Update-4
Scene: Mahesh ka ghar, Arpita returns from the coffee date
Arpita ghar wapas aati hai, visibly tired and conflicted.
Arpita: (sighs) Mahesh, main aaj Ravi se mili. Woh accha insaan hai, lekin main abhi bhi sunischit nahi hoon.
Mahesh: Mujhe pata hai, Arpita. Kaisa laga tumhe Ravi?
Arpita: (thoughtful) Ravi acha laga, uski soch bhi achi hai. Par main kuch samajh nahi paa rahi hoon.
Mahesh: I understand. Hum kal Dr. Sangeeta ke papa ke ghar bhee to jana hai na, unki help lagegi. Kaal Shaksh Gandh hai, kya lagega kya nahi aur sab kuch.
Mahesh aur Arpita Dr. Sangeeta ke papa ke ghar pohchte hain. Suresh, Varsha, Shyam aur Lata Mehato bhi wahan hain. Sab milkar Shaksh Gandha ki tayyari kar rahe hain. Varsha subtly brings up the topic with Arpita.
Varsha: Arpita, shayad tumhe Mahesh aur Ravi ne pratha ke baare mein bata diya hoga shayad.
Arpita: (confused) Kaisi pratha?
Varsha: (calmly) Yeh ek purani rasm hai Ravi ke gaon ki. Shaadi se pehle hone wale pati aur patni ko 25 din ek hi bedroom mein ek hi bed par rehna padta hai, taaki ek-doosre ke habits, likes-dislikes aur sab kuch jaan sakein.
dono ke beech ek parda hota hai jise kaho to maryada ka parda ho jise shadi taak koi laanghe naa
Suresh: Yeh pratha isliye hai taaki shaadi ke baad koi surprise na rahe. Agar kuch galat lagta hai toh shaadi se pehle hi pata chal jaye.
Lata Mehato: Haan, aur is pratha ko follow karne se hum sabko pata chal jata hai ke dono ek doosre ke liye sahi hain ya nahi.
Arpita: (shocked) Yeh kya bakwas hai? me ye saab ko nahee manati hu .
Varsha:- are baba Ravi ji part se aaya hai ye waha pe bada common hai mene bhee shadi ke pehele kee hai ye pratha ( zoot bollate huye )
Suresh: (smiling) Ajeeb toh lagta hai, par yeh pratha kaafi valuable hai. Isse dono ki understanding aur strong hoti hai.
Lata:- haa tum sahee ho paar ye galati haamane pehele kee hai jiska natija dekho Ravi kee pehali wife nahee rahee kahee na kahee haam paar awkrupa ho gayee
( Arpita shoked ho jati hai and concern for mahesh now )
Saab milkar arpita ko convice karate hai but vo haar kisi ke baat ko ignore kaar deti hai fir mahesh dr.sangeeta kee aur dekhata hai jo door se saab dekhati hai
Dr.Sangeeta :- are baba kaal engagement hai uska kya hai uskee bhee planning karo bhai meri saheli ka saksh gandh hai bhai mehandi , phool , ring saab kaa kya hisaab hai
Sab milkar Shaksh Gandha ki planning karte hain.
Varsha: Toh Arpita, Shaksh Gandha ke din, tumhare ghar hum sab kaunse time pe aayenge?
Arpita: (thinking) Shaam ko 4PM baje thik rahega.
Mahesh: Perfect, hum sab ready rahenge.
Scene: Mahesh ka ghar, us raat ka scene
Mahesh aur Arpita ghar aate hain. Arpita abhi bhi conflicted hai.
Arpita: Mahesh, mujhe abhi bhi samajh nahi aa raha. Tumhe lagta hai yeh sab theek hai?
Mahesh: (calmly) Arpita, mujhe pata hai yeh sab ajeeb lagta hai. Lekin yeh ek mauka hai humein ek doosre ko aur achi tarah samajhne ka.
Arpita: (frustrated) Mahesh, tumhara har baar ka answer yeh hota hai. Tum samajhte kyun nahi ho?
Arpita, gusse mein, Mahesh ko thappad maar deti hai.
Arpita: Tumhe sharam nahi aati, Mahesh? Mere pyaar ka yeh matlab nahi ke kisi aur ke saath bed share karoon!
Mahesh, shocked but understanding, nods.
Mahesh: (softly) I'm sorry, Arpita. Mujhe sirf tera khayal hai.
Arpita: (softening) Pillu bachhu, tu samajh kyun nahi raha? Baaki sab tere emotions ka fayda utha rahe hain.
Arpita Mahesh ko gale lagati hai, kiss karati hai use aapane chatti se laga deti aur roti hai use aaj mara is liye aur mahesh ko lovingly dinner khilati hai.
Neat day in hospital for check-up ( Dr.Khurana clinic)
Mahesh looks weak and pale. Dr. Sangeeta baat karti hai Arpita se. Arpita abhi bhi conflicted hai.
Dr. Sangeeta: Dekho Arpita, Mahesh ka condition theek nahi hai. Therapy ke baad vomiting aur weakness hai. Usse khush rakhna hi ek tarika hai medicines kaam karne ka.
Arpita: (angry but concerned) Mujhe bhi gussa aa raha hai, lekin Mahesh ke health se nahi khel sakti.
Arpita is torn between her emotions and Mahesh's health.
Dr. Sangeeta: (softly) Arpita, yeh sab pratha aur rasm sirf ek tarika hota hai ek dusare ko jaan ne kaa , kya tum chahati ho kee
shadi ke baad koi galat banda tumhare life me aaye aur tumhare mahesh ko tum se door le jaaye kya tum seh paavogi ye saab
Arpita:- nahee kabhee nahee , me mahesh ke bina nahee ji pavungi
Dr.Sangeeta : tum aur Ravi ek doosre ko samajh sako bina kisi physical interaction ke. Ek transparent chunni beech mein rahegi, privacy aur maryada ke liye.
Arpita: (conflicted) Yeh sab sach mein zaroori hai? Kya koi aur raasta nahi hai?
Dr. Sangeeta: (convincingly) Arpita, Mahesh ke liye yeh zaroori hai. Uski health critical hai aur usse emotional support ki zaroorat hai. Tumhari madad aur presence uske liye dawai ka kaam karegi.
Arpita: (teary-eyed) Thik hai, main yeh karungi, par sirf Mahesh ke liye. Tum jake bata do unko ke main ready hoon, aur Ravi apna bag lekar ghar aa sakta hai. Lekin ek shart hai, Ravi aur main guest bedroom mein rahenge, Mahesh ke saath hamare ghar me .
Dr. Sangeeta: (smiling) Yeh accha decision hai, Arpita. Main Ravi aur lata dadi ko bata doongi.
Arpita raat ko Mahesh ko emotionally support karti hai, aur finally confirm kar deti hai ke woh ready hai.
Arpita: Mahesh, main ready hoon. Ravi ko bula lo, woh apna bag lekar aa sakta hai.
Mahesh, emotionally overwhelmed, Arpita ko gale lagata hai.
Mahesh: Thank you, Arpita. Tumne mere liye itna bada kadam uthaya hai.
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Arpita raat me uthake aapane pati Mahesh ko dekhati hai jo shant soya huwa hai uske maan me bohot se emotion hai vo rone lagati hai use kahee naa kahee pata hai vo aapane dil ke tukade ko kho degi
kese rahega ye mere bina aur fir mahesh ke chehare pe haath ferte huye uska dil ye kehata hai
Suraj tera gardish mein hai
Dhalte huaa keh gaya
Phir laut ke aaunga main
Nazdeek hi hai subah
Gaaye jaa, gaaye jaa
Gham mein hai sargam
Gunguna ye dhun, gaaye jaa..
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Raat ke dhaagon se savera bun, gaaye ja..
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Gham mein hai sargam
Gunguna ye dhun, gaaye ja
Apna hi apna kyun kehlaaya hai
Kaise koi tay karta hai kaun paraaya hai
Ek wohi rishta teri kamaayi hai
Dard ke pal mein jisne tera saath nibhaya hai( arpita ko yaad aata hai cyst ke time jaan vo bimar thee taab bache jese ro raha tha mahesh us ke liye )
Toota huaa to kya sitaara tu ( aaj cancer se laadh raha hai uska mahesh )
Kisi ka bann sahara tu..
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Raat ke dhaagon se savera bun, gaaye ja…
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Gham mein hai sargam
Gunguna ye dhun gaaye ja
Ho.. aankhon mein rakhna sapne tu kal ke
Tujhko lekin un tak jana hoga khud chal ke
Majhdhaaron se tu, haar nahin jaana
Saahil tujhko paana hoga lehron mein dhalke
Hai zindagi wohi jo chalti hai
Yeh girke hi sambhalti hai
Scene: Mahesh and Arpita's house – Shaksh Gandha ceremony
(Mahesh ke ghar ko sundar rangoli, phoolon ke haar, aur deepak se sajaya gaya hai. Aaj Shaksh Gandha hai, ek shubh din jo Arpita aur Ravi ke rishte ko ek naya mod dene wala hai. Mahesh, apni bimari ke baavajood, sab kuch apne haathon se arrange kar raha hai. Arpita paithani pehne hue, khud ko tayar kar rahi hai. Uske chehre par ek ajeeb si tension aur uljhan hai.)
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Mahesh:
(dekh kar muskurata hai)
"Arpita, tum bahut sundar lag rahi ho. Aaj ka din tumhare liye bahut maayne rakhta hai."
Arpita:
(thoda sharmate hue)
"Mahesh, mujhe abhi bhi yeh sab ajeeb lagta hai. Yeh Shaksh Gandha aur Ravi ke saath rasm... main samajh nahi pa rahi."
Mahesh:
(uska haath thaam kar)
"Mujhe pata hai, yeh sab asaan nahi hai. Lekin yeh rasm tumhare aur Ravi ke rishte ki pehli seedhi hai. Tumhare liye yeh sab important hai, aur mere liye bhi."
(Arpita Mahesh ko dekhkar thoda shant ho jaati hai. Dono milkar rasm ki tayyari karne lagte hain.)
Scene: Shaksh Gandha ki shuruaat
Scene: Shaksh Gandha - Ek Stree ka Sabr aur Samarpan
(Mahesh ka ghar poore josh ke saath sajaya gaya hai. Ghar ke har kone mein gulaab aur genda ke phoolon ki mala latak rahi hai. Mitti ki khushboo aur halke dhoop ke dhuan se mahal pavitra lag raha hai. Sab mehmaan Shaksh Gandha ki rasm ke liye tayar hain, lekin Arpita ke dil mein ek alag hi toofan chal raha hai. Usne apni peethani pehni hai, lekin chehre par muskaan banayi hui hai jo andar se bilkul asli nahi lagti. Uska mann Mahesh ke liye kaafi bhaari hai, jo uske liye sirf pati nahi, ek bacche jaise hai.)
Mahesh:
(Arpita ki aankhon mein uljhan dekhkar uske paas aata hai)
"Arpita, tum thik ho na? Tumhare chehre par ajeeb si pareshaani hai."
Arpita:
(aankhein jhuka kar, halke se muskurane ki koshish karti hai)
"Mahesh... main yeh sab nahi karna chahti thi. Tumhe pata hai na? Mujhe yeh rasm samajh nahi aati."
Mahesh:
*(narm lekin thoda majboor)
"Pillu, mujhe pata hai tum kitni ziddi ho, aur main bhi janta hoon tum Ravi ko samajhne ke liye tayar nahi ho. Lekin mere liye... sirf mere liye ek baar yeh sab kar lo."
(Arpita ke aankhon mein aansu aa jaate hain, lekin woh apni feelings ko dabane ki koshish karti hai. Uske liye Mahesh sirf pati nahi, ek bacha hai, jise woh maa ki tarah sambhalti hai. Mahesh ka pyaar uske liye sab kuch hai, lekin yeh rasm uske liye apne dil ka ek tukda chhodne jaisa lagta hai.)
Scene: Shaksh Gandha Ki Shuruaat
(Mehmaan aa gaye hain, dhol aur manjeeron ki awaaz se mahal gunj raha hai. Ravi apne parivaar ke saath aata hai, safed kurta aur dupatta pehne. Uske chehre par ek halka nervousness hai, lekin woh Arpita ki taraf muskurata hai. Arpita zameen ki taraf dekhte hue Ravi ka swagat karti hai, lekin uske mann mein sirf Mahesh hai. Mahesh, apni bimari ke bavjood, sab ko manage kar raha hai.)
Panditji:
"Yeh Shaksh Gandha ek pavitra rasm hai, jisme hone wale pati aur patni apne parivaar ke saamne apne rishte ko suvikrit karte hain. Yeh rishta XXXX aur XXXX ki kripa se aur mazboot hota hai."
(Ravi aur Arpita ko bulaya jaata hai. Arpita majboori mein chalti hai, dil mein Mahesh ka dard aur Ravi ke saath rasm nibhane ki uljhan. Panditji dono ke haath mein phool aur chawal dete hain, Ravi ko Arpita ka haath thaamne ke liye kehte hain.)
Ravi:
(Arpita ki taraf dheere se dekhta hai)
"Arpita, main samajh sakta hoon tumhari hesitancy. Lekin mujhe lagta hai yeh ek zaroori kadam hai, hume ek doosre ko samajhne ke liye."
Arpita: hmmmm
(maan me rudely, lekin apne emotions ko rok kar)
"Tumhe kuch samajh nahi aa sakta, Ravi. Tum samajhte ho ke main yahaan tumhare liye khadi hoon? Nahi. Main yahaan Mahesh ke liye hoon. Uske liye kar rahi hoon yeh sab."
**Panditji:**
"Ab dono apne apne anguthiyaan ek doosre ko pehnayein."
*(Ravi apni jeb se ek chhoti si box nikalta hai jisme ek sundar diamond ring hai. Woh Arpita ki taraf dekhta hai, lekin Arpita ka dhyaan Mahesh ki taraf hai, jo thoda door se khada hai. Ravi dheere se anguthi Arpita ke ungli mein pehnata hai.)*
**Ravi:**
*(softly, thoda nervous hote hue)*
"Arpita, main ummed karta hoon ke tumhe yeh rishta hum dono ke liye acha lagega."
*(Arpita thoda hesitant hai, lekin majboor hokar Ravi ko anguthi pehna deti hai. Uske chehre par ek muskaan hai, lekin andar se woh abhi bhi Mahesh ke liye tension mein hai. Mahesh ka chehra halka sa udaas hai, lekin woh apni khushi ke liye Arpita ko dekh raha hai.)*
Mahesh:
(ek kona se dekhta hai, uske chehre par ek muskurahat hai, lekin andar se uski haalat kharab ho rahi hai. Arpita ke shabdon ne uska dil choo liya hai. Panditji rasm ko aage badhate hain, aur Ravi aur Arpita ka engagement ho jaata hai.)
Scene: Raat ka Samay - Arpita ka Tootna aur Majboori ka Faisla
(Raat ko, jab sab mehmaan chale jaate hain, Arpita apne kamre mein baithti hai, Mahesh ke paas. Mahesh ki tabiyat aur bigad gayi hai, lekin woh Arpita ki taraf dekhta hai jaise sab kuch theek ho.)
Arpita:
(rote hue, Mahesh ke paas aati hai)
"Mahesh, mujhe kyun karna pad raha hai yeh sab? Tumne kabhi yeh nahi socha ke main tumhare bina nahi reh sakti? Tumne kabhi yeh nahi dekha ke main yeh sab sirf tumhari khushi ke liye kar rahi hoon?"
Mahesh:
(dheere se uska haath pakadta hai)
"Pillu, mujhe pata hai tum yeh sab mere liye kar rahi ho. Lekin main chahta hoon ke tum Ravi ke saath apni zindagi aage badhao. Mere liye tumhara yeh sacrifice bahut bada hai."
Arpita:
(gusse mein, lekin aansu bahate hue)
"Tum samajhte ho Mahesh? Tum ho meri duniya. Tumhe yeh sab dekhkar takleef nahi hoti? Yeh Ravi ke saath rasm nibhaana, yeh sab bas ek formal duty lag raha hai. Main tumhara saath nahi chhod sakti, tum mere bacche jaise ho!"
(Arpita Mahesh ko gale lagati hai, jaise ek maa apne bacche ko samhalti hai. Mahesh ka haath thoda kaanp raha hai, aur Arpita uske halat ko dekh kar aur ro padh jaati hai.)
Mahesh:
(softly)
"Arpita, tumhara saath mere liye sabse zaroori hai. Lekin meri yehi ichcha hai ke tum Ravi ko bhi apne zindagi mein jagah do."
(Arpita ka mann phir se uljhan mein hai. Lekin apne pyaar aur mamta ke beech, woh Mahesh ke liye pratha karne ke liye tayar ho jaati hai.)
Scene: Shaksh Gandha ke baad ki Pratha - Arpita ka Aakhri Faisla
(Subah Ravi apna bag le kar Arpita ke ghar aata hai. Arpita usse seedha aankhon mein nahi dekh paati, lekin Mahesh ki khushi ke liye woh pratha mein shamil hone ke liye majboor hai. Woh Ravi ke saath ek chhoti si baat-cheet shuru karti hai.)
Arpita:
"Ravi, main is pratha ke liye tayar hoon, lekin sirf Mahesh ke liye. Mujhe yeh samajhna hai ke yeh sab mere liye kitna mushkil hai."
Ravi:
(samajhdari se, dheere bolta hai)
"Main samajhta hoon, Arpita. Tumhe koi pressure nahi hai, hum yeh pratha kaise bhi kar sakte hain jo tumhe theek lage."
(Arpita Ravi ko dekhti hai, lekin uska mann Mahesh ke saath hi hai. Woh apni aankhon ke aansu chupati hai, aur pratha ke liye haan keh deti hai.)
**Arpita:** ( aapane Master bedroom me )
*(tez aur jiddi)
"Mahesh, main Ravi ke saath guest room mein nahi jaaungi. Agar raat mein tumhe kuch ho gaya to main kaise sambhalungi tumhe? Tum meri duniya ho, tumhare bina main kuch nahi hoon."
**Mahesh:**
*(shant, lekin samjhdari se)*
"Arpita, tumhe Ravi ke saath waqt bitaana zaroori hai, taaki tum usse samajh sako. Main yeh sab tumhare bhale ke liye kar raha hoon."
**Arpita:**
*(roti hui, lekin ziddi)*
"Main Ravi ko samajhne ke liye yeh sab nahi kar sakti. Tum meri jaan ho, tumhare bina ek raat bhi nahi reh sakti. Main tumhe raat bhar akela nahi chhod sakti."
*(Arpita ke aankhon mein aansu aa jaate hain. Uska pyaar sirf Mahesh ke liye hai, lekin usse yeh bhi pata hai ke Mahesh ki tabiyat ab zyada serious ho rahi hai. Woh Mahesh ko ek maa ki tarah sambhalti hai, lekin is pratha ke wajah se usse lagta hai ke uska pyaar use chhod kar jaa raha hai.)*
**Ravi:**
*(kamre mein aate hue, Arpita ki baat sunta hai)*
"Arpita, agar tum Mahesh ko chhodna nahi chahti to theek hai. Main guest room mein rahoonga, aur tum Mahesh ke paas. Tumhari khushi aur Mahesh ki tabiyat sabse zaroori hai."
*(Arpita Ravi ko dekh kar halke se muskurati hai, lekin uska mann abhi bhi Mahesh ke saath hai. Woh usse raat bhar akela nahi chhod sakti. Ravi bhi ye samajh gaya hai ke Arpita ka pyaar sirf Mahesh ke liye hai.)*
**Arpita:**
"Mahesh, main tumhare bina nahi reh sakti. Agar tumhe kuch ho gaya to main kya karungi? Tum mere dil ka tukda ho."
*(Mahesh Arpita ko samjhaane ki koshish karta hai, lekin Arpita ka pyaar aur uska stubborn nature use Mahesh se door nahi hone deta. Finally, Arpita ek faisla leti hai.)*
**Arpita:**
"Ravi, tum guest room mein rehna. Main Mahesh ke saath rahoongi. Agar tumhein samajhna hai ke main tumhare saath is pratha ko kaise nibhungi, to mujhe samajhna padega ke main apne Mahesh ko akela nahi chhod sakti."
*(Ravi halke se muskurata hai aur Arpita ke faisle ko respect karta hai. Arpita, apne dil ke faisle ke saath Mahesh ke saath raat guzarti hai, jaise ek maa apne bimar bacche ka khayal rakhti hai.)*
Next morning
Mahesh shyam ko call karta hai aur use aur Dr.sangeeta ko add karta hai saab unhe samja deta hai us morning saam confrence call me ek decision lete hai kee haar ek night shyam
aayega Mahesh kee care karane aur use experince bhee hai mahesh ke saath use usakee saree medicines pata hai
same Dr.Sangeeta bhee dr.Khurana se call kaar ke requiest karati hai kee unkee koi nurse bhee rahe on-call support ke liye dr.khurana bhee haa kehata hai
ab saab ek plan karate hai kee aaj evening ko shyam aur on-video call dr.khurana ka jr.assistant resedent dr availble hai
Arpita bhee gussa aur lal aankh dikha ke kuch nahee kehati aur chup chap night me ravi ke saath sone ke liye chali jaati hai ....
aap ko bata du kee kahani me ek time shyam and mahesh ne ek plan banaya tha pichali baar unhone guest bedroom me ek hidden voice and video hd camera chupa ke rakha tha
jiska live feed mahesh ke phone pe aata hai he can watch and listen at same time
ab aage ....