Looteraaa
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Hmm lekin update bhi kaafi jaldi aate hStory dilchasp lag rahi hai par story build karne ke chakkar mein update badhte jaa rahe hai
Hmm lekin update bhi kaafi jaldi aate hStory dilchasp lag rahi hai par story build karne ke chakkar mein update badhte jaa rahe hai
Bhai abb vihaan normal bnda h baad m uska attitude bhi dikhna cahia na ab suru m hi vo attitude tude wala hoga to baad me bhabhi ka matter kaha aayega orr nafrat ya pyr ka kya hi masla rahega abhi to vo khud ke pyr nhi hua ager story psnd ni to band Kar du bhai orr ager aap cahte ki story do jaldi end ho jaye to m 5 , 6 episode m end kar duga kahani ko !!!!!!Hmm sahi h jis prakar se shuruwat hui h nafrat se pyar tak ka safar dekhne m maza bohot aayega.....to kuchh oot patang krne ki jarurat nahi h.... title k hisab se story badh rhi h.....agar vihaan ka gf wala pyar strong ho gaya to bhabi kese isme entry legi.....dekha jaye to bobot suspence baaki h ....kya bhai mar jyga ya kuchh or writer ne socha hoga
Kaha-kaha aapko vihan ka character pasand nhi aaya...thoda sa to mujhe bhi lagta h usne abhi tak hero jese koi chiz show nhi ki h aam sa ladka hi laga h or thoda masala laga diya h kahi kahi .....aage dekhte h kya likhte h writer sahab
Sorry bhai long story likhne ki salah thi sorry par ab ye short story hi rahegiStory dilchasp lag rahi hai par story build karne ke chakkar mein update badhte jaa rahe hai
No bro story long ho chahiye koi kuch boleSorry bhai long story likhne ki salah thi sorry par ab ye short story hi rahegi
Bro aap bhabhi ke sath pyar ya nafrat karke bhi agar sex karta hai to bhi wo incest story ho hoga hum isliye bole the incest hona chahiyeKuch bhai yaha mom se ya sister ke bich sax cahte h parr phir ye romantic story kaha se rahegi phir to mom se bhi pyr karna padega orr sister se bhi!!! ager Normal sax hi karwana h to phir ye romantic story hi nhi rahegi na na isme phir romance bachega na kuch orr !!!
Mom sax bhai bhn sax kafi story h parr m bhabhi se nafrat se pyr karwana cahta tha parr muje ni lagta ab vo bilud up hogi story ab to bss aapko bhabhi se sax dekhna h mom ke saath sax dekhna h sister ke saath sax dekhna h aapki icha ke Anusara hi hoga sab