Thriller BHANU PARTAP SINGH...

[Kalyansurya]

Bhai update bhut he khubsurat diya hai
Es me koi saq nai ki aapki story jabardast hoti hai
Ha kuch bura jrur lga tha ki aap kaffi time se story pe update nai de pa rhe ho
But aapki problem ka be pta nai tha hame
So uske leya sorry bhai sayad kuch narajgi wale comment be ham sab reader ke taraf se mele honge aapko
One agen sorry bhai
And bhai story lambi hone wali hai to hero ko fast forward me bada kro taqi action our romance dono story me saath me saath chale baki aapki choice
Best off luck for next update bhai

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Nice update
Waiting to see the competition

 

[Devanand]

BHANU PARTAP SINGH...................


ISKA naaam kaise nikla...........

GREYROCK.........aap sab bache ab jaa sakte hai...........

sab apne roome me jaane lggee......waha par sirf khadde rahe 4 students woh the...... Rex Stark Lara AND ZIN..........

rex............ Sir ...... Kya Bhanu kaa naam nahi nikal sakta.....abhi 1st year ka student hai........

GREYROCK......... Nahi mere bache......ab aisa mushkil hai........ Yeh kaaam jisne bhi kiya hai main uska pta lagake he rahunga auur usse kadi se kadi saza dunga......yeh mera bachan hai............

Rex........ Ok sir...waise jo isme harta hai usse kya saza milti hai......

greyrock........... Uski sab powers chin lee jati hai.....woh 1 aam insaan bn jata hai......

rex........ Nahi sir......... Fir uska ant kaise hoga....agat bhanu yeh match haar gyaa........

Greyrock......... Ab toh bas uper wale ka hee asra hai........


Aaj ka din aise hee nikal gya kal humara match tha.. ........

Subha subha hum sab uthe meditatin krne baith gyee jaha maine dekha

foe ki 3 indriya jagrit thi wahi rev ki 4 aur lew ki sirf 2 hi thi...... Main bhi baith gyaa....... Main dhyaam me apni book se baat krne lggaa.......

book....... G malik......

main......... Main iss mayaajaal me kaise fassa.....

book...... Malik ....aap fase nahi fasaye gye ho......... Aap dhyaan me baitho aur apne dil aur dimaag ki shakti ko ek sath jodo...... Fir apko koi nahi hara payega......par yeh itna asaan bhi nahi hai...... Uske dushparinaam bhi ho sakte hai........

main........ dushparinaam.........kaise dushparinaam.........

Book........malik....aap apne lok me nahi dekh sakte.........aur agar yeh mukabala haar jate ho toh aap 1 aam insaan bn jaoge.......jo naa toh dhartilok ke liye acha hai......naa toh iss galaxy ke aur naa hi kisi aur galaxies ke liyee.......... Aap ko kisi bhi halat me yeh mukabala jeetna hai.....

main........... Main apni trf se puri koshish krunga........aur healing stone toh hai hee agar mujhe ghav lagge toh main theek ho jaunga.......

book...... G malik ..... Healing stone apke ghav shanbhar me theek kr dega.............

fir maine book se baat krna band ki aur apne dill aur dimaag ki shakti ko ek sath krne lggaa....... Maine apni sarrii indriya jagrit kr lee...


Shaktiya ko ek sath krne me mujhe behad drd huaa........ Mera charo trf 1 aura bn chukaa thaa.....jo white colour tha....... Aur har waqt badhta jaa raha tha........aur uska taapmaan bhi........ Foe rev lew numo mera aura dekh apne dhyaan se uth gye aur 1 sath dusri jagh khad gyee.... Jab unse garmi sehan nahi huiii toh bahar ki trf bhaaggee aur GREYROCK ke pass chale gye......jaise hee greyrock ne sunaa toh woh aur bakki ke teacher bhagte huee uss room ki trf aayyee... Jaise hee room kaa door khola waise hee 1 ray chaaroo trf gayiii jo bhi uss ray ki chapet me aayyaa sab tabah ho gya tha jaise he ray greyrock aur baki ke teachers tak pahuchi tabhi greyrock ne ek shield apne aur backi ke teachers aur students ke uper lggaa diii....par ray kaa prahbhav itna tha kii uss shield ko tod bhi diya aur sabko dur faink diya....... Tabhi meri ankhe khulliii aur maine apni muthi bnd kii sab phele jaisa ho gya.......... Charon dhyaan me the..... Teachers Apne room me the............aur mere sharir ke ander ek alag hee urja thee.......

main(man me).........book kya makn safal raha.........

bookk..... G malik..... Aap safal rhe........

Main ....... Theeek hai...... Waise har raat tum mujhe yaha aur purani ghatnao ke baare me btate rahoge...... Main jald se jald yaha se jana chahta hu.......


Boook........ G malik........ Jaisi apki marziiii......


Fir GREYROCK aur baki ke teacher hummare room me aayyee..........

greyrock........bacho ab jo match shuru hone jaa raha hai uska ant yaa toh haar ke mannne se hoga yaa toh mar jaane se..........apko jaise pta hee hai.....jo bhi match harega woh 1 aam naagrik reh jayega..........ab aap peeche bhi nahi hat sakte kyuuki jalagni tumhe nasht kr degi..........apjj puri koshish se ladna..........sabash mere bachon.......


Fir hum charron bahar ground me aagye......... Iss baar ground bahut bada tha......... Kam se kam 40 toh bde tv jaise lgge thee.....jaha hummee dikhaya jaa raha tha.......Greyrock ground ke beech me aayyee.....

greyrock........mukabla shuru kiya jaayyee......

foe aur rev ne magic se apne dhanush bnaye.........aur ek dusre par humla krne lgge....... Wahi lew meri trf dauda aur uske hath me gadda thi....jo bahut hee bhaarriii (weight) dikh rahi thiii....... Usne mere par hamla kiyaa....tabhi maine 1 current ki deewaar apne aagge bnaa dee.....jaise hee uski gadda meri current ki deewaar ko touch huiiii 3 guna speed se woh wapis udda aur rev ke upper jaa giirraa.....jiisse rev aur lew dono neeche gir gye....... Har jagh....BHANU BHANU hone lggii.... Aur greyrock ke mukh par smile aa gyii........

lew.......... Rev..foe....phle iska hee khel khatam krte hai .....baar me hum teeno me jo jeetega dekha jayega......


Rev....... Haan theek bol rhe ho tum........

Foe.......par tuum itnaa dur kaise giirre.....

lew........yaar pta nahi...... Uspar apni gadda se parhaar kiya par ek dum se idher aakr girraa..........


Foe..........acha....chalo.....apne apne skills se hee ladte hai....aur isko harra dete hai.........

lew.......foe...apne magic se kuch bde bde pathar idher bnaa do.....tabtak rev tum isse apne warrior skills se ldoo.....hum donk bhi aaker milte hai tumhare sath......

rev....... Ok.....

Fir rev meri trf aayyyaa aur apne dhanush se mere upper teer chalane lgga...... Maine bhi magic se 1 dhanush mangwaya....aur rev ke teer ko apne teer se rokne lgga.....

mera teer rev ke teer ko tod ke aage chale jata hai aur jaake seedha uske dhanush ko lgta hai....jisse uska dhanush tut gya.......
rev ne hawa me hath ghumaya aur ek talwaar uske hath me aaggaaiiii
.....main ab iss mukable ko khatam krna chahta thaa ...toh maine apne purana paitra iste maal kiya naye treeke se......

maine uper hawa me pani ki 1 ring bnaii aur dusre hath se 1 neeche chote chote aag ke bawandar karib karib 10 15 bawandar to the......aur unko rev ki trf chod diya.......rev ne usse bachne ke liye gol gol ghumm ke kalabaji lgaiii aur mere pani ke ring me aakar fass gya......... Aur neeche girr gya.....

tab tak foe bhi aa chuki thi ....woh usko kaat saktii par main aise nahi hone diyaa ..... Jaise hee woh aae....maine uske upper jadui jal dhanush se teero ki baarish kr dii....... Jisse usne aag ki dhaal bnaa kar rokne lggiii ....par pagal usko kya pata uske aage kon hai......... Main shant khada ho gyaa....apni ankhe band kii aur dono hath uper kiyaa.....1 side se jal dhanush se pani ke teer barash rhe thee dusri side main bijli kaa dhanush bnaa diya jisme foe fass gayiii aur apna concertante nahi kr payiii aur bechari ghayak ho giii..... Bahi lew bhii aa gyaa....aur mere uper bhari bhari pathro ki barish krne lggaa..... Main apne hath jhatka aur hawa ka ek bawander bnaya jisse yeh hua......woh jitne pathar yaa chattaan fainkta uss bawandar me aa jattee ....mere iss bawander ne un teeno ko gher liyaa.... Aur gol gol ghumaane lggee........

jaise hee teeno ek dum uper pahuche maine bawander rok diya...... Jisse woh neeche girne lggee.....Aur hawa me hee HUM HAAR GYEEE....HUM HAAR MANTE HAI.......aisa chilane lgge...... Tabhi maine 1 mantr bola aur woh araam se neeche aannee laggee.......


Har jagh pura school sirf bhanu bhanu krne lggaa........ ....


Tabhi

GREYROCK............sab shaaant ho jaye.............. Adhbhut.........1st year ka student.........4rth year ke students ko aisi dhul........... Adhubhut.......tum sach me kamaaal ho BHANU PARTAP SINGH................

Kal mera match numo ke sath tha........ Aur parso sab universe se bache aur unke teacher aane wale the
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[Last benchers]

Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update...

 

[Black water]

Awesome fantastic update bhai

 

[HarRy GoYaL]

Love It Bro Fantastic...
Bas Aise Hi Updates Dete Rho.
waiting For Main Competition..

 

[Jerry]

Awsm update bro

 

[aditya]

Wonderful update

 

[Sharad97]

Nice update

 

[Wolverine]

Jbrdst update