Incest Bhain di fuddi...

[UnknownJatt]

Bai teri ikk gall dekhi hai ke tu sirf shikayat karan hi auna...shikayat da fayda taan e jadon asi regularly comment kariye dost. waise main os disha vall ja rehan. Eh kahani bahut badi hai es layi aje developing mode te hai. Sabh kujh ik writer di nigah ch hunda e. main horan writers warga nahi ke munda bed te bhain naal baithya ohde pattan te hath fere te usne nala khol ta. mere hisab naal kise vi chij nu time lagda hai. tusi sahi keha asli kahani preet te naaz di hai. oh vi aunge chinta na karo. eh meri jimmedari e ke apne pathkan nu kiwen maza dena e. waise aje thodi der layi preet naaz kol jawega par kahani thodi der dilli ch hi jari rahegi. lekin pathkan nu poora maza awega...

Bhra shikayaat krn ni aunda , mere according na story koi bi aa chahe tusi movie nu hi dekhlo kise nu oh story main characters de ale duwale rehndi aa , eve ta bai kise bi character nu add krke kahani diya lattan vaha bnai jao , side characters sirf twist leke aun vaste hunde aa , vese teri story aa bhrava tu writer aa jo tenu changa lagda krla , mai ta suggestion mangi si mere according mai tenu eh keh ta bi meri shikayaat aa , nale critics ta har jagah te hunde aa bhra har ek writer nu jwaab dena hi hunda aa . Baki appa mudke comment nhi krde kyuki tu har baar ess cheej nu wrong direction ch leke jana aa

 

[UnknownJatt]

Fer bi bhra tenu bura lageya ta maafi mai koi ehda bdda smjhdaar te gyaani person ta hniga , bss jive mehsus hoya keh ta tenu agge tu jaane te tera kam

 

[manikmittalme07]

Fer bi bhra tenu bura lageya ta maafi mai koi ehda bdda smjhdaar te gyaani person ta hniga , bss jive mehsus hoya keh ta tenu agge tu jaane te tera kam

Main teri gall ton inkaar taan ni si kita. Yaar mera jawab dhyan naal padh main keha ohna te vi awanga. Pehla eh part poora ho jawe. Baki es forum te top class writer paye ne. Main koi vadhiya lekhak wali category ch taan aunda ni. Jinni ku samajh aundi e likhi jana. Mafi mangan wali koi gall ni harek nu apni gall rakhan da hak e. Meri taan iko request hai ke harek part te comment karo taki banda kahani nu ose hisab naal dhal lawe.

 

[aulakh_]

Sira bai

 

[arjun8713]

Nice

 

[Shikari jatt]

Next update krde veer

 

[Harrymunda]

Bai update kar yaar Tu……Harek di apni pasand hundi aa..Comments nu pisitive lavo…..

 

[Harjas kaur]

Ki Raula pe gya tuhada ??

Main teri gall ton inkaar taan ni si kita. Yaar mera jawab dhyan naal padh main keha ohna te vi awanga. Pehla eh part poora ho jawe. Baki es forum te top class writer paye ne. Main koi vadhiya lekhak wali category ch taan aunda ni. Jinni ku samajh aundi e likhi jana. Mafi mangan wali koi gall ni harek nu apni gall rakhan da hak e. Meri taan iko request hai ke harek part te comment karo taki banda kahani nu ose hisab naal dhal lawe.

 

[aulakh_]

Krde yirr update

 

[manikmittalme07]

Ghnt bro yrr

thx a lot bro