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Adultery BHABHI MAA (Completed)

Chutiyadr

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dosto i think i need a break ,
main kai maniho se lagatar likhe hi aa raha hu aur life bhi thodi busy chal rahi hai jo ki aane wale samy me aur bhi busy hone wali hai ,abhi is story me bas ek hi update aaya hai to readers ka isse koi emotional connection abhi nahi hua hai ,islilye mere khayl se ye sahi time hai story hodi aage chali jayegi to mere liye bhi ise chhodna muskil ho jaayega ..
to fir abhi ise close kar raha hu milte hai break ke bad :)
 
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Chutiyadr said:
dosto i think i need a break ,
main kai maniho se lagatar likhe hi aa raha hu aur life bhi thodi busy chal rahi hai jo ki aane wale samy me aur bhi busy hone wali hai ,abhi is story me bas ek hi update aaya hai to readers ka isse koi emotional connection abhi nahi hua hai ,islilye mere khayl se ye sahi time hai story hodi aage chali jayegi to mere liye bhi ise chhodna muskil ho jaayega ..
to fir abhi ise close kar raha hu milte hai break ke bad :)
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Ok dr. Sahab
 
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Chutiyadr said:
dosto i think i need a break ,
main kai maniho se lagatar likhe hi aa raha hu aur life bhi thodi busy chal rahi hai jo ki aane wale samy me aur bhi busy hone wali hai ,abhi is story me bas ek hi update aaya hai to readers ka isse koi emotional connection abhi nahi hua hai ,islilye mere khayl se ye sahi time hai story hodi aage chali jayegi to mere liye bhi ise chhodna muskil ho jaayega ..
to fir abhi ise close kar raha hu milte hai break ke bad :)
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Dr sahab ap to bura maan gaye mere aur firefox420 bhai ke review ka
Koi nahi.... 2-4 din daru party karke resume karo.... Dil par mat lena... Kajal pareshan ho jayegi
 
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Chutiyadr

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kamdev99008 said:
Dr sahab ap to bura maan gaye mere aur firefox420 bhai ke review ka
Koi nahi.... 2-4 din daru party karke resume karo.... Dil par mat lena... Kajal pareshan ho jayegi
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:haha: nahi bhai jinki bat ka aajtak bura nahi mana ab kaise maan sakta hu ,actually sach me thodi problem se gujar raha hu kuch dino se ,isliye jadui lakadi bhi jadi end kar di aur jo tantrik wali story shuru karne wala tha use bhi nhi kiya balki likhne me asan story shuru kari lekin kal rat ko ek aur news ka pta chala ,to aane wala samy bahut busy rahne wala hai ..bina creativity ke likhne se achcha naa likhna hi sahi hota hai bro ,isliye break le liya hu ,time par updates nahi de paunga aur story bhi boring ho jaayegi to maja nahi aayega na ..
jab free ho jaunga to fir se start karunga ise ...
 
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Dr.sahab aap bhale na kho pr jadui lakdi me readers ke diye gay coments ka kuch Bura man Gye ho aap.yr aise Dil pe Mt Kiya kro bhai .Aap Jaise raightero ki wajah se hi hm readre yha pr bar-bar aate hai. Isliy khani ki nirantarta Ko bnay rakhe . waiting for next update dr shahb.
 
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Chutiyadr said:
:haha: nahi bhai jinki bat ka aajtak bura nahi mana ab kaise maan sakta hu ,actually sach me thodi problem se gujar raha hu kuch dino se ,isliye jadui lakadi bhi jadi end kar di aur jo tantrik wali story shuru karne wala tha use bhi nhi kiya balki likhne me asan story shuru kari lekin kal rat ko ek aur news ka pta chala ,to aane wala samy bahut busy rahne wala hai ..bina creativity ke likhne se achcha naa likhna hi sahi hota hai bro ,isliye break le liya hu ,time par updates nahi de paunga aur story bhi boring ho jaayegi to maja nahi aayega na ..
jab free ho jaunga to fir se start karunga ise ...
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Dr. saab aapki chuttiya sirf ek hafte ke liye hi sanction hui hai .. 1 january 2020 par fir se likna shuru kar dena .. aur rahi baat aapki dikkato ki .. to hume nahi pata .. aapki dikkat aapko mubarak .. parr hume 'bhabi Maa' par ek tarikh se naye update chahiye ... "ha nahi to" ...

aur dikkat kya aa gayi .. jara hume bhi to batao .. aap kaunsa shaadi shuda ho .. jo koi aapki ghar wali ko bhaga kar le gaya ...

abb jyaada bhaav khane ki jarurat nahi hai .. nahi to Monga daaku se keh kar ghar se uthawa lenge .. phir na dr. chutiya aur na hi Kaajal dono mein se koi bhi aapko dhund paayenge ...
 
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Chutiyadr

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Arvind274 said:
Dr.sahab aap bhale na kho pr jadui lakdi me readers ke diye gay coments ka kuch Bura man Gye ho aap.yr aise Dil pe Mt Kiya kro bhai .Aap Jaise raightero ki wajah se hi hm readre yha pr bar-bar aate hai. Isliy khani ki nirantarta Ko bnay rakhe . waiting for next update dr shahb.
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nahi bhai aisa nahi hai maine isse bhi bure bure comments dekhe hai ,salo se likh raha hu ..isliye bura to kabhi nahi manta ha ladai jarur karta hu abhi thodi der bad udhar bhi jaunga ladne ke liye :haha:
kaam me fansa hu isliye dikkat hai ..aur koi bat nahi hai
start karunga ise fir se jab time milega
 
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