Adultery Biwi ki job ( बीवी की नौकरी )

[Ravi-00]

Updated kab tak aaye ga

 

[MAD DEVIL]

लगता है बीवी ने बिहार सरकार में नौकरी का आवेदन दिया है, 5 6 साल में लिखित परीक्षा और उसके 3 4 साल बाद अपॉइंटमेंट होगा, फिर कहानी आगे बढ़ेगी।

 

[taboolover]

He is a strange writer and i think he will not give update in near future

 

[khemucha]

15 August se shalu ki story writing start hogi ....fir big update milega sabka favrt dekhtey huye ishko phle start or complete krunga to ab ok friends

Plots acche hai aapki kahaniyon ke ... please concentrate on one story at a time ... remember success - 20%inspiration + 80%hard work.

Plots acche hain par youneed to try to add some more sex scenes and sex converstions ... show how the husband copes with his helplessness to stop his wife's adultery .... jaise in Shalu's story we dont know anything ... only some snnipets with Pawan and som ... how did she start ... what was payal's role ... who all has fucked her ... has Payal been fucked by Som and others ... when where ... as the story is from the husband's POV ... you need find a way to weave in explicit revelations ... either he witnesses ,,, over hears the lovers talking ... or overhear girls exchanging stories - girls can be very lurid when exchanging stories in confidence - they will describe every action touch by touch storke by stroke ...

 

[Jankayar]

Plots acche hai aapki kahaniyon ke ... please concentrate on one story at a time ... remember success - 20%inspiration + 80%hard work.

Plots acche hain par youneed to try to add some more sex scenes and sex converstions ... show how the husband copes with his helplessness to stop his wife's adultery .... jaise in Shalu's story we dont know anything ... only some snnipets with Pawan and som ... how did she start ... what was payal's role ... who all has fucked her ... has Payal been fucked by Som and others ... when where ... as the story is from the husband's POV ... you need find a way to weave in explicit revelations ... either he witnesses ,,, over hears the lovers talking ... or overhear girls exchanging stories - girls can be very lurid when exchanging stories in confidence - they will describe every action touch by touch storke by stroke ...

Sab btaya jayega dost....

 

[malikarman]

Sab btaya jayega dost....

Aakhir kab???

 

[Jankayar]

Aakhir kab???

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[malikarman]

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Fir kahani ka kya hoga
Hum sab ke intezar ka kya hoga

 

[Ravi-00]

Ajkl maine 1 casino tricks bnayi hai jisse play krne m mal milta h monthly 1 lac plus bas time Dena padta h 1hour m 1k win so sara time ajkl wahi lag jata hai mera khelne mein 3 patti....

Updates kab tak aaye ga

 

[Kumar Wadhwani]

Updates kab tak aaye ga

Nhe aae ge or koe story parho thanks