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Yes broHi...
I hope you are doing well. I Read your 3 or 4 stories. You have good writing skills.
One thing i want to say that i notice is you only focus on one character in single story. Like in this story you have two characters(mother and sister in law) but you only focused on one character (mother).
I hope to see more than one character in your story
Acha jeeBahut hi shaandaar.
One of the best erotica and seducive.
Bahut hi pasand aai.
Par yeh dil mange more, itni jldi nahin chudana chahiye tha.
Aur seduce karwa sakte the. Bahut hi acche chal rahi thi.
Chahat ka koi ant nahin hota isliye itni mast kahani lgi, khada hi rha pdhte hue.