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Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Joker7755 bhai....Update 11
Next day
Saloni mummy ke sath nasta bana rahi thi
Aur tabhi papa aye
Papa – ho gaya nasta redy
Mummy – ha
Dad – kunal nahi aya abhi tak
Mummy – wo nahi aya ata hi hoga
Dad – beta ja to jara kunal ko bulake la
Saloni – ha papa
Saloni kunal ke room ki taraf ja rahi thi
Jese saloni kunal ke room me pohchi usne dekha kunal so raha tha
Saloni – man me – are dekho to kitne pyar se so raha he, sorry kal me tume sota huva hi chhodke chali gai
Mera man nahi tha lekin fir b jana pada
Saloni yeh sochna bundh karke normal ho jati he
Saloni – kunaal
Kunaaaallll utho
Kunal nahi uthta saloni ke awaj lagene bavjud
To saloni kunal ke galo pe apna hath rakhti he
Saloni – kunaaallll utho mere bhai
Jesehi kunal ko mehsoos huva hath to usne harakat li aur usne saloni hath pakda aur uske apni baho me daba diya
Aur sote sote hi muskura raha tha
Kunal ki is harkat se saloni ke mu pe muskan aa gayi
Saloni – kunaaalllll uthhoooooo
Kunal – need me badbadate huve – shelly sone do na, ek to bar bar ap mujse dur jate rehte ho aur abhi apki baho me sone mila he wo b ap sone nahi dete
Aj me apko kahi nahi jane dunga chahe kuch b ho jaye, apko mere paas hi rehna he
Saloni yah sub sunke khus hoke muskurha rahi thi
Saloni – man me – lagta he kunal sapne me b mere sath hi he
Ise uthane ka man to nahi kar raha pn kya karu papa bula rahe he
Saloni – kunaaaallllu tho
Bahut bat uthane ke baad kunal uthta he
Uthte hi uske samne saloni thi
Kunal ke mu pe saloni ko dekh ke smile aa jati he
Kunal – shelly
Saloni – ha utho lad saheb
Kunal – ap uth gai
Saloni – me uth b gai nasta b ban gya papa b aa gye aur tume bula rahe he
Kunal – ap kab chali gai thi
Saloni – ratko
Kunal – kyu ?
Har bar ap asa hi karte ho me soya rehta hu aur ap muje chhodke chali jati ho
Agli baar asa mat karna
Saloni – ha who me samj gai jo tu need me badbada raha tha mene suna
Kunal – need me ? kyaaaaa?
Saloni – yahi ki “ aj me tume kahi nahi jane dunga , apko yahi rehna he mere pass “ etc etc
Kunal sarma ke apna mu neeche kar leta he
Saloni – aree dekho to kitna sarma raha he
Aur pyar se kunal ke galo pe apna hath rakh deti he
Kunal – aj hum kahi bahar gumne jaye ?
Saloni – kaha ?
Kunal – kahi b
Saloni – thik he duper ko jayenge kaam khatam karne ke baad
chalo ab utho fresh ho jao papa bula rahe he
Kunal – papa? Kyu?
Saloni – who to pata nahi
Kunal – thik he me ata hu
Aur kunal apne kamre se aa gaya
Papa – uth gaya beta chal aa beth muje tumse kuch baat karni he
Kunal – kya papa
Papa – ruk mummy aur saloni ko b ane de
Aur sab table pe beth gye
Papa – to suno sub me kunal ke naam se naya project suru kar raha hu
Mummy n saloni – are wah
Kunal – mere naam se?
Papa – ha age jake tujehi sab sabhalna he to kyuna abhise tumhare naam pe karna suru kardu
To uske liye muje aj hi saher se bahar jana he 5 din ke liye aur kunal tuje b mere sath ana hoga
Kunal – muje b ?
5 din ke liye ?
Yah sunke hi turant kunal saloni ko dekhta he
Kunal ke mu pe halki su mayusi aa gayi
Papa – ha tere naam se suru kar rah hu to tuje anahi padega na teri jaroorat padegi aur tu b dekh lega thoda samj lega
Kunal – thik he apko seja thik lage kab jana he he?
Papa – duper ko packing karle apni
Mummy – me bahut khus hu kunal ke liye
Chaliye me packing kar deti hu apki
Aur saloni tu b apne bhai ko thoda help karde packing ke liye
Saloni – ha thik he
Aur mummy aur papa chale aur kunal b apne kamre me chala gya aur thoda mayus tha
Saloni ne dekha ki kunal thoda mayus lag rah he
To tab to saloni ne kuch bola nahi apne kamre me chali gyi lekin thodi der ke baad who kunal ke kamre me gayi uski packing me help karne ke liye
Kunal aehi bed pe betha tha
Saloni – are kunal asehi betha he packing nahi karni
Kunal – nahi
Saloni – kyu jana nahi he
Kunal – man nahi kar raha
Saloni – kya huva ?
Kunal – pata nahi kyu jane ka man nahi kar raha he , baat to achi he mere liye lekin fir b kuch acha nahi lag raha
Saloni – kya hu kunal
kunal – pata nahi me bahut khus hu papa sub kar rahe he mere liye achi baat he muje to khus hona chahiye lekin 5 din apse dur jane ka man nahi kar raha man me ajeeb sa kuch ho raha ki me apko chhod ke ja rha hu
saloni sab samj gyi aur man me bolne lagi
saloni – man me – ham muje pata he tumhara man kyu nahi maan raha he tuje mari adat si ho gyi he ab
mera b man udas he kyuki muje b teri adat si lagne lagi he ab mere bhai
lekin kya karu me b b bol nahi pa rahi hu
kunal – kya soch rahi ho d
saloni – kuch nahi tu asa kyu soch raha he 5 din ki to baat he aur me to yahi hu
aur asa kuch huva to muje phn kar dena thik he
hum phone pe to baat karenge hi na
chal ab redy ho ja
kunal – thik he lekin me apko bar bar phn karunga
saloni – ha karna pura din phn thik he
aur kunal redy hoke bahar ata he to papa uska wait kar rahe hote hi
papa- redy beta
kunal – ha
aur who nikl rahe the
mummy – kunal apna khyal rakhna all the best tu naya kaam karne ja rah he
kunal – thnkyu mummy
kunal ko jata huva dekh ab saloni man b bhari hone laga use pehle asa nhi laga lekin kunal ko jata huve dekh ke who b thodi mayus ho gyi
tabhi papa bole
papa – aur ha ek baat to batana bhul hi gaya ki wah sayad network ka problem ho sakta he to humara phn na lage to tention mat lena
mummy – thik he
yeh sunke saloni aur kunal ke pero ke neeche se mano jameen nikal gyi
abhi to dono ne baat ki ki har vaqt hum phn pe baat karenge lekin network hi nahi huva to
ab kunal ka chehra itna mayus ho aur who saloni ko dekh raha he
aur saloni b kunal ko dekh rahi he mayushi se
lekin who nahi chahti thi ki kunal ko mayusi se by bole to usne bhari man se kunal ko smile di
saloni – by kunaaal apna khyal rakhna
kunal yeh sunke kunal ki ankho me sirf anshu ane hi baki rahe the
aur who nikal gaye
saloni darvaj bundh karke 5 min tak darvaje se hili b nahi wahi khadi rahi
tabi mummy ne kaha
mummy – ab 5 din me aur tum akele garme
saloni – bhari man se ha mummy
asa kehte saloni apne room me chali gyi aur apne bed pe bethke
saloni – man me – me kitna b cntrol kar lu lekin meri feeling ab bahar aa hi jati he
me kunal ko bada samja rahi thi ki 5 din ki baat pn me apne ap ko sambhal nahi pa rahi hu
udhar kunal b ki halat b buri thi woh b man me dukhi tha usne turant apna phn nikala aur saloni ko msg kiya
kunal – miss you shelly
kunal ka msg dekhke uske mu pe smile aa gyi uski mayusi thodi kam ho gyi
saloni – I miss you too kunal
aur aj pehla din tha to aj kunal aur papa busy the to rat tak koi msg phn nahi huva
lekin jesehi raat huyi
saloni – mummy papa se baat huyi?
woh inderectly jaanana chahti thi kunal ke bare me
mummy – nahi unke phn nahi laga raha papa ne bola tha netwrok nahi he
saloni – ha thik he
saloni – mummy me sone ja rahi hu kuch kaam ho to muje batana
mummy – nahi kuch nahi tu soja ja gn
saloni - gn mummy
aur itna bole who apne kamre me chali gayi under jate hi usne turant hi apna phn liya aur kunal ko phn karne lagi lekin nahi laga
saloni- man me - kunal kya kar raha hoga usne khana khaya hoga ki nahi
cut to kunal
waha ka scene asa tha ki jaha kunal ka project chal raha tha wah pe to kabhi kabhi network aa jata tha par who waha papa ke sath rehta tha aur meeting vagera me rehta tha to wo phn nahi kar sakta tha nahi msg kar sakta tha lekin jaha pe who ruka huva tha waha network ka bahut issu tha
internet to chalna muskil tha lekin mobile pe baat chit ho sakti thi lekin awaj kat jati thi barabr baat nahi ho pati thi
kunal apne hotel ke room me betha tha aur apna phn dekh raha tha usme network nahi tha usase b saloni ki bahut yaad aa rahi thi lekin phn nahi kar pa raha tha
lekin usne msg kiya saloni ko jab b netwok aa jayega to msg to send ho jayega yeh soch ke
kunal – shelly I miss you
gud night
cut to saloni
saloni apne bed pe leti huyi thi aur takiye ko apne seene se lagake soyi thi
aur bar bar apna phn check kar rahi thi ki kunal ka phn aye yah msg aye kuch b
kunal ne msg to kiya tha lekin aya hi nahi
saloni ase hi pade pade so gai
agle din subeha jab kunal apne kaam me pohcha to uske phn me network aya aur uska msg sent huva
udhr saloni kaam kar rahi thi mom ke saht
jesehi uski phn me msg aya saloni ke man me sirf akahi baat gum rahi thi kunal ka hoga msg kunal ka hoga
aur usne msg dekha to kunal ka hi tha
“shelly I miss you
Gud night”
saloni samj gai padhke ki kunal ne muje ratko bheja hoga lekin network ki vajah se abhi aya hoga
saloni man hi man me bahut khus ho rahi thi uske man me thoda relax huva ab
wo thodi der phn ke asehi pakdke msg ko dekhti rahi
fir usne reply diya
saloni – I miss you yoo kunal,
tum thik to ho na,
ache se kaam karna
yeh mg kunal ke phn me paoch gaye the lekin kunal dekh nahi paya
jab who hotel room me pohcha jab une apna phn chehck kiya to usme saloni ka msg tha
usne padha msg uske b muh pe smile aa gyi
3 din asehi chala
4the din jab kunal aur papa lunch karne bethe the to papa ne kaha kunal garpe baat huyi ki nahi ?
Kunal – nahi papa network hi nahi he
papa - Thik he aj ratko hotel ke landline se phn karte he
Ratko who dono jab hotel pohche to uneno hotel ke land line se garpe call kiya
Saloni aur mummy hall me bethe the tabhi mummy ka phn baja
Aur mummy ne phn uthaya
Mummy- hello
Papa- hi kesi ho
Mummy – me thik hu ap kese ho
Aur kunal kesa he?
Jesehi mummy ke mu se kunal ka naam nikala saloni turant hi mummy ki aur dekhne lagi who samj gayi ki papa ka phn he
Wo man hi man itna khus huyi uska man bechen hone laga ki
Dad – me b thik hu aur kunal yahi he ye lo baat karo
Kunal – hi mummy kesi ho ap
Mummy –kunal kese ho tum tik to ho na
Jesehi kunal phn pe aya saloni aur bechen hone lagi uske man me bus yahi chal raha tha mummy muje baat karne do mummy plz muje baat karne do
Mummy – ha he na teri dd yahi he ruko deti hu
Saloni ne jesehi yeh suna itna bhari man se phn liya
Saloni – hello
Kunal saloni ke mu se hello sunke itna khus huva lekin papa samne the who kuch jayada bol nahi sakta tha
Kunal – hello dd kesi ho ap
Kunal ki awaj sunke saloni ke man me ek rahat ki sans li uska man jo bhari tha halka ho gaya
Saloni – me thik hu kunal tum kese ho
Kunal – me b thik hu
Kunal bahut kuch bolna chahta tha lekin who bol hi nahi paa raha tha uske mu se awaj hi nahi nikal rahi thi
Kunal – me papa ko phn deta hu
Papa – hi beta kesi ho
Saloni – me thik hu ap kese ho ?
Papa – me b thik hu chalo ab me rakhta hu hum kal aa rahe he
Mummy ko b bol dena thik he by beta
Saloni – ha by
Jesehi phn rakha wo apne kamre me chali gai, aj saloni ke man me thodi santi thi
Saloni – man me – 4 din baad aj kunall ki awaj suni in 4 dino me muje yah to pata chal gya ki me jitna b apne apko strong banane ki kosis karu lekin me hu nahi itni strong
yeh mene dekh liya he
Jab kunal mere paas tha tab me use samne apni felling ko chupa leti thi lekin jab who mujse dur raha tab me b tut gai
jaldi aa jao kunal ab me b tumhare sath rehna chahti hu tumse baat karna chahti hu tume gale lagana chahti hu
Cut to kunal
kunal ne b saloni ki awaj 4 din baad suni thi to who b thoda khus tha lekin
who b yahi soch raha tha ki jaldi se me gar jana chahta hu saloni se baat karna chahta hu unki baho me sona chahta hu
kunal apni balkony me khade khade bus sab soche ja raha tha use need nahi aa rahi thi to usne deha ki hotel ka café khula he to who neeche chala gya
café me jake who coffie ka order de raha tha tab uski najar café ke landline pe padi
usne turant socha ki saloni ko phn kare usne gadi dekhi to ratke 2 baje the
lekin uska man nahi mana usne turant pucha
kunal – can I make a call plz
waiter – yes sir ofcors
aur kunal ne saloni ko phn lagaya
ring ja rahi thi lekin saloni ne phn nahi uthaya kyuki saloni so gai thi
kunal ko b laga ki saloni so gai hogi isliye usne dubara call nahi kiya
aur wo coffie leke kone ke table pe jake beth gaya
aur soch me duba huva tha
tabi ek unknown person café me aya jo umer me kafi bada tha aur who b coffie pee raha tha thodi der baad uski najar kunal pr padi
jo kunal bar bar apna phn chech kar raha tha aur paresan lag raha tha
to us unkown bande ko laga ki jake uske sath baat ki jaye wese b dono akelehi the café me
who kunal ke paas jata he
unknown – hey
kunal – herani se – hi
unknown – kya me yah beth sakta hu?
kunal – ha ofcors
unknown – kya baat he bahut paresan dikh rahe ho
kunal – ap kon
unknown – me yah betha tha tume dekha rat ke 2 baje akele bethe ho bar bar apna phn check kar rahe ho paresaan b dikh rahe ho sub thik he
kunal – ha sub thik he
unknown – agar kuch he to tum muje bata sakte ho kyuki dekha jaye to mere alawa yaha koi he b nhi –haste huve
kunal – nahi asi koi baat nahi he
unknown – thik he jesi apki marji
jesehi who uthke jane laga kunal achanak se bola
kunal – kisiki yaad aa rahi he
unknown – gf?
Kunal – nahi meri koi gf nahi he lekin pata nahi idk muje kuch samj me nahi aa raha
unknown – me kuch help karu
kunal – ap kese help kar sakte ho
unknown – batake to dekho
kunal ne sari bate batayi ki use kya feel ho rahahe leki usne yah nahi bataya ki who uski behan he
usne kaha
kunal – pata nahi wese to bahut tym se use janta hu lekin thode din se pata nahi hum dono ke beech me kya chala raha he usase baat karna uske sath rehna aur uski ki bare me sochte rehna muje kuch samj me nahi aa raha he jab me yaha ane ke liye nikla tha tab uasase juda hone ki baat se mayu hona aur 3 4 din se baat nahi huyi to uski yaad muje aur paresan kar rahi he
unknown – r u in love ?
kunal – herani se – nahi nahi bilkul nahi
unknown - lekin tumhari baat se lag raha he u r in love young man
kunal – kya sach me asa ho sakta he?
unknown – tumne yeh sub bate kabhi usase batayi he ?
kunal – nahi
unknown – meri mano to use yah sub bate use bata do
kunal – lekin apko kya lagta he agar me use yeh bata dunga to naraj hoke muje baat karna bundh kar diya to
unknown – dubne ke darse koi terna thodi chhod deta he mere dost – aur kya pata use yeh sab bate use achi b lage you never know
kunal thoda sochta he iske bare me ki kya muje bata dena chahiye apni behn ko is bare me lekin saloni meri behn he me usase pyar yeh kese ho sakta he
unknown – kya soch rahe ho agar itna sochte rahoge to sochte hi reh jaoge
meri ek baat yaad rakhna agar tum kisise pyar karte ho na to use jake bata do fir us insaan ke uper he ki who kya react karega
agar eoh insan b tume itna pyar karta he to who tumhare sath rehega nahi to chala jayega
lekin tume yeh afsos nahi rahega ki tumne use apni dil ki baat ki nahi
kunal – ap thik keh rahe he me use apne dil ki baat bata dunga
unknown – that’s gud young boy chalo ab jao apne room me raat bahut huyi he aur ab jara si bi deri mat karna
kunal – thnkyu so much leki ap he kon
unknown – me is hotel ka malik hu yeh hotel meri he
lekin ajse muje apna dost samjo
kunal – haske thkyu sir gud night
unknown – gud night god bless you
aur fir kunal wahase apne room me gaya aur usne deside kar liya ki who saloni ko apne dil ki baat bata dega
lekin aese nahi kuch achi tarike se batayega aur who sochne laga ki kese?
aur sochte sochte so gaya
Nice and beautiful update....
