Lovebird16
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Ab bhai ji mai story pe kya hi comments Karu ya aur kuchh kahu kyuki mujhe khud ko bhi nhi pata hai ki story kaise likhte hai kya kya add karna chahiye... Pr hota hai na ki kuchh bhi ho na ho pr ek chij jarur aisa hota hai jo aapko pasand ho aur wahi chij mujhe aapke story me mil rha hai isliye mere liye ye best hai bahut achhi hai ... Aur ye baat mai pure man se bol rha hu..... Dhanywad aapka ki aapke wajah se aisi story padhne ko mili ...update - 37
( woh do din )
Me or petar abhi party se laut rahe the or petar bilkul shant baitha hua tha jo ke uske swabhav ke bilkul ulta tha aam tor par woh bas bak bak karta rahta tha
me - petar
petar - bhai apun aapse bahut zada dislipontid hai
me - woh discipointed hota hai
petar - bhai aapko samajh me aaya naa
uske baad mene petar se koi baat nahi ki or ghar aakar me room me chala gya
sham ke time mujhe bukh lagi thi isi_liye mene socha kyu na petar ke sath kuch khane chala jaye waise bhi use kuch zada hi bukh lagti hai
likin jab mene bahar aake dekha to t.v par picture chal rahi thi or petar sofe par murda lash ki tarha soya pada tha likin table ko dekh kar saaf pata chal raha tha ki sala kha_pi kar mast soya hai
kyuki waha pizza or pepsi ki botle padi hui thi
ye dekh kar mera mood kharaab ho gya kyuki mujhe bhi bukh lagi thi or ye sala akele akele kha ke so gya
yahi soch kar me bina petar ko liye nikal gya or waise bhi mujhe jungle wale ghar par bhi jana tha
me bhar aaya or apni car me baithne hi wala tha ki tabhi meri aankho me ek flash pada fir me car me baith gya or ek dhabe par jake khana khaya
khana khane ke baad me apne jungle wale ghar ki taraf jane laga
likin mene ek usse pahle hi car roki or aram aram se jungle ke andar chala gya
(Kuch der baad)
ek coti black car abhay ki car se thodi dur ruki or usme se ek admi nikla jiska muh puri tarha Dhaka hua tha or uske gale me ek bada sa cemra tha woh bhi dhere dhere chupte hue jungle ke andar jane laga
thodi dur tak andar jane ke baad jab us admi ko koi nahi dekha to woh wapas aa gya
wapas aake jaise hi woh car me baitha waise hi kisi ne uska gala pakad liya or tab uske kano me ek khaufnaak awaz sunai padi kiske admi ho tum
admi - (dar or herani se) ji k ki kisi ka nahi
abhay - mene pucha kisne bheja hai tumhe
admi - ch ch chaudhary ne
abhay - ohhh to tum chaudhary ke admi ho
admi - ( darte hue ) nahi nahi me unka admi nahi hu me to bas ek private detective hu mujhe chaudhary sahab ne hire kiya hai
woh aapke bare me sab kuch janna cahte hai jaise aap kon ho kaha se aaye ho aapke pariwar me kon kon hai or khas kar aapke karibi log kon kon hai
is waqt woh admi hadd se zada dara hua tha woh pichle 3 salo se jasoosi karta aa raha rah or aaj tak uske kisi shikaar ko uske hone ki bhanak tak nahi lagi thi
ye pahli baar tha jab woh pakda gya tha or dusra uska gala abhi abhay ke hatho me tha or uski pakad se hi woh uski tagat ka andaza laga sakta tha
use yakin tha ki agar usne kuch bhi chupane ki yaa naa batane ki koshish ki to uski gardan toddi jayegi
abhay - tumne ab tak kya kya bataya hai or kya kya hai jo nahi bataya
uske baad woh admi abhay ko sab kuch batane laga usne bataya ki woh abhay ke piche pichle kuch dino se hai usne ab tak chaudhary ko sirf phone par bataya hai
jaise abhay ke ghar roz ek ladki aati hai
uske sath 3 4 dino se ek ladka rah raha hai
uske baad usne abhay ko woh photo's dekhaye jo usne pichle kuch dino se abhay ke liye the
mene woh sare photo dekhe jinme mere or vani ke petar ke sanjay ke jungle wale ghar ke or yaha tak ki mere or priya ke bhi photo's the
me - ye tum kab chaudhary tak pahuchane wale the
admi - woh sir 2 din baad ki date hai
uski baad sunkar me soch me pad gya tha usne chaudharyo ko saaf saaf bata diya tha ki daily subha mere pass koi ladki aati hai jo koi or nahi vani hai or mujhe pata tha woh chaudhary pariwar se hi hai
halaki mujhe usse koi farak padna chaheye tha likin me itne dino se us ladki ke sath samay bita raha tha or uske bare me mujhe itna to pata chal hi gya tha ki woh ladki dil ki saaf hai or mujhe use bachana hoga
par kahte hai naa ki har chez ki ek kemat hoti hai waise hi iski bhi thi agar vani ko bacha tha to kisi ko fasana bhi padega
dusra option thi avni likin abhi me chacha ke sath kaam kar raha tha or dusra me aage jake uska istmaal karna cahta tha isi_liye use fasana bhi ek accha idea nahi tha
fir thi priya jiska to koi sawal hi nahi uthta
baki mera wasta kisi or ladki se pada nahi tha
me abhi gambhir soch me duba hua tha
ki tabhi mere dimag me kuch aaya
me - tumhe mere liye kisi par nazar rakhni hai
admi - ok me kar dunga
me - theek hai or paise ki fikr mat karna chaudhary se dugna dunga
waise tera naam kya hai
admi - (khush hote hue) bhai mera naam Raju hai waise log mujhe jaggu 07 naam se jaante hai
(Fir thoda ruk ke) bhai waise mujhe nazar kis par rakhni hai
me - hema chaudhary......
Me - (man_me) chaudhary mere bare me sab janna cahta hai naa to me bhi use sab batauga
jaha ek taraf abhay ke samne pahli baar ayisi koi mushkil aayi thi jise woh tagat se nahi suljha sakta tha
to wahi kuch log ayise bhi the jo ab apni tagat dikhana cahte the
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hamne 30 saal intzaar Kiya hai likin ab hamse or sabar nahi hoga
ab hamare pass bas yahi moka hai
ek bade se mahal me ek 40 45 saal ka admi 2 logo ke sath khada hua tha use dekh kar saaf lag raha tha jaise woh koi raja maharaja ho uske sath ek ladka or ek badi dari much wala admi bhi tha
( Inhe ham admi 1 2 3 likhinge )
admi 1 - tumhe kuch pata chala us ladki ka
admi 2 - ji ******* hamne sab pata kar liya hai
admi 1 - to apne kisi kabil admi ko bhejo or use maardo
admi 1 ki baat sunkar to mano admi 2 or 3 sakte me hi aa gye
Admi 2 - likin ******* hamto use agwa karne wale the naa
Admi 1 - nahi agar aage jake hamare pass koi dusra upay nahi rahta hai to agwa karige likin abhi hamare samne ek sunhara avsar hai ham bina sidhi ladai ke ek 2no me se ek pariwar ko khatm kar sakte hai
tum kisi ayise admi ko is kaam par lagao jo ye kaam sambhal sake
admi 2 - ji *******
(abhay ki side)
abhi me apne jungle wale ghar me tha mere chandan ke ped ab kafi bade ho chuke par abhi inke katne ka waqt nahi aaya tha
me in sab ke bare me soch hi raha tha ki tabhi tannnnn
karke mere mobile ki tone baji mene mobile utha ke dekha to uspar Jaggu 07 ka msg tha
07 - city mall
aaj ke liye bas itna hi sorry bhai log ummed ke hisaab se update bada nahi hai kyuki 2 din lagatar barish hui hai yaha
