Fantasy BIWI NO. 1 ~ A Saga Of Love , Comedy & Vengeance

[Lustyboy123]

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" The Blood Dance "

 

[aru queen]

Uski bat sunker maya ki ankhen gusse se lal ho jati ha or wo kahti ha “ Sidharth roy ab tu dekh kaise tujhe barbad karti ha ye Maya tumhe mene pahle bhi tujhse kah rakha tha ki mujhse panga na le lekin nahi tu nahi man ab dekh Ye Maya kya game khelti ha tere sath “

Chapter~9
(The First Meet )​

Abhi wo dono Daizy or Maya baten kar hi rahe the ki unhe pichhe se kisi ke ghurane ki awaj ati ha jab wo dono pichhe palat ke dekhti ha to wo dekhti ha ki Shreya pichhe se Luna ke muh ko check kar rahi thi



Shreya :- Luna baby jara muh kholo bolo aaa



Luna iske jawab me ghurati ha uske aisa karte hi Shreya uska kan pakad leti jisse Luna ki ek mithi si dard bhari aah nikal jati ha



Shreya:- halke gusse ke sath jyada ghurane ki jarurat nahi ha samjhi warna tere sare dant tod dungi samjhi chal apna muh khol or mujhe dekhne de ki kahin Rajesh ki koi haddi to tere danton me nahi fans gayi warna tujhe cavity ho jayegi



Uski aisi bat per pichhe khadi Maya or Daizy ki ankhen chodi ho jati ha or unhe lagta ha ki unhone kisi bhut ko dekh liya ho wo dono apni ankhen or muh khol ker ye scene dekh rahe the jabki Shreya Luna ka kan pakad ker use khinchte ja rahi thi aisa lag raha tha jaise ki koi maa apni bachhe ki kisi shararat per uske kan pakad kar khinchti ha lekin yahan bachha or koi nahi Luna thi jo abhi kuchh der pehle ek insan ko jinda khakar aa rahi thi aise khunkar janwar ko Shreya kisi bachhe jaisa treat kar rahi thi aisa scene dekhkar Maya or Daizy ki ankhen chodi ho gayi thi unka dhyan tab tuta jab unhe Luna ke karhane ki awaj aayi or tab Luna un dono ko baby sa sweet puppy face banakar dekhne lagi ki jaise keh rahi ho ki mujhe bachao mumma se






Maya ko uski halat per taras aa jata ha akhir wo bhi to uski mumma thi or wo shreya ko apni baton me lene ka try karti ha



Maya :- Didi o meri pyari didi kyun us bechari bachhi ke kan ukhadne per tuli hui ho dekho to us bechari ki bholi shakla ko kaise use dard ho raha ha or Luna ki taraf dekhte hue ha na Luna



Luna uske jawab per apni gardan uper nichhe karte hue haan ka ishara karti ha uski baton ko sunker Shreya uski taraf dekhti ha or halke gusse me kahti ha



Shreya :- bechari or ye tum laparwah ho sakti ho lekin me nahi samjhi agar meri bachhi ko cavity ho gayi to uske itne pyare danton ko ukhadna pad jayega na or aisa me kabhi nahi hone dungi samjhi isliye chup raho samjhi warna agla number tumhara hoga



Maya :- lekin didi use kuchh nahi hoga are uska kaam hi wahi



Shreya :- kya insanon ko khana



Maya :- are yar mera matlab ha ki yar tum doctor hoker nahi samajh rahi wo khati hi wahi ha samjhi



Shreya :- han to sab samajh rahi hun me tum nahi chahti ki me Luna ko check karun samjhi mujhe mat sikhao samjhi tum or Luna apna muh kholo me akhri bar kah rahi hun warna tumhe punishment de dungi



Punishment ka naam sunte hi Luna apna muh kisi agyakari bachhe ki tarah khol deti ha uski aisi harkat per Shreya muskura deti ha or kahti ha that’s like my girl “



Maya ( fusfusate hue ) :- hitler kahin ki



Shreya :- Luna ko dekhte hue kuchh kaha kya tumne



Maya ( jhepte hue ) :- nahi nahi nahi to mene to kuchh nahi kaha



Shreya :- achhi bat ha



Maya :- aap raho idhar hi me ja rahi hun bahar khuli hawa khane aap ghar aa jana me wahi milungi



Shreya :- han thik ha lekin rat ko time se aa jana or apna khayal rakhna



Maya :- han han ab me ja rahi hun bya didi by Daisy milte han ghar per



Shreya and Daisy by thik se jana or Maya udher se chal deti ha



Wo apni car Ferrari F8 Tributo nikalti ha or use dodate hue bahar nikal jati ha








Wroom wroom sadkon per farai dod rahi thi or maya use chala rahi thi sath me gana gunguna rahi thi



Aaja doob jaaun teri
aankhon ke ocean mein
Slow motion mein
Aaja doob jaaun teri
aankhon ke ocean mein
Slow motion mein
hmm Aha aha aha



Or fir man me kahti ha na jane kab miloge tum or kab me tumhari ankhon me dubungi haye tumhari nili aankhen din ka chen or rat ki nind uda di ha meri ab mujhse or bardast nahi hota please bhagwan mila do na use kya sirf sapnon me hi dikhaoge hakikat me nahi milwaoge kya
udhar gana chal raha tha



Aaja doob jaaun teri
aankhon ke ocean mein
Slow motion mein
Aaja doob jaaun teri
aankhon ke ocean mein
Slow motion mein
hmm Aha aha aha



Fir wo man me kahti ha waise sach me sallu bhai ne bhi kya gana nikala ha maja aa gaya sunker or fir wo bhi gane ko gungunate hue driving kiye ja rahi thi ki tabhi use aisa lagta ha ki uska sir ghum raha ha use chakkar ane lagte han wo jaldi se apne hath ko dekhti ha jis per pichhli ladayi ka ek jara sa cut lag gaya tha



Maya :- hass ek to ye bimari lagta ha uske milne per hi thik hogi or uper dekhte hue man me (dekh rahe ho tumhare karan koi bhi mard mujhe chhu nahi sakta aisi to konsi protective shield banayi ha tumne han mana ki me kisi ko khud ko chune nahi dungi lekin aisa bhi koi karta ha kya yar dekho tumhare karan kisi ko hath bhi nahi mila sakti aisa bhi koi apni hone wali biwi ke sath karta ha kya itna possessiveness hona bhi thik nahi )



or fir khud se are maya tu bhi na apne aap se hi bate kiye ja rahi ha bawali bawali ho gayi ha tu pyar me bawali tabhi to Daisy tujhe chidhati rahti ha



Fir are yar sala wo fight or frustration me me dawa lena hi bhul gayi agar didi ko pata pad gaya to meri kher nahi are kahan rakh di mene dawa wo abhi idhar udhar dekh hi rahi thi ki uske chakkar badhne lagte han or wo apni gadi ko dheere karne lagti ha lekin tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi Maya ek sunsan sadak per thi or wo behosh ho chuki thi dur us sunsan sadak per koi nahi tha

Author's POV





Tabhi us sadak per se ek car ghumte hue udhar ane lagti ha us car me ladka betha hua tha jo ki dikhne me bahut handsome or charming tha ankhen uski bilkul nili thi chehra ek dum masum tha or wo apni gadi ko masti me chalata aa raha tha uske pichhe hi usse chupate hue uske guards ki gadi bhi aa rahi thi jisse wo ladka anjan tha



(Ab tak aap to samjh hi gaye honge ki ye Apna aksh ha jo ki aise hi long drive pe nikla tha is bat se anjan ki aaj iski long drive kisi ke sapne ko hakikat me badlne wali thi )



Aksh apni dhun me hi gadi badhiya aram se chalata aa raha tha kyonki uski rosy mumma ne kaha tha ki gadi aram se hi chalayen bhagaye nahi or Aksh apna mumma’s boy ha yo kaise unki bat ko nakare to abhi Aksh apni car ko chalate hue badh hi raha tha ki use sadak per ek

Ferrari F8 Tributo khadi dikhayi di pehle to Aksh us car ki sunderta me kho gaya



Aksh :- haye itni sunder or badhiya car lagta ha bahut mehengi bhi hogi lekin ye car is sunsan sadak per aise kyon khadi ha khin usme koi to nahi kahin kisi ko kuchh ho to nahi gaya kya mujhe uski madad karni chahiye aise hi soch vichar karte hue Aksh gadi us car ke pichhe hi rok deta ha use aisa karte dekhkar pichhe guards bhi apni car rok dete han or us per najar rakhne lagte han



Aksh abhi bhi apni car me betha hua tha wo soch raha tha ki use bahar jana chahiye ya nahi

Fir wo apne man me sochta ha to use apne past ki kuchh buri yaden dikhni lagti ha jinhe dekhkar Aksh ek dam se ghabra jata ha or wo faisla leta ha ki nahi wo yahan se chala jaye ga wo apni car start hi karne wala tha ki use apni Rosy mumma ki kahi ek bat yad aa jati ha



Rosy :- baby agar tumhe kabhi bhi kisi ki help karne ka moka mile to tumhe pichhe nahi hatna ha kya pata tumhari ki gayi help kisi ki jan bacha jaye or fir tumhare sath bhi kuchh achha ho samjhe



Aksh :- samjh gaya aunty me hamesha dusron ki help karunga jisse fir mere sath bhi achha hi hoga



Rosy :- that’ s like my boy



Apni yadon ko yad karte hue uske chehre per ek muskan aa jati ha or eo faisla karta ha ki wo us car wale ki madad jarur karega wo apni car ko band karke gate kholkar bahar nikalta ha or us car ki taraf jane lagta ha or wo car ki window per thap thap hath se khatkata ha



Aksh :- are koi ha window nichhe karo kya koi ha is car me



Kafi der tak aisa karne se bhi koi response nahi ata to so sochta ha lagta ha jo bhi ha is car me so gaya ha chalo use disturb nahi karte han or wo wapas jane lagta ha lekin tabhi uske chote se dimag ki batti jalti ha or usko ek idea ata ha or wo man me sochta ha “ kahin koi is car me behosh to nahi ho gaya han aisa bhi ho sakta ha mene to ye socha hi nahi lekin ab soch liya na yar Aksh tu kitna smart ha mumma will proud of you “



Or wo aspas kuchh dhundne lagta ha jisse ki car ki shishe ko toda ja sake kyonki aise to wo khul nahi raha tha kafir der dhundne ke bad use ek pathar milta ha jise uthakar wo lata ha or wo car ke shishe per marne hi wala tha ki uske chhote se dimag me fir ek bat ati ha “ ek minute ek minute dikhne me to ye car bahut mehengi lag rahi ha kahin ise todker mene galti kar di to or iske malik ne mujhse paise mang liye to me kaise dunga mere pas to paise bhi nahi ha abhi wo to mumma no. 2 ke pas ha “



fir wo thodi der tak aise hi sochta rahta ha ki shisha tode ki nahi fir kafi der sochne ke bad wo us car wale se apne man me kahta ha “ dekho tum jo koi bhi ho abhi mujhe tumhari madad karne ke liye ye shisha todna padega han thoda mehnga ha lekin meri mumma no. 2 tumhare sare paise de dengi isliye mind mat karna thik ha ab me ise todne ja raha hun “ or so jor se us pathar se shishe per marta ha jisse car ki window chakna chur ho jati ha or aksh uske andar hath dalkar car ka gate khol deta ha or gate kholkar dekhta ha to wo dekhta ha ki us car me ek khubsurat si ladki driving seat per thi bal uske halke lal rang ke the dikhne me wo kisi pari ki tarah thi use dekhte hi to ek bar ko to Aksh mantra mugdh ho gaya lekin jab usne dekha ki ladki us car me behosh padi ha to to wo use uthane hi ja raha tha ki tabhi use kuchh yad aya or wo pichhe hat kar kuchh sochne laga “ are Aksh kya karne jaa raha tha tu fir se wahi pehle wali harkat karne ja raha tha tu tujhe yad ha na pehle kya hua tha ye ladkiya bas dikhne me sunder hoti ha kya pata iske man me bhi kya ho kya pata ye bhi mujhe kidnap kar le nahi nahi me iski madad nahi krunga “ or wo udhar se jane hi laga ki fir uski mumma ke shabd uske mind me gunjne lage or wo wahin ruk gaya uske man me dwand chhid gaya ki wo uski madad kare ki nahi kare kafi soch vichar karne ke bad usne socha ki use uski madad karni chahiye shayd ye un jaisi na ho



( Author be like Aksh itna mat socha ker warna soch ko bhi sharm aa jaye or tum sab idhar mat dekho kahani padho han to hum kahan the )



Aksh uss uthane ke liye jaise hi apna hath uske hath se touch karta ha ha use aisa lagta ha ki use kisi ne bijli ka jhatka diya ho or use kuchh drashya dikhne lagte han



Ek bachha jo mushkil se 5 se 6 mahinon ka hoga wo ek orat ki god me tha or wo bahut roye ja raha tha tabhi udhar ghumti hui ek 1 se 2 sal ki bachhi apne nanhe nanhe kadam lekar udhar ati ha ir us bachhe ko chup karane ke liye uska hath pakad kar apni tutlayi awaj me ek bat kahti ha “ mele pheonix chhant ho jao fil me tumhe thub thilaungi “ or uski bat sunker wo bachha bhi shant ho jata ha or khilkhilaker hansne lagta ha jise dekhkar us orat ke muh per bhi ek pyari si muskan aa jati ha



Is drasya ko dekhkar hi ek dum se Aksh ki ankhen khul jati ha or wo apne as pas dekhta ha ki wo kahan ha tabhi wo apne man me sochta ha “ ye kon tha or mujhe kya dikh raha tha kahin ye ladki koi bhut wut to nahi ha na mumma “ or aisa sochkar hi wo dar jata ha or udhar se bhagne ki koshish karta ha lekin tabhi kuchh sochkar wo ruk jata ha or sochta ha



( Readers be like Aksh bhai tum sochte bahut jyada ho yar oh sorry sorry kahani per dhyan do or han like kar dena kahani ko chalo ab dubara padho)



“ ek minute ek bar fir check karun kya kahin ye koi bhut nahi ho agar dubara bhi yahi hua to beta Aksh patli gali pakadke nikal lena idhar se kahin koi bhutni tera shikar na kar de “ or wo fir udhar us ladki ko uthane lagta ha or is bar hath lagane per use jhatka nahi lagta ha ye dekhkar wo sochta ha “ hashh chalo ye koi bhutni to nahi ha “ fir wo use hath lagane hi wala tha ki uski past ki darawni memories use effect karne lagti ha or wo dar se kanpne lagta ha lekin jab wo us ladki ko chhuta ha to uska dar kahin gayab ho jata ha Aksh aisa dekhker shock ho jata ha “ ye kya ise chhune se mujhe wo dar nahi lag raha jo mujhe baki ladkiyon se lagta ha aisa kyon “ kafi der sochne ke bad wo apne man se is bat ko jhatak deta ha or us ladki ko uthane lagta ha wo use joron joron se uthane lagta ha ek do bar to usne use sir per do char tapli bhi mar di tab bhi nahi uthi kafi der mashakkat karne ke bad bhi wo ladki ankhen nahi kholti



Aksh :- are yar kaisi ladki ha aisa bhi to konsi si nind aa rahi ha ise jo ye uth nahi rahi lagta ha jhatke se behosh ho gayi hogi ya fir is sunsan sadak per dar ke mare behosh ho gayi hogi bechari kitni masum ha lagta ha isko mere ko hi bachana padega



Wo dusri side jata ha or car ko kholker driver wali seat se use uthane hi lagta ha ki uske man me sk khayal ata ha “ ek minute lekin ye ha kon iska naam kya ha or ye rahti kahan ha ye jane bager me ise iske ghar kaise drop karunga “ fir wo uske aspas koi chij dhundne lagta ha jisse ki wo pata kar sake ki ye ladki kahan rahti ha tabhi use ek mobile milta ha wo us mobile ko uthane hi wala tha ki wo mobile ring hone lagta ha or us per ek naam flash hone lagta ha ‘‘ Hitler didi ‘‘



( Ye behosh ladki or koi nahi Maya hi thi or use call karne wali Shreya )





Us naam ko dekhker Aksh apne man me sochta ha “ ye kaisa naam ha yar kya kisi ka aisa bhi naam hota ha ab ye to behosh ha kya me iska phone utha lun utha hi leta hun ye jo bhi ha inse is ladki ka pata puchh lunga or ise iske ghar drop karke me chala jaunga “



Wo us ring ho rahe mobile ko utha leta ha or kahta ha



On call



Aksh :- Hello hitler didi



Samne wala uski awaj sunker do bar shock hota ha pehla shock to is bat se ki Maya ke phone se kisi mard ki awaj or dusra us mard dwara use hitler didi bolna wo turant bolti ha



Shreya :- mind your language han kon ho tum or Maya kahan ha kahin tumne uske sath kuchh kar to nahi diya na dekho tum jante nahi ho ki me kon hun



Pehle to askh uski bat sunker thoda ghabra jata ha fir aram se bolta ha



Aksh :- wo sorry sorry please me aisa ab nahi karunga me age se apka kya kisi ka phone nahi uthaunga me ja raha hun ise yahin chhodker aap khud hi aa jana or ye kya naam ha Maya han inhe bhi apne sath le jana thik ha bya

Uski bat sunker shreya ghabra jati ha



Shreya :- are are aise kaise bye pehle ye batao ki tum kon ho or wahan kya kar rahe ho or maya ko kya hua



Aksh :- nahi aap daant rahi ho me nahi bataunga me ja raha hun inhe chhodker app khud hi aa jana



Shreya ( ghabraker ) :- nahi nahi mera aisa matlab nahi tha tum mujhe batao to sahi ki tum kahan ho taki me meri chhoti behen ko lene aa sakun



Aksh :- aise nahi bataunga



Shreya :- fir kaise bataoge dekho tum mujhe jante nahi ho



Aksh :- dekha aap fir dantne lagi me nahi bataunga



Shreya frustration me apna sir peet leti ha ki kon pagal ha ye or wo khud ko control karte hue lambi si sans lete hue aram se kahti ha



Shreya :- achha mere bap



Aksh :- lekin me bap thodi hun meri to abhi shadi bhi nahi hui to me bap kaise



Shreya apne sir deewar me mar leti ha ki kon ha ye pagal fir shant hoker lambi si sans lekar badi dheemi or pyari si awaj me kahti ha



Shreya :- achha to aap mujhe bataye ki me kya karun



Aksh :- aapki mumma ne aapko ek bat nahi sikhayi



Shreya :- kyaa ?



Aksh :- ki kisi se request jarne se pehle bolte han please



Shreya jo hamesha shant rahti thi aaj tak hi use kabhi itna gussa aya ho wo apne gusse ko laghbhag control hi kiye hui thi aaj kisi ne use itna gussa dila diya tha ki agar Aksh aaj uske samne hota to wo uska sir fod deti



Shreya :- PLEASEEE KRIPYA KARKE batayen AAP OR MERI CHHOTI BEHEN KAHAN HA



Aksh :- achha achha bata raha hoon ab aap aise bar bar request karengi to mujhe to batana hi padega na ab aise request karke mujhe sharminda na karen me chhota hun aapse or bade chhito se request nahi karte



Shreya ek bar dhyan se phone ko dekhti ha or fir khud ko dekhti ha ki usne sahi suna na fir apne man me kahti ha kya pagal admi ha ye or fir jor se bolti ha



Shreya :- BOLOO



Aksh :- aap fir se chilane lagi



( Shreya be like maro mujhe maro nahi hum pagal ha bc )



Shreya :- please kripya karke hame batayen ki hamari choti behen abhi kahan or kaisi ha aapko badi kripa hogi



Aksh :- kya hogi



Shreya :- are yar batao na



Aksh :- to han wo kya ha na me apni car se ghumne nikla tha or fir mujhe na is sunsan sadak per ye nayi nahi chamakti hui gadi dikhayi di ek bat bolun sach me aapki gadi bahut badhiya ha hitler didi mene itni sunder gadi kabhi nahi dekhi or han me kahan tah han fir mene dekha ki wo gadi bahut der se udhar hi khadi ha to mene socha ki kahin koi kidnap karne walon ki koi chal to nahin isliye me udhar se jane laga lekin tabhi mujhe mere chhote se dimag me ek vichar aya ki


Shreya :- tumne sahi kaha


Aksh :- kya


Shreya :- ki tumhara dimag chhota sa ha or uski bat sunker wo halka sa muskura di use bhi ab uski baten pasand ane lagi thi use aisa lag raha tha ki koi connection ha un dono ka



Aksh() :- apna muh fulate hue aap mera majak uda rahi ho jao me apse bat nahi karta



Shreya :- achha achha sorry bolo age kya hua fir



Aksh :- han fir mujhe mere chhote se dimag me ye vichar aya ki kahin is car me koi behosh to nahi or usko meri jarurat to nahi isliye me use dekhne chala aya hun na me dekho kitna hoshiyar



Shreya :- han han tum bahut hoshiyar ho ab age bolo ( man me pagal kahin ka lekin baten bahut pyari karta ha hihihi are ye me kya sochne lagi )



Aksh :- fir mujhe meri mumma ki bat yad aa gayi ki hame hemasha dusron ki mada karni chahiye ki kya pata humari ki gayi madad dusron ke liye vardan sabit ho or fir hamare sath bhi kuchh achha ho



Shreya :- ( man me chalo dil ka to achha ha bhale hi pagal ha ) bahut badhiya or pyari bat sikhayi ha tumhari mumma ne



Aksh :- han na meri mumma bahut pyari ha han to jab me us car ke pas chala gaya to mene dekha ki wo car to lock ha or mene bahut khatkhataya lekin kisi ne response nahi kiya isliye mene or age ka sochkar Aksh dar gaya



Shreya :- or fir age bolo kya hua kya kiya tumne



Aksh :- wo wo sorry mujhe maf kar dijiye

Uski bat sunker shreya ko tension ho jati ha ki kahin maya ke sath kuchh ho to nahi gaya wo tapak se bolti ha lekin thodi ghabrati hui



Shreya :- kyun ? Aisa kya kar diya tumne



Aaj ke liye itna hi guys agar update pasand aya ho to like kar dena or comment bhi kar dena update ab aise hi ate rahenge hansi majak or pyar bhare or fir romantic bhi to sath bane rahe

Bahut hi badhiya or funny update diya ha aapne

 

[king1969]

Bahut hi lajawab update

 

[Lustyboy123]

Chapter~9 posted

Gys thank you aapke itne pyare comments ke liye mujhe to laga galiyan pad rahi hongi aisi bachkani writing ke liye

Next update tomorrow night

 

[Lustyboy123]

Behad khubsurat or lajawab update waiting for next

Thank you so much

 

[krish1152]

nice story aur start bhi bahut achhi hai

 

[Lustyboy123]

Bhai update mast tha ....

Thank you so much

Lekin inki baate are ek samay ka leeya laga ki shreya aj apni dinagi Shakti ko degi ... ... Kya conversation hai sahi mai hasi aa gya. ...

Abhi ruk jao do deviyan or kudengi is conversation me tab or maja ayega

Aur ab dekhta hai kya hoga aage kya Maya zan payegi aksh ka saath kya hua tha past mai aur kaisa Maya help karegi Mazza aayega

Isme abhi bahut time ha

Thanks for the support

 

[Lustyboy123]

Msst update bro

Thank you so much

Le hero ko bhot hi innocent dikha dia tumne to yr
Nice

Kabhi kabhi innocent hone me bhi maja ha sab log jyada pyar dete han lekin kuchh us innocent ka fayda utha lete han

Mzza Aya last walle part me
Fun tha

Abhi or maja ayega

Thanks for the support

 

[Lustyboy123]

Shaandar Mast Lajwab Funny update
Aakash ne to sheya ko pura pagal bana diya

Thank you so much abhi do ko or pagal karega

Etna kaun sochta hai

Mene to kaha tha aksh itna mat soch lekin uske chhotu se dimag me bat ghusti hi nahin

Thanks for the support

 

[Lustyboy123]

Bahut badhiya.... Aksh ka character ek natural seedhe saade bachche ka ha.... Mature nahin bachpane wala

Pehli bar kisi ne hero ka naam sahi liya ha hey kamdev kahan the aap ab tak

Mature hoga shayd last tak to me usko mature bana hi dunga

Achchha laga

Aapko achha laga hame bahut khushi hui

Keep posting

chalu ha

 

[Lustyboy123]

Nice n fantastic

Thank you so much