Adultery BHABHI MAA (Completed)

[Pritam.bs]

pritam da , comments ke liye
lekin pritam da is speed se padhoge tab to ho gaya kaam , main roj ek update de raha hu ...
index uthao aur thoda time nikaal kar padh daalo
kam se kam 2 update to padho ek din me ...aise mujhe pata hai padhne ke liye bhi time nikalna bada muskil ho jata hai , mera bhi wahi hal rahta hai
koi nahi aap apni speed se padhiye , agale comment ka intjar rahega

Dr. sahab mai to isliye aaram se pad raha tha. Kyoki mujhe laga ki, aap bhi aaram se update de rahe hai. Lekin koi baat nahi. Mai aapki ye shikayat aaj hi door kar duga.

 

[Chutiyadr]

kamal hai .. aisi kismat bhi kisi - kisi bhagyashali ko hee naseeb hoti hai .. jisko Chutiyadr ki kahani mein hero ka kirdaar nibhane ko mile .. aur dekho Sonu se Ankit .. aur Ankit se Shiva .. kalwa jaisa dost aur bodyGuard .. Sampat jaisa mama .. jisne aate hee shahar ke top ke college mein admission dilwa diya .. aate hee pehle din 4 dost mil gaye .. well yaha per Neha ki to entry ho chuki hai .. ab baaki ke khiladiyon ka intezaar hai .. aur saath he Aakash. bhai ko debut role mila hai XF par .. jis film ke director apne Dr. Saab hai .. puri team ko meri taraf se advance mein badhai .. he he .. but Dr. saab apne Aakash bhai ka thoda dhyaan rakhna .. kyon ki ye shareef baccha hai aur inka haath hindi mein thoda tang (weak) hai .. chalo abhi tak to sab kuch accha dekhne ko mil raha hai .. bhabi Maa (aarti) ko bhi adde par he kaam mil gaya hai .. aur ye college ka naam Ratan chandani ke naam par rakh diya .. iske naam to pehle hee bahut kuch hai .. but anyway .. nice updates .. ab bas bahut bakchodi ho li hai story mein .. ab asal writing karni shuru kar do .. Dr. saab ...

dhanywad ff bro
jise aap asal writing bol rahe hai use main meri typical style of writing kahunga jo ki mere story me aapko dikhta hoga ... ye abhi to aapko nahi dikhega lekin kuch updates ke bad dikhna shuru ho jayega

 

[Chutiyadr]

Nice

dhanywad kai bhai

 

[Chutiyadr]

Nice update Dr.shahb

dhanywad arvind bhai

 

[Chutiyadr]

वह डॉ जी ये लड़का अंकित तो बहुत चालू निकला और 4 अच्छे दोस्त भी मिल गए . ये इधर कॉलेज में पढ़ेगा उधर जवान भाभी के साथ कोई लोचा न हो जाय

चंदानी को यहाँ भी ले आये यहाँ भी ये हरामी ही बनेगा क्या ?

dhanywad sandy bhai
chandaani ke smriti me college hai wo to mar chuka hai dost

 

[The_InnoCent]

Update 9​

“Ankit ???”


Main subah sampat aur uske giroh ke sath khada tha


Wo ek dusare ko dekhne lage aur fir sabhi ek sath milkar joro se hans pade …


Main un logo ka chahra dekhta rah gaya


“abe sale tujhe gang ka member banna hai na ki college me admission lene ja raha hai .. kuch aisa naam rakh jo ki hamare gang ke hisab se sahi lage ..”


Sabhi ka chahra sochne wala ho gaya tha


“bhai pappu hatela kaisa rahega ..”


Koi ek bola, lekin sampat ne use ghur kar dekha


“ye tere jaisa koi chindi nahi hai jo chindi sa naam de raha hai , ye chaman chutiye wala naam aapne gand me ghusa le ..”


Sampat ki bat sunkar sabhi hasane lage aur wo bolne wala bhi bina kisi sharm ke dant nikalne laga ..


“sala kya naam rakhe iska ..”


Sampat apana sar khujlane laga tha


Tabhi haweli ke aangan me bane hue mandir ka ghanta baja..


Maine dekha ki bhabhi shiv ling me pani chada rahi thi aur astha se apne ankhe band kiye hue thi…


Shayd wo mere liye hi koi dua mang rahi thi , shayad meri salamati ke liye ya ye ki main is bure raste me bhi apne ko bacha kar rakhu…


“Shiva ..”


Mere mukh se achank hi nikal gaya ..


Sampat ne ek bar mandir ki or dekha aur uske hotho me ek muskan khil gai ,


“wah ye hui na bat tu aaj se hamara Shiva hai , jo us Tiwari ki it se it baja kar rakh dega , us danaw ko uske karmo ki saja dega ..


Har har mahadev ..”


“har har mahadev …” sabhi joro se chilla pade the ..


Wahi meri najr bhabhi par padi ham dono hi hairat se sabhi ko dekh rahe the akhir ye log mujh jaise bachche par itna kyo bharosa dikha rahe the ..???




Din bitate gaye aur bhabhi wanha ki mahilao ke sath ram gai wahi mujhe badi hi kathin training di ja rahi thi , 1 hi mahine me maine gun chalana sikh liya tha , mera nishana bhi bada hi achcha tha aur sath hi sath mera sharir bhi achcha viksit ho raha tha ,


Mujhe samjh nahi aa raha tha ki akhir ye sab kyo, lekin ye ho raha tha …


Ek din achank sampat ne mujhe bulaya


“Shiva main soch raha tha ki tumhe college join kar lena chahiye “


Maine bade hi ashchary se use dekha


“bat aisi hai na ki hamare pure gang me koi bhi jyada padha likha nahi hai , kam se kam tu padh likh lega to ham Tiwari jaise adami par bhari pad jayenge …”


“lekin mama Tiwari se ladna hi kyo hai “


Mama muskurane lage


“samjh jayega tu fikar mat kar abhi college jane ki taiyari kar le aur tune jo naam bataya tha na usi naam se jayega tu college “


“Ankit ??”


“ha wahi Ankit ke naam se jana tu “


“lekin mere pas usse related koi bhi documents nahi hai “


Sampat joro se hans pada


“fikar mat kar sab ek saptah me aa jayega, tera Aadhar card se le kar school ki sari marksheet tak sabhi aa jaayegi..”


Main bas use ankhe fade dekhta raha ,


Aise is baat se bhabhi bahut hi khus thi aur dil ke kisi kone me main bhi , lekin fir bhi mujhe ab is jivan se bhi pyar hone lga tha , main sirf bhabhi aur sampat ke liye college ja raha tha kyoki yanha itane din rahte hue mere dimag me logo ne bas yahi bhara tha ki main koi special adami hu jise koi bahut hi bada janahit ka kaam karna hai …

बहुत ही शानदार अपडेट रहा ये, बस ज़रा छोटा सा था मगर कोई बात नहीं।

तो इस नये सफ़र में सोनू को उसकी भाभी से जो नाम मिला था उस नाम से वो काॅलेज में पढ़ाई करेगा और शिवा नाम से यकीनन वो संपत के लिए या यूॅ कहें कि उसके इशारों पर ऐसा काम करेगा जो निश्चित रूप से ग़ैर कानूनी ही होगा।

ख़ैर, देखते हैं कि सोनू उर्फ अंकित उर्फ शिवा की नियति में क्या क्या लिखा है।

 

[Chutiyadr]

wonderfull update bhaiya ji aur sabse badhiya baat aapne mere dost akash paglu ko story me liya hai jo sach me bade dayalu tipe ke hain inka bas chale to ghar baar sab garibon ke naam kar den Shiva ki yani ankit ki college life set ho gayi bas ye 96% salamat rahe to jada achcha hai

dhanywad rahul bhai
akki bro ki love story mujhe bahut pasand aayi thi

 

[Chutiyadr]

mast update......................................

dhanywad skyesh bro

 

[Chutiyadr]

Bhai, inke khujli wali kahani ke ped ki neev mazboot ho chuki hai, ab ped ki shakhayen kahan tak failaingi aur kis kis ke khujli karengi ye aage dekhte hai

dhanywad BH bro
abhi thoda aur neev banana baki hai dost uske bad uper ghar taiayr hoga

 

[Chutiyadr]

nice update..

dhanywad nirmal bhai