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Incest Bheed me akela (abhay)

Gurdep

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Update - 33

(Recap - aakhri update me aapne padha ki kis tarha avni ne petar ko abhay ke khilaf bhadkaya )

aab aage

2 din baad

sahi kahe tha mara baba ghodi ki lagam dhili naa choddi jati
or yaha hamne chori ki lagam dhilli chhoddi


ke faida itne admi itni tagat ka bhiku jab ham hamare ghar ki choriya ne naa rok sakte

Is_waqt Chaudhary haveli me sannata chaya hua tha ayisa is haveli me salo se nahi hua tha

jaankaar log jaante the jab bhi chaudharyo ke ghar me shanti chati h to woh bas aane wale tufaan ki dastak deti h

is_samay shyam Chaudhary kamre me baithe hue the or unke sath unke 2no bete or sabhi pote the
shyaam Chaudhary ke samne table thi , jis par kuch photos pade hue the jinme dekhai de rahe the ek ladki or ek ladka

Aaj shyam Chaudhary gusse me the or baki sare dare hue
yaha tak ki jis bhiku chaudhary ko log janwar danav or pata nhi kis kis naam se bulate the
us bhiku chaudhary ke chahre ki hawaiya bhi udi hui thi

Likin in sab me 2 log ayise bhi the jo dar ke mare kaap rahe the unhe apni mout apne samne nazar aa rahi thi
or woh log the tinka or gopal dono ki itni buri halat thi ki pucho mat

Vikram - ab is dono ka karna kya h

gopal -(dar dabate hue) karna kya bhaiya apna hi sikka khota h chaudharyo ki izzat itni sasti nhi h ki koi bhi khel jaye

tinka - (moke kaa faida uthate hue) or ib to pure ****** sahar ne pata chalan do ki chaudhary apni izzat bachan khatir apna bhi khun baha sake h

abhi dono ne apni baat kahke khatm ki hi thi ki
thaaaddddaakkkk tadaakkk
1 1 danda dono ke pairo pe pada

s.c (shyam Chaudhary)
manne khushi hui yo jaanke ki mare baad mare bete naa sahi par mare pote apni izzat ka itna khayaal kre h
par budhi ka vikas naa hoya tabhi itni_si baat pe apni bhen ka khun bahan_ke liye raji ho gaye

khun bahega zarur bahega par apna nhi is chore ka

vikram - par dada naam kya h is chore ka

s.c - abhiii


magar lagta h aaj ki raat ****** city me ye bijli sirf ek pariwar par nhi balki 2 pariwaro par giri h

Location thakur haveli

abhi ham zinda h mare nhi jo tum is_tarha ki harkat par utar aaye Ranveer


Dhananjay thakur bhi aaj bahut gusse me the
aaj unke vishwas ko thes pahuchi thi
unhe aaj apna pariwar tutta hua nazar aaya tha
or agar aaj bhi woh bich me nhi aate to thakur pariwar ek dusre ka dushman ban jata

aaj dari hui to savitri devi bhi thi unhe samajh nhi aa raha tha ye kaise ho gya kyu ho gya kab ho gya

wahi Kamini ki aankho me khun utar aaya tha usne kabhi bhi apne bacho or apni jethani ke bacho me farak nhi kiya ulta apni jethani ke bacho ko apni beti se zada pyaar diya apni jethani ko apni bahan ka darja diya likin.....

wahi Kajal ki aankhain sharm se jhuki hui thi aakhir aaj uske pati ne harkat hi ayisi ki thi

arav - dad are you mad aap kya soch rhe the
aapne chachu ke kaam ko band krane ki koshish ki

ranveer - mujhe maaf kardo sanjay me lalach me andha ho gya tha
or hath jod kar khada ho gya

ranveer gusse me tha par woh bewakuf nhi tha use samajh aa gya tha ki bhanda phut chuka hai agar abhi usne baat ko nhi sambhala to bahut kuch bigad sakta h

ranveer ke ayisa karte hi sabki nazrain sanjay ki taraf chali gyi
(is_waqt koi bhi ladki waha moujud nhi thi)

savtri - beta dekh bada bhai h maaf karde use dekh kaise hath jod ke khada h

arav - haa chachu papa se galti ho gyi unhe maaf karde
Or sath ke sath mujhe bhi bahno ki shadi ki taiyari or baki chezon me itna ulajh gya ki dad or aap sab par dhiyan hi nhi de_paya

arav ko pata tha pichle kuch waqt se usne sab dekh kar undekha kar diya tha or isi_liye uska chacha uspr bhi satka hua hai
or woh koi risk lena nhi cahta tha

kajal - haa sanjay ham sabko maaf kardo hamse bahut badi bhul hui h

sanjay sab dekh raha tha agar purana sanjay hota to ab tak ye baat khatm bhi ho chuki hoti likin ab sanjay badal chuka tha
ab sanjay ko ye ek moke jaisa lag raha tha

sanjay - theek h maa papa aap log chahate h naa me ye baat yahi khatm kar dun to theek h par meri ek shart h

sanjay ki baat sun kar sab log canfuse the

dhananjay - kaisi shart

sanjay - me nhi cahta ki avni ki shadi Sangwan pariwar me ho
likin kyuki raja sahab se wada pitaji ne kiya tha to me shadi to nhi tod sakta par me aapse ek wada cahta hu ki agar shadi se pahle meri beti ko koi or ladka passand aata hai yaa woh khud is shadi se mana karti hai to
YE SHADI NHI HOGI

or bas boooommmmm

sabhi ke totte udd chuke the sanjay ne aaj dhamaka kar diya tha

arav ki muthi gusse me kas gyi thi
ranveer ka sar ghum gya tha
kajal ki aankhain badi badi ho gyi thi
Dhananjay thakur ko bas almost 2nd hart_aatack aa hi gya tha
savitri devi ki aankho me aasu aa gye the

likin yaha sabse buri halat to khud Kamini ki thi woh aankh or muh fade sanjay ko dekh rahi thi akhir uske pati ko hua kya tha itni himmat use to yakin hi nhi ho raha tha

arav - ( khudko sambhalte hue) haahahaha chachu aap bhi kaisi baatin karte h me to pahle hi apni bahno se wada kar chuka hu k......

sanjay -( bichme tokte hue) me koi tumhari bahno ki tarha bacha nhi hu arav jise tum wade ki lolipop de doge or me maaan jauga
or me ye aap logo se sirf puch nhi raha hu balki bata raha hu
agar meri beti ek baat bhi ye kaha ki use ye shadi nhi karni to koi bhi matlab koi bhi mujhe is shadi ko todne rok nhi payega...

ye bol kar sanjay wahase chala jata hai or uske piche piche kamini bhi dhire dhire sab log apne apne kamre me pahuch jate h

raat 1 bje ranveer chhat par baitha daru pi raha tha

ranveer - ye sab us_ladke ki wajha se hua h
nhi chhodunga sale tujhe dekh luga
ABHIII KE BACHE...

or in do bade pariwaro ke log jis admi ko galiya de rahe the woh admi is waqt baithe hue kuch soch raha tha or uske man me petar ka sawal chal raha tha

petat - (nashe me) bhai apun kabhi kabhi sochta h ki ye jo sala koi bhi pahli baar ghadi baya hoga usko kaise malum din me 24 ghante hote h usko kon bataya hoinga

me - soch se bahar aate hue ye sala kya sawal tha....

aaj ke liye bas itna hi or
Aapko kya lagta hai abhay ne 2 din me ayise konse kand kiye h or ab kya hone wala h abhay ke sath
sorry for late bhai log
Update - 33

(Recap - aakhri update me aapne padha ki kis tarha avni ne petar ko abhay ke khilaf bhadkaya )

aab aage

2 din baad

sahi kahe tha mara baba ghodi ki lagam dhili naa choddi jati
or yaha hamne chori ki lagam dhilli chhoddi


ke faida itne admi itni tagat ka bhiku jab ham hamare ghar ki choriya ne naa rok sakte

Is_waqt Chaudhary haveli me sannata chaya hua tha ayisa is haveli me salo se nahi hua tha

jaankaar log jaante the jab bhi chaudharyo ke ghar me shanti chati h to woh bas aane wale tufaan ki dastak deti h

is_samay shyam Chaudhary kamre me baithe hue the or unke sath unke 2no bete or sabhi pote the
shyaam Chaudhary ke samne table thi , jis par kuch photos pade hue the jinme dekhai de rahe the ek ladki or ek ladka

Aaj shyam Chaudhary gusse me the or baki sare dare hue
yaha tak ki jis bhiku chaudhary ko log janwar danav or pata nhi kis kis naam se bulate the
us bhiku chaudhary ke chahre ki hawaiya bhi udi hui thi

Likin in sab me 2 log ayise bhi the jo dar ke mare kaap rahe the unhe apni mout apne samne nazar aa rahi thi
or woh log the tinka or gopal dono ki itni buri halat thi ki pucho mat

Vikram - ab is dono ka karna kya h

gopal -(dar dabate hue) karna kya bhaiya apna hi sikka khota h chaudharyo ki izzat itni sasti nhi h ki koi bhi khel jaye

tinka - (moke kaa faida uthate hue) or ib to pure ****** sahar ne pata chalan do ki chaudhary apni izzat bachan khatir apna bhi khun baha sake h

abhi dono ne apni baat kahke khatm ki hi thi ki
thaaaddddaakkkk tadaakkk
1 1 danda dono ke pairo pe pada

s.c (shyam Chaudhary)
manne khushi hui yo jaanke ki mare baad mare bete naa sahi par mare pote apni izzat ka itna khayaal kre h
par budhi ka vikas naa hoya tabhi itni_si baat pe apni bhen ka khun bahan_ke liye raji ho gaye

khun bahega zarur bahega par apna nhi is chore ka

vikram - par dada naam kya h is chore ka

s.c - abhiii


magar lagta h aaj ki raat ****** city me ye bijli sirf ek pariwar par nhi balki 2 pariwaro par giri h

Location thakur haveli

abhi ham zinda h mare nhi jo tum is_tarha ki harkat par utar aaye Ranveer


Dhananjay thakur bhi aaj bahut gusse me the
aaj unke vishwas ko thes pahuchi thi
unhe aaj apna pariwar tutta hua nazar aaya tha
or agar aaj bhi woh bich me nhi aate to thakur pariwar ek dusre ka dushman ban jata

aaj dari hui to savitri devi bhi thi unhe samajh nhi aa raha tha ye kaise ho gya kyu ho gya kab ho gya

wahi Kamini ki aankho me khun utar aaya tha usne kabhi bhi apne bacho or apni jethani ke bacho me farak nhi kiya ulta apni jethani ke bacho ko apni beti se zada pyaar diya apni jethani ko apni bahan ka darja diya likin.....

wahi Kajal ki aankhain sharm se jhuki hui thi aakhir aaj uske pati ne harkat hi ayisi ki thi

arav - dad are you mad aap kya soch rhe the
aapne chachu ke kaam ko band krane ki koshish ki

ranveer - mujhe maaf kardo sanjay me lalach me andha ho gya tha
or hath jod kar khada ho gya

ranveer gusse me tha par woh bewakuf nhi tha use samajh aa gya tha ki bhanda phut chuka hai agar abhi usne baat ko nhi sambhala to bahut kuch bigad sakta h

ranveer ke ayisa karte hi sabki nazrain sanjay ki taraf chali gyi
(is_waqt koi bhi ladki waha moujud nhi thi)

savtri - beta dekh bada bhai h maaf karde use dekh kaise hath jod ke khada h

arav - haa chachu papa se galti ho gyi unhe maaf karde
Or sath ke sath mujhe bhi bahno ki shadi ki taiyari or baki chezon me itna ulajh gya ki dad or aap sab par dhiyan hi nhi de_paya

arav ko pata tha pichle kuch waqt se usne sab dekh kar undekha kar diya tha or isi_liye uska chacha uspr bhi satka hua hai
or woh koi risk lena nhi cahta tha

kajal - haa sanjay ham sabko maaf kardo hamse bahut badi bhul hui h

sanjay sab dekh raha tha agar purana sanjay hota to ab tak ye baat khatm bhi ho chuki hoti likin ab sanjay badal chuka tha
ab sanjay ko ye ek moke jaisa lag raha tha

sanjay - theek h maa papa aap log chahate h naa me ye baat yahi khatm kar dun to theek h par meri ek shart h

sanjay ki baat sun kar sab log canfuse the

dhananjay - kaisi shart

sanjay - me nhi cahta ki avni ki shadi Sangwan pariwar me ho
likin kyuki raja sahab se wada pitaji ne kiya tha to me shadi to nhi tod sakta par me aapse ek wada cahta hu ki agar shadi se pahle meri beti ko koi or ladka passand aata hai yaa woh khud is shadi se mana karti hai to
YE SHADI NHI HOGI

or bas boooommmmm

sabhi ke totte udd chuke the sanjay ne aaj dhamaka kar diya tha

arav ki muthi gusse me kas gyi thi
ranveer ka sar ghum gya tha
kajal ki aankhain badi badi ho gyi thi
Dhananjay thakur ko bas almost 2nd hart_aatack aa hi gya tha
savitri devi ki aankho me aasu aa gye the

likin yaha sabse buri halat to khud Kamini ki thi woh aankh or muh fade sanjay ko dekh rahi thi akhir uske pati ko hua kya tha itni himmat use to yakin hi nhi ho raha tha

arav - ( khudko sambhalte hue) haahahaha chachu aap bhi kaisi baatin karte h me to pahle hi apni bahno se wada kar chuka hu k......

sanjay -( bichme tokte hue) me koi tumhari bahno ki tarha bacha nhi hu arav jise tum wade ki lolipop de doge or me maaan jauga
or me ye aap logo se sirf puch nhi raha hu balki bata raha hu
agar meri beti ek baat bhi ye kaha ki use ye shadi nhi karni to koi bhi matlab koi bhi mujhe is shadi ko todne rok nhi payega...

ye bol kar sanjay wahase chala jata hai or uske piche piche kamini bhi dhire dhire sab log apne apne kamre me pahuch jate h

raat 1 bje ranveer chhat par baitha daru pi raha tha

ranveer - ye sab us_ladke ki wajha se hua h
nhi chhodunga sale tujhe dekh luga
ABHIII KE BACHE...

or in do bade pariwaro ke log jis admi ko galiya de rahe the woh admi is waqt baithe hue kuch soch raha tha or uske man me petar ka sawal chal raha tha

petat - (nashe me) bhai apun kabhi kabhi sochta h ki ye jo sala koi bhi pahli baar ghadi baya hoga usko kaise malum din me 24 ghante hote h usko kon bataya hoinga

me - soch se bahar aate hue ye sala kya sawal tha....

aaj ke liye bas itna hi or
Aapko kya lagta hai abhay ne 2 din me ayise konse kand kiye h or ab kya hone wala h abhay ke sath
sorry for late bhai log
AMAZING AWESOME FANTASTIC UPDATE BHAI NEXT UPDATE KAB AYE GAYA
 
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Naik

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Update - 34

Next day - roz ke mukable aaj mousam thoda zada hi garam tha ye suraj ki khudki marzi thi yaa ****** city me biti hui raat ka asar tha ye to pata nhi likin bhale hi thakur pariwar me kuch logo ke liye kal ki raat kaisi bhi rahi ho par kuchke liye to ye din bhi normal hi tha
or unhi normal logo me se ek thi avni jo baithe baithe apne man me kuch soch rahi thi

kya hua choti kya soch rahi hai

ye awaz sun kar avni ke hotho par pyaari si muskaan aa gyi woh jaanti

thi ab uski pareshani ka hal use mil hi jayega uski badi bhen ke pass har chez ka jawab hota hi hai

avni - di kya ayisa nhi ho sakta ki hame thoda or time mil jaye shadiyo ke liye

avni ki baat sun kar divya soch me pad jati hai

divya - choti tu mujhe sach sach bata kya tu sirf or time cahti hai yaa tujhe ye shadi nhi karni
dekh agar ayisa kuch hai to tu mujhe bata sakti hai tu bhi jaanti hai me khud ye shadi nhi karna cahti

divya ki baat sunkar avni me bhi
himmat bandhti h

avni - (haklate hue) d d di w wo me ye shadi nnnn nhi karna cahti

Avni ki baat sunkar jaha divya heran thi to usse kahi zada khush bhi thi
use lag raha tha jaise ekdum se uski ye choti bhen samajhdaar ho gyi hai

divya - tu fikr mat kar choti me aaj hi is shadi ke natak ka end kar dungi

avni - (khush ho kar) kya sach di aap ayisa kar sakti ho

divya -(aankha maarte hue) try karne me kya jaata hai
or jabse me aakeli thi ab to tu hai naa mere sath or waise bhi abhi to 2.5 mahina bacha hua hai

hamare pass ye nhi to kuch or dhund hi lige

or ayise hi dono bahne sham ki planing me jut gyi is_baat se bekhabar ki koi or bhi tha jo unki baatin sun raha tha

ab ye baatin sunne wala insaan kya tufaan layega ye to waqt hi batayega

ji woh jo aapne raat ko kaha kya woh
sanjay jaanta tha ki kamini raat se usse baat karne ke liye bechain h
isi liye woh bola

sanjay - haa kamini agar hamari beti ko woh shadi nhi karni hui to fir me woh shadi nhi hone dunga fir chahe mujhe
uske liye koi bhi kemat kyu naa chukani pade

kamini - par ham aakele sab logo ke khilaaf kar bhi kya sakte hai

sanjay - (rahasyamayi musaan kee sath) pahle shayad me kuch nhi kar pata par ab ek raasta hai mere pass

isse pahle kamini kuch kahti sanjay kamre se jaa chuka tha
woh is waqt office jana cahta tha use pata tha raat me jo hua uske baad aaj woh breakfast ghar par naa hi kare to accha h

ruko

abhi sanjay apne kamre nikal kar thodi dur hi pahucha tha ki use ek gusse bhari awaz sunai padi
sanjay ne palat kar dekha to paya uski maa use gusse se ghur rahi hai

savitri devi - (gusse me) mere sath aao

or use ek khali kamre me leke jati hai

S.d - kya baat hai sanjay kya cahte ho tum

sanjay - me kuch nhi cahta maa

s - to kya tum pariwar ko todna cahte ho kyu kar rahe ho ayisa

sanjay - me pariwar ko nhi tod raha maa bas apni beti ki zindgi bacha raha hu

s - ( gusse me ) to kya ham apni poti ka bura cahte hai
hamne unki shadi sahar ke sabse bade pariwaro me pakki ki hai
or agar

maan bhi liya jaye ki tum shadi tod bhi lete ho to kya kroge apni beti ka kaha se dhundoge itne bade or amir pariwar yaa kisi garib or bhuke nange me uski shadi krane ka irada hai tumhara

sanjay - me apni beti ki shadi kahi bhi ho kisi se bhi ho par mujhe itna to pata hai agar meri beti in_pariwaro ke alawa kahi bhi gyi to khush hi rahegi

s - or tumne socha hai agar hamare pariwar se 1 bhi beti kam hui to arav ki bhi shadi ruk jayegi
tumne ek bhi baar arav ke bare me socha hai
bhul gye jab usne pahli baar rajkumari ko dekha tha tab kya haal hua tha uska

sanjay - mujhe sab yaad hai maa par ek ke pyaar ke liye sabki kubani kaha tak theek hai
agar arav ka pyaar sacha hai to rajkumari uski hoke hi rahegi par uske liye me kisi or ki zindgi bhale hi naa sahi par apni beti ki zindgi bilkul barbad nahi hone dunga
ye kah kar sanjay to chala jata hai par savitri devi ke dimag me ek flashback chalne lagta hai




( flashback)

dadi dadi dadi dadi

ary ary kya hua mere lalla ko ayise bhagta hua kyu aa raha hai

arav - dadi mene aaj ek bahut hi beautiful girl ko dekha

dadi (savitri) - hahahaha mera lalla ghar ke liye bahu dekh ke aaya hai

arav - ( blush ) dadi woh girl bahut beautiful hai

dadi - theek hai lalla pahle tu bada hoja fir ham teri shadi usi se kara dige

us _waqt arav sirf 6 saal ka tha isi wajha se savitri devi ne uski baat par zada dhiyaan nhi diya likin usdin ke baad se to jaise arav ke sar par us ladki kaa bhoot hi sawar ho gya
woh aksar hi us_ladki ko kahi naa kahi dekh leta or fir aake pure ghar ko batane lagta

likin ek din

dadi dadu mene aaj fir us girl ko dekha woh bahut beautiful lag rahi thi

dhananjay - aryy chote thakur sahab to uska naam pata bhi puch lete ham kara dete usse apki shadi

arav - dadu aaj mene use papa ko bhi dekhaya papa batao naa

ranveer - beta aap andar jao me sabko bata dunga or bade logo wali meeting bhi karni hai fir thodi der me papa or mamma aate hai

arav - ok papa

kajal - ( haste hue ) kya baat h ji aakele aakele bahu ko dekh bhi aaye or mujhe bataya tak nhi

sanjay - par bhaiya aap

to raja sahab ki anniversary me gye the naa aapko woh ladki kaha mil gyi kya woh bhi kisi bade pariwar se hai

ranveer - ( pareshan hote hue ) isi baat ki to dikkat h kash ko woh kisi pariwar se hoti to ham kuch bhi karke mana lete par woh rajkumari hai or arav ki zidd ko to aap log jaante hi ho
ab to ham bas ek hi prathana kar sakte hai ki waqt ke sath sath arav ke sar se ye rajkumari kaa bhoot utar jaye

ranveer ki baat sun kar sabki hawaiya udd gyi thi bhale hi woh sahar ke sabse tagatwar pariwaro me se 1 the par woh raja ki barabari nhi kar sakte the or ye baat woh sab acche se jaante the

savtri - rajkumari hai to kya hua uski shadi bhi to kisi naa kisi se hogi hi or tum sab dekhna mera lalla sabse accha hai

dhananjay - apna muh band rakho savitri

s - par

d - mene kaha naa muh band matlab band

dhananjay thakur ne thakurain ka muh to band kra diya par unke man ko shant nahi kar paye
waise to thakur pariwar me sabhi arav ko pyaar karte the par savitri devi kaa pyaar un_sabse bahut zada tha
ye kahna bhi galat nahi hoga ki savitri devi apne pote ke pyaar me pagal thi

or jaisa ki pichle kuch salo me savitri devi ko adat pad gyi thi ki jab bhi unke man ka kuch naa hota to unhe bas ek hi admi yaad aate or woh the guruji...

haa to jaisa ki aapne bataya savitri devi hame bhi waisa hi lagta hai rajkumari ke liye arav se bahtar koi nhi likin ye itna asan bhi nahi hone wala

savitri devi - guruji aap to maha gyani h sharv shaktiman hai aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nhi hai

guruji - (muskurate hue) tum hamari param bhakt ho savitri devi or hame

sabse zada preya bhi ho parantu yaha hamare karne se kuch nhi hoga yaha to sab kuch arav ko karna hoga

s.d - kya karna hoga guruji

guruji - **************

s - theek hai guruji mera lalla ye kaam krega or aaphi to kahte ho mera lalla khas hai

guruji - haa ham jaante h savitri devi
parantu ek baat ka sadev dhiyaan rakhna tumhare pote ki iss jiwan yatra me tumhe hi uski sahayata karni hai tumhe uski sankatmochan banna hai

ab ye to nhi pata guruji ne ye baat kyu kahi thi par savitri devi par uska asar ayisa hua ki woh sach me arav ki dhal ban gyi

agle din

arav apne television par baitha video game khel raha tha

s. - lalla idhao aao hame baat karni hai

a - dadi aap ruko me bas mario khel ke aata hu

s - theek hai lalla me to tumhari us girl ke bare me baat karne aayi thi

pata nhi us ladki ka ayisa konsa asar tha arav par jo woh uske bare me sunte hi sab kuch chhod deta tha

arav - kya hua dadi aapko bhi woh mili kya

dadi - lalla tumhe pata hai woh ladki kon hai

arav - nhi dadi

dadi - lalla woh ladki rajkumari hai or unka naam hai dipti

arav - kya dadi woh beautiful girl real ki princess hai or kya woh meri friend banegi

dadi - haa woh sach ki princess hai par woh aapki friend nhi ban sakti kyuki aap uske layak nhi ho

arav - ( canfuse ) dadi fir mujhe uska friend banne ke liye kya karna hoga

dadi - beta tumhe uske layak banna hoga sabse tagatwar sabse accha tumhe ayisa banna hoga jiske aage sab sar jhukaye
tumhe ayisa banna hoga jise dekh kar raja khud tumhara hath mage rajkumari ke liye

arav - me ayisa banuga dadi

dadi - par ayisa banna asan nhi h tumhe bahut mahnat karni hogi shayad sabse zada mahnat kya tum kar paoge

a - ji dadi me kruga

or bas fir kya tha us_din ke baad se arav puri tarha badal gya use karate shok pahle se tha us_din ke baad se arav har chez seekhne laga jo bhi woh seekh sakta tha ladai me ho ya kahi or se use jo bhi milta woh seekhta use sabse bahtar jo banna tha

Flashback end

itna sab sochte hue savitri devi thoda emotional ho gyi thi akhir kitni mahnat ki thi unke lalla ne is_din ke liye or jab ye din itna kareeb tha to uske hi ghar me bagawat uthne lagi thi
nhi woh ye nhi hone degi apne lalla ka dil nhi tutne degi

or itna sab sochte hue bhi unke kano me guruji kahe wohi itne salo purane shabd gunj rahe the
(Tumhe uska sankatmochan banna hoga)
ab tak sab log daining table par aa gye the 2 logo ko chhod kar jinme se ek sanjay tha or dusra (aage pata chalega)

arav - papa mujhe aap sabko kuch batana hai

ranveer - haa beta bolo

arav - papa dadu pichle kuch dino se jo ghar ka mahol h usse me thoda disturbed feel kar raha hu isi_wajha se mene faisla kiya hai ki me kuch dino ke liye ghumne chala jau


Dhananjay - woh sab to theek hai likin tum jaana kaha cahte ho

arav - dadu me ...... Jaa raha hu

Wahi kisi dusri jagha


Aaaahhhh Maaf kardo didi ab ayisi galti nhi hogi bachao koi to bachao

Kutta

kamina samjhe ke se khudne
isne ke lage se me hamesha ke liye gyi thi ke jo loutke kona aau
je ek baar me pahuch jau fir dekh baandar nach na nachaya naa to mara naam bhi vani chaudhary koni

or yo patar patar ne bhi dekhu jake

delhi airport ke bahar 2 ladke bachao bachao chilla rahe the pit pit kar unka bura haal ho gya tha

par hamari pahalwan to jaise aaj kisi or hi nashe me thi
woh kahi ka gussa kahi utaar rahi thi

hua asal me ye ki vani apne match ke liye banglore gyi thi usne petar ko zimmedari di thi ki woh abhay ke bare me use din me 3 baar report deha par
ab petar to petar hai usne abhay ko bhi bahut phone kiye par usne bhi nahi uthaya yahi karan tha ki maidam ka gussa aaj 7ve asman par tha

or uska shikaar hue ye manchale ladke jinhone vani ke airport se bahar aate hi us par commant maar diya or bas fir kya tha
laat par laat ghuse par ghuse aakhir kaar airport police ko aana pada jiska anjaam ye hua ki vani ko band kar diya kuch or ghanto ke liye

vani - ek baar aan de manne fir dekh ke kru me thare sath

hiccccchhh hiccccc hicccc

Me - ye sala subha subha kon bhagwan se pahle mujhe yaad kar raha hai

me aaj subha der se utha tha aaj acchi baat ye hui ki dono me se koi ladki mera dimag kharaab karne nhi aayi thi
me 10 minutes me taiyaar hoke nikla to

petar - bhai kab tak faltu logo ke mafik pada rahega bole to apne pet me chuha log Bolly boll khel rela hai chalo naa bhai kuch thus ke aate hai

petar sahi kah raha tha bahut time ho gya tha kuch khaya nhi tha isliye mene car nikali or chal diye kuch kahane hamare flat se kuch dur ek markit hai abhi ham jaa hi rahe the ki mene ek ajib chez notice ki aaj pura markit band tha rod khali thi
abhi me iske bare me kuch or sochta usse pahle hi mujhe mere sawalo ka jawab mil gya mere samne 3 cars khadi thi uncars ke samne kamse kam 10 se 12 admi khade the
or unki bich wali par par ek insaan baitha hua tha ...

more than 2.2k words hai or mere sabse lambe updates me se ek


to aapko kya lagta hai kya hone wala aage vani kya kregi abhay ka or woh admi kon hai jo abhay ke samne khada hai
Bahot behtareen shaandar update
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Vaani Banglore se wapas aate 2 chichoro ki wat laga Dali or Abhay per itna gussa kyon h woh bhala
Avni n bhi Shaadi na kerne ka apni Didi ko bol dia jise kisi n sunl lia kon h bhala
Divya ko bhi ek saathi mil gaya dekhte h dono behne kia kerti h
Behtareen shaandar update bhai
 
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Next day - roz ke mukable aaj mousam thoda zada hi garam tha ye suraj ki khudki marzi thi yaa ****** city me biti hui raat ka asar tha ye to pata nhi likin bhale hi thakur pariwar me kuch logo ke liye kal ki raat kaisi bhi rahi ho par kuchke liye to ye din bhi normal hi tha
or unhi normal logo me se ek thi avni jo baithe baithe apne man me kuch soch rahi thi

kya hua choti kya soch rahi hai

ye awaz sun kar avni ke hotho par pyaari si muskaan aa gyi woh jaanti

thi ab uski pareshani ka hal use mil hi jayega uski badi bhen ke pass har chez ka jawab hota hi hai

avni - di kya ayisa nhi ho sakta ki hame thoda or time mil jaye shadiyo ke liye

avni ki baat sun kar divya soch me pad jati hai

divya - choti tu mujhe sach sach bata kya tu sirf or time cahti hai yaa tujhe ye shadi nhi karni
dekh agar ayisa kuch hai to tu mujhe bata sakti hai tu bhi jaanti hai me khud ye shadi nhi karna cahti

divya ki baat sunkar avni me bhi
himmat bandhti h

avni - (haklate hue) d d di w wo me ye shadi nnnn nhi karna cahti

Avni ki baat sunkar jaha divya heran thi to usse kahi zada khush bhi thi
use lag raha tha jaise ekdum se uski ye choti bhen samajhdaar ho gyi hai

divya - tu fikr mat kar choti me aaj hi is shadi ke natak ka end kar dungi

avni - (khush ho kar) kya sach di aap ayisa kar sakti ho

divya -(aankha maarte hue) try karne me kya jaata hai
or jabse me aakeli thi ab to tu hai naa mere sath or waise bhi abhi to 2.5 mahina bacha hua hai

hamare pass ye nhi to kuch or dhund hi lige

or ayise hi dono bahne sham ki planing me jut gyi is_baat se bekhabar ki koi or bhi tha jo unki baatin sun raha tha

ab ye baatin sunne wala insaan kya tufaan layega ye to waqt hi batayega

ji woh jo aapne raat ko kaha kya woh
sanjay jaanta tha ki kamini raat se usse baat karne ke liye bechain h
isi liye woh bola

sanjay - haa kamini agar hamari beti ko woh shadi nhi karni hui to fir me woh shadi nhi hone dunga fir chahe mujhe
uske liye koi bhi kemat kyu naa chukani pade

kamini - par ham aakele sab logo ke khilaaf kar bhi kya sakte hai

sanjay - (rahasyamayi musaan kee sath) pahle shayad me kuch nhi kar pata par ab ek raasta hai mere pass

isse pahle kamini kuch kahti sanjay kamre se jaa chuka tha
woh is waqt office jana cahta tha use pata tha raat me jo hua uske baad aaj woh breakfast ghar par naa hi kare to accha h

ruko

abhi sanjay apne kamre nikal kar thodi dur hi pahucha tha ki use ek gusse bhari awaz sunai padi
sanjay ne palat kar dekha to paya uski maa use gusse se ghur rahi hai

savitri devi - (gusse me) mere sath aao

or use ek khali kamre me leke jati hai

S.d - kya baat hai sanjay kya cahte ho tum

sanjay - me kuch nhi cahta maa

s - to kya tum pariwar ko todna cahte ho kyu kar rahe ho ayisa

sanjay - me pariwar ko nhi tod raha maa bas apni beti ki zindgi bacha raha hu

s - ( gusse me ) to kya ham apni poti ka bura cahte hai
hamne unki shadi sahar ke sabse bade pariwaro me pakki ki hai
or agar

maan bhi liya jaye ki tum shadi tod bhi lete ho to kya kroge apni beti ka kaha se dhundoge itne bade or amir pariwar yaa kisi garib or bhuke nange me uski shadi krane ka irada hai tumhara

sanjay - me apni beti ki shadi kahi bhi ho kisi se bhi ho par mujhe itna to pata hai agar meri beti in_pariwaro ke alawa kahi bhi gyi to khush hi rahegi

s - or tumne socha hai agar hamare pariwar se 1 bhi beti kam hui to arav ki bhi shadi ruk jayegi
tumne ek bhi baar arav ke bare me socha hai
bhul gye jab usne pahli baar rajkumari ko dekha tha tab kya haal hua tha uska

sanjay - mujhe sab yaad hai maa par ek ke pyaar ke liye sabki kubani kaha tak theek hai
agar arav ka pyaar sacha hai to rajkumari uski hoke hi rahegi par uske liye me kisi or ki zindgi bhale hi naa sahi par apni beti ki zindgi bilkul barbad nahi hone dunga
ye kah kar sanjay to chala jata hai par savitri devi ke dimag me ek flashback chalne lagta hai




( flashback)

dadi dadi dadi dadi

ary ary kya hua mere lalla ko ayise bhagta hua kyu aa raha hai

arav - dadi mene aaj ek bahut hi beautiful girl ko dekha

dadi (savitri) - hahahaha mera lalla ghar ke liye bahu dekh ke aaya hai

arav - ( blush ) dadi woh girl bahut beautiful hai

dadi - theek hai lalla pahle tu bada hoja fir ham teri shadi usi se kara dige

us _waqt arav sirf 6 saal ka tha isi wajha se savitri devi ne uski baat par zada dhiyaan nhi diya likin usdin ke baad se to jaise arav ke sar par us ladki kaa bhoot hi sawar ho gya
woh aksar hi us_ladki ko kahi naa kahi dekh leta or fir aake pure ghar ko batane lagta

likin ek din

dadi dadu mene aaj fir us girl ko dekha woh bahut beautiful lag rahi thi

dhananjay - aryy chote thakur sahab to uska naam pata bhi puch lete ham kara dete usse apki shadi

arav - dadu aaj mene use papa ko bhi dekhaya papa batao naa

ranveer - beta aap andar jao me sabko bata dunga or bade logo wali meeting bhi karni hai fir thodi der me papa or mamma aate hai

arav - ok papa

kajal - ( haste hue ) kya baat h ji aakele aakele bahu ko dekh bhi aaye or mujhe bataya tak nhi

sanjay - par bhaiya aap

to raja sahab ki anniversary me gye the naa aapko woh ladki kaha mil gyi kya woh bhi kisi bade pariwar se hai

ranveer - ( pareshan hote hue ) isi baat ki to dikkat h kash ko woh kisi pariwar se hoti to ham kuch bhi karke mana lete par woh rajkumari hai or arav ki zidd ko to aap log jaante hi ho
ab to ham bas ek hi prathana kar sakte hai ki waqt ke sath sath arav ke sar se ye rajkumari kaa bhoot utar jaye

ranveer ki baat sun kar sabki hawaiya udd gyi thi bhale hi woh sahar ke sabse tagatwar pariwaro me se 1 the par woh raja ki barabari nhi kar sakte the or ye baat woh sab acche se jaante the

savtri - rajkumari hai to kya hua uski shadi bhi to kisi naa kisi se hogi hi or tum sab dekhna mera lalla sabse accha hai

dhananjay - apna muh band rakho savitri

s - par

d - mene kaha naa muh band matlab band

dhananjay thakur ne thakurain ka muh to band kra diya par unke man ko shant nahi kar paye
waise to thakur pariwar me sabhi arav ko pyaar karte the par savitri devi kaa pyaar un_sabse bahut zada tha
ye kahna bhi galat nahi hoga ki savitri devi apne pote ke pyaar me pagal thi

or jaisa ki pichle kuch salo me savitri devi ko adat pad gyi thi ki jab bhi unke man ka kuch naa hota to unhe bas ek hi admi yaad aate or woh the guruji...

haa to jaisa ki aapne bataya savitri devi hame bhi waisa hi lagta hai rajkumari ke liye arav se bahtar koi nhi likin ye itna asan bhi nahi hone wala

savitri devi - guruji aap to maha gyani h sharv shaktiman hai aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nhi hai

guruji - (muskurate hue) tum hamari param bhakt ho savitri devi or hame

sabse zada preya bhi ho parantu yaha hamare karne se kuch nhi hoga yaha to sab kuch arav ko karna hoga

s.d - kya karna hoga guruji

guruji - **************

s - theek hai guruji mera lalla ye kaam krega or aaphi to kahte ho mera lalla khas hai

guruji - haa ham jaante h savitri devi
parantu ek baat ka sadev dhiyaan rakhna tumhare pote ki iss jiwan yatra me tumhe hi uski sahayata karni hai tumhe uski sankatmochan banna hai

ab ye to nhi pata guruji ne ye baat kyu kahi thi par savitri devi par uska asar ayisa hua ki woh sach me arav ki dhal ban gyi

agle din

arav apne television par baitha video game khel raha tha

s. - lalla idhao aao hame baat karni hai

a - dadi aap ruko me bas mario khel ke aata hu

s - theek hai lalla me to tumhari us girl ke bare me baat karne aayi thi

pata nhi us ladki ka ayisa konsa asar tha arav par jo woh uske bare me sunte hi sab kuch chhod deta tha

arav - kya hua dadi aapko bhi woh mili kya

dadi - lalla tumhe pata hai woh ladki kon hai

arav - nhi dadi

dadi - lalla woh ladki rajkumari hai or unka naam hai dipti

arav - kya dadi woh beautiful girl real ki princess hai or kya woh meri friend banegi

dadi - haa woh sach ki princess hai par woh aapki friend nhi ban sakti kyuki aap uske layak nhi ho

arav - ( canfuse ) dadi fir mujhe uska friend banne ke liye kya karna hoga

dadi - beta tumhe uske layak banna hoga sabse tagatwar sabse accha tumhe ayisa banna hoga jiske aage sab sar jhukaye
tumhe ayisa banna hoga jise dekh kar raja khud tumhara hath mage rajkumari ke liye

arav - me ayisa banuga dadi

dadi - par ayisa banna asan nhi h tumhe bahut mahnat karni hogi shayad sabse zada mahnat kya tum kar paoge

a - ji dadi me kruga

or bas fir kya tha us_din ke baad se arav puri tarha badal gya use karate shok pahle se tha us_din ke baad se arav har chez seekhne laga jo bhi woh seekh sakta tha ladai me ho ya kahi or se use jo bhi milta woh seekhta use sabse bahtar jo banna tha

Flashback end

itna sab sochte hue savitri devi thoda emotional ho gyi thi akhir kitni mahnat ki thi unke lalla ne is_din ke liye or jab ye din itna kareeb tha to uske hi ghar me bagawat uthne lagi thi
nhi woh ye nhi hone degi apne lalla ka dil nhi tutne degi

or itna sab sochte hue bhi unke kano me guruji kahe wohi itne salo purane shabd gunj rahe the
(Tumhe uska sankatmochan banna hoga)
ab tak sab log daining table par aa gye the 2 logo ko chhod kar jinme se ek sanjay tha or dusra (aage pata chalega)

arav - papa mujhe aap sabko kuch batana hai

ranveer - haa beta bolo

arav - papa dadu pichle kuch dino se jo ghar ka mahol h usse me thoda disturbed feel kar raha hu isi_wajha se mene faisla kiya hai ki me kuch dino ke liye ghumne chala jau


Dhananjay - woh sab to theek hai likin tum jaana kaha cahte ho

arav - dadu me ...... Jaa raha hu

Wahi kisi dusri jagha


Aaaahhhh Maaf kardo didi ab ayisi galti nhi hogi bachao koi to bachao

Kutta

kamina samjhe ke se khudne
isne ke lage se me hamesha ke liye gyi thi ke jo loutke kona aau
je ek baar me pahuch jau fir dekh baandar nach na nachaya naa to mara naam bhi vani chaudhary koni

or yo patar patar ne bhi dekhu jake

delhi airport ke bahar 2 ladke bachao bachao chilla rahe the pit pit kar unka bura haal ho gya tha

par hamari pahalwan to jaise aaj kisi or hi nashe me thi
woh kahi ka gussa kahi utaar rahi thi

hua asal me ye ki vani apne match ke liye banglore gyi thi usne petar ko zimmedari di thi ki woh abhay ke bare me use din me 3 baar report deha par
ab petar to petar hai usne abhay ko bhi bahut phone kiye par usne bhi nahi uthaya yahi karan tha ki maidam ka gussa aaj 7ve asman par tha

or uska shikaar hue ye manchale ladke jinhone vani ke airport se bahar aate hi us par commant maar diya or bas fir kya tha
laat par laat ghuse par ghuse aakhir kaar airport police ko aana pada jiska anjaam ye hua ki vani ko band kar diya kuch or ghanto ke liye

vani - ek baar aan de manne fir dekh ke kru me thare sath

hiccccchhh hiccccc hicccc

Me - ye sala subha subha kon bhagwan se pahle mujhe yaad kar raha hai

me aaj subha der se utha tha aaj acchi baat ye hui ki dono me se koi ladki mera dimag kharaab karne nhi aayi thi
me 10 minutes me taiyaar hoke nikla to

petar - bhai kab tak faltu logo ke mafik pada rahega bole to apne pet me chuha log Bolly boll khel rela hai chalo naa bhai kuch thus ke aate hai

petar sahi kah raha tha bahut time ho gya tha kuch khaya nhi tha isliye mene car nikali or chal diye kuch kahane hamare flat se kuch dur ek markit hai abhi ham jaa hi rahe the ki mene ek ajib chez notice ki aaj pura markit band tha rod khali thi
abhi me iske bare me kuch or sochta usse pahle hi mujhe mere sawalo ka jawab mil gya mere samne 3 cars khadi thi uncars ke samne kamse kam 10 se 12 admi khade the
or unki bich wali par par ek insaan baitha hua tha ...

more than 2.2k words hai or mere sabse lambe updates me se ek


to aapko kya lagta hai kya hone wala aage vani kya kregi abhay ka or woh admi kon hai jo abhay ke samne khada hai
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Next day - roz ke mukable aaj mousam thoda zada hi garam tha ye suraj ki khudki marzi thi yaa ****** city me biti hui raat ka asar tha ye to pata nhi likin bhale hi thakur pariwar me kuch logo ke liye kal ki raat kaisi bhi rahi ho par kuchke liye to ye din bhi normal hi tha
or unhi normal logo me se ek thi avni jo baithe baithe apne man me kuch soch rahi thi

kya hua choti kya soch rahi hai

ye awaz sun kar avni ke hotho par pyaari si muskaan aa gyi woh jaanti

thi ab uski pareshani ka hal use mil hi jayega uski badi bhen ke pass har chez ka jawab hota hi hai

avni - di kya ayisa nhi ho sakta ki hame thoda or time mil jaye shadiyo ke liye

avni ki baat sun kar divya soch me pad jati hai

divya - choti tu mujhe sach sach bata kya tu sirf or time cahti hai yaa tujhe ye shadi nhi karni
dekh agar ayisa kuch hai to tu mujhe bata sakti hai tu bhi jaanti hai me khud ye shadi nhi karna cahti

divya ki baat sunkar avni me bhi
himmat bandhti h

avni - (haklate hue) d d di w wo me ye shadi nnnn nhi karna cahti

Avni ki baat sunkar jaha divya heran thi to usse kahi zada khush bhi thi
use lag raha tha jaise ekdum se uski ye choti bhen samajhdaar ho gyi hai

divya - tu fikr mat kar choti me aaj hi is shadi ke natak ka end kar dungi

avni - (khush ho kar) kya sach di aap ayisa kar sakti ho

divya -(aankha maarte hue) try karne me kya jaata hai
or jabse me aakeli thi ab to tu hai naa mere sath or waise bhi abhi to 2.5 mahina bacha hua hai

hamare pass ye nhi to kuch or dhund hi lige

or ayise hi dono bahne sham ki planing me jut gyi is_baat se bekhabar ki koi or bhi tha jo unki baatin sun raha tha

ab ye baatin sunne wala insaan kya tufaan layega ye to waqt hi batayega

ji woh jo aapne raat ko kaha kya woh
sanjay jaanta tha ki kamini raat se usse baat karne ke liye bechain h
isi liye woh bola

sanjay - haa kamini agar hamari beti ko woh shadi nhi karni hui to fir me woh shadi nhi hone dunga fir chahe mujhe
uske liye koi bhi kemat kyu naa chukani pade

kamini - par ham aakele sab logo ke khilaaf kar bhi kya sakte hai

sanjay - (rahasyamayi musaan kee sath) pahle shayad me kuch nhi kar pata par ab ek raasta hai mere pass

isse pahle kamini kuch kahti sanjay kamre se jaa chuka tha
woh is waqt office jana cahta tha use pata tha raat me jo hua uske baad aaj woh breakfast ghar par naa hi kare to accha h

ruko

abhi sanjay apne kamre nikal kar thodi dur hi pahucha tha ki use ek gusse bhari awaz sunai padi
sanjay ne palat kar dekha to paya uski maa use gusse se ghur rahi hai

savitri devi - (gusse me) mere sath aao

or use ek khali kamre me leke jati hai

S.d - kya baat hai sanjay kya cahte ho tum

sanjay - me kuch nhi cahta maa

s - to kya tum pariwar ko todna cahte ho kyu kar rahe ho ayisa

sanjay - me pariwar ko nhi tod raha maa bas apni beti ki zindgi bacha raha hu

s - ( gusse me ) to kya ham apni poti ka bura cahte hai
hamne unki shadi sahar ke sabse bade pariwaro me pakki ki hai
or agar

maan bhi liya jaye ki tum shadi tod bhi lete ho to kya kroge apni beti ka kaha se dhundoge itne bade or amir pariwar yaa kisi garib or bhuke nange me uski shadi krane ka irada hai tumhara

sanjay - me apni beti ki shadi kahi bhi ho kisi se bhi ho par mujhe itna to pata hai agar meri beti in_pariwaro ke alawa kahi bhi gyi to khush hi rahegi

s - or tumne socha hai agar hamare pariwar se 1 bhi beti kam hui to arav ki bhi shadi ruk jayegi
tumne ek bhi baar arav ke bare me socha hai
bhul gye jab usne pahli baar rajkumari ko dekha tha tab kya haal hua tha uska

sanjay - mujhe sab yaad hai maa par ek ke pyaar ke liye sabki kubani kaha tak theek hai
agar arav ka pyaar sacha hai to rajkumari uski hoke hi rahegi par uske liye me kisi or ki zindgi bhale hi naa sahi par apni beti ki zindgi bilkul barbad nahi hone dunga
ye kah kar sanjay to chala jata hai par savitri devi ke dimag me ek flashback chalne lagta hai




( flashback)

dadi dadi dadi dadi

ary ary kya hua mere lalla ko ayise bhagta hua kyu aa raha hai

arav - dadi mene aaj ek bahut hi beautiful girl ko dekha

dadi (savitri) - hahahaha mera lalla ghar ke liye bahu dekh ke aaya hai

arav - ( blush ) dadi woh girl bahut beautiful hai

dadi - theek hai lalla pahle tu bada hoja fir ham teri shadi usi se kara dige

us _waqt arav sirf 6 saal ka tha isi wajha se savitri devi ne uski baat par zada dhiyaan nhi diya likin usdin ke baad se to jaise arav ke sar par us ladki kaa bhoot hi sawar ho gya
woh aksar hi us_ladki ko kahi naa kahi dekh leta or fir aake pure ghar ko batane lagta

likin ek din

dadi dadu mene aaj fir us girl ko dekha woh bahut beautiful lag rahi thi

dhananjay - aryy chote thakur sahab to uska naam pata bhi puch lete ham kara dete usse apki shadi

arav - dadu aaj mene use papa ko bhi dekhaya papa batao naa

ranveer - beta aap andar jao me sabko bata dunga or bade logo wali meeting bhi karni hai fir thodi der me papa or mamma aate hai

arav - ok papa

kajal - ( haste hue ) kya baat h ji aakele aakele bahu ko dekh bhi aaye or mujhe bataya tak nhi

sanjay - par bhaiya aap

to raja sahab ki anniversary me gye the naa aapko woh ladki kaha mil gyi kya woh bhi kisi bade pariwar se hai

ranveer - ( pareshan hote hue ) isi baat ki to dikkat h kash ko woh kisi pariwar se hoti to ham kuch bhi karke mana lete par woh rajkumari hai or arav ki zidd ko to aap log jaante hi ho
ab to ham bas ek hi prathana kar sakte hai ki waqt ke sath sath arav ke sar se ye rajkumari kaa bhoot utar jaye

ranveer ki baat sun kar sabki hawaiya udd gyi thi bhale hi woh sahar ke sabse tagatwar pariwaro me se 1 the par woh raja ki barabari nhi kar sakte the or ye baat woh sab acche se jaante the

savtri - rajkumari hai to kya hua uski shadi bhi to kisi naa kisi se hogi hi or tum sab dekhna mera lalla sabse accha hai

dhananjay - apna muh band rakho savitri

s - par

d - mene kaha naa muh band matlab band

dhananjay thakur ne thakurain ka muh to band kra diya par unke man ko shant nahi kar paye
waise to thakur pariwar me sabhi arav ko pyaar karte the par savitri devi kaa pyaar un_sabse bahut zada tha
ye kahna bhi galat nahi hoga ki savitri devi apne pote ke pyaar me pagal thi

or jaisa ki pichle kuch salo me savitri devi ko adat pad gyi thi ki jab bhi unke man ka kuch naa hota to unhe bas ek hi admi yaad aate or woh the guruji...

haa to jaisa ki aapne bataya savitri devi hame bhi waisa hi lagta hai rajkumari ke liye arav se bahtar koi nhi likin ye itna asan bhi nahi hone wala

savitri devi - guruji aap to maha gyani h sharv shaktiman hai aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nhi hai

guruji - (muskurate hue) tum hamari param bhakt ho savitri devi or hame

sabse zada preya bhi ho parantu yaha hamare karne se kuch nhi hoga yaha to sab kuch arav ko karna hoga

s.d - kya karna hoga guruji

guruji - **************

s - theek hai guruji mera lalla ye kaam krega or aaphi to kahte ho mera lalla khas hai

guruji - haa ham jaante h savitri devi
parantu ek baat ka sadev dhiyaan rakhna tumhare pote ki iss jiwan yatra me tumhe hi uski sahayata karni hai tumhe uski sankatmochan banna hai

ab ye to nhi pata guruji ne ye baat kyu kahi thi par savitri devi par uska asar ayisa hua ki woh sach me arav ki dhal ban gyi

agle din

arav apne television par baitha video game khel raha tha

s. - lalla idhao aao hame baat karni hai

a - dadi aap ruko me bas mario khel ke aata hu

s - theek hai lalla me to tumhari us girl ke bare me baat karne aayi thi

pata nhi us ladki ka ayisa konsa asar tha arav par jo woh uske bare me sunte hi sab kuch chhod deta tha

arav - kya hua dadi aapko bhi woh mili kya

dadi - lalla tumhe pata hai woh ladki kon hai

arav - nhi dadi

dadi - lalla woh ladki rajkumari hai or unka naam hai dipti

arav - kya dadi woh beautiful girl real ki princess hai or kya woh meri friend banegi

dadi - haa woh sach ki princess hai par woh aapki friend nhi ban sakti kyuki aap uske layak nhi ho

arav - ( canfuse ) dadi fir mujhe uska friend banne ke liye kya karna hoga

dadi - beta tumhe uske layak banna hoga sabse tagatwar sabse accha tumhe ayisa banna hoga jiske aage sab sar jhukaye
tumhe ayisa banna hoga jise dekh kar raja khud tumhara hath mage rajkumari ke liye

arav - me ayisa banuga dadi

dadi - par ayisa banna asan nhi h tumhe bahut mahnat karni hogi shayad sabse zada mahnat kya tum kar paoge

a - ji dadi me kruga

or bas fir kya tha us_din ke baad se arav puri tarha badal gya use karate shok pahle se tha us_din ke baad se arav har chez seekhne laga jo bhi woh seekh sakta tha ladai me ho ya kahi or se use jo bhi milta woh seekhta use sabse bahtar jo banna tha

Flashback end

itna sab sochte hue savitri devi thoda emotional ho gyi thi akhir kitni mahnat ki thi unke lalla ne is_din ke liye or jab ye din itna kareeb tha to uske hi ghar me bagawat uthne lagi thi
nhi woh ye nhi hone degi apne lalla ka dil nhi tutne degi

or itna sab sochte hue bhi unke kano me guruji kahe wohi itne salo purane shabd gunj rahe the
(Tumhe uska sankatmochan banna hoga)
ab tak sab log daining table par aa gye the 2 logo ko chhod kar jinme se ek sanjay tha or dusra (aage pata chalega)

arav - papa mujhe aap sabko kuch batana hai

ranveer - haa beta bolo

arav - papa dadu pichle kuch dino se jo ghar ka mahol h usse me thoda disturbed feel kar raha hu isi_wajha se mene faisla kiya hai ki me kuch dino ke liye ghumne chala jau


Dhananjay - woh sab to theek hai likin tum jaana kaha cahte ho

arav - dadu me ...... Jaa raha hu

Wahi kisi dusri jagha


Aaaahhhh Maaf kardo didi ab ayisi galti nhi hogi bachao koi to bachao

Kutta

kamina samjhe ke se khudne
isne ke lage se me hamesha ke liye gyi thi ke jo loutke kona aau
je ek baar me pahuch jau fir dekh baandar nach na nachaya naa to mara naam bhi vani chaudhary koni

or yo patar patar ne bhi dekhu jake

delhi airport ke bahar 2 ladke bachao bachao chilla rahe the pit pit kar unka bura haal ho gya tha

par hamari pahalwan to jaise aaj kisi or hi nashe me thi
woh kahi ka gussa kahi utaar rahi thi

hua asal me ye ki vani apne match ke liye banglore gyi thi usne petar ko zimmedari di thi ki woh abhay ke bare me use din me 3 baar report deha par
ab petar to petar hai usne abhay ko bhi bahut phone kiye par usne bhi nahi uthaya yahi karan tha ki maidam ka gussa aaj 7ve asman par tha

or uska shikaar hue ye manchale ladke jinhone vani ke airport se bahar aate hi us par commant maar diya or bas fir kya tha
laat par laat ghuse par ghuse aakhir kaar airport police ko aana pada jiska anjaam ye hua ki vani ko band kar diya kuch or ghanto ke liye

vani - ek baar aan de manne fir dekh ke kru me thare sath

hiccccchhh hiccccc hicccc

Me - ye sala subha subha kon bhagwan se pahle mujhe yaad kar raha hai

me aaj subha der se utha tha aaj acchi baat ye hui ki dono me se koi ladki mera dimag kharaab karne nhi aayi thi
me 10 minutes me taiyaar hoke nikla to

petar - bhai kab tak faltu logo ke mafik pada rahega bole to apne pet me chuha log Bolly boll khel rela hai chalo naa bhai kuch thus ke aate hai

petar sahi kah raha tha bahut time ho gya tha kuch khaya nhi tha isliye mene car nikali or chal diye kuch kahane hamare flat se kuch dur ek markit hai abhi ham jaa hi rahe the ki mene ek ajib chez notice ki aaj pura markit band tha rod khali thi
abhi me iske bare me kuch or sochta usse pahle hi mujhe mere sawalo ka jawab mil gya mere samne 3 cars khadi thi uncars ke samne kamse kam 10 se 12 admi khade the
or unki bich wali par par ek insaan baitha hua tha ...

more than 2.2k words hai or mere sabse lambe updates me se ek


to aapko kya lagta hai kya hone wala aage vani kya kregi abhay ka or woh admi kon hai jo abhay ke samne khada hai
Superb update bhai.... wait for next update
 

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Bhai raat 10 bje se likhna start kar duga bada update likhna hai isliye 17 18 tak aayega
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Nahi sir ji 17 18 ko hi update Dena lekin mega update dena
 

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Next day - roz ke mukable aaj mousam thoda zada hi garam tha ye suraj ki khudki marzi thi yaa ****** city me biti hui raat ka asar tha ye to pata nhi likin bhale hi thakur pariwar me kuch logo ke liye kal ki raat kaisi bhi rahi ho par kuchke liye to ye din bhi normal hi tha
or unhi normal logo me se ek thi avni jo baithe baithe apne man me kuch soch rahi thi

kya hua choti kya soch rahi hai

ye awaz sun kar avni ke hotho par pyaari si muskaan aa gyi woh jaanti

thi ab uski pareshani ka hal use mil hi jayega uski badi bhen ke pass har chez ka jawab hota hi hai

avni - di kya ayisa nhi ho sakta ki hame thoda or time mil jaye shadiyo ke liye

avni ki baat sun kar divya soch me pad jati hai

divya - choti tu mujhe sach sach bata kya tu sirf or time cahti hai yaa tujhe ye shadi nhi karni
dekh agar ayisa kuch hai to tu mujhe bata sakti hai tu bhi jaanti hai me khud ye shadi nhi karna cahti

divya ki baat sunkar avni me bhi
himmat bandhti h

avni - (haklate hue) d d di w wo me ye shadi nnnn nhi karna cahti

Avni ki baat sunkar jaha divya heran thi to usse kahi zada khush bhi thi
use lag raha tha jaise ekdum se uski ye choti bhen samajhdaar ho gyi hai

divya - tu fikr mat kar choti me aaj hi is shadi ke natak ka end kar dungi

avni - (khush ho kar) kya sach di aap ayisa kar sakti ho

divya -(aankha maarte hue) try karne me kya jaata hai
or jabse me aakeli thi ab to tu hai naa mere sath or waise bhi abhi to 2.5 mahina bacha hua hai

hamare pass ye nhi to kuch or dhund hi lige

or ayise hi dono bahne sham ki planing me jut gyi is_baat se bekhabar ki koi or bhi tha jo unki baatin sun raha tha

ab ye baatin sunne wala insaan kya tufaan layega ye to waqt hi batayega

ji woh jo aapne raat ko kaha kya woh
sanjay jaanta tha ki kamini raat se usse baat karne ke liye bechain h
isi liye woh bola

sanjay - haa kamini agar hamari beti ko woh shadi nhi karni hui to fir me woh shadi nhi hone dunga fir chahe mujhe
uske liye koi bhi kemat kyu naa chukani pade

kamini - par ham aakele sab logo ke khilaaf kar bhi kya sakte hai

sanjay - (rahasyamayi musaan kee sath) pahle shayad me kuch nhi kar pata par ab ek raasta hai mere pass

isse pahle kamini kuch kahti sanjay kamre se jaa chuka tha
woh is waqt office jana cahta tha use pata tha raat me jo hua uske baad aaj woh breakfast ghar par naa hi kare to accha h

ruko

abhi sanjay apne kamre nikal kar thodi dur hi pahucha tha ki use ek gusse bhari awaz sunai padi
sanjay ne palat kar dekha to paya uski maa use gusse se ghur rahi hai

savitri devi - (gusse me) mere sath aao

or use ek khali kamre me leke jati hai

S.d - kya baat hai sanjay kya cahte ho tum

sanjay - me kuch nhi cahta maa

s - to kya tum pariwar ko todna cahte ho kyu kar rahe ho ayisa

sanjay - me pariwar ko nhi tod raha maa bas apni beti ki zindgi bacha raha hu

s - ( gusse me ) to kya ham apni poti ka bura cahte hai
hamne unki shadi sahar ke sabse bade pariwaro me pakki ki hai
or agar

maan bhi liya jaye ki tum shadi tod bhi lete ho to kya kroge apni beti ka kaha se dhundoge itne bade or amir pariwar yaa kisi garib or bhuke nange me uski shadi krane ka irada hai tumhara

sanjay - me apni beti ki shadi kahi bhi ho kisi se bhi ho par mujhe itna to pata hai agar meri beti in_pariwaro ke alawa kahi bhi gyi to khush hi rahegi

s - or tumne socha hai agar hamare pariwar se 1 bhi beti kam hui to arav ki bhi shadi ruk jayegi
tumne ek bhi baar arav ke bare me socha hai
bhul gye jab usne pahli baar rajkumari ko dekha tha tab kya haal hua tha uska

sanjay - mujhe sab yaad hai maa par ek ke pyaar ke liye sabki kubani kaha tak theek hai
agar arav ka pyaar sacha hai to rajkumari uski hoke hi rahegi par uske liye me kisi or ki zindgi bhale hi naa sahi par apni beti ki zindgi bilkul barbad nahi hone dunga
ye kah kar sanjay to chala jata hai par savitri devi ke dimag me ek flashback chalne lagta hai




( flashback)

dadi dadi dadi dadi

ary ary kya hua mere lalla ko ayise bhagta hua kyu aa raha hai

arav - dadi mene aaj ek bahut hi beautiful girl ko dekha

dadi (savitri) - hahahaha mera lalla ghar ke liye bahu dekh ke aaya hai

arav - ( blush ) dadi woh girl bahut beautiful hai

dadi - theek hai lalla pahle tu bada hoja fir ham teri shadi usi se kara dige

us _waqt arav sirf 6 saal ka tha isi wajha se savitri devi ne uski baat par zada dhiyaan nhi diya likin usdin ke baad se to jaise arav ke sar par us ladki kaa bhoot hi sawar ho gya
woh aksar hi us_ladki ko kahi naa kahi dekh leta or fir aake pure ghar ko batane lagta

likin ek din

dadi dadu mene aaj fir us girl ko dekha woh bahut beautiful lag rahi thi

dhananjay - aryy chote thakur sahab to uska naam pata bhi puch lete ham kara dete usse apki shadi

arav - dadu aaj mene use papa ko bhi dekhaya papa batao naa

ranveer - beta aap andar jao me sabko bata dunga or bade logo wali meeting bhi karni hai fir thodi der me papa or mamma aate hai

arav - ok papa

kajal - ( haste hue ) kya baat h ji aakele aakele bahu ko dekh bhi aaye or mujhe bataya tak nhi

sanjay - par bhaiya aap

to raja sahab ki anniversary me gye the naa aapko woh ladki kaha mil gyi kya woh bhi kisi bade pariwar se hai

ranveer - ( pareshan hote hue ) isi baat ki to dikkat h kash ko woh kisi pariwar se hoti to ham kuch bhi karke mana lete par woh rajkumari hai or arav ki zidd ko to aap log jaante hi ho
ab to ham bas ek hi prathana kar sakte hai ki waqt ke sath sath arav ke sar se ye rajkumari kaa bhoot utar jaye

ranveer ki baat sun kar sabki hawaiya udd gyi thi bhale hi woh sahar ke sabse tagatwar pariwaro me se 1 the par woh raja ki barabari nhi kar sakte the or ye baat woh sab acche se jaante the

savtri - rajkumari hai to kya hua uski shadi bhi to kisi naa kisi se hogi hi or tum sab dekhna mera lalla sabse accha hai

dhananjay - apna muh band rakho savitri

s - par

d - mene kaha naa muh band matlab band

dhananjay thakur ne thakurain ka muh to band kra diya par unke man ko shant nahi kar paye
waise to thakur pariwar me sabhi arav ko pyaar karte the par savitri devi kaa pyaar un_sabse bahut zada tha
ye kahna bhi galat nahi hoga ki savitri devi apne pote ke pyaar me pagal thi

or jaisa ki pichle kuch salo me savitri devi ko adat pad gyi thi ki jab bhi unke man ka kuch naa hota to unhe bas ek hi admi yaad aate or woh the guruji...

haa to jaisa ki aapne bataya savitri devi hame bhi waisa hi lagta hai rajkumari ke liye arav se bahtar koi nhi likin ye itna asan bhi nahi hone wala

savitri devi - guruji aap to maha gyani h sharv shaktiman hai aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nhi hai

guruji - (muskurate hue) tum hamari param bhakt ho savitri devi or hame

sabse zada preya bhi ho parantu yaha hamare karne se kuch nhi hoga yaha to sab kuch arav ko karna hoga

s.d - kya karna hoga guruji

guruji - **************

s - theek hai guruji mera lalla ye kaam krega or aaphi to kahte ho mera lalla khas hai

guruji - haa ham jaante h savitri devi
parantu ek baat ka sadev dhiyaan rakhna tumhare pote ki iss jiwan yatra me tumhe hi uski sahayata karni hai tumhe uski sankatmochan banna hai

ab ye to nhi pata guruji ne ye baat kyu kahi thi par savitri devi par uska asar ayisa hua ki woh sach me arav ki dhal ban gyi

agle din

arav apne television par baitha video game khel raha tha

s. - lalla idhao aao hame baat karni hai

a - dadi aap ruko me bas mario khel ke aata hu

s - theek hai lalla me to tumhari us girl ke bare me baat karne aayi thi

pata nhi us ladki ka ayisa konsa asar tha arav par jo woh uske bare me sunte hi sab kuch chhod deta tha

arav - kya hua dadi aapko bhi woh mili kya

dadi - lalla tumhe pata hai woh ladki kon hai

arav - nhi dadi

dadi - lalla woh ladki rajkumari hai or unka naam hai dipti

arav - kya dadi woh beautiful girl real ki princess hai or kya woh meri friend banegi

dadi - haa woh sach ki princess hai par woh aapki friend nhi ban sakti kyuki aap uske layak nhi ho

arav - ( canfuse ) dadi fir mujhe uska friend banne ke liye kya karna hoga

dadi - beta tumhe uske layak banna hoga sabse tagatwar sabse accha tumhe ayisa banna hoga jiske aage sab sar jhukaye
tumhe ayisa banna hoga jise dekh kar raja khud tumhara hath mage rajkumari ke liye

arav - me ayisa banuga dadi

dadi - par ayisa banna asan nhi h tumhe bahut mahnat karni hogi shayad sabse zada mahnat kya tum kar paoge

a - ji dadi me kruga

or bas fir kya tha us_din ke baad se arav puri tarha badal gya use karate shok pahle se tha us_din ke baad se arav har chez seekhne laga jo bhi woh seekh sakta tha ladai me ho ya kahi or se use jo bhi milta woh seekhta use sabse bahtar jo banna tha

Flashback end

itna sab sochte hue savitri devi thoda emotional ho gyi thi akhir kitni mahnat ki thi unke lalla ne is_din ke liye or jab ye din itna kareeb tha to uske hi ghar me bagawat uthne lagi thi
nhi woh ye nhi hone degi apne lalla ka dil nhi tutne degi

or itna sab sochte hue bhi unke kano me guruji kahe wohi itne salo purane shabd gunj rahe the
(Tumhe uska sankatmochan banna hoga)
ab tak sab log daining table par aa gye the 2 logo ko chhod kar jinme se ek sanjay tha or dusra (aage pata chalega)

arav - papa mujhe aap sabko kuch batana hai

ranveer - haa beta bolo

arav - papa dadu pichle kuch dino se jo ghar ka mahol h usse me thoda disturbed feel kar raha hu isi_wajha se mene faisla kiya hai ki me kuch dino ke liye ghumne chala jau


Dhananjay - woh sab to theek hai likin tum jaana kaha cahte ho

arav - dadu me ...... Jaa raha hu

Wahi kisi dusri jagha


Aaaahhhh Maaf kardo didi ab ayisi galti nhi hogi bachao koi to bachao

Kutta

kamina samjhe ke se khudne
isne ke lage se me hamesha ke liye gyi thi ke jo loutke kona aau
je ek baar me pahuch jau fir dekh baandar nach na nachaya naa to mara naam bhi vani chaudhary koni

or yo patar patar ne bhi dekhu jake

delhi airport ke bahar 2 ladke bachao bachao chilla rahe the pit pit kar unka bura haal ho gya tha

par hamari pahalwan to jaise aaj kisi or hi nashe me thi
woh kahi ka gussa kahi utaar rahi thi

hua asal me ye ki vani apne match ke liye banglore gyi thi usne petar ko zimmedari di thi ki woh abhay ke bare me use din me 3 baar report deha par
ab petar to petar hai usne abhay ko bhi bahut phone kiye par usne bhi nahi uthaya yahi karan tha ki maidam ka gussa aaj 7ve asman par tha

or uska shikaar hue ye manchale ladke jinhone vani ke airport se bahar aate hi us par commant maar diya or bas fir kya tha
laat par laat ghuse par ghuse aakhir kaar airport police ko aana pada jiska anjaam ye hua ki vani ko band kar diya kuch or ghanto ke liye

vani - ek baar aan de manne fir dekh ke kru me thare sath

hiccccchhh hiccccc hicccc

Me - ye sala subha subha kon bhagwan se pahle mujhe yaad kar raha hai

me aaj subha der se utha tha aaj acchi baat ye hui ki dono me se koi ladki mera dimag kharaab karne nhi aayi thi
me 10 minutes me taiyaar hoke nikla to

petar - bhai kab tak faltu logo ke mafik pada rahega bole to apne pet me chuha log Bolly boll khel rela hai chalo naa bhai kuch thus ke aate hai

petar sahi kah raha tha bahut time ho gya tha kuch khaya nhi tha isliye mene car nikali or chal diye kuch kahane hamare flat se kuch dur ek markit hai abhi ham jaa hi rahe the ki mene ek ajib chez notice ki aaj pura markit band tha rod khali thi
abhi me iske bare me kuch or sochta usse pahle hi mujhe mere sawalo ka jawab mil gya mere samne 3 cars khadi thi uncars ke samne kamse kam 10 se 12 admi khade the
or unki bich wali par par ek insaan baitha hua tha ...

more than 2.2k words hai or mere sabse lambe updates me se ek


to aapko kya lagta hai kya hone wala aage vani kya kregi abhay ka or woh admi kon hai jo abhay ke samne khada hai
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काफी दिनों से इस कहानी के दोबारा शुरू होने का इंतजार कर रहे थे....फिर से कहानी शूरु करने के लिए आपके शुक्रगुजार है।

कहानी बहोत रोचक है...अभय का उसके घरवालों के सामने आना बहोत तूफानी होने वाला है....

राजकुमारी दीप्ति से भले ही आरव प्यार करता हो, लेकिन जब वो अभय की होगी तब देखने लायक होगा...क्या राजकुमारी अभय को दिल देकर खुद आरव से रिश्ता तोड़ेगी?? ऐसा हुआ तो अभय के लिए यह सबसे बड़ी जीत होगी।

लगता है अपने परिवार वालों का घमंड तोड़नेमें और उन्हें बर्बाद करने में वह कोई कसर नही छोड़ेगा!

गुरुजी इस कहानी का असली विलन है आखिर उसकी वजह से ही अभय के साथ अन्याय हुआ है। क्या अभय गुरुजी से बदला ले पायेगा देखने ने मजा आएगा....

शतरंज का खेल बिछ चुका है, पहली चाल अभय ने चल दी है अब देखते है आरव क्या करता है अपनी शादी बचाने के लिए!!
 
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Mr_monu

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Next day - roz ke mukable aaj mousam thoda zada hi garam tha ye suraj ki khudki marzi thi yaa ****** city me biti hui raat ka asar tha ye to pata nhi likin bhale hi thakur pariwar me kuch logo ke liye kal ki raat kaisi bhi rahi ho par kuchke liye to ye din bhi normal hi tha
or unhi normal logo me se ek thi avni jo baithe baithe apne man me kuch soch rahi thi

kya hua choti kya soch rahi hai

ye awaz sun kar avni ke hotho par pyaari si muskaan aa gyi woh jaanti

thi ab uski pareshani ka hal use mil hi jayega uski badi bhen ke pass har chez ka jawab hota hi hai

avni - di kya ayisa nhi ho sakta ki hame thoda or time mil jaye shadiyo ke liye

avni ki baat sun kar divya soch me pad jati hai

divya - choti tu mujhe sach sach bata kya tu sirf or time cahti hai yaa tujhe ye shadi nhi karni
dekh agar ayisa kuch hai to tu mujhe bata sakti hai tu bhi jaanti hai me khud ye shadi nhi karna cahti

divya ki baat sunkar avni me bhi
himmat bandhti h

avni - (haklate hue) d d di w wo me ye shadi nnnn nhi karna cahti

Avni ki baat sunkar jaha divya heran thi to usse kahi zada khush bhi thi
use lag raha tha jaise ekdum se uski ye choti bhen samajhdaar ho gyi hai

divya - tu fikr mat kar choti me aaj hi is shadi ke natak ka end kar dungi

avni - (khush ho kar) kya sach di aap ayisa kar sakti ho

divya -(aankha maarte hue) try karne me kya jaata hai
or jabse me aakeli thi ab to tu hai naa mere sath or waise bhi abhi to 2.5 mahina bacha hua hai

hamare pass ye nhi to kuch or dhund hi lige

or ayise hi dono bahne sham ki planing me jut gyi is_baat se bekhabar ki koi or bhi tha jo unki baatin sun raha tha

ab ye baatin sunne wala insaan kya tufaan layega ye to waqt hi batayega

ji woh jo aapne raat ko kaha kya woh
sanjay jaanta tha ki kamini raat se usse baat karne ke liye bechain h
isi liye woh bola

sanjay - haa kamini agar hamari beti ko woh shadi nhi karni hui to fir me woh shadi nhi hone dunga fir chahe mujhe
uske liye koi bhi kemat kyu naa chukani pade

kamini - par ham aakele sab logo ke khilaaf kar bhi kya sakte hai

sanjay - (rahasyamayi musaan kee sath) pahle shayad me kuch nhi kar pata par ab ek raasta hai mere pass

isse pahle kamini kuch kahti sanjay kamre se jaa chuka tha
woh is waqt office jana cahta tha use pata tha raat me jo hua uske baad aaj woh breakfast ghar par naa hi kare to accha h

ruko

abhi sanjay apne kamre nikal kar thodi dur hi pahucha tha ki use ek gusse bhari awaz sunai padi
sanjay ne palat kar dekha to paya uski maa use gusse se ghur rahi hai

savitri devi - (gusse me) mere sath aao

or use ek khali kamre me leke jati hai

S.d - kya baat hai sanjay kya cahte ho tum

sanjay - me kuch nhi cahta maa

s - to kya tum pariwar ko todna cahte ho kyu kar rahe ho ayisa

sanjay - me pariwar ko nhi tod raha maa bas apni beti ki zindgi bacha raha hu

s - ( gusse me ) to kya ham apni poti ka bura cahte hai
hamne unki shadi sahar ke sabse bade pariwaro me pakki ki hai
or agar

maan bhi liya jaye ki tum shadi tod bhi lete ho to kya kroge apni beti ka kaha se dhundoge itne bade or amir pariwar yaa kisi garib or bhuke nange me uski shadi krane ka irada hai tumhara

sanjay - me apni beti ki shadi kahi bhi ho kisi se bhi ho par mujhe itna to pata hai agar meri beti in_pariwaro ke alawa kahi bhi gyi to khush hi rahegi

s - or tumne socha hai agar hamare pariwar se 1 bhi beti kam hui to arav ki bhi shadi ruk jayegi
tumne ek bhi baar arav ke bare me socha hai
bhul gye jab usne pahli baar rajkumari ko dekha tha tab kya haal hua tha uska

sanjay - mujhe sab yaad hai maa par ek ke pyaar ke liye sabki kubani kaha tak theek hai
agar arav ka pyaar sacha hai to rajkumari uski hoke hi rahegi par uske liye me kisi or ki zindgi bhale hi naa sahi par apni beti ki zindgi bilkul barbad nahi hone dunga
ye kah kar sanjay to chala jata hai par savitri devi ke dimag me ek flashback chalne lagta hai




( flashback)

dadi dadi dadi dadi

ary ary kya hua mere lalla ko ayise bhagta hua kyu aa raha hai

arav - dadi mene aaj ek bahut hi beautiful girl ko dekha

dadi (savitri) - hahahaha mera lalla ghar ke liye bahu dekh ke aaya hai

arav - ( blush ) dadi woh girl bahut beautiful hai

dadi - theek hai lalla pahle tu bada hoja fir ham teri shadi usi se kara dige

us _waqt arav sirf 6 saal ka tha isi wajha se savitri devi ne uski baat par zada dhiyaan nhi diya likin usdin ke baad se to jaise arav ke sar par us ladki kaa bhoot hi sawar ho gya
woh aksar hi us_ladki ko kahi naa kahi dekh leta or fir aake pure ghar ko batane lagta

likin ek din

dadi dadu mene aaj fir us girl ko dekha woh bahut beautiful lag rahi thi

dhananjay - aryy chote thakur sahab to uska naam pata bhi puch lete ham kara dete usse apki shadi

arav - dadu aaj mene use papa ko bhi dekhaya papa batao naa

ranveer - beta aap andar jao me sabko bata dunga or bade logo wali meeting bhi karni hai fir thodi der me papa or mamma aate hai

arav - ok papa

kajal - ( haste hue ) kya baat h ji aakele aakele bahu ko dekh bhi aaye or mujhe bataya tak nhi

sanjay - par bhaiya aap

to raja sahab ki anniversary me gye the naa aapko woh ladki kaha mil gyi kya woh bhi kisi bade pariwar se hai

ranveer - ( pareshan hote hue ) isi baat ki to dikkat h kash ko woh kisi pariwar se hoti to ham kuch bhi karke mana lete par woh rajkumari hai or arav ki zidd ko to aap log jaante hi ho
ab to ham bas ek hi prathana kar sakte hai ki waqt ke sath sath arav ke sar se ye rajkumari kaa bhoot utar jaye

ranveer ki baat sun kar sabki hawaiya udd gyi thi bhale hi woh sahar ke sabse tagatwar pariwaro me se 1 the par woh raja ki barabari nhi kar sakte the or ye baat woh sab acche se jaante the

savtri - rajkumari hai to kya hua uski shadi bhi to kisi naa kisi se hogi hi or tum sab dekhna mera lalla sabse accha hai

dhananjay - apna muh band rakho savitri

s - par

d - mene kaha naa muh band matlab band

dhananjay thakur ne thakurain ka muh to band kra diya par unke man ko shant nahi kar paye
waise to thakur pariwar me sabhi arav ko pyaar karte the par savitri devi kaa pyaar un_sabse bahut zada tha
ye kahna bhi galat nahi hoga ki savitri devi apne pote ke pyaar me pagal thi

or jaisa ki pichle kuch salo me savitri devi ko adat pad gyi thi ki jab bhi unke man ka kuch naa hota to unhe bas ek hi admi yaad aate or woh the guruji...

haa to jaisa ki aapne bataya savitri devi hame bhi waisa hi lagta hai rajkumari ke liye arav se bahtar koi nhi likin ye itna asan bhi nahi hone wala

savitri devi - guruji aap to maha gyani h sharv shaktiman hai aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nhi hai

guruji - (muskurate hue) tum hamari param bhakt ho savitri devi or hame

sabse zada preya bhi ho parantu yaha hamare karne se kuch nhi hoga yaha to sab kuch arav ko karna hoga

s.d - kya karna hoga guruji

guruji - **************

s - theek hai guruji mera lalla ye kaam krega or aaphi to kahte ho mera lalla khas hai

guruji - haa ham jaante h savitri devi
parantu ek baat ka sadev dhiyaan rakhna tumhare pote ki iss jiwan yatra me tumhe hi uski sahayata karni hai tumhe uski sankatmochan banna hai

ab ye to nhi pata guruji ne ye baat kyu kahi thi par savitri devi par uska asar ayisa hua ki woh sach me arav ki dhal ban gyi

agle din

arav apne television par baitha video game khel raha tha

s. - lalla idhao aao hame baat karni hai

a - dadi aap ruko me bas mario khel ke aata hu

s - theek hai lalla me to tumhari us girl ke bare me baat karne aayi thi

pata nhi us ladki ka ayisa konsa asar tha arav par jo woh uske bare me sunte hi sab kuch chhod deta tha

arav - kya hua dadi aapko bhi woh mili kya

dadi - lalla tumhe pata hai woh ladki kon hai

arav - nhi dadi

dadi - lalla woh ladki rajkumari hai or unka naam hai dipti

arav - kya dadi woh beautiful girl real ki princess hai or kya woh meri friend banegi

dadi - haa woh sach ki princess hai par woh aapki friend nhi ban sakti kyuki aap uske layak nhi ho

arav - ( canfuse ) dadi fir mujhe uska friend banne ke liye kya karna hoga

dadi - beta tumhe uske layak banna hoga sabse tagatwar sabse accha tumhe ayisa banna hoga jiske aage sab sar jhukaye
tumhe ayisa banna hoga jise dekh kar raja khud tumhara hath mage rajkumari ke liye

arav - me ayisa banuga dadi

dadi - par ayisa banna asan nhi h tumhe bahut mahnat karni hogi shayad sabse zada mahnat kya tum kar paoge

a - ji dadi me kruga

or bas fir kya tha us_din ke baad se arav puri tarha badal gya use karate shok pahle se tha us_din ke baad se arav har chez seekhne laga jo bhi woh seekh sakta tha ladai me ho ya kahi or se use jo bhi milta woh seekhta use sabse bahtar jo banna tha

Flashback end

itna sab sochte hue savitri devi thoda emotional ho gyi thi akhir kitni mahnat ki thi unke lalla ne is_din ke liye or jab ye din itna kareeb tha to uske hi ghar me bagawat uthne lagi thi
nhi woh ye nhi hone degi apne lalla ka dil nhi tutne degi

or itna sab sochte hue bhi unke kano me guruji kahe wohi itne salo purane shabd gunj rahe the
(Tumhe uska sankatmochan banna hoga)
ab tak sab log daining table par aa gye the 2 logo ko chhod kar jinme se ek sanjay tha or dusra (aage pata chalega)

arav - papa mujhe aap sabko kuch batana hai

ranveer - haa beta bolo

arav - papa dadu pichle kuch dino se jo ghar ka mahol h usse me thoda disturbed feel kar raha hu isi_wajha se mene faisla kiya hai ki me kuch dino ke liye ghumne chala jau


Dhananjay - woh sab to theek hai likin tum jaana kaha cahte ho

arav - dadu me ...... Jaa raha hu

Wahi kisi dusri jagha


Aaaahhhh Maaf kardo didi ab ayisi galti nhi hogi bachao koi to bachao

Kutta

kamina samjhe ke se khudne
isne ke lage se me hamesha ke liye gyi thi ke jo loutke kona aau
je ek baar me pahuch jau fir dekh baandar nach na nachaya naa to mara naam bhi vani chaudhary koni

or yo patar patar ne bhi dekhu jake

delhi airport ke bahar 2 ladke bachao bachao chilla rahe the pit pit kar unka bura haal ho gya tha

par hamari pahalwan to jaise aaj kisi or hi nashe me thi
woh kahi ka gussa kahi utaar rahi thi

hua asal me ye ki vani apne match ke liye banglore gyi thi usne petar ko zimmedari di thi ki woh abhay ke bare me use din me 3 baar report deha par
ab petar to petar hai usne abhay ko bhi bahut phone kiye par usne bhi nahi uthaya yahi karan tha ki maidam ka gussa aaj 7ve asman par tha

or uska shikaar hue ye manchale ladke jinhone vani ke airport se bahar aate hi us par commant maar diya or bas fir kya tha
laat par laat ghuse par ghuse aakhir kaar airport police ko aana pada jiska anjaam ye hua ki vani ko band kar diya kuch or ghanto ke liye

vani - ek baar aan de manne fir dekh ke kru me thare sath

hiccccchhh hiccccc hicccc

Me - ye sala subha subha kon bhagwan se pahle mujhe yaad kar raha hai

me aaj subha der se utha tha aaj acchi baat ye hui ki dono me se koi ladki mera dimag kharaab karne nhi aayi thi
me 10 minutes me taiyaar hoke nikla to

petar - bhai kab tak faltu logo ke mafik pada rahega bole to apne pet me chuha log Bolly boll khel rela hai chalo naa bhai kuch thus ke aate hai

petar sahi kah raha tha bahut time ho gya tha kuch khaya nhi tha isliye mene car nikali or chal diye kuch kahane hamare flat se kuch dur ek markit hai abhi ham jaa hi rahe the ki mene ek ajib chez notice ki aaj pura markit band tha rod khali thi
abhi me iske bare me kuch or sochta usse pahle hi mujhe mere sawalo ka jawab mil gya mere samne 3 cars khadi thi uncars ke samne kamse kam 10 se 12 admi khade the
or unki bich wali par par ek insaan baitha hua tha ...

more than 2.2k words hai or mere sabse lambe updates me se ek


to aapko kya lagta hai kya hone wala aage vani kya kregi abhay ka or woh admi kon hai jo abhay ke samne khada hai
Same as expected update...🔥🔥🔥
 
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Rajm1990

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Behtreen update bhai
 
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