Incest BHAI BAHEN KI SHAADI (incest)

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[Ranveerj]

Update -09​

Pishle update mein ​

Fir mane bhut sochne ke badh Didi se baat karne ka fesla kiya or bed se uth gaya.​

Bed se uth kar main Dhere Dhere Didi ke pass gaya or Didi ko bola.......(Jhijkte hue bola..)​

Ab Aage ​

Main bolne hi wala tha ke Didi ne pishe mud kar dekha to main toda sa ghabra gaya or pass main pada kush dekha or hadbada kar mere muh se nikal gya......​

Main : vo vo Comb/ Kangi chaiye tha...​

Komal kush nahi boli or mujhe Comb/kangi pakda diya. Main fir ase komal ke pishe khad kar mirror main dekh kar hair sahi karne laga. Komal mere Aage ki side bath kar narvous feel kar raho thi.....​

main mirror mein komal Didi ko dekh reha tha par komal Didi apni Ankhe niche kar ke mere vaha se Jane ka intezar kar rahi thi.....fir mene kangi/comb vahi pass mein rakha or vapis se bed par aa kar bath gaya.

Narvous to mein bhi bhut tha...Ab Didi ke pass Jane ki himmat nahi rahi. Jo todi bhut himmat thi vo abhi nikal gyi.

Main bed par bath kar fir se mobile chalane laga but mobile main kha dil lagne wala tha. Main bich bich main komal Didi ko dekh leta but kush kar nahi pa reha tha kyuki mujhe komal Didi ke gusse ka pata tha. Or bolta bhi Kya.

Fir kush time main komal tiyar ho gyi. Komal bhut hi sunder lag rahi thi. Komal ka itna khubsurat sa chera dekh kar mere ankhe hat hi nahi rahi thi. Gora sa face, gallon par halki se lali ayi Hui thi, gaalon pe halke ghare dimple. Komal ko ase dekh kar ab main toda bhakne laga tha. Main ikk baar fir se bhul gya ke hum dono bhai bahen hai. Pata nahi sharam thi ja kya komal mujse najar nahi mila rahi. Vo bus najar niche kar ke apne kaam mein lagi hui thi.

Komal uth kar bed ke pass ayi or beg mein apne phone ka charger rakhne lagi. Komal bilkul bhi mere tarf nahi dekh rahi thi. ​

Niche se taiji ki awaj ayi jo shayad komal ko awaj laga rahi thi. ​

Awaj sunte hi komal bhar seediyon pe gyi or taiji ko kush bola or fir se room main aa gyi or sidha washroom main chali gyi. Main pata nahi kyu komal ki har harkat ko note kar reha tha. ​

Ase hi ab komal or tauji- taiji ke jane ka time aa gya. Ab fir se mujhe pata nahi kya hone laga. Komal ne bed se apna bag uthaya or bhar Jane lagi. Pata nahi kyu ajj Maan to kar reha tha ke komal ka hath pakdu or ikk baar gale laga lu but ab itni himmat bhi to hone chahiye jo mujme abi nahi thi.​

Komal to in sabse bilkul anjan thi. Komal ko bilkul bhi farak nahi pad reha tha. Komal to shayad mujse dur hi rahena chati thi. ​

Main or kush to kar nahi sakta tha to jese hi komal beg lekar niche Jane lagi to Main jaldi se bed se utha or komal ko bola..​

Main : mujhe beg pakda do main niche le aata hu......​

Komal kush nahi boli or mujhe beg pakda kar room se bhar Jane lagi or main bhi beg le kar piche piche Jane laga.​

Niche ja kar dekha tha tauji- taiji already tiyar ho chuke the. Shayad komal Didi ka hi wait kar rahe the. ​

Kafi time ho gaya tha to tauji jaldi se uthe or maa or mujhe bole......​

Tauji : thik hai ab hume nikalana chahiye kafi time ho gaya hai...​

5-6 hours ka rasta tha. Or uper se thand ka mussam tha. Isliye tauji jitna jaldi ho sakta tha nikalna chate the. ​

Yeh bol kar tauji beg lekar bhar gadi ke pass Jane Lage to main bhi komal ka beg le kar unke piche piche Jane laga. Tauji or maine gadi main beg rakh diye tab tak maa, komal or taiji bhi bhar aa gyi.​

Ab mere halat to bhut buri ho gyi thi. Mujhe kush samaj nahi aa reha tha ke Pata nahi Aesa kyu ho reha hai. Komal phele bhi kafi baar apne mama ke jaha gyi thi but tab mujhe kabi kush fark nahi padta tha. But ajj aesa kyu ho reha hai uska jawab bhi mere pass nahi tha. Bus Dil jahi chata tha ke komal na jaye. But ab shayad yeh hona mumkin nahi tha. ​

Tauji gadi main bath gye. komal maa ke gale lagi fir phele taiji or fir komal gadi main bath gyi.​

Komal ne mere tarf ikk baar bhi nahi dekha. mujhe thoda bura to laga but kar bhi kya sakta tha. Komal or taiji ke bathne ke badh tauji ne gadi start ki or ghar se nikal gye.​

Main or maa ghar main aa gye. Maa apne room main chali gyi or main apne room main chala gya. Main apne Room main ja kar bed pe late gya or kush sochne laga.​

Mere dimag mein apne aap se bhut sare sawal chal rahe the. Jinka jawab shayad abi mere pass nahi tha.​

Main maan mein soch reha tha ke : kya ho gaya hai mujhe? Mere Dil main ase ajeeb se feeling kyu AA Rahi hai? Komal ke dur jane se ajj mujhe problem kyu ho Rahi hai ? Jabki komal phele kai baar Akele apne mama ke jaha gyi hai. Tab to mujhe kabi Aesa feel nahi hua. Aesa kyu ho reha hai? Jaha tak ki komal to ab mujse baat tak nahi karti. In sabi swalon se Mera dimag fatne laga tha.​

Yahi sab sochte sochte pata nahi kab mere Ankh lag gyi.​

Mere ankh sham ko karib 06:00pm par maa ke awaj dene par khuli. Mane uth kar dekha to maa Room ke darwaje par kadi thi. Or mujhe awaj laga rahi thi. Maa ne mujhe jaldi se niche aane ka bola or khud niche chali gyi.​

Main uth kar phele bathroom gya or muh dho kar bhar aya. Mane bed pe pada apna phone uthaya or niche chala gaya. maa kichan mein thi. Main sidha kichan main chala gaya. Jaha maa kush kaam kar rahi thi. Mane maa se pusha...​

Main : Maa aapne mujhe kyu bulaya...​

Maa : Haan beta....aa gye..​

Main : kya kaam hai maa....​

Maa : yeh saman le kar ana hai markit se.....​

Maa ne mujhe ikk list di.....​

Main : thik hai.....​

Fir mane Friz se ikk botal nikali or pani pe kar kichan se bhar aa gaya. Mane jaldi se apne room se bike ki key le aya or fir markit ke liye nikal gaya.​

Pure Raste fir se vahi sab sawal mere dimag main chalne lage. Mujhe kush samaj nahi aa reha tha ke Akhir ho kya reha hai.​

Jahi sab sochte sochte main markit phoch gaya. Ikk shop par ja kar samaan ki list shopkeeper ko di or vo samman niklvane laga.​

Vahi pass main ikk new married couple bhi saman le reha tha or ladki ka face mere side tha or ladke ki peth mere side thi. Pishe se dekhne se vo ladka mujhe kush jana phechana lag reha tha.​

But face dusri side hone se kush pata nahi chal reha tha.​

Main bhut gor se use dekh reha tha. Achank se us ladki ki najar muj pe padi or mujhe unki side itne gor se dekhte hue paya to vo ladki mujhe bhut gusse se dekh kar face niche kar liya or main bhi toda hadbda kar ider uder dekhne laga. Mujhe pata chal gaya ke us ladki ne kush galat samaj liya hai. Fir main kush der unki side nahi dekha.​

But Mera dhayan fir se us ladke ki side gaya ke us ladke ko pishe se dekh kar aesa kyu laga jese main ise janta hu. Mane ikk baar fir se mud kar us ladke ko dekha abi bhi uska face dusri side tha or ladki bhi niche face kiye hue thi.​

Main fir se gor se thoda side se ho kar dekhne laga or Achank fir se ladki ne face uper kiya or mujhe fir se use dekhte hue dekh liya. Mere najar usse mili to main fir se hadbada gaya or dusri side muh kar liya. Is baar ladki ko shayad bhut gussa aya or usne apne pati ko sab bata diya.​

Uska pati mud kar mere side aya or mujhe kande pe hath laga kar bola....​

Ladka : Hello bhai sabh.....​

Main toda dar gaya tha kyuki Anjane main hi sahi par mere galti to thi. Chahe main us ladke ko dekh reha tha but mujhe pata tha koi bhi mere baat nahi manega. Sab ko lagega main hi galt najar se dekh reha hu. Sab ladki ko hi support karege. But todi himmat karke main pishe muda to dekha.....​

Ladka : Are Ravi Tum....​

Main : Suraj tum.....​

Yeh ladka Suraj mere School ka friend tha jo 10th ke badh kisi Dusre shar main apne mama ke vaha chala gya tha. Or uske badh ajj mila tha. School se jane ke badh phele kush month phone par hamare baat hoti thi but dhere dhere phone karna bhi band ho gya. Suraj ikk pass ke gav main rehta tha or school main hum bhut ache dost the. Ikk dusre ke ghar se dur hone ke karan hum ajj tak 1-2 baar hi ikk dusre ke ghar gye the. Mere maa papa or uske maa papa kabi kabi school ke parents meeting mein hi apas mein milte the. But Suraj ke maa papa ka sahbav acha tha to mere maa papa or suraj ke maa papa ikk dusre ko ache se janne Lage the.​

Suraj : Are yrr Ravi kesa hai tu....( Halki se smile se )​

Main : main thik hu tum batao......(Mere saanse abi bhi todi yej chal Rahi thi)​

Suraj : main bhi thik hu.....or bata ghar main Uncle Aunty kese hai....​

Main : sab thik hai... Tu bata kha tha itne saal....kabi mud ke aya hi nahi ider or Uncle-Aunty sab kese hai...​

Uncle-Aunty ka naam sunte hi Suraj ka chehra utar gya or dukhi maan se bola....​

Suraj : Vo maa to pishle saal hi gujar gayi hai.....( Dukhi maan se)​

Main : ohhh Sorry....(Dukhi ho kar bola )​

Main : kya hua tha.....(Udaas maan se)​

Suraj : Herat Attack hua tha....(Nam Ankho se)​

Main : Hmm....​

Suraj : chal shod yeh sab bate Jo hona tha vo ho gaya....Ab kya hi milega Dukhi ho kar.( Ankhe pochte hue)​

Or bata kha tha tu itne saal kabi apne dost ki yaad nahi ayi..​

Main : yeh yaad wali baat to tu mat kar....tu hi shod kar gya tha ....​

Pass main khadi uski wife hum dono ko dekh rahi thi....​

Main : main kab se tumhe pishe se phechane ki koshish kar reha tha but tumhara face dusri side tha....​

Suraj : ohh Tum mujhe dekh rahe the....or hum galat samaj liye.....(Halki se smile se bola)​

Main : kya samaj liye.....(Mujhe pata tha but anjan bante hue)​

Suraj : kush nahi.....vo bus mere wife ko laga tum use dekh rahe ho....( Mushkrate hue apni wife ko dekh kar)​

Main : main nahi vo......( Thoda sa jhijkte hue)​

Main itna hi bola tha ke Suraj bola...​

Suraj : Haan Haan bhai rahne do mujhe sab pata hai tum ase nahi ho......main bachpan se janata hu tumhe....(Haste hue)​

Main : hmmm...​

Suraj : Are main to bhul hi Gaya...yeh mere biwi hai Sunita....​

Main : Namaste.....( Hath jod kar)​

Usne bhi hath jod kar namaste bola....​

Suraj : or bata kya kar reha hai aaj kal....​

Main : main vo ikk govt. bank main job karta hu ....or tum kya kar rahe ho....​

Suraj : Badiya hai ......Main govt. School main teacher hu......​

Main : fir to bhut badiya hai...​

Itne Main shopkeeper ne mujhe awaj lagai. shopkeeper ne saman ka bill bana kar mujhe de diya or main bill pay Kiya.​

Suraj ka bhi saman ho gaya tha or saman le kar mere pass aya or bola...​

Suraj : chal aja kahi sath main bathte hai....​

Main : nahi main chalta hu abi.​

Suraj : Aree Aaja bhai...bhut deno badh mile hai todi der bathte hai....​

Suraj ke bhut jid karne par mujhe suraj ko haan bolna pada or fir hum ikk restaurant chale gye...ikk table par bath kar Suraj ne kush order Kiya or hum baat karne lage....​

Suraj ki wife sunita Suraj se bich bich main kush normal hi baat karti or jada tar hamari baate sun rahi thi...sunita ikk samjdaar, padi likhi or sanskari ladki thi.​

Main Suraj se baat karte hue bola.....​

Main : Suraj tumne shadi kab ki or mujhe bataya tak nahi ....​

Suraj : Nahi yrrr maa ke chale jane ke badh bhut Jaldi main shadi karni padi... Shadi mein sirf Badi didi or mama ke ghar ke log hi the...​

Main: Haan....​

Suraj : Mere shod tum bata tumne shadi ki ke nahi abi tak......ja abi tak ladkiyaon ko ignore mar rahe ho....​

Main ab kya hi bolta ke mane shadi ki ja nahi or ki bhi hai to kisse ki hai. Ab mujhe fir se komal ki yaad aa gyi or main chup ho gaya. Mujhe chup hua dekh Suraj bola..​

Suraj: kya hua Ravi....​

Mujhe pata nahi kya hua or maine ikk dum se bola...​

Main : Haan.......​

Mere muh se Haan sunte hi Suraj ne sawalon ki boshar kar di....​

Suraj : Kab ki shadi tumne ?....kisse ki ?....kon hai ?....kha se hai?​

Mane Haan bol to Diya Par ab mujhe samaj nahi aa reha tha ke Suraj ke sawalon ka kya jawab du ke kab ki shadi or kisse ki. Ab mujhe kush to sawalon ka jawab dena hi tha to mane bola.​

Main : kush months phele ki ikk ladki se....​

Suraj : haan bhai pata hai ladki se hi karoge or ladke se thodi karoge....(Haste hue..)​

Main : Haan....(Halki se muskan ke sath)​

Suraj : kon hai kahi vo school wali Anu to nahi jo ki tumhare pishe padi hui thi but tumne kabi use bhav nahi diya....​

Main : nahi yrrr...​

Itne Main hamara order aa gaya or hum khana khane lage...khana khate hue humne koi jada baate nahi ki. Ab toda Andhera hone laga tha. khana kha kar main Suraj se bola.​

Main : Suraj ab main chalta hu fir milte hai...Ab tum kahi ja to nahi rahe ho na...​

Suraj : Nahi Ab main kahi nahi jaa reha.....jahi transfer karva liya hai...​

Main : badiya hai.... Chal fir milte hai.....mujhe apna new number de..​

Fir Suraj ne mujhe pana new number diya..or maine use miss call kar di...​

Mane bye bola or vaha se nikal gaya...​

Ghar phochne tak fir se mere dimag main vahi sab sawal chalne lage. Ab ikk sawal or badh gya ke jab Suraj ne mujse pusha ke tumne shadi ki ke nahi to mane use haan kyu bola? Mana karna chahiye tha. Phele tension kam thi jo ikk or tension gal pa lyi. Par ab jo hona tha vo to ho gya tha.​

Jahi sab sochte hue main ghar phoch gaya. Jab main ghar phocha tab tak Dad bhai ghar aa gye the or sofe par bath kar T.v main news dekh rahe the.​

Maa kichan main khana bana rahi thi. Mane kichan main ja kar saman maa ko diya. Maa ne mujse pusha ke itni der kha lag gyi to mane maa ko Suraj se milne wali sab baat bata di. Maa suraj ko janti thi to maa mujse uske or uske ghar walo ke bare main pushne lagi. Fir mane maa ko uske maa ke bare mein bhi sab bata diya to maa ko bhut dukh hua yeh sun kar. Suraj ki maa ka sambhav acha tha. Mere maa or suraj ke maa beshak kabi kabi milti thi but kabi kabi dono phone par baat kar leti thi. Par jab se Suraj or mera milna kaam hua hai unke bhi baat bhut kaam ho gyi thi. Dono ikk dusre ko achi tarh janti thi. Suraj ke maa ki death ki khabar sun kar maa mujse boli ke kush din mein vo suraj ke ghar unse pushne ke liye jayege. Maine haa bola diya.​

Maa khana bana rahi thi to maine maa ko apne liye khane ka mana kar diya kyuki main abhi suraj ke sath khana khaya tha.​

Fir main papa ke paas ja kar todi der batha or kush normal bate ki or T.V dekhne laga. Kush der ke badh main uth kar apne Room main aa gya. ​

maa kush der badh kichan se bhar aa gyi or sofe par bath kar t.v dekhne lagi. Tabi papa maa se bole...

Papa : Ragni komal se kush baat Hui...kha phoch gye hai vo....

Maa : abi mere to kush baat nahi Hui, shayad ravi ne phone kar ke pusha ho komal ko call karke.

Papa : Hmmm.....Ajj komal beti ghar nahi hai to kitna suna suna sa ghar lag reha hai......kal tak kitni shoti the or ajj dekho kitni badi ho gyi hai. Jab shoti se thi tab se hi bhaiya or bhabhi se jada hamare sath hi rehti thi...ajj ikk din ke liye hi gyi hai to Ghar suna suna sa lag reha hai...

Maa : Hmmm...sach mein mera bhi apke jesa hi haal hai....shukhar hai komal ki shadi ravi se karva di, ab hamare beti kahi nahi jayegi....sach batau to mera bhi komal Bina Ghar mein bilkul bhi jee nahi lag reha...

Papa : Hmmm.... Sahi kha...ab hamre beti hamare pass hi rahegi....(Nam ankho se)

Maa : chalo udaas mat ho....khana kha lo......ajj jayegi ikk din mein apki ladli beti....

Papa : hmmmm....

Yeh bol kar papa khane ke table pe chale gye or maa ne papa ko khana pros diya...

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Ider Room main aa kar mujhe ajj kush Adhura Adhura sa lag reha tha or yeh thi room main komal ki kami. Main bed par let gya or fir se pata nahi kitne hi sawal dimag main chalne lage. Mujhe kush samaj nahi aa reha tha. Chahe pishle kush dino se komal baat nahi karti thi or room main shanti hi rahti thi but ajj yeh Shanti achi nahi lag rahti. Mera dimag baar baar komal ki side hi jaa reha tha.​

Main kush der ase hi bed par leta reha. Mane phone utha kar time dekha to abhi 08:00pm hua tha. Kush der ase hi leta or fir ikk dum se Dimag main aya kyu na ikk baar komal ko call kar ke push lu ke phoch gye ke nahi. Fir turant hi khiyal aya Nahi yrr rahne de komal mujse gussa hai vo baat nahi karege. ikk to maan kar reha tha call kar lu or ikk maan kar reha tha nahi. kabhi main sochta ke call kar leta hu mane to bus usse jahi pushne ke liye hi to call karna hai ke phoch gye ke nahi but yeh pushne ka to ikk bhana tha asal mein main ikk baar komal se baat karna chata tha. But ab kush samaj nahi aa reha tha ke kese call karu. Komal aage se pata nahi baat karegi bhi ja nahi.​

Tabhi mujhe bhar se maa ki awaj aayi.​

Maa : Ravi beta ....Darwaja khol​

Main jaldi se gaya or darwaja khola.....maa dudh ka glaas liye khadi thi. main dudh ka glass le kar under jane laga to maa ne bola.​

Maa : Ravi komal ko phone laga kar pusha ke nahi. Sahi se phoch gye ja nahi.​

Main : nahi maa abi karne hi wala tha...(Jhuth bolte hue)​

Maa : chal phone laga kar de mujhe main pushti hu kha phoche..​

Main toda khush bhi ho gaya ke chahe komal se direct baat to nahi hogi but kam se kam uski awaj sun luga. Mane turant komal ko phone lagaya or phone handsfree kar ke maa ko de Diya....​

Dusri side jab komal ne mere phone se call dekha to ikk baar to toda ghabhra gyi or call nahi uthaya....​

Maa ne fir se call karne ka bola or mane firse call laga diya.​

Dusri side jab komal ne fir se mere number se call dekha to fir se thoda tension main aa gyi or sochne lagi ab isko kya hai. Ab ise kya chahiye. kyu call kar reha hai baar baar. Komal mera phone dekh kar hi chidne lagi thi. Jab komal ka call baja to taiji bhi pass main bathi hui thi to bole....​

Taiji : yeh kiska phone aa reha hai baar baar komal.... Phone uthao...​

Komal : Haan....​

Or is baar komal ko na chate hue bhi phone uthana hi pada. Komal ne toda sa narvous feel karte hue phone utha liya....or bola...​

Komal: Hlo.....( Narvous hote hue)​

Maa : Hlo.....komal beti....​

Ikk dum se Maa ki awaj sun kar komal toda acha feel karte hue....​

Komal : Haaji maa....​

Maa : Komal beti....phoch gye ke nahi...​

Komal: Haan maa bus phochne Hi wale hai. Abi 10-15 km ka rasta hai.​

Maa : abi Ravi ke Room main dudh Dene ayi thi to Ravi ko call karne ke liye bola...​

Komal : Haan......​

Main apni maa ke pass bed par betha dono ki bate sun reha tha. Tabi niche se Papa ne maa ko Awaj di to maa komal se boli...​

Maa : komal......yeh ravi se baat kar tere papa mujhe niche bula rahe hai.....​

Maa ne mujhe phone pakda diya or maa jaldi se room se nikal kar niche chali gyi. Mane phone kan par lagaya. Ab hum Dono hi chup the koi kush nahi bol reha tha. Dono ki Dhadkane bhad gyi thi. Phele baat karne main or ab baat karne main bhut farak tha. Phele hum kush bhi bina soche samjhe bol dete the but ab na chate hue bhi hum dono pati-patni the. jab dono mein se koi nahi bola to maine hi is chupi ko todna sahi samja or bolao.....​

Main : Hlo.....( Thoda narvous feel karte hue)​

Mere awaj sunte hi komal ke dimag mein pata nahi kya aya usne ikk dum se call cut kar diya.​

Ikk baar to mujhe bhut bura laga but ab kya hi karta......​

Fir mane phone rakha or fir se wahi sab sawal dimag main chalne lage. Aesa kyu ho reha hai? Kyu ab Aesa ajeeb sa feel hone laga hai? Kyu ab mein komal ki Awaj sunne me liye tadap reha hu. Mane kyu Suraj ke shadi ke bare main pushne par Haan bol diya ? Komal maa se kitna ache se baat kar rahi thi or mujse baat kyu nahi kar rahi ? Mane Aesa kya kar diya hai jo komal mujse itni nafrat karne lagi hai ? Ab mere Ankhe nam hone lagi but ab main kush kar bhi nahi sakta tha. Bhut der tak Jahi sab sochte hue mujhe pata nahi kab need aa gyi.​

Komal ke mama ke ghar::::​

Dusri side komal ko kush farak nahi pada or todi der badh mama ke ghar phoch gye. Ghar phoch kar sabhi se mile. Jyoti bhi unke aane se phele to bhut khush thi but jab use pata chala ke main nahi aya hu to uska chehra utar gya or chid kar apne room mein chali gyi. kafi raat ho gyi thi to sab khana kha kar sone chale gye. Komal ikk room mein ja kar bed par late gyi.​

Komal ko ab acha lag reha tha kyu ki main nahi tha vaha. Or bed par late kar sochne lagi acha hua ajj main/Ravi uske sath nahi hu. Ajj kitne dino badh mujhe sukoon ki need ayegi. Ajj kitne dino badh main bina kisi tension ke souge. Yahi sab sochte hue Use pata hi nahi chala kab use ikk halki se muskan ke sath need aa gyi..​

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Bhai you are rocking and what ever story your building you know how to build the story so don't be sad of other's always remember when you doing good job alot of people will poke leave them you just go on with your flow

 

[Sweetboy232]

Hi All Readers, I am back with a new thinking. Mujhe umeed hai App sab ko story achi lag rahi hogi. Jadi aap ko story achi Lagi to jisne bhi story ko like nahi kiya please story like kar de..Aap sab ke like karne se hume koi pessa nahi milta bus yeh dekh kar acha lagta hai ke aap sab ko story achi lag rahi hai. Or hume story ko or acha banane ka or likhne ka motivation milta hai. Or kisi ko story achi nahi lage to please koi negative comments mat karna kyuki sab ki apni apni thinking hai, sabhi ko alag alag tarh ke story pasand hote hai. Please story pe negative comments mat kiya karo. Jisse writer ka story likhne ka hosla tut jaye..jadi kisi ko story achi nahi lagti to aap mere story ko skip kar sakte ho but negative comments mat karna. Ikk negative comments ke chakkar mein writer ka hosla to tut ta hi hai uske sath hi jin Readers ko story achi lagti hai vo bhut se readers ki umeed Tut jati hai.....

Next update kal tak aa jayega.....ab bhut kush story mein skip Kiya jayega...jada long story nahi hogi.... Jo main starting mein story mein chata tha.....vo nahi hoga.....ab story mein kush badlav hoge....kush readers mein sabar nahi hai...vo sidha story ki ending hi dekhna chate hai..... Isliye story jada long nahi hogi....kyuki long story likhne ke liye shote shote movement ko sath le kar chalna padta hai or mein nahi chahta ke jin Readers ko story pasand aa rahi hai aap sab bhi mujhe bole ke story slow chal rahi hai or app sab bhi mujhe bura bhala bole... to mein story ko jada khichne ki koshish nahi karuga...

Yeh Mera last message tha aap sab Readers ke liye iske baad is baat par koi discussion nahi hoga.... Thanks

 

[adonisthor]

Bhai update de do... Aur intezar nahi hota

 

[Naik]

Update -09​

Pishle update mein ​

Fir mane bhut sochne ke badh Didi se baat karne ka fesla kiya or bed se uth gaya.​

Bed se uth kar main Dhere Dhere Didi ke pass gaya or Didi ko bola.......(Jhijkte hue bola..)​

Ab Aage ​

Main bolne hi wala tha ke Didi ne pishe mud kar dekha to main toda sa ghabra gaya or pass main pada kush dekha or hadbada kar mere muh se nikal gya......​

Main : vo vo Comb/ Kangi chaiye tha...​

Komal kush nahi boli or mujhe Comb/kangi pakda diya. Main fir ase komal ke pishe khad kar mirror main dekh kar hair sahi karne laga. Komal mere Aage ki side bath kar narvous feel kar raho thi.....​

main mirror mein komal Didi ko dekh reha tha par komal Didi apni Ankhe niche kar ke mere vaha se Jane ka intezar kar rahi thi.....fir mene kangi/comb vahi pass mein rakha or vapis se bed par aa kar bath gaya.

Narvous to mein bhi bhut tha...Ab Didi ke pass Jane ki himmat nahi rahi. Jo todi bhut himmat thi vo abhi nikal gyi.

Main bed par bath kar fir se mobile chalane laga but mobile main kha dil lagne wala tha. Main bich bich main komal Didi ko dekh leta but kush kar nahi pa reha tha kyuki mujhe komal Didi ke gusse ka pata tha. Or bolta bhi Kya.

Fir kush time main komal tiyar ho gyi. Komal bhut hi sunder lag rahi thi. Komal ka itna khubsurat sa chera dekh kar mere ankhe hat hi nahi rahi thi. Gora sa face, gallon par halki se lali ayi Hui thi, gaalon pe halke ghare dimple. Komal ko ase dekh kar ab main toda bhakne laga tha. Main ikk baar fir se bhul gya ke hum dono bhai bahen hai. Pata nahi sharam thi ja kya komal mujse najar nahi mila rahi. Vo bus najar niche kar ke apne kaam mein lagi hui thi.

Komal uth kar bed ke pass ayi or beg mein apne phone ka charger rakhne lagi. Komal bilkul bhi mere tarf nahi dekh rahi thi. ​

Niche se taiji ki awaj ayi jo shayad komal ko awaj laga rahi thi. ​

Awaj sunte hi komal bhar seediyon pe gyi or taiji ko kush bola or fir se room main aa gyi or sidha washroom main chali gyi. Main pata nahi kyu komal ki har harkat ko note kar reha tha. ​

Ase hi ab komal or tauji- taiji ke jane ka time aa gya. Ab fir se mujhe pata nahi kya hone laga. Komal ne bed se apna bag uthaya or bhar Jane lagi. Pata nahi kyu ajj Maan to kar reha tha ke komal ka hath pakdu or ikk baar gale laga lu but ab itni himmat bhi to hone chahiye jo mujme abi nahi thi.​

Komal to in sabse bilkul anjan thi. Komal ko bilkul bhi farak nahi pad reha tha. Komal to shayad mujse dur hi rahena chati thi. ​

Main or kush to kar nahi sakta tha to jese hi komal beg lekar niche Jane lagi to Main jaldi se bed se utha or komal ko bola..​

Main : mujhe beg pakda do main niche le aata hu......​

Komal kush nahi boli or mujhe beg pakda kar room se bhar Jane lagi or main bhi beg le kar piche piche Jane laga.​

Niche ja kar dekha tha tauji- taiji already tiyar ho chuke the. Shayad komal Didi ka hi wait kar rahe the. ​

Kafi time ho gaya tha to tauji jaldi se uthe or maa or mujhe bole......​

Tauji : thik hai ab hume nikalana chahiye kafi time ho gaya hai...​

5-6 hours ka rasta tha. Or uper se thand ka mussam tha. Isliye tauji jitna jaldi ho sakta tha nikalna chate the. ​

Yeh bol kar tauji beg lekar bhar gadi ke pass Jane Lage to main bhi komal ka beg le kar unke piche piche Jane laga. Tauji or maine gadi main beg rakh diye tab tak maa, komal or taiji bhi bhar aa gyi.​

Ab mere halat to bhut buri ho gyi thi. Mujhe kush samaj nahi aa reha tha ke Pata nahi Aesa kyu ho reha hai. Komal phele bhi kafi baar apne mama ke jaha gyi thi but tab mujhe kabi kush fark nahi padta tha. But ajj aesa kyu ho reha hai uska jawab bhi mere pass nahi tha. Bus Dil jahi chata tha ke komal na jaye. But ab shayad yeh hona mumkin nahi tha. ​

Tauji gadi main bath gye. komal maa ke gale lagi fir phele taiji or fir komal gadi main bath gyi.​

Komal ne mere tarf ikk baar bhi nahi dekha. mujhe thoda bura to laga but kar bhi kya sakta tha. Komal or taiji ke bathne ke badh tauji ne gadi start ki or ghar se nikal gye.​

Main or maa ghar main aa gye. Maa apne room main chali gyi or main apne room main chala gya. Main apne Room main ja kar bed pe late gya or kush sochne laga.​

Mere dimag mein apne aap se bhut sare sawal chal rahe the. Jinka jawab shayad abi mere pass nahi tha.​

Main maan mein soch reha tha ke : kya ho gaya hai mujhe? Mere Dil main ase ajeeb se feeling kyu AA Rahi hai? Komal ke dur jane se ajj mujhe problem kyu ho Rahi hai ? Jabki komal phele kai baar Akele apne mama ke jaha gyi hai. Tab to mujhe kabi Aesa feel nahi hua. Aesa kyu ho reha hai? Jaha tak ki komal to ab mujse baat tak nahi karti. In sabi swalon se Mera dimag fatne laga tha.​

Yahi sab sochte sochte pata nahi kab mere Ankh lag gyi.​

Mere ankh sham ko karib 06:00pm par maa ke awaj dene par khuli. Mane uth kar dekha to maa Room ke darwaje par kadi thi. Or mujhe awaj laga rahi thi. Maa ne mujhe jaldi se niche aane ka bola or khud niche chali gyi.​

Main uth kar phele bathroom gya or muh dho kar bhar aya. Mane bed pe pada apna phone uthaya or niche chala gaya. maa kichan mein thi. Main sidha kichan main chala gaya. Jaha maa kush kaam kar rahi thi. Mane maa se pusha...​

Main : Maa aapne mujhe kyu bulaya...​

Maa : Haan beta....aa gye..​

Main : kya kaam hai maa....​

Maa : yeh saman le kar ana hai markit se.....​

Maa ne mujhe ikk list di.....​

Main : thik hai.....​

Fir mane Friz se ikk botal nikali or pani pe kar kichan se bhar aa gaya. Mane jaldi se apne room se bike ki key le aya or fir markit ke liye nikal gaya.​

Pure Raste fir se vahi sab sawal mere dimag main chalne lage. Mujhe kush samaj nahi aa reha tha ke Akhir ho kya reha hai.​

Jahi sab sochte sochte main markit phoch gaya. Ikk shop par ja kar samaan ki list shopkeeper ko di or vo samman niklvane laga.​

Vahi pass main ikk new married couple bhi saman le reha tha or ladki ka face mere side tha or ladke ki peth mere side thi. Pishe se dekhne se vo ladka mujhe kush jana phechana lag reha tha.​

But face dusri side hone se kush pata nahi chal reha tha.​

Main bhut gor se use dekh reha tha. Achank se us ladki ki najar muj pe padi or mujhe unki side itne gor se dekhte hue paya to vo ladki mujhe bhut gusse se dekh kar face niche kar liya or main bhi toda hadbda kar ider uder dekhne laga. Mujhe pata chal gaya ke us ladki ne kush galat samaj liya hai. Fir main kush der unki side nahi dekha.​

But Mera dhayan fir se us ladke ki side gaya ke us ladke ko pishe se dekh kar aesa kyu laga jese main ise janta hu. Mane ikk baar fir se mud kar us ladke ko dekha abi bhi uska face dusri side tha or ladki bhi niche face kiye hue thi.​

Main fir se gor se thoda side se ho kar dekhne laga or Achank fir se ladki ne face uper kiya or mujhe fir se use dekhte hue dekh liya. Mere najar usse mili to main fir se hadbada gaya or dusri side muh kar liya. Is baar ladki ko shayad bhut gussa aya or usne apne pati ko sab bata diya.​

Uska pati mud kar mere side aya or mujhe kande pe hath laga kar bola....​

Ladka : Hello bhai sabh.....​

Main toda dar gaya tha kyuki Anjane main hi sahi par mere galti to thi. Chahe main us ladke ko dekh reha tha but mujhe pata tha koi bhi mere baat nahi manega. Sab ko lagega main hi galt najar se dekh reha hu. Sab ladki ko hi support karege. But todi himmat karke main pishe muda to dekha.....​

Ladka : Are Ravi Tum....​

Main : Suraj tum.....​

Yeh ladka Suraj mere School ka friend tha jo 10th ke badh kisi Dusre shar main apne mama ke vaha chala gya tha. Or uske badh ajj mila tha. School se jane ke badh phele kush month phone par hamare baat hoti thi but dhere dhere phone karna bhi band ho gya. Suraj ikk pass ke gav main rehta tha or school main hum bhut ache dost the. Ikk dusre ke ghar se dur hone ke karan hum ajj tak 1-2 baar hi ikk dusre ke ghar gye the. Mere maa papa or uske maa papa kabi kabi school ke parents meeting mein hi apas mein milte the. But Suraj ke maa papa ka sahbav acha tha to mere maa papa or suraj ke maa papa ikk dusre ko ache se janne Lage the.​

Suraj : Are yrr Ravi kesa hai tu....( Halki se smile se )​

Main : main thik hu tum batao......(Mere saanse abi bhi todi yej chal Rahi thi)​

Suraj : main bhi thik hu.....or bata ghar main Uncle Aunty kese hai....​

Main : sab thik hai... Tu bata kha tha itne saal....kabi mud ke aya hi nahi ider or Uncle-Aunty sab kese hai...​

Uncle-Aunty ka naam sunte hi Suraj ka chehra utar gya or dukhi maan se bola....​

Suraj : Vo maa to pishle saal hi gujar gayi hai.....( Dukhi maan se)​

Main : ohhh Sorry....(Dukhi ho kar bola )​

Main : kya hua tha.....(Udaas maan se)​

Suraj : Herat Attack hua tha....(Nam Ankho se)​

Main : Hmm....​

Suraj : chal shod yeh sab bate Jo hona tha vo ho gaya....Ab kya hi milega Dukhi ho kar.( Ankhe pochte hue)​

Or bata kha tha tu itne saal kabi apne dost ki yaad nahi ayi..​

Main : yeh yaad wali baat to tu mat kar....tu hi shod kar gya tha ....​

Pass main khadi uski wife hum dono ko dekh rahi thi....​

Main : main kab se tumhe pishe se phechane ki koshish kar reha tha but tumhara face dusri side tha....​

Suraj : ohh Tum mujhe dekh rahe the....or hum galat samaj liye.....(Halki se smile se bola)​

Main : kya samaj liye.....(Mujhe pata tha but anjan bante hue)​

Suraj : kush nahi.....vo bus mere wife ko laga tum use dekh rahe ho....( Mushkrate hue apni wife ko dekh kar)​

Main : main nahi vo......( Thoda sa jhijkte hue)​

Main itna hi bola tha ke Suraj bola...​

Suraj : Haan Haan bhai rahne do mujhe sab pata hai tum ase nahi ho......main bachpan se janata hu tumhe....(Haste hue)​

Main : hmmm...​

Suraj : Are main to bhul hi Gaya...yeh mere biwi hai Sunita....​

Main : Namaste.....( Hath jod kar)​

Usne bhi hath jod kar namaste bola....​

Suraj : or bata kya kar reha hai aaj kal....​

Main : main vo ikk govt. bank main job karta hu ....or tum kya kar rahe ho....​

Suraj : Badiya hai ......Main govt. School main teacher hu......​

Main : fir to bhut badiya hai...​

Itne Main shopkeeper ne mujhe awaj lagai. shopkeeper ne saman ka bill bana kar mujhe de diya or main bill pay Kiya.​

Suraj ka bhi saman ho gaya tha or saman le kar mere pass aya or bola...​

Suraj : chal aja kahi sath main bathte hai....​

Main : nahi main chalta hu abi.​

Suraj : Aree Aaja bhai...bhut deno badh mile hai todi der bathte hai....​

Suraj ke bhut jid karne par mujhe suraj ko haan bolna pada or fir hum ikk restaurant chale gye...ikk table par bath kar Suraj ne kush order Kiya or hum baat karne lage....​

Suraj ki wife sunita Suraj se bich bich main kush normal hi baat karti or jada tar hamari baate sun rahi thi...sunita ikk samjdaar, padi likhi or sanskari ladki thi.​

Main Suraj se baat karte hue bola.....​

Main : Suraj tumne shadi kab ki or mujhe bataya tak nahi ....​

Suraj : Nahi yrrr maa ke chale jane ke badh bhut Jaldi main shadi karni padi... Shadi mein sirf Badi didi or mama ke ghar ke log hi the...​

Main: Haan....​

Suraj : Mere shod tum bata tumne shadi ki ke nahi abi tak......ja abi tak ladkiyaon ko ignore mar rahe ho....​

Main ab kya hi bolta ke mane shadi ki ja nahi or ki bhi hai to kisse ki hai. Ab mujhe fir se komal ki yaad aa gyi or main chup ho gaya. Mujhe chup hua dekh Suraj bola..​

Suraj: kya hua Ravi....​

Mujhe pata nahi kya hua or maine ikk dum se bola...​

Main : Haan.......​

Mere muh se Haan sunte hi Suraj ne sawalon ki boshar kar di....​

Suraj : Kab ki shadi tumne ?....kisse ki ?....kon hai ?....kha se hai?​

Mane Haan bol to Diya Par ab mujhe samaj nahi aa reha tha ke Suraj ke sawalon ka kya jawab du ke kab ki shadi or kisse ki. Ab mujhe kush to sawalon ka jawab dena hi tha to mane bola.​

Main : kush months phele ki ikk ladki se....​

Suraj : haan bhai pata hai ladki se hi karoge or ladke se thodi karoge....(Haste hue..)​

Main : Haan....(Halki se muskan ke sath)​

Suraj : kon hai kahi vo school wali Anu to nahi jo ki tumhare pishe padi hui thi but tumne kabi use bhav nahi diya....​

Main : nahi yrrr...​

Itne Main hamara order aa gaya or hum khana khane lage...khana khate hue humne koi jada baate nahi ki. Ab toda Andhera hone laga tha. khana kha kar main Suraj se bola.​

Main : Suraj ab main chalta hu fir milte hai...Ab tum kahi ja to nahi rahe ho na...​

Suraj : Nahi Ab main kahi nahi jaa reha.....jahi transfer karva liya hai...​

Main : badiya hai.... Chal fir milte hai.....mujhe apna new number de..​

Fir Suraj ne mujhe pana new number diya..or maine use miss call kar di...​

Mane bye bola or vaha se nikal gaya...​

Ghar phochne tak fir se mere dimag main vahi sab sawal chalne lage. Ab ikk sawal or badh gya ke jab Suraj ne mujse pusha ke tumne shadi ki ke nahi to mane use haan kyu bola? Mana karna chahiye tha. Phele tension kam thi jo ikk or tension gal pa lyi. Par ab jo hona tha vo to ho gya tha.​

Jahi sab sochte hue main ghar phoch gaya. Jab main ghar phocha tab tak Dad bhai ghar aa gye the or sofe par bath kar T.v main news dekh rahe the.​

Maa kichan main khana bana rahi thi. Mane kichan main ja kar saman maa ko diya. Maa ne mujse pusha ke itni der kha lag gyi to mane maa ko Suraj se milne wali sab baat bata di. Maa suraj ko janti thi to maa mujse uske or uske ghar walo ke bare main pushne lagi. Fir mane maa ko uske maa ke bare mein bhi sab bata diya to maa ko bhut dukh hua yeh sun kar. Suraj ki maa ka sambhav acha tha. Mere maa or suraj ke maa beshak kabi kabi milti thi but kabi kabi dono phone par baat kar leti thi. Par jab se Suraj or mera milna kaam hua hai unke bhi baat bhut kaam ho gyi thi. Dono ikk dusre ko achi tarh janti thi. Suraj ke maa ki death ki khabar sun kar maa mujse boli ke kush din mein vo suraj ke ghar unse pushne ke liye jayege. Maine haa bola diya.​

Maa khana bana rahi thi to maine maa ko apne liye khane ka mana kar diya kyuki main abhi suraj ke sath khana khaya tha.​

Fir main papa ke paas ja kar todi der batha or kush normal bate ki or T.V dekhne laga. Kush der ke badh main uth kar apne Room main aa gya. ​

maa kush der badh kichan se bhar aa gyi or sofe par bath kar t.v dekhne lagi. Tabi papa maa se bole...

Papa : Ragni komal se kush baat Hui...kha phoch gye hai vo....

Maa : abi mere to kush baat nahi Hui, shayad ravi ne phone kar ke pusha ho komal ko call karke.

Papa : Hmmm.....Ajj komal beti ghar nahi hai to kitna suna suna sa ghar lag reha hai......kal tak kitni shoti the or ajj dekho kitni badi ho gyi hai. Jab shoti se thi tab se hi bhaiya or bhabhi se jada hamare sath hi rehti thi...ajj ikk din ke liye hi gyi hai to Ghar suna suna sa lag reha hai...

Maa : Hmmm...sach mein mera bhi apke jesa hi haal hai....shukhar hai komal ki shadi ravi se karva di, ab hamare beti kahi nahi jayegi....sach batau to mera bhi komal Bina Ghar mein bilkul bhi jee nahi lag reha...

Papa : Hmmm.... Sahi kha...ab hamre beti hamare pass hi rahegi....(Nam ankho se)

Maa : chalo udaas mat ho....khana kha lo......ajj jayegi ikk din mein apki ladli beti....

Papa : hmmmm....

Yeh bol kar papa khane ke table pe chale gye or maa ne papa ko khana pros diya...

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Ider Room main aa kar mujhe ajj kush Adhura Adhura sa lag reha tha or yeh thi room main komal ki kami. Main bed par let gya or fir se pata nahi kitne hi sawal dimag main chalne lage. Mujhe kush samaj nahi aa reha tha. Chahe pishle kush dino se komal baat nahi karti thi or room main shanti hi rahti thi but ajj yeh Shanti achi nahi lag rahti. Mera dimag baar baar komal ki side hi jaa reha tha.​

Main kush der ase hi bed par leta reha. Mane phone utha kar time dekha to abhi 08:00pm hua tha. Kush der ase hi leta or fir ikk dum se Dimag main aya kyu na ikk baar komal ko call kar ke push lu ke phoch gye ke nahi. Fir turant hi khiyal aya Nahi yrr rahne de komal mujse gussa hai vo baat nahi karege. ikk to maan kar reha tha call kar lu or ikk maan kar reha tha nahi. kabhi main sochta ke call kar leta hu mane to bus usse jahi pushne ke liye hi to call karna hai ke phoch gye ke nahi but yeh pushne ka to ikk bhana tha asal mein main ikk baar komal se baat karna chata tha. But ab kush samaj nahi aa reha tha ke kese call karu. Komal aage se pata nahi baat karegi bhi ja nahi.​

Tabhi mujhe bhar se maa ki awaj aayi.​

Maa : Ravi beta ....Darwaja khol​

Main jaldi se gaya or darwaja khola.....maa dudh ka glaas liye khadi thi. main dudh ka glass le kar under jane laga to maa ne bola.​

Maa : Ravi komal ko phone laga kar pusha ke nahi. Sahi se phoch gye ja nahi.​

Main : nahi maa abi karne hi wala tha...(Jhuth bolte hue)​

Maa : chal phone laga kar de mujhe main pushti hu kha phoche..​

Main toda khush bhi ho gaya ke chahe komal se direct baat to nahi hogi but kam se kam uski awaj sun luga. Mane turant komal ko phone lagaya or phone handsfree kar ke maa ko de Diya....​

Dusri side jab komal ne mere phone se call dekha to ikk baar to toda ghabhra gyi or call nahi uthaya....​

Maa ne fir se call karne ka bola or mane firse call laga diya.​

Dusri side jab komal ne fir se mere number se call dekha to fir se thoda tension main aa gyi or sochne lagi ab isko kya hai. Ab ise kya chahiye. kyu call kar reha hai baar baar. Komal mera phone dekh kar hi chidne lagi thi. Jab komal ka call baja to taiji bhi pass main bathi hui thi to bole....​

Taiji : yeh kiska phone aa reha hai baar baar komal.... Phone uthao...​

Komal : Haan....​

Or is baar komal ko na chate hue bhi phone uthana hi pada. Komal ne toda sa narvous feel karte hue phone utha liya....or bola...​

Komal: Hlo.....( Narvous hote hue)​

Maa : Hlo.....komal beti....​

Ikk dum se Maa ki awaj sun kar komal toda acha feel karte hue....​

Komal : Haaji maa....​

Maa : Komal beti....phoch gye ke nahi...​

Komal: Haan maa bus phochne Hi wale hai. Abi 10-15 km ka rasta hai.​

Maa : abi Ravi ke Room main dudh Dene ayi thi to Ravi ko call karne ke liye bola...​

Komal : Haan......​

Main apni maa ke pass bed par betha dono ki bate sun reha tha. Tabi niche se Papa ne maa ko Awaj di to maa komal se boli...​

Maa : komal......yeh ravi se baat kar tere papa mujhe niche bula rahe hai.....​

Maa ne mujhe phone pakda diya or maa jaldi se room se nikal kar niche chali gyi. Mane phone kan par lagaya. Ab hum Dono hi chup the koi kush nahi bol reha tha. Dono ki Dhadkane bhad gyi thi. Phele baat karne main or ab baat karne main bhut farak tha. Phele hum kush bhi bina soche samjhe bol dete the but ab na chate hue bhi hum dono pati-patni the. jab dono mein se koi nahi bola to maine hi is chupi ko todna sahi samja or bolao.....​

Main : Hlo.....( Thoda narvous feel karte hue)​

Mere awaj sunte hi komal ke dimag mein pata nahi kya aya usne ikk dum se call cut kar diya.​

Ikk baar to mujhe bhut bura laga but ab kya hi karta......​

Fir mane phone rakha or fir se wahi sab sawal dimag main chalne lage. Aesa kyu ho reha hai? Kyu ab Aesa ajeeb sa feel hone laga hai? Kyu ab mein komal ki Awaj sunne me liye tadap reha hu. Mane kyu Suraj ke shadi ke bare main pushne par Haan bol diya ? Komal maa se kitna ache se baat kar rahi thi or mujse baat kyu nahi kar rahi ? Mane Aesa kya kar diya hai jo komal mujse itni nafrat karne lagi hai ? Ab mere Ankhe nam hone lagi but ab main kush kar bhi nahi sakta tha. Bhut der tak Jahi sab sochte hue mujhe pata nahi kab need aa gyi.​

Komal ke mama ke ghar::::​

Dusri side komal ko kush farak nahi pada or todi der badh mama ke ghar phoch gye. Ghar phoch kar sabhi se mile. Jyoti bhi unke aane se phele to bhut khush thi but jab use pata chala ke main nahi aya hu to uska chehra utar gya or chid kar apne room mein chali gyi. kafi raat ho gyi thi to sab khana kha kar sone chale gye. Komal ikk room mein ja kar bed par late gyi.​

Komal ko ab acha lag reha tha kyu ki main nahi tha vaha. Or bed par late kar sochne lagi acha hua ajj main/Ravi uske sath nahi hu. Ajj kitne dino badh mujhe sukoon ki need ayegi. Ajj kitne dino badh main bina kisi tension ke souge. Yahi sab sochte hue Use pata hi nahi chala kab use ikk halki se muskan ke sath need aa gyi..​

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(Note- bhai story achi Lage to like or comment jarur karna .....or ajj ka update bada hai or ase hi update kabi bade hoge to kabi shote bhi ....to please koi negative comments karne se phele writer ki majburi ko bhi samja karo umeed hai apko story achi lag rahi hogi ....... thanks)

Yaar yeh Kuch ziada ho Raha h komal ki taraf se ab Ravi aisi kia galti kardi koyi uski marji tow Shaadi huwi nahi hsab Ghar walo ki marji huwi h are thodi BAAT kar logi tow kia harj ho Jayega
Chalo ek Purana dost mil gaya bade dino Baad Kuch tow gam BAAT hi sakte h uske Saath
Jyoti ne kia plan banaya tha Jo Ravi ke na jaane jaane use mayoosi huwi
Soch komal ki ab aaj chain ki neend aayegi
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h

 

[redarc121]

Hi All Readers, I am back with a new thinking. Mujhe umeed hai App sab ko story achi lag rahi hogi. Jadi aap ko story achi Lagi to jisne bhi story ko like nahi kiya please story like kar de..Aap sab ke like karne se hume koi pessa nahi milta bus yeh dekh kar acha lagta hai ke aap sab ko story achi lag rahi hai. Or hume story ko or acha banane ka or likhne ka motivation milta hai. Or kisi ko story achi nahi lage to please koi negative comments mat karna kyuki sab ki apni apni thinking hai, sabhi ko alag alag tarh ke story pasand hote hai. Please story pe negative comments mat kiya karo. Jisse writer ka story likhne ka hosla tut jaye..jadi kisi ko story achi nahi lagti to aap mere story ko skip kar sakte ho but negative comments mat karna. Ikk negative comments ke chakkar mein writer ka hosla to tut ta hi hai uske sath hi jin Readers ko story achi lagti hai vo bhut se readers ki umeed Tut jati hai.....

Next update kal tak aa jayega.....ab bhut kush story mein skip Kiya jayega...jada long story nahi hogi.... Jo main starting mein story mein chata tha.....vo nahi hoga.....ab story mein kush badlav hoge....kush readers mein sabar nahi hai...vo sidha story ki ending hi dekhna chate hai..... Isliye story jada long nahi hogi....kyuki long story likhne ke liye shote shote movement ko sath le kar chalna padta hai or mein nahi chahta ke jin Readers ko story pasand aa rahi hai aap sab bhi mujhe bole ke story slow chal rahi hai or app sab bhi mujhe bura bhala bole... to mein story ko jada khichne ki koshish nahi karuga...

Yeh Mera last message tha aap sab Readers ke liye iske baad is baat par koi discussion nahi hoga.... Thanks

bhai tum is story ko waise hi chalao jaise tum chalana chahte ho ... slow burn romance...

 

[LASYBOY]

Bro Ap ko jaise achcha lage waise likhne no problem

 

[kikikaka]

Let's see what direction story takes now

 

[Game888]

Yeh Story start karne se phele mein sabhi reader se bolna chata hu ke same Ise name ki ikk or story hai jo ki kisi other writers ki hai or is story ka only 1st update Us story se writer se push kar liya hai or writer ki puri parmission le gyi hai. 1st update ke aage ke update usse bilkul aalag hai isliye phele yeh story pade or uske badh us story se compare kare. Yeh puri story usse alag hai. Is baat ka pura pura dhiyan rakhna...Ab story Start karte hai.....​

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Update -01​

(Note-Dosto ye meri paheli kahani hone ja rahi hai. Yeh ikk love, Romance se bharpur story hai or yeh story kisi sachi ghatna par adharit nahi hai. Is story ke sabi character fake hai. Yeh story only manoranjan ke liye hai. Is story ka Udesh kisi bhi Vyakti,Jat,Dharam ko thes phochana nahi hai. Main koshish karuga koi bhi Dharam, jaat bich main na aye.)​

To chaliye sabse pahele main aapko milvata hu is story mein ane wale main character se...... to introduction start karte hai.​

1. Ranveer sharma (Ravi)- sabse pahele mai Ranveer kahani ka main Patra or story ka Hero. Mai 22 saal ka hu or ikk Government Bank Main Job Karta Hu. Dad or tauji ki Acchi Jaan pehchan ke karan job jaldi mil gyi.Mera rang rup acha hai or Morning-Evening exercise size karne se body bhi achi hai.Hight karib 6.1 hai. Kul mila kar Achi body hai.​

2. Dawinder sharma - mere dad age 48 years ye govt teacher hai. School mein teacher ke saath saath ikk coching mein classes bhi lete hai. Ye bhi nature wise acche hai bas thoda sa ghusse Wale hai .​

3. Ragani Sharma - Meri mom age 42 Years simple Indian housewife hai. Main apni maa se bhut pyaar karta hu.( Maa Bete wala)​

Phir bari aati hai ek or family ki or wo hai hamare tau ji ki family .​

4. Pardeep Sharma- ( tau ji ) age 54 years ye bhi Railway department me officer hai retirement hone wala hai bas.​

5. Devki sharma ( Tai ji ) - age 49 years ye bhi meri mummy ki tarah house wife hi hai .​

6 . Komal sharma - Ye hai meri cousin didi or story ki Heroine. Age 23 years(mujse ikk saal badi). Dikhne me acchi hai bilkul simple. Figure bhi accha bana rakha hai or bhagwan me bahut maanti hai roj mandir jaati hai or Pooja path karti hai. Ye govt job ki taiyaari kar rahi hai and currently schools me bhi padhati hai .​

Ham dono parivaar abhi ek hi Ghar me rahte hai.​

Ghar-- Hamara ghar kafi bada hai, Mera or komal Didi ka Room uper hai or Mom- Dad or Tauji-taiji ka room niche hai. Uper ke dono Room main alag alag bathroom bana hua hai. Niche ke room ke liye niche ikk single bathroom bana hua hai. Hamare pass ikk Gadi or ikk bike hai.​

Story begins​

Ab hua yu ki tau ji ka transfer dusre Sahar ho raha tha to tau ji ab komal didi ki shadi karna chahte thee . Kyunki hamare yaha ladkiyon ki iss age tak shaadi kar di jaati hai. Per dikkat yah thi ki koi ladka nahin mil raha tha. Didi ke anurup .​

Kyunki Maine aapko pahele bhi bataya ki hum bhagwan me bahut maante hai or didi thoda manglik bhi thi to hum ek manglik ladka hi dhundh rahe thee . Par kaya kare 1 month Tak bahut dhunda par ladka nahi mila .​

Phir ek din mere papa or tau ji ek bade pandit ji ke paas Gaye pandit ji ne pure parivaar ki kundli mangvayi thi .​

Waha jaane ke baad pandit ji papa or tau ji se kuch baate kahte hai .​

Pandit ji - dekhiye aapki beti manglik hai or agar iski shadi iske anurup ladke se nahi hue to aapki beti shadi ke 6 months me hi vidhva ho jaayegi.​

Ye sunke papa or tau ji dono dar jaate hai .​

Pandit ji aage kahte hai - iska ek matra upaay hai ki hum ek manglik ladka dhundhe , par Aaj kal ke sansar me samasya ye hai ki kundli Mila bhi le to bhi hum ye nahi Jaan sakte ki ladka sahi hai ya nahi nashe karta hai ya nahi , ladki baji karta hai ya nahi. (Tauji or Papa ko samjate hue)​

Tau ji - to kaya kare guruji .​

Pandit ji - dekhiye ye ladka Ravi Jo aapka ( papa ke taraf ishara karte hue ) beta hai uski kundli bilkul anurup hai shadi ke or Jo ladki manglik ho uski shadi jald se jald kar deni chaiye warna shayad uski shadi jeevan me kabhi bhi na ho .​

Papa - par pandit ji ye kaya kah rahe hai aap Bhai behen ki shadi ye to ghor paap hai chi chi. ( Bhut Dukhi maan se)​

Pandit ji - dekhiye paap kuch bhi nahi hai kyunki in dono ki kundli dekh ke lagta hai ki ye Bane hi ek dusre ke liye hai. (Kundali dekhte hue)​

Tau ji - par pandit ji ye kaise ho sakta hai hamare samaj me to ye galat hi rahega.( Dukhi maan se)​

Pandit ji - galat to kuch bhi nahi hai mahashay Aaj bhi South India me bahut si jagah hamare hi dharam me cousin marriage hoti hai. Or rahi baat samaj ki to samaj ko batao hi mat thode dino ke liye . Or baccho ko jaha rah rahe ho waha se dur settle kar do sab sort out ho jaayega .​

Abhi kamre me sanata chaya rahta hai , tabhi tau ji kahte hai.​

Tau ji - par pandit ji ye hoga kaisa.(Ashanka jatate hue)​

Pandit ji - chat mangni pat bhay ek hi din me shadi nipta denge wo bhi mandir me or phir aap 5 din baad court se marriage certificate bhi banva Lana jayada bhid bhadaka karne ki jarurat nahi hai bas parivaar ke log hi AA Jana.(Shadi ki plan Dad or tauji ko batate hue)​

Papa : par bacche kaise maanenge, pandit ji.(Sankoch karte hue)​

Pandit ji : wo aapka jaati mamla hai usme mai kuch bhi nahi kar sakta hu. Ye kaam to aapko hi karna padega.( Dad or tauji ko samjhate hue)​

Phir dono uth te hai waha se or pandit ji se date wagera fix kar lete hai. Pandit ji ne 2 din baad ka shubh muhurat bataya.Papa or tauji bhut dukhi the unhe yeh sab acha nahi lag reha tha par ab unke pass bhi koi or upaya nahi tha. isliye dono ne abb khud ko samja liya ke jo Pandit ji bol rahe hai vo hi sahi rahega. Or phir dono Ghar ke or nikal jaate hai. Raaste me yahi sochte hue aate hai ki ye baat kaise karni hai or baat bhi Aaj hi karni padegi kyunki 2 din to taiyaari me hi nikal jaayenge.​

Phir tau ji or papa Ghar par aate hai or sabse pahle ye baat mummy or taiji ko batate.​

Papa : Ragani oh Ragani.(Bhar Sofe pe bathte hue Dukhi maan se)​

Ragani : Ji Boliye.(Kitchen se bhar ate hue)​

Papa : Jakar apni Badi Bahen Devki ko bhi bula liya, hume kush baat karni hai.( Toda jhijkte hue )​

Fir Ragani Devki ko bhi bula layi​

Tauji: hum Ajj pandit ji se mile........more....... Fir Tauji ne pandit ji ki kahai hui sari baat bata di.​

Mom or taiji shocked ​

Mom or taiji dono sath main: kyaa ?​

Mom: Aesa kese ho sakta hai? Dono Bhai Bahen hai or uper se yeh samaj ke log kya bolege?​

Taiji: haan Aesa nahi ho sakta.(Toda dukhi maan se)​

pahele to mummy or taiji ko vishwas nahi hota or wo iss baat ke liye nahi maanti par phir jab Tauji mom or taiji ko samjate hai to vo maan jati hai. ( kyunki mummy or taiji dono hi bhagwan or jotish me vishwas rakhte thi )​

Par phir ab sab ke saamne main baat thi komal or Ravi ko batana or unko manana .​

Shaam ka samay hota hai 7 pm, hum dinner kar chuke hote hai or phir tau ji ye baat vahi baithe baithe sab ko batate hai . Or as usual jaisa hona tha mai or komal didi dono hi shock me rahte hai ki ye kaya hua . Bhai behen ki shadi chii chii.​

Komal didi ko bahut gussa aa jata hai wo sab par chillane bhi lagti hai.​

Komal: Papa App yeh kya bol rahe hai?​

Yeh kese ho sakta hai. Ravu mera Shota Bhai hai.​

Ravi: Haan Tauji Yeh nahi ho sakta. main Apni didi se shadi nahi kar sakta. ( Ravi komal se bhut payar karta tha but only Bahen Bhai wala, uske maan main kabhi bhi apni bahen ke liye galat khiyal nahi aye the)​

Komal: Haan papa or Aapne yeh soch bhi kese liya?​

Tauji: Haan Beta hume Pata hai Ravi tumhara bhai hai but ab hamare hath main bhi kush nahi hai.(Fir tauji Pandit or unke bich hui sar baat bata dete hai)​

Komal or Ravi fir bhi nahi mante to tauji gusse se daant dete hai ( tau ji or papa bhut gusse Wale the, sabi ko unke gusse se bhut dar lagta hai)​

Didi ab thoda shant hoti hai kyunki tauji ka para saatve aasman par hota hai.​

Tauji : mai tum dono ki Rai nahi le raha hu tumko order De Raha hu ki tumko kaya karna hai. Mai nahi chahta ki meri beti pure jeevan kunwari rahe ya phir vidhwa ban ke rahe mujhe Jo sahi lagega wo hi tum dono ( mai or didi) ko karna padega understand 2 din baad ki shadi hai better hai ki tum mentally prepare ho jao .​

Baat khatam hoti hai or sab apne kamronme chale jaate hai amuman ham sab saath baith kar TV dekha karte or baate karte par Aaj Aisa nahi hua or ho bhi kaise sakta tha.​

Komal apne room me hoti hai udaas hatash ki ye kaya anarth hone ja raha hai bhagwan me to aapki bahut pooja path karti hu aap ne bahut maanti hu phir ye kaise ek Bhai behen ki shadi kaise he bhagwan ye anarth hone se rok do .​

Or mai bhi apne room me hota hu mujhe bhi ye sab accha nahi lagta hai but fir mere dimag main tauji ki boli hui ikk baat ati hai ( flashback: Mai nahi chahta ki meri beti pure jeevan kunwari rahe ya phir vidhwa ban ke rahe) Or main bhi apni Didi se bhut payar karta hu(Now Bhai Bahen wala) or main bhi apni Didi ko vidhwa nahi dekh sakta. Isliye mane fesla kar liya ke Ab jo ho reha hai hone dena chahiye or mujhe pata tha jo bhi tauji or Papa ne jo bol diya hai to vo ho kar hi rahega or mere liye yeh jitni jaldi ho sakta hai Accept kar lena chahiye.​

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Nice start

 

[Game888]

Update - 03

Pishle update mein

Didi apne room se bhar na ayi to maa ne uske room main khana de diya.​

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Fir hum sab ne mil kar khana khaya or khana kha kar sab sone chale gye or main bhar road pe thora tahalne chala gaya. Kisi ne bhi jada kush baat nahi ki. Main bhi todi der ke badh vapas aa gaya or room main jaa kar so gaya...​

Ab Agge

Next day ab sirf ikk din rahe gaya tha shadi main or hamare tayri bhi puri thi but ikk insan tha jiske maan main pata nahi kya chal reha tha vo thi komal Didi. Komal Didi bilkul bhi khush nahi thi or sabhi se bhut chidi hui thi.

Ajj tauji or Dad bhi kaam par nahi gye the or unhone kaam se shuti le layi thi or pandit ji se mil kar shadi ki sari tyari kar le.

Ravi aaj bank giya or 2 din ki application laga kar shuti le.

Komal Didi aaj school nahi gyi thi Mom or taiji ne use school Jane se mana kar diya tha. Maa or taiji ne komal Didi ke hatho par mahendi lagi.

Ase hi ajj ka din nikal giya or shadi ki sabi tayari ho gyi. Raat ko sabne mil kar khana khaya or todi der bate ki. Komal Didi pass main bathi sab sun rahi thi but kush bol nahi Rahi thi or mujhe khush dekh kar bhut chidi hui thi. Par kyu yeh mujhe nahi pata. Main jab bhi Didi ko dekhta to uska face gusse se laal Dikhta.

Or ase hi baate karne k badh hum sab apne apne room main sone chale gye.

But 2 shakhas the jinhe need nahi aa rahi thi ikk tha main or ikk komal Didi.

Komal Didi maan main soch rahi thi ke Ravi ko bilkul bhi farak nahi padta ke kal hamare shadi hai. Kitna khush dikh reha hai. Ikk main hu ki mere yeh soch soch kar jaan nikli ja rahi hai ke hum bhai bahen shadi kese kar sakte hai. Kitna ganda hai yeh sab soch kar bhi sharam ati hai. But Ravi ko to bilkul bhi farak nahi padta.





Dusre room mein Main soch reha tha yeh Didi mujse kyu chidi hui hai. Is mein mere kya galti hai. Mujse baat kyu nahi kar rahi. Mane kya kiya main to bus uski khushi ke liye hi yeh sab kar reha hu. Mujhe bhi acha nahi lag reha Didi ko ase udass dekh kar par ab main kya karu. Ab mera bhi yeh sab soch soch kar sar fatne laga. Ase hi sochte sochte kush hi der mein dono so gye.

Next subha akhir aaj shadi ka din bhi aa gaya.

Shadi Part- 01

Mom-Dad,Tauji-taiji sab bhut khush the or jadi jaldi shadi ki tayari kar rahe the. Main bhi uth kar fresh ho kar aya.

Dad : Aa giya Ravi aa ja yeh shadi ka saman gadi main rakhne main help kar.

Main : Ji papa

Fir main bhi shadi ki tayari karvane main help karne laga. Hum shadi ka Sara saman gadi main rakhne Lage.

But komal Didi apne room main abhi bhi gumsum si ho kar bathi Hui thi. Uske Dimag mein pata nahi kya khichdi pak rahi thi.

Ase hi tayari karte karte kab 10:00am ho giya pata hi nahi chala. Mom or taiji ne khana banaya or karib 11:00am tak khana tiyar ho gaya. fir hum khana khane lage. Ab komal bhi room se bhar aa kar sabke sath khana kha rahi thi but kisi se baat nahi kar rahi thi. Ase hi khana khate khate kab 12:00pm ho gaya pata hi nahi chala.

Ab hum sab apne apne room main tiyar hone chale gye. Mom or taiji komal Didi ko tiyar karne uske room main chali gyi or main apne room main tiyar hone laga. But mujhe kush samaj nahi aa reha tha ke kya karu or kesa tiyar hou. Itne Main Dad or Tauji bhi tiyar ho kar mere room main aa gye. Mane ikk shervani paheni or unhone mere tiyar hone main help ki.Fir main shervani pahen ke ache se tiyar ho gaya.

Is tarh ab hum sab mard tiyar ho gye the but ladies ka abi tak kush pata nahi tha. Hum sab niche bath kar sab ka wait karne lage. Tauji or papa bhut gussa kar rahe the kyu ke phele hi kafi late ho gye the.

Bhut wait karne ke badh Mom or taiji bhar ayi but komal abi tak bhar nahi ayi thi. Dad ke pushne par maa ne bataya ke todi der or wait karna padega.

Ase hi 10 min or beet gye uske badh maa room main gyi or kush der ke badh komal Didi ko bhar le ayi.

Jese hi mane komal Didi ko dekha to ikk baar to mera imman hi dol giya. Kush sec. Ke liye main bhul hi Gaya tha ke hamara rishta kya Mere akhe fati ki fati rahe gyi. Sach main kya hi lag rahi thi komal Didi. Didi ta bina mekup to bhut sunder lagti thi But ajj to bhut jada sunder lag rahi. Jab tak maa Didi ko niche nahi le ayi tab tak mere ankhe didi par tiki hui thi. Mere Ankhe Didi ke face se hat nahi rahi Thi.


Fir jab maa didi ko lekar mere pass aa gyi or bola Ravi chalo ab tab ja kar mujhe hosh aiya.

Tab tak Dad or tauji bhar chale gye the Or mane apne sir par jor se hath mara or khud se bola yeh kya dekh reha tha, vo mere Badi Didi hai or fir main bhi maa or komal Didi ke pishe pishe chalne laga or fir main gadi main bath gya. But Didi Gadi ke pass aa kar ruk gyi or fir..............


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Superb

 

[tyro]

Hi All Readers, I am back with a new thinking. Mujhe umeed hai App sab ko story achi lag rahi hogi. Jadi aap ko story achi Lagi to jisne bhi story ko like nahi kiya please story like kar de..Aap sab ke like karne se hume koi pessa nahi milta bus yeh dekh kar acha lagta hai ke aap sab ko story achi lag rahi hai. Or hume story ko or acha banane ka or likhne ka motivation milta hai. Or kisi ko story achi nahi lage to please koi negative comments mat karna kyuki sab ki apni apni thinking hai, sabhi ko alag alag tarh ke story pasand hote hai. Please story pe negative comments mat kiya karo. Jisse writer ka story likhne ka hosla tut jaye..jadi kisi ko story achi nahi lagti to aap mere story ko skip kar sakte ho but negative comments mat karna. Ikk negative comments ke chakkar mein writer ka hosla to tut ta hi hai uske sath hi jin Readers ko story achi lagti hai vo bhut se readers ki umeed Tut jati hai.....

Next update kal tak aa jayega.....ab bhut kush story mein skip Kiya jayega...jada long story nahi hogi.... Jo main starting mein story mein chata tha.....vo nahi hoga.....ab story mein kush badlav hoge....kush readers mein sabar nahi hai...vo sidha story ki ending hi dekhna chate hai..... Isliye story jada long nahi hogi....kyuki long story likhne ke liye shote shote movement ko sath le kar chalna padta hai or mein nahi chahta ke jin Readers ko story pasand aa rahi hai aap sab bhi mujhe bole ke story slow chal rahi hai or app sab bhi mujhe bura bhala bole... to mein story ko jada khichne ki koshish nahi karuga...

Yeh Mera last message tha aap sab Readers ke liye iske baad is baat par koi discussion nahi hoga.... Thanks

Bhai yadi sambhav ho to story ko pahle jese hi chalana
Or aap bura bhala bolne vala ki baat kar rahe ho vo kuch update ke bad aakar ravi ka uski maa aur tai ke sath bhi sex relation ki mang karenge. ese camment wale to kai baar romantic story me bhi adultery,cuckold samil karne ke liye kahte hai
baki app store apni suvidha anusar aur story ki ruprekha ke hisab se chale.