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Abhi likhne ja raha hun bhai hope kal night tak mil jaye agar me aaj soya nahi toBro waiting for your nex master peice![]()
Intezar rahega bro , rosy mummy ab had par karegi kyuki kisi ne uske beta aksh ka ankho mai aasu la Diya Jo woh kabhi bardash nhi sakti haiAbhi likhne ja raha hun bhai hope kal night tak mil jaye agar me aaj soya nahi to![]()
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Waiting sir![]()
Late night ayega abhi likh raha hun so jao subah update posted milegaKya hua Tera wada vo kasam vo irada
कहानी के
पृष्ठ पूर्ण होने पर शुभकामनाएं
Agar yaha maya bhi rahti to
Bhai ekdam mast update hai ekdam kadak... Ek taraf Maya aur daisy shock hai ki rosy ko kaisa unka pura past ka bare mai pta hai aur uska saath saath rosy kaisa Pooja ko poo kehkar pukarti hai ... Mazza aayega jab naya aur daisy ye baat Pooja ko batayegi ..
Toh wahi dusri taraf Aksh ko apna trauma yaad aa gya jise woh behosh ho gya aur ab sabki smmat aayegi chaiye woh manager ho chaiye woh hotel ka Malik ko ya chaiye koi bhi security guard ko uss hotel ka..
Ek samay ka liya toh sach mai dil dhak dhak karna laga ki Aksh rosy sa mil payega bhi ya nhi . Lekin hash chalo ye achi baat hai ki aksh mil gya ab shanti Hui hai ....
Ab intezaar rahega next update ka kab rosy kaand karegi aur sabko sabak dikhayegi ki aksh ko kaisa rona Diya , aur ab dekhta hai ki jab aksh hosh Mai aayega toh kya hoga ...
Intezaar rahega next update ka![]()
Ab Pata nahi kitni ladhe girdygi Ye Rosy par anjali kya karegi pats nahi
Nice one![]()
@Lustyboy123 bhai the concept of your story is quite unique and really loved it till the latest update and the characters of rosy and maya are full on thrilling and mad about their loved ones......
Keep the good work going...
Nice update
Phle socha ki agle update me khub comedy hogi par is update ne toh emotional kar diyayrr
Sach me past me kuch bhut bada hua hai
Now I want see beast mode of both moms Anju aur Rosy kya karengi dekna dilchasp hoga
Awesome means awesome update![]()
Can't wait for the next episode
Bahut hi shandar update
Superb fantastic update aaj to kai logon ki akal thikane laga di hai Rozy darling ne or Maya or Desy ke to kya hi kahne waiting for next
nice update
Bhai story to mast ha lakin hero ko asa chutiya to mat dekho
Now I can't wait please let me know when will next update will come please be fast mujhe Ishika or anjali ko dekhna hai vo kya karti hai hotel ke sath
Superb update bhai
Nahi bhai story mast hai story main koi problem sab ka character apne jagah sahi hai story bahut hee achhi hai continue kijiye ga bas
Bhai badhiya cliff hanger pe update khatam kiya nice writing skills
Badhiya upadate ha bhai
Maya ko jane anjane me hi Aksh ka naam to pata pad gaya wahin Rosy to pehle se tayaar ha Aksh ki shadi Maya se karane ke liye pata nahi jab dubara amna samna hoga Aksh ke sath to Maya ka kya reaction hoga
Idhar Aksh babu ko humilate kiya gaya ha Raghu ke dwara lekin use bachaya kis ladki ne
Idhar hotel me bhi kand ho gaya Aksh babu fir apni purani yadein me chale gaye ye kon bar bar konsi ladki aa jati ha aksh ke sapne me
idhar Rosy full angry mod me ha dekhte han ki kya hota manager ka
Bhai itna rulaye ho to badla bhi achhi tarah se lena chahiye....
Aksh ke bodygards kha h jise rosy ne lagya tha
Bro waiting for your nex master peice![]()
Bahut hi emotion se bhara update diya ha aapne
Chapter~ 22 posted is per bhi apna pyar barsa doIntezar rahega bro , rosy mummy ab had par karegi kyuki kisi ne uske beta aksh ka ankho mai aasu la Diya Jo woh kabhi bardash nhi sakti hai![]()
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