Update - 16
Pishle update mein 
Doctor ne komal ka checkup kiya or....hmare pushne par sab normal bataya....or karib 10 baje discharge karne ka bol kar chale gye....
Maa, papa or taiji bhi aa gye or ab sab bahut khush the ke komal ab thik hai....
Ase hi time beet gya.... Doctor ne ikk last baar komal ka cheakup kiya or kush dawai likh kar di or komal ko hospital se shuti mil gyi....or hum sab ghar ke liye nikal gye......
Ab aage
Hum kush hi der mein ghar pahoch gye.... Maa or taiji komal ko sahara de kar gadi se utara or ghar ke ander le gyi...
Komal ki halat phele se ab kafi achi thi...maa or taiji komal ko uske room mein le gyi or bed par betha diya....
Main papa or tauji ke sath aa kar niche sofe pe bath gya...abi karib 12:00pm hone wala tha....tabi mujhe kisi ka call aaya to jab maine dekha to yeh call bank se tha....
Main bhul gya tha ke maine ajj bank mein shuti ke bare main nahi bataya....Maine call pe baat ki or kal bank aane ka bol kar call cut kar diya....
Ase hi hum ne mil kar khana khaya or main todi der sofe par betha or phir main uper komal ke room mein chala gya....room mein Pallavi, payal, joyti or taiji bathe hue the....main room mein ja kar ikk chair pe bath gya....sabhi aapas mein baat kar rahi thi....
Mujhe vaha bethna sahi nahi laga to main fir se niche aa gya....main us time ka wait karne laga jab komal room mein akeli ho but har baar koi na koi uske room mein hota....aase hi kafi time nikal gya but main ikk baar bhi komal se baat nahi kar paya....
Main ikk room mein ja kar late gya or mujhe kush hi der mein need aa gyi... Main karib 05:00 pm Tak sota reha..... mere need tab khuli jab joyti Almari se kush nikal rahi thi..... Yeh shayad joyti ka room tha..... Joyti ne ikk baar pishe mud kar dekha or mere ankhe khuli hui dekh kar smile ke sath boli.....
Jyoti : Good Evening......
Main bhi need main hi bola...
Main : Good Evening.... Tum jaha kya kar rahi ho....
Joyti : Tum Mere room mein ho or mujse hi push rahe ho tum jaha kya kar rahi ho....
Main : ohhh Sorry.....mujhe nahi pata tha yeh tumhara room hai.... I'm sorry....(Bed se uthte hue)
Joyti : Arre koi baat nahi.... So jao main Abi bahar ja rahi hu.....
Main : Hmmm....
Or fir se aase hi late gya...or Jyoti almari se kush nikal kar bhar chali gyi....
Bahar sofe pe komal, pallavi or payal ko shod kar sabhi bathe hue the.....
Joyti ne mami ke pass ja kar bola...
Joyti : maa main kush kaam se markit ja rahi hu abi todi der mein aa jaugi....
Mami : joyti beta abi bahut der ho gyi hai.... Subha chale jana....
Joyti : nahi maa main kush hi der mein aa jaugi.... Abi andera hone mein bhi kafi time hai....
Mami : chal thik hai chali ja.... Vese bhi tu kisi ki sunne wali to hai nahi....
Joyti : maa abi aa jaungi....
Mami : Fir Asea karo Ravi ko sath le jao....bike le jana....Jaldi vapis aa jaoge...
Joyti to shayad isi time ka hi wait kar rahi thi....or khush hote hue boli....
Joyti : hmmm...maa yeh sahi rahega....main abi bula kar lati hu...
Yeh bol kar joyti fir se room ki tarf aane lagi....
Ider room mein :
Main aase hi Lata hua kush soch reha tha... Mujhe komal ka badla hua behaviour acha bhi lag reha tha or ajeeb bhi lag reha tha ki jo abi kush din phele mujhe dekh tak nahi rahi thi vo kal raat itna ache se kese baat kar rahi thi jese kush hua hi na ho.... Mujhe kush samaj nahi aa reha tha....but main is baat se khush bhi tha ke komal kam se kam mujse baat to kar rahi hai.... Or dukh is baat ka tha ke kal mujhe apne ghar jana padega.... Mujhe pata tha komal ki abi halat sahi nahi hai to shayad vo abi itna safar nahi kar payege to komal ko 1-2 din jaha rukna padega or mujhe akele hi Jana padega.... but main komal ke Bina Ghar nahi Jana chata tha.... Jahi sab sochte sochte kafi time nikal gya....
Ider komal ke room mein ::
Komal ke pass bed par bath kar komal, pallavi or payal baat kar rahi thi...
Tabi payal ko niche se mami ne awaj lagi to payal niche chali gyi....tabi pallavi komal se boli....
Pallavi : or batao Hospital mein kese rahi raat....
Komal : yrr tum fir se vahi baat karogi...Maine tumhe phele hi bataya hai... Aesa kush nahi hai jesa tum soch rahi ho....
Joyti : hmm..... Jada natak mat karo Didi.... Aesa kush nahi hai to Us din Ravi kya kar reha tha....jis din vo aapko lene aaya tha maine sab dekha tha us din...
Komal : mujhe nahi pata vo kya sochta hai mere bare mein but mere liye hum dono bhai bahen hai....
Joyti : but Didi mujhe nahi lagta.... Ravi aapko bahen manta hai.... Mujhe lagta hai Aap Ravi ke liye bahen se badh kar hai.... Or vese bhi app dono konse Real bhai behen ho.... Aap dono cousin sister and brother ho.....
Komal : yrrr tum chup karo... Mujhe iske baare mein or koi baat nahi karni....
Pallavi : ikk baat batau....
Komal : kya....
Pallavi : Ravi Raat ko bhi....
Komal : kya raat ko bhi....
Pallavi : Ravi Raat ko bhi aapko kiss karne wala tha.... Vo to main time pe aa gyi to aap Bach gyi....
Komal : kya.... Ab Ravi ka kush jada hi ho reha hai.... Sheee.... Kitna besharam hai....Hospital mein bhi koi Aesa karta hai kya....
Pallavi : to kya Ghar pe hote to aap karne deti....
Komal : kya pallavi.... Tum bhi besharmo jesi baatein kar rahi ho....jao jaha se mujhe toda aaram karne do....
Pallavi : ikk baat or batau....
Komal : ab kya hai....
Pallavi : Ravi ab bhi tumse milne ko tadf reha hai....bolo to bula lu usko.... hospital mein jo adhura rahe gya tha vo pura kar lena....
Komal : ab tum maar khaogi.... Yeh sab tum ne kha se sikha....tumhe bilkul bhi sharam nahi hai....ab kush bhi bola to sab kush mami ko bata dugi kesi kesi gandi baatein sikh rahi ho....
Pallavi : chalo yeh majak ki baatein shodo.... Main seriously batau to jese ravi tumhare care karta hai.... Jese pishle puri 2 raat usne tumhari Dekh rekh ki mujhe lagta hai vo tumse pyaar karta hai....or jese tum sab jante hue bhi kal raat uske sath baat kar rahi thi...mujhe lagta hai tumhare Dil mein bhi uske liye kush hai....or jese tum us din Ravi ko joyti ke sath dekh kar chid rahi thi....kush to hai Tumhare Dil mein Ravi ke liye....
Komal : yahi to main nahi chati Ravi mujhe le kar koi galt fahmi pale.... Main nahi janti Ravi ke Dimag mein kya chal reha hai.... Or rahi baat hospital mein Ravi se ache se baat karne ki to main nahi chati thi ki Ravi Is accident ka jimmedar khud ko manta rahe or kisi guilt mein jeeta rahe....phele se hi maa ne use bahut suna Diya hai....
Pallavi : hmmm.....but mujhe nahi lagta ab tumhara Ashiq tumhe shodne wala hai....
Komal : yrrr ab tum paka maar khaogi....Mujhe tumse kush baat nahi karni....tumhe to koi sharam nahi hai but mujhe hai....
Pallavi : hmmm thik hai.....Ravi ko bhejti hu vahi tumhare sharam dur karega.....or apna Adhura kaam bhi pura kar lena....
Komal ne pass pada hu takiya marne ke liye uthaya but Pallavi phele hi haste hue room se bhar bhag gyi....
Pallavi ke jane ke badh komal ke dimag mein bahut se baatein chalne lagi.... Komal sochne lagi....jaldi hi Ravi ka kush karna padega... Main Aesa kabi bhi nahi hone de sakti....ghar ja kar karvi se baat karugi....jahi sab sochte sochte komal bed par late gyi.....
Ider joyti ke room mein ::
Main bed par leta hu soch reha tha or khush tha ke komal mujse ache se baat karne lagi hai....tabi room mein joyti ayi or aa kar mujse boli.....
Joyti : Ravi kya tum mere sath markit chal sakte ho....
Main : Nahi mujhe bahut need aa rahi hai....
Joyti : yrr kab se soo hi to rahe ho.... Chalo na todi der mein aa jayege.... maa ne bhi tumhe sath le kar jane ka bola hai....
Main : nahi tum chali jao mere sar mein bahut dard ho reha hai...( Jhut bolte hue)
Joyti : chalo main doctor se dawai dala dugi....
Main jana to nahi chata tha but joyti ki jid ke agge ikk na chali to maine haan bol diya....
Main : thik hai....jaldi aa jayege.....
Joyti : hmm thik hai....aa jao jaldi....(Khush hote hue)
Main : Ruko main uper kapde change kar ke ata hu....
Joyti : hmmm thik hai....
Yeh bol kar main uper komal ke room mein chala gya....komal abi soo Rahi thi....Maine apne bag se kapde nikale or washroom mein chala gya...todi der ke badh bhar aya to dekha....komal abi ghari need mein so Rahi thi... shayad dawai ka asar tha....
Main ready ho kar niche chala gya...joyti ne mujhe car ki key dete hue bola....
Joyti : chale.....
Main : bike se chalte hai....
Joyti : hmm thik hai....
Fir joyti bike ki key le kar ayi
Tabi pass mein bathi mami boli....
Mami : Ravi beta dhiyan se jana....isko pata nahi itni late markit Jane ki kya padi hai....joyti andhera hone se phele Ghar aa jana.....
Joyti : hmmm maa aa jayege.....
Ab karib 06:00 pm ka time ho gya tha or hum dono markit ke liye nikal gye....
Joyti raste mein bahut kush bol rahi thi or main bus hu hmm mein hi jawab de reha tha....Ase hi hum kush 15-20 minutes mein markit phoch gye.. Joyti ne mujhe ikk bade se shopping mall ke samne bike rokne ka bola....Maine bike parking stand par laga di or hum dono mall ke ander chale gye....
joyti ne mujhe uske sath saman kharidne ka bola but main uske sath nahi gya or ikk soffe par bath kar phone chalane laga....
Joyti akele hi samna kharidne lagi jiske liye vo markit ayi thi.... Joyti ne pata nahi kya kya kharida or karib 1 hour ke badh vapis aayi...usne bill pe pay Kiya or hum mall se bahar aa gye....bahar bahut andera ho gya tha or karib 07:30 pm ka time ho gya tha....tabi joyti ke phone pe call aaya...
Joyti : hlo maa...
Mami : kha rahe gye tum dono...kitna andhera ho gya hai....
Joyti : kya maa itna to time lagna hi tha....bus hum kush hi der mein aa jayege....
Mami : hmm dhiyan se aana....
Joyti : thik hai maa....
Yeh bol kar joyti ne call cut kar diya....
Ider komal ke room mein ::
Komal ki need karib 07:00 pm par khuli gyi....karib 15 minutes ke badh pallavi komal ke room mein ayi or Dono normal hi baatein karne lagi....ase hi dono kush der baatein karti rahi tabi todi der badh niche se mami ki awaj aane lagi....tabi komal pallavi se boli....
Komal : pallavi mami itni jor jor se Kispe chila rahi hai.....
Pallavi : vo kush nahi.....joyti markit gyi thi....itna late ho gya abi tak nahi aaye dono.....
Komal : or kon gya hai uske sath....
Pallavi : Ravi Dono gye hai....
Komal : kya....Ravi dono....
Pallavi : kyu.....kya hua....
Komal : nahi kush nahi....
Pallavi : kush to hua.... kush jalne ki smell aa rahi hai....
Komal pallavi ki baat samaj gyi or boli...
Komal : yrrr tumhe asi baatein karni hai....to jao jaha se mujhe tumse kush baat nahi karni....
Pallavi : chalo thik hai....nahi karti....par sach batau to kush to jalne ki smell aa rahi hai.....
Komal : rahne do jao jaha se mujhe kush baat nahi karni....
Payal : kisse baat nahi karni....
Komal : nahi Didi hum dono to ase hi baat kar rahi thi.....
Payal : tum Dono mein ladai ho gyi kya....
Pallavi : ladai or hum dono mein ho hi nahi sakta...hum to ase hi majak kar rahi thi....kyu komal Didi...(Smile karte hue)
Komal : hmmmm.....(Pallavi ko ankh dikhate hue)
Ase hi fir teeno baatein karne lagi....
Ider markit mein ::
Call cut hone ke badh joyti mujhe ikk restaurant mein le gyi or humne kush khana khaya....Ase hi hume 1 hour aur beet gya....
Hum dono bahut late ghar phoche.... Mami ne mujhe to kush nahi bola but joyti ko bahut sunaya....but joyti ko iska koi farak nahi pada or vo apne room mein chali gyi..... Main vahi sofe par papa, tauji or mama ke sath bath gya.....
Main bahar betha hua komal ke bare mein sochne laga...main komal se milna chata tha but koi na koi komal ke room mein hota....jiske karan hospital se aane ke badh ikk baar bhi komal se nahi mil paya....mujhe pata tha maa, taiji pallavi or payal niche nahi hai to pakka komal ke room mein hogi....but fir bhi main utha or komal ke room ki tarf chal pada....
Jab main room mein phocha to sabhi komal ke room mein hi the.....jab maine door khola to sabhi ne ikk baar meri tarf dekha or baatein karne lage....
Jab main room mein aaya to maa ne mujse bola....
Maa : Ravi aa gya beta.....itni der kha laga di tum dono ne.....dekho kitna time ho gya hai.....
Main : Haanji aa gya....
Yeh bol kar main vahi pass mein padi ikk chair pe bath gya.....main toda khush tha ke maa ne mujse baat ki.....meri najar komal ke face par hi thi...but komal niche sar karke bathi hui thi....komal ko bhi shayad pta chal gya tha ke main use hi dekh reha hu......
Pass mein bathi pallavi najar bacha kar mere or Komal ke face ko hi dekh rahi thi....or halka sa muskura rahi thi.....
Todi der badh mami room mein ayi or mujhe boli....
Mami : Ravi beta....Aaja niche khana laga Diya hai khana kha lo....bahut der ho gyi hai...
Main : Nahi mami....Maine bahar se hi kha liya tha.....
Mami : thik hai.....
Mami yeh bol kar Room se bhar chali gyi or uske sath maa or taiji bhi chali gyi....
Main vahi chair pe bathe hue phone chalane laga....Mera dhiyan phone mein kaam or komal pe jada tha.....main baar baar najar bacha kar komal ke face ko dekh reha tha....but pallavi ki najar se nahi Bach paya....
Main aase hi todi der phone chalate reha or fir uth kar niche chala gya.... Kyu ke mujhe pata tha pallavi or payal ke hote hue abi komal se kush baat nahi ho payegi.....
Main niche aa kar fir se Papa, tauji or mama ke sath Beth gya...maa or taiji kichan mein mami ki help kar rahi thi....
Main papa se bola....
Main : papa subha main ghar ja reha hu....mujhe bank jana hai...
Papa : hmm main bhi subha chaluga....tumhare maa, tauji- taiji or komal kush din badh aayege....tumhare mama shod aayege apni gadi se....
Tabi maa kichan se ayi or boli....
Maa : hmm Ravi...apne papa ke sath chale jana gadi mein jaldi phoch jaoge...
Main : hmm thik hai maa....
Papa : subha hume jaldi nikalna hoga....abi ja kar so jao Ravi.....
Main : thik hai...
Main Ghar jane se phele ikk baar komal se baat karna chata tha....but koi chance nahi mil reha tha....fir bhi maine ikk baar fir komal ke room mein jane ka fasla kiya or Room ki tarf chal pada....raste mein mujhe payal niche aate mile....maine maan Mein hi socha chalo Kam se kam ikk kantta to nikala....abi room mein Pallavi rahe gyi thi komal ke sath....
Maine jab room ka door khola to pallavi or komal ne meri tarf dekha or pallavi mujhe dekh kar halki se smile karne lagi or fir komal ke face ko dekhne lagi.... komal ne pallavi ko ghur kar dekha to pallavi ne muh pe hath rakhte hue apni hasi ko dabane ki koshish ki.... pallavi samaj gyi thi ki main komal se baat karna chata hu or shayad komal ko bhi pta tha but Vo baat nahi karna chati thi....iska karan mujhe nahi pta kya tha...
Main ja kar chair pe bath gya....or kush sochne laga....to mujhe ikk idea aiya or maine ikk risk lete hue pallavi se bola....
Main : pallavi Tumhe mami niche bula rahi thi.... shayad kush kaam hai...
Pallavi samaj to gyi thi but fir bhi smile ke sath boli....
Pallavi : itni raat ko maa ko mujse kya kaam ho sakta hai....
Main : pata nahi shayad koi hoga....(Jhijkte hue bola)
Komal or pallavi sab samaj Rahi thi aur fir pallavi boli.....
Pallavi : thik hai main abi aati hu....(Komal ko dekh kar halki smile karte hue boli)
Yeh bol kar pallavi bed se uthne lagi....mujhe apna plan safal hote hue dikhne laga....but tabi komal pallavi se boli....
Komal : Ruko pallavi.....todi der ke badh chale jana....
Pallavi : main abi aati hu Didi.....maa ki baat sun kar....
Komal ne ishare se pallavi ko rukne ka bola but pallavi ne uski baat nahi mani or yeh bol kar pallavi Room se bhar Jane lagi to pallavi ke door kholne se phele hi bahar se payal ne door khola or room mein aa gyi....
Yeh dekh kar pallavi jor jor se hasne lagi or room se bhar chali gyi....komal ke face pe bhi halki se smile aa gyi..
payal ko pallavi ke hasne ka kush bhi matlab samaj nahi aaya or aa kar bed par bath gyi...
Payal : yeh pallavi ko kya ho gya itna haas kyu rahi thi...
Komal : kush nahi didi....bus ase hi....(Halki smile se)
Main pass mein chair pe betha apni kismat ko kosne laga...mujhe bahut kam gussa ata tha but is baar mujhe apni kismat pe or payal Didi dono pe bahut gussa aaya....kyuki mere hisab se abi tak mera plan sahi ja reha tha but payal Didi ne aa kar sab khrab kar diya....
Main ase hi todi der vahi betha reha or fir niche aa gya....ab raat bhi bahut ho gyi thi or mujhe pta tha...ab koi chance nahi milega komal se baat karne ka to maine maa se sone ka pusha to maa ne ikk room mein ja kar sone ka bola or main room mein chala gya....
Ider pallavi ne mami se komal ke sath sone ka bola or uske room mein chali gyi.....
Komal ko pta tha pallavi fir se vahi sab bakwas karegi to komal ne pallavi se bola....
Komal : pallavi tum jaha kya kar rahi ho....
Pallavi : kyu kisi or ka intezar tha kya...?
Komal : mujhe pta tha Tum jahi bakwas karne ayi hogi.....chalo jao so jao mujhe need aa rahi hai....
Pallavi : main to jaha sone ayi hu....
Komal : thik hai chup chap so jao....
Pallavi : hmmm....thik hai Didi...
Yeh bol kar pallavi bed pe komal ke sath late gyi....kush der pallavi chup rahi or fir boli.....
Pallavi : ikk baat bolu Didi .....
Komal :.................(Kush nahi boli)
Pallavi : Bolo Didi kya hua....so gyi kya....
Komal : Nahi.....Karo Jo bakwas karni hai.....
Pallavi : Rahne do Didi mujhe aapse kush nahi bolna....Good night so jao....(Gusse se)
Komal : ab kya ho gya....bol kya bolna hai....
Pallavi : nahi rahne do Didi....so jao...
Komal : ab bolegi bhi.....
Pallavi : thik hai.....Ravi bhaiya ko dekha kese tadap rahe hai baat karne ko....
Komal : Dekho isliye bolti hu tumhe sirf bakwas karni hoti hai,,, Rahne do mujhe kush baat nahi karni....
Pallavi : yrrr ikk baar baat to suno....
Komal : kya hai....
Pallavi : Didi Tumhe bhi pta hai....vo tumhari kitni fikar karta hai....fir aap use baat kyu nahi kar rahi.....
Komal : maine bola use fikar karne ka.... accident wali uski galti thi isliye vo yeh sab kar reha hai....or main Ravi se dur hi rehna chati hu.....or kush....
Pallavi : Didi aap shayad bhul gyi hai....vo accident se phele hi aapse payar karta hai.....
Komal : Dekho pallavi mere Dil mein uske liye kush nahi hai.....or na hi kabi hoga.....hum sirf bhai behen hai.....or hamesha rahege....ab iske bare mein koi baat nahi...so jao....
Pallavi : Bhai behan nahi.... cousin ho....Or rahi baat Dil ki vo to maine dekh liya hai....jab bhi tum joyti Didi or ravi Bhaiya ko sath mein dekhti ho to sab dikhta hai tumhare face pe.....
Komal : cousin bhi to bhai behen hote hai....shodo yrrr please so jao mujhe iske bare mein or kush baat nahi karni.....
Pallavi : ikk or baat batau.....
Komal : yrrr tum so Rahi ho ke nahi....
Pallavi : ikk baar suno to Didi....
Komal : hmmm....bolo kya hai....
Pallavi : subha ravi Bhaiya....ja rehe hai....
Komal : kya....tumhe kisne bola....
Pallavi : jab main niche gyi thi to maa ne bataya.... Shayad isi liye Ravi bhaiya jane se phele aapse baat karna chate the......
Komal : kitne baje ja raha hai....
Pallavi : shayad subha jaldi nikal jaye....kyu aapko kya hua....aapko konsi kisi ki feeling ki kadar hai....
Komal : or kon ja reha hai uske sath....
Pallavi : Shayad uncle bhi ja rahe hai.....
Komal : hmm Thik hai....Ab so Jaa....
Pallavi : thik hai.... Good night
Yeh bol kar pallavi dusri side muh kar ke so gyi....
Komal bhi dusri side muh kar ke sochne lagi......ab Ravi ka bahut jada ho reha hai......mujhe usse baat karni padegi.....main yeh sab nahi hone de sakti.....but pallavi sach bol rahi hai....main jab bhi Ravi ko joyti ke sath dekhti hu to mujhe acha kyu nahi lagta.... uski life hai vo jese marji kisi ke bhi sath Rahe to mujhe kyu ajeeb lagta hai....vese bhi mere shodne ke badh vo ikk na ikk din to kisi or ladki se shaadi karega hi....or Ab uske jaane se mujhe acha kyu nahi lag reha....Kya sach mein jesa pallavi bol rahi thi....main Ravi se or Ravi mujse....nahi nahi main Aesa nahi hone dugi....Jo bhi ho jaye Main Ravi ko or aage nahi badne dugi...mujhe usse baat karni hogi...
Yahi sab sochte hue komal ko need aa gyi.....
ider Main bhi room mein todi der ase hi leta reha or fir kush time mein meri bhi ankh lag gyi....
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Bahut hi mast update hai bhai
Ravi aur Komal ka beech ye pyaar jo dono ko ehsaas nahi woh mast chal Raha Hain
Ab Ravi apna ghar ayega , woh toh chahta hai Komal sa baat karna ko lekin Situation aisi ho ja rahi hai ki Komal sa uski baat ho nahi pa rahi hain
Pallavi bahut hi mazze le rahe hain Komal ki , ab dekhta hai kya hoga kya komal apna dil ka andar jo feelings hai use samjh sakegi
Mazza aayega next update main.
