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Thriller BHANU PARTAP SINGH...

Vickey1211

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BHANU PARTAP SINGH..................


subha huii .....hum sab 7 students ussi room me the....... Abhi tak kisi ne kisi se bhi koi baat nahi ki thi.....sab apne dhyaan me baithe the ......... Main bhi dhyaan me hee thaa......par aaj dill me ek dar saa tha......pta nahi kyuu..... Par kuch acha nahi lagg raha tha.......

subha ke 6 bje....humme bahara bulaya gya tha......... Main ground tak pahuche....... Sab teachers iss universe ke aur dusre universe ke 1 sath baithe hue the..... Parmguru greyrock ki chair par baithe the........tabhi......


Paramguru........ Bacho.......aaj.... universal leauge ka phela aur akhiri din hai....... Aaj total 3 match honge......

1st match...... Hide and seek with power........

2nd......check the true power......

3rd......final......

1st match me aap sab ki powers nikaal dii jayegi........ Aur ghanne jungle me chuppa dii jaygei.....usse bs apko dhudna hai.....jo 5 students usse dhund lenge.......woh hee agle match me jayege......... Yeh itna asaan bhi nahi hai....... Jo usme reh jayge woh sada ke liye hee ussme reh jayega....... Aur uski powers jo 1st student hoga uske pass chale jayegi........

2nd........ Check the true power......... Isme kewel 3 student hee paar kr payege ....aur jo students reh jayge woh apne ghar laut jayega par unki powers jo match jeete gaa uske liye gift hogii.......iss match me apko apne antarshakti se kaam lena pdega ......apko powers to milli hogi par........ Uske ilaawa apne antar shakti kaa bhi istemaal krna pdega..........saral bhasha me....apki bahri aur antar shakti kaa mel ka test hoga.......


3rd....... Jo final me jeetga....woh mere sath....reh kar aaggee ki training lega aur.....uski 1 wish bhi puri ki jayegi......aur aage chal kar all universe ki sena me shamil hoga.....apki mehnat dekh kr apko aaggee kaa pad millega...... Agar aap uttam hoge toh uttam pad...aur agar aap theek rhege toh sena me pad ........ Aur jo jeetega unhe baki bache 6 students ki power bhi mileegi........... Final me aap apne tarike se ldde gee......


Hum sabne apna cir hilaya........firr paramguru neeche ground par aayyee..... Aur barri baarrii hum sab ke cir par hath rakha jisse humme dard toh huaa......jo main byaan nahi kr sakta........ Hum sab apne ghutno par aa gyee....... Karib karib 7 se 8 minut tak aise hee baithe rahe fir dheere dheere khade hone lggew....... Fir paramguru ne apna hath ghumaya aur hum 7 students 1 jungle me pahuch gyee......... Jaha 7 raste the .........

fir paramguru ne apna hath ghumaya aur humari shaktiya jungle me chale gyi...... Meri kitaab guru ji ke pass thi........



Rael ne apni aankhe band ki aur 3sre raste par ninta 1st se yala 7th se metoliya 4rth se xoto 2nd se garry 6th se aur ab bacha mai....... Mere pass bas 5th tha toh apne MAA AUR PAPA ko yaad kiya aur raste par nikal gya........

pura school humme ground par lgge bade bade screens se dekh raha tha........ Aur baki ke UNIVERSE bhi humara match dekh rahe the......

jaise hee hum sab ander gye.... Peeche se rasta band ho gya tha....... Maine bhagna shuru kiya..... Yeh 1 bhul bhuleya jaisa thaa..... Bss main ghum raha tha...... Ghumte ghumte jaha se shuruwaat ki thi fir bahi pahuch gya......... Maine neeche zammen par apna hath rakha aur apni aankhe band ki......... Tabhi mere peeche jo jhadiya thi woh band hone laaggii matlab apas me judne lggew..... Maine fir daud lgga dii..... Aise he dhundhte dhundhte 1 hr ho gya tha.....par koi bhi safal nahi ho paya...... Tabhi rael aur main 1 jagah pahuch rael ne meri ankho me dekha........ Aur aagge ki trf chala gya.... Main usse dusri side chala gya.....

hum dono fir se takraye....... Tabhi meri power meri trf se chuuuu krke nikali.....mujhe abhaas hua ki yeh meri power hai.... Main bhi uss trf daud lgaa diii....mere peech peeche rael ne bhi daud lga dee thi..........


Ek jagh jakar meri power ruk gar aur udher hee rael kii power bhi thi......... Meri aur rael ki power apas me ladd rahi thi........ Rael aur main ek jagah hee khade the........ Tabhi maine dauda aur mere peeche rael bhi dauda....... Rael kad Kathi me mere se bada tha.....umer me bhi mere se bdda tha .......... Magar mere phle daudne ki bjh se main apni power ke gole ko chuu liya jisse phle toh sab 1 dum rukk saa gya.....aur 2sre hee pal main ground me thaa.......... Kuc second baad rael bhi aa gya.......... Fir xoto metoliya aur ant me garry potter.....


Ninta aur yala.......waha hee reh gae.......unki powers ke gole mere samne aakar rukke aur mere ird gird gol gol ghumane lgee....... Aur jab unki speed unke akhri charam par thi.....tab woh mere sharir me parvesh krne lggiii...... Mera sharir hawa me thaa.... Kabhi uper jata kabhi neeche jata.....aur 1 se 2 mint me wapis phele jaise ho gya.......

paramguru......... apka phela charan paar hota hai......ab aap check the true power me jayege.......


Aur paramguru neeche aaye aur firr unhone apna hath ghumaya aur hum 5 students ek pahad ke samne the ........

Paramguru....... Issme tumhe apni sujhbhuj se aage jaana hai ...... Har kadam phook phook kr rakhna pdega.....yaha kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hi..... Isme apka warrior skills.....magic skills....aur powerfull skills..... Ka 1 sath upyog krna hoga........aur iska ant uper pahad par 1 gufa hai....usme 1 pathar hai.....jo usse pehle pkdega woh toh vijeta hoga....aur jo uske pass pass honge 2 students woh bhee jeet jayege aur unke beech hoga final..........


Tabhi Paramguru waha se challe gye.......

pahad ko aam pahad nahi tha.....bilkul he andhere me thaa....... Aur uper toh bilkul hee andhera tha............

maine pahad par daud lgaa dii...kuch aagee gyaa ki mujhe kuch aihsas hua toh main ruk gya.....par rael aur xoto nahi ruke...... Aur jaise hee mere se kuch door par pahuche.......aur....




Aaaaaahhhhhhhh..... Yeh cheek dono ke muhh se nikli thi......... Kuki aahe 1 adrishya bijle ki dewwar thi .... Mujhe kuch gargarahat c awaaz aaii toh main rukk gya tha......par woh nahi...jiske bjh se unko fir se start krna pda.........

maine zameen ke ander se jaane ki sochi aur uske liye maine ek bawander bnaya aur usse zameen me parvesh krwaya jisse woh zameen ko fadta huaa ander jaa rah tha.. metoliya aur garry mujhe bas dekh rahe the....... Par tabhi bawandar wapis aagya....aur mujhe 1 jhatka lgga jisse main bhi starting point par aagya tha........

Main firr dauda toh dekha waha par sab khade hai...

metoliya aur garry ne toh koshish hee naa ki ho........

fir main apni aankhe band krke baith gyaa.....mujhe dekh baki ke bhi baith gye....... Hum sabne uss deewaar par apni bijli faiki toh usmw 3 se 4 second ke loye ek ched huaa aur panchon bhage ander ghusne ke liyee..... Par metoliya fass gyii uska aadha sharir bahr tha aur adha ander.....aur woh ek raaakh bn gyiii... Kyuki..uska pura sharir jall gya tha...............

fir hum kuch aage gyee...... Waha 4 danav khadde the....... Unke hath me unka hathiyar tha...... Aur side me gadha....talwaar dhanudh....aur bhalla pdde the....... Rael ne bhaag kar 1 talwar uthai..... Maine dhanus.......garry ne gadha....aur xolo ne bhala. ....
jaise hee humme apne hathiyaar uthaye ussi waqt danvo ne humpar humla karr....... Hum charron alg alg ho gyee....... Mere wale danav kii 1 hee aankh thi.... Cir ke upper 1 sing aur 2 hath 2 laate....... maine danav par phel kuch teer maare jisse usne unhe pakar karr tod diya....... Fir maine 1 teer aur chalya woh teer aag ka tha.... Jaise hee usne usse pkda uska hath jalne lggaa..... Tabhi maine.... 4teer hawa me chalye..... 1 aag kaa....1 pani ka..... 1 bijli ka...... 1 pathar kaa........

jaise hee usne upper dekhaa toh maine 5 teer ek sath uski gardar par chalaye jisse uski gardan alab ho gae..... Abhi main khush bhi nahi huaa tha ki uski gardan fir se judd gayiii
.......

danav.........Haahahahahahaha.
...humme marna tum bacho ki baat nahi.......hahahahah aak hum tumhar sewan krege........

main fir uss par aag ke teer chalaye jaa raha tha alag alag heeso par....... Par jaise hee woh jalta shanbhar me theek ho jata...... Ab mera dimmaag bilkul ghumm gya tha........

maine kahi pdha tha ki danvo ki shakti unke sing me hoti hai.......

toh maine 1 teer uske sing par chalya jo usne roka........ Cir wapis lagne ke baad usne koi bbi teer nahi rokaa thaa.....

tabhi main 5 teer uske pairo par chalyee lar jabtak uske paor jal rahe the tabhi 1 ke 1 teer uske sing par chalye jaa raha tha....jisse woh rokne ki koshish kr rha tha..... Par kitne teer rokta.....uske sing ko 1 teer lag gyaa..aur woh kat gya........

tabhi danav dhua Bankar gayab ho gya.......

mere ko dekh kar sab unke singo par waar krne lggee.....main agge badh gya..... Aage chal krr... 12 ped the....aamne saamne...... Aur unke beech jaane ka rasta par 12 khaane bne hue the.......

Main situation smjh hee raha tha...ki garry aa gya........ Garry ne bhi apna danav ko maar diya tha...... Gaary ne bina kuch soche samjhe apna pair aage 1 khanne me rakh diya .... Par tabhi 2 pedo se unginat teer nikalne lggee...... Maine garry ko peeche khicha aur 1 sheil lgga dii...jisse teer bjte aur tut jaate....

Garry.......shukriya dost...

main......shukriya ki koi bhi baat nahi....yeh mera farj tha.....

Tab tak rael aur xolo bhi pahuch gye...... Woh situation ko samajh he rehe the ki maine apni aankhe band ki aur man ki shakti se dekhne lgga..... Maine phele he apne man aur dimaag ki shakti ko jod liyaa thaa..... Mai ankhe band kr un khano ko dekh sakta tha..... Woh khaane 1 button jaise the...... fir aankhe band kr main aage bdhta jaa raha tha.... Mere peeche sab aagye........ Abhi usse bahar nikle hee the.. ki aage 1 aur mussi bat khaddi thi..... Ab jungle tha......woh bhi ghana aur andehre se bhara huaa.....

hum dheere dheere aage badh rahe thw ki... Rael ne illusion magic hum teeno par kr diya...... Mujhe toh uska koi farak nahi paddaa par garry aur xoto wapis mudne lgee.....

rael ne 1 look mujhe dee aur aage ki aur bdhne lggaa..... Main uske peeche bhaag raha tha.... Bhagte bhagte....marte marte hum uss pahad ke top par pahuch gye...... Rael mere se kuch he kadam aage tha......... Tabhi rael ne aag se mere par humla kiya..... Jisse maine pani se roka...... Aur rael ki aag meri taraf naa aakar peeche ki trf jaa rahi thi.... Aisa dekb usne apna magic roka aur guffa je andar bhaga..... Main bhi puri jee jaan se bhaag raha tha...... Hum dono 1 dusre ke bilkul pass the...... Woh pathar hum dono se karib 20 22 kadam door tha.... Hum dono bhaag rahe the aur 1 dum se chalanag lagaaii....... Dono kaa hath 1 sath uss pathar par lgga....... Aur agke hee shan ..... Main aur rael pathar ko hath me pakde hue school ground par the........ Har jagh taliya he taliya baj rahi thi......

Aur kuch sec. Baad garry bhi aa gyaa.....

uska muh udaas thaa.... Aur rael par gussa bhi tha....

paramguru neeche aayye....

paramguru.........adhbhut pratiyogita thi...... BHANU.....tumhari shakti ka toh aihsas tha mujhe par ekta aur dridhta dekh sach me maja aayya......

ab hoga final........

battle...... Jo shuru hota hai ab.......
aur itna bol paramguru wapis uper chair par bath gyee aur hum teeno apni jagh khade ho gye......


rael ne shuruwaat ki usne dono hatho se agni nikali aur meri aur garry ki trf chodd dee....


Garry ko usper phele se gussa tha...aur iss trh war krne se gusse me tel kaa kaam kr diya.....

garry ne puri takat se usper hamala krne lggaa... Garrii ne panni ka ek gola banaya aur usse brf kaa bna diya..... Usme se kuch spikes se nikle aur woh rael ki trf chod diye...... Rael uske liyee tyaar thaa.... Usne bhi apne aage 1 aag ki dewwar khaddi kr li... Jisse garry ke spikes takrate aur bhap ban jattee...... Garry konaur bhi gussa aa raha tha....... Admi gusse me bahut galat kaam kr jata hai aur yaha bhi wahi huaa..... Jaise hee garry kaa dhyaan hattaa waise hee rael ne aag kaa 1 hath banaya aur garry ki trf chod diya..... Gaary ko uss hath ne pakad liyaa... Aur gael ne apna hath ghumaya......sath sath aag ka bhi hath ghum raha tha....... Jaise jaise action rael ka hath kr raha tha....waise waise aag kaa hath bhi kr rha tha.... Aur rael ne apna hath zameen par maarraa.... Jisse garry bhi zameen pe maarraa gyaa aur joh bhi aag thi sab garry ke sharir me dhass gyi....... Aur garry ne apna dum tod diya.......


Meri aankh se ansu nikal ayyee.....

rael........ Aa ab teri baari hai......

main.......... Tu bheek mangega apni maut ki aur tujhe maut nahi milegi..... Ab dekha......

aur tabhi maine apni indriya jagrit ki.. meri sab indiya jagrit dekh rael ki bhi gand fatt gyii isne bji apni indriya jagrit ki par uski sirf 4 hee jagrit huii......

maine phele apne hath se 1 aag fainki....meri aag kaa tez itna tha ki.... paramguru uthe aur unhone 1 sheil students aur apne teachers ke uper lgaaii....

rael ne jal se usse rokna chaha par aag ka tez itna tha ki uske jal ko shok rahi thi....... Aisa dekh rael ne jal ko roka aur 1 aag kii deewaar khddi kr dii.... Par jaise he meri aag uske aag ki dewaar ko lgii...booooommmmmm

1 dhamaka hua.... Har jagh dhua he dhua thaa........

mera yeh dekh bilkul hee mood kharab ho gya..... Maine apni aankhe band ki aur apne dono hath aagee kiye..... Aur aag aur oani ke gole rael ke uper chodne lggaa..........

kuch gole rael ko touch kr rhe the aur kuch uske side se nikal jaa rahe the......
jo gole rael ko touch krne wale hote woh unko dodge kr raha tha.....

rael........ Hahahahaha..... Bhanu tera toh nishana bilkul kharab hai..... 1 bhi mujhe chu nahi paya.....

maine usse dekha aur halki c smile pass ki aur peeche ki trf mud gya....... Aur 1 chutki bjaii... Jo bhi gole gye...sab rael par barsne lggee.....




Nahhhiiiii.......aaaaaahahhhhhhhh.......... Bas yehi cheekh thi rael ki....


Param guru............

SHAURYA PARTAP SINGH
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
 
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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Rael ne Sala dhoka sb ko Diya Kiya Jo mare hai wo wapas nhi aaskte aise pramguru ne kah tha Jo jitega uski ek wish Puri krega
 
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Awesome update. Finally Bhanu wins the battle.
 

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nice
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Nice update
 

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