya gaya ki Akki aur Ajju thik hai , hospital ke bahar bahut kuch ho chuka tha ya ho raha tha lekin mujhe kuchh bhi nahi bataya ja raha tha ..
Aaj rat ke 2 baje the lekin Neha ki ankho me nind hi nahi tha uske man me apni ma ki kahi bat aur us aourat ka chahra bar bar ghum raha tha jise usne salo pahle dekha tha …..
“akhir wo aourat kon thi aur kareem ne uske sath kya kiya , aur uske bad uska kya hua hoga ….?????????”
Neha ke dimag me achank se ye sawal utha ………….
Koi bat ne sir update ke intjar me haiupdate ke liye time lagega dosto thoda intjaar krana ..
abhi likhna shuru nahi kiya hu abhi baithunga to ho sakta hai ki aaj hi de du warna kal hi de paunga