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Chapter-8 kal nahi to parson tak aa jayega
Chapter-8 kal nahi to parson tak aa jayega
Update ????
Shaandar Emotional updatePrologue
Ek room me bahut sare computers lage hue the or us room me bahut sare log kam kar rahe the . Us room me sirf shanti thi sir awaj aa rahi thi to keybords ki key ke press hone ki. Usi room me ek lady khadi hui thi. Jiski nigahen un computer screen par thi. Uski ankhon me bahut tez tha jaise ki abhi is duniya ko aag laga degi.
Usi lady ke pas ek or lady thi jo age me usse thodi badi thi. Jiski ankhon se asun nikal rahe the lekin wo unhe roke hue thi. Jaise ki un asuon ko behne na dena chahti ho. Pahli wali lady computer ki screen ko dekhkar bahut jor se kahti ha
Lady 1 :- FUCKING DAME ITTT. jaldi se pata lagao uska dhundo use kaise bhi karke i fucking want result jaldi jaldi
Sab uski awaj sunker ek var ko kanp kate han uske pas khadi dusri lady kahti ha ki
Lady 2 :- Shant ho jao baby use kuchh nahi hoga hum use dhund lenge . Wo jald hi mil jayega ausa kahkar wo us pahli lady ko gale lagakar satvana dene ki koshish karti ha jisse wo pehli lady thoda shant hoti ha. Lekin dar to us pehli wali lady ko bhi tha ki bahut time ho gaya ha or abhi tak uska pata nahi chala ha. Uski bhi ummid kam hoti ja rahi thi lekin ummid usne bhi nahi chhodi thi.
Tabhi us room ka darwaja jor se khulta ha or ek or lady enter karti ha
Lady 3:- yahan itna sab ho gaya or app logon ne mujhe batana jaruri nahi samjha. Kya me aapke liye parayi ho gayi hoon haan. Or aisa kahte hue iski ankhon me asun aa jate han.
Use yun rota dekhkar jo badi lady thi wo pehli eali lady ko chhodkar use jaldi se gale laga leti ha or use satvana dene lagti ha.
Lady 2:- nahi bchha tum to meri behen jaisi hi ho tumhe kyun paraya samjhenge hum. Haan wo to hum tumhe pareshan nahi karna chahte the isliye nahi bataya tha .
Lady 3 ( rote hue ) :- lekin me aap se naraj hun or me aapko tabhi maf karungi jab aap *********. Ye karogi.
Ye sunke us lady 2 ke chehre per bhi halki muskan aa gayi
Lady 2 :- chal thik ha lekin pehle use dhund le fir haan
Lady 3 :- apne asun pochhte hue thik ha me use dhundti hu. Aisa kahkar wo sare pc ka commands apne hath me lene lagti ha or apna laptop nikal kar use sare system se connect karke us laptop par jaldi jaldi hath chalane lagti ha uski ankhen laptop screen per hi thi or baki sabki ankhen us lady per.
30 minute ke bad computer screen per awaj aati ha the location is detected
Ye dekhte hi first lady jaldi se bahar nikalti ha or apni car nikalkar full speed me location ki taraf jane lagti ha. Ye dekhkar lady 2 jaldi kahati ha force 2 ko jaldi location per bhejo.
Some times later
Jagah jagah aag lagi hui thi lashe hi lashe giri hui thi un lashon ke dher ke bich ek lady khadi hui thi khun se uske kapde lal ho gaye the or uski ankhen uper asman ko dekh rahi thi . Kyonki asman me ek choper ud raha tha or uski khidki per ek lady bethi hui thi jiske muh per ek evil muskan thi or usi ke sath uske hath me tha ek jawan ladke ka sharir jo behosh tha. Us ladke ko dekhkar nichhe wali lady ki ankhon me chinta dikhne lagti ha. Or uski aisi ankhen dekhkar wo uper wali lady ki muskan or gahri ho jati ha
Lady 4:- O may may dekho to kisi ki ankhon me bebasi lachari dikh rahi ha. Aisa kahkar wo lady jor jor se hasne lagti ha
Niche khadi lady kuchh karne keiye apni gun nikalne hi wali hoti ha ki
Lady 4 :- na na na na aisa bhulkar bhi na karna warna or aisa kahkar wo us ladke per gun tan deti ha jisse wo nichhe wali lady apni gun niche kar leti ha or aisa karkar wo choper wali lady dheere se apna chehra us ladke ke muh ki taraf karti ha or niche wali lady ko dekhkar apni jibh nikalkar us ladke ka gal chat leti.
Ye scene dekhkar niche wali lady ka khoon khol jata ha or wo jor se kahti ha
Lady :- CHHOD DO USE WARNA TUMHARA NAMONISHAN IS DUNIYA SE MITA DUNGI
ye sunker us uper wali lady ki muskan or evil ho jati ha or wo niche dekhkar kahti ha
Lady 4:- ha ha ha ha ha ha itna gussa ohoohohoho lekin me to ise lekar jaa rahi hun or mujhe rokne ki koshish na karna warna tumhe pata hi ha ki iske kya parinam ho sakte han agar tumme dum ha to bacha sake to bacha lena ise wo kya kahta ha ye tumhe han han yad aya
“ BIWI NO. 1 “
Update bahut jald milega
Shaandar UpdateChapter~ 1
(The Beginning)
2024
New york
New york sapno ka shahar jahan ana har kisi ka sapna hota ha USA ka ye shahar jahan hamesha chahal kadmi rahti ha log apne sapnon ko poora karne ate han. Usi shahar ke rihayshi ilake me ek banglow tha jo ki dikhne me bahut luxury tha
use dekhkar hi kag raha tha ki usme rahne wale log bahut hi ameer honge usi bangle ke ek room tha jo ki kisi princess ki tarah lag raha tha us room me bed per ek ladki ulti soyi hui thi dikhne me wo bahut khubsurat lag rahi thi uski fair skin or uske halke lal reshmi bal or uski halki lal ankhen or uska cute chehra jo kisi ko bhi apna deewana bana de
sharir per usne sirf red bra penty pahni hui thi or wo din duniya se bekhabar soyi hui thi tabhi uska darwaja nok hota ha or koi us darwaje ko kholker andar aa jata ha andar ane wali bhi ek ladki thi jiski age lagbhag 28 years thi uski sunderta ka bhi koi varnan nahi tha dikhne me wo bhi bahut sunder thi wo jab samne bed per padi ladki ko dekhti ha to apna sir peet leti ha or bolti ha “ kya karun me is ladki ka abhi tak nahi uthi subah ke 8 baj gaye han “ fir wo bed ki taraf jati ha or us bed wali ladki ko uthane lagti ha “ Maya Maya utho bachha subah ho gayi ha or kita sougi ab uth bhi jao suraj bhi ab sir ke uper aa gaya ha “ uski awaj sunker Maya nind me hi budbudate hue bolti ha
Maya :- thodi der or sone do na shreya didi
Shreya :- are or kitna sougi chalo utho ab bahut time ho gaya ha ab or aisa kahkar wo Maya ko jabardasti uthane lagti ha
Maya apni nind ka tyag karke dheere se angdai leke uthti ha or apni adhkhuli ankhon se se shreya ko bolti ha
Maya :- good morning didi
Shreya :- good morning ki bachhi ab morning nahi rahi chalo jaldi se utho or tayaar ho jao yumhe iffice bhi jana ha uski bat sunker
Maya :- are to usme kya ha didi me hi udhar ki boss hun or fir hame waise bhi next week wapas India jana ha mom ke pas
Shreya :- han to tab tak kya tum kuchh kam nahi karogi kya are itni badi businees woman ho log bag darte han tumse or tum idhar bachhon jaisi harkaten kar rahi ho or hume mom ke pas next week jana ha tab tak tumhe apne kam per dhyan dena chahiye suna ha agle 2 hafton me best business man ka award decide hone wala ha or wo hamesha ki tarah hume hi milna chahiye uski aisi bate sunker Maya shreya ko pichhe se pakad leti ha
Maya :- are didi tum bhi na bahut tension leti ho are chill didi wo hamesha ki tarah hume hi milega kyonki MAYA MALHOTRA ne kabhi har manna sikha hi nahi
Uski aisi bat sunker shreya kahti ha
Shreya :- han me janti hun ki the greatest Maya Malhotra ne kabhi har nahi mani lekin uske liye kam bhi karna padta ha meri pyari behna
Uski aisi baten sunker Maya shreya pichhe se hug karke apne hoth uski gardan per rakh deti ha or suductive voice me bolti ha
Maya :- didi tum bhi na bahut tension leti rahti ho chalo tumhari tension dur kar deti hun or aisa kahkar wo shreya ki gardan ko kiss karne lagti ha us per apne hoth firane lagti ha or spne hath le jaakr shreya ke boobs per rakh deti ha or unhe halke se daba deti ha
Maya ke is achanak hamle se shreya bhi machalne lagti ha or uski ek halki ahh nikal jati ha or wo maya se kahti ha
Shreya :- are maya ye kya kar rahi ha subah subah shuru ho gayi kya chal hath pehle naha dhokar fresh ho ja or breakfast kar le
Maya :- are didi break fast to hota rahega pehle mujhe aapko thoda sa to pyar kar lene do or aisa kahakar wo shreya ke boobs jor se daba deti ha jisse shreya ki ek halki chikh nikal jati ha tabhi
Trin trin trin trin phone ki ring bajne lagti ha
Or shreya ko hosh ata ha or or wo maya ko khud se alag karti ha or maya se bolti ha
Shreya :- are kamini lesbo kahin ki khud ke sath mujhe bhi lesbo banane pe tuli hui ha wo udhar tera phone baj raha ha use utha pahle
Uski aisi awaj sunker maya masti me
Maya :- are didi ek din sath me maja karenge apne pati ke sath abhi dekhun to kon apni gand marwa raha ha jisne subah subah mera mood kharab kar diya or wo phone ghumakar dubara call mila deti ha samne se ring jate hi call pick ho jata ha or samne se koi ladki bolti ha
Ladki :- hello mam jaldi se office aa jaiye
Maya :- kya hua daisy kyon subah subah phone kiya aisa kya ho gaya
Daisy :- mam we betrayed
Uski aisi awaj sunker maya ke bhav badal jate han or wo apna mukh sakht kar leti ha or cold voice me bolti ha
Maya :- who
Uski awaj sunker samne se bhi cold voice me hi jawab ata ha
Daisy :- Mr. Bedi
Naam sunte hi maya ke bhav badal jate han or wo kahti ha
Maya :- I will come in 1 hour or aisa kahkar wo call cut kar deti ha
Fir wapas shreya ki taraf dekhkar masti me kahti ha to hum kahan the didi
Shreya :- kahin nahi the hum or kya hua kya kaha daisy ne
Maya :- kuchh nahi kisi ke par nikal aye han bas uske par ko kuchalna ha use chhodo or yahan aao aap didi or aisa kahkar wo shreya oer jhapatta marti ha lekin shreya usse bach jati ha
Shreya ( hanste hue ) or masti nahi maya chalo ab fresh hoker jaldi se tayaar ho jao
Maya ( natak karte hue) didi aap to mujhse pyar hi nahi karti
Shreya ( apni ankhen ghumate hue ) :- are baba tujhse pyar nahi karungi to or kisse karungi
Maya:- tapak se humare pati se
Shreya :- humara
Maya :- or nahi to kya didi na jane kab milega mujhe wo jo jise me beshumar pyar karungi or usse me khub sex karungi fir tumhara or un dono ka number hum sab ek sath rahenge or jindagi ke khoob maje karenge aap to meri problem janti hi ho or aapka mujhe pata hi ha or un dono ka mujhe pata ha unhone mujhe hi ye kam de rakha ha ki sabke liye dulha me dhundoon or wo dono kutiya na jane kidhar apni gand marwa rahi ha
Uski aisi bat kahte hi do jagah do ladkiyon ko ek sath chhinke ayin or unke mukh se ek sath nikla lagta ha koi yad kar raha ha fir nahin nahi kon yad karega hume fir kuchh sochkar wo kutiya NEVER
( Chalo chalo apni kahani per ate han han to hum kahan the )
Shreya :- or aisa tujhe kyun lagta ha ki wo hum sabke liye man jayega
Uski aisi bat sunker maya attitude me
Maya :- agar nahi manega to manwa lenge nahi to sidha kidnap sara kam hi khatam
Shreya :- or mom kuchh nahi kahengi kya
Maya :- are to usme kya ha mom ko bhi apne sath rakh lenge waise bhi mom hamare bager akeli kya karegi
Shreya :- or uski maa ko ye sab pata pad gaya to
Maya :- uske liye mene pehle se hi plan karke rakha ha uski maa ko apne jhanse me le lenge or unko bhi pata lenge simple or kuchh
Shreya ko apni ankhon per vishwas nahi ho raha tha use lag raha tha ki ye samne khada insan koi bhoot ha
Shreya :- maya tera irada kya ha
Maya :- mera irada ha ek harem banane ka jisme hum sab sath rahen wo eklota prince or hun sab princess sab milkar usse pyar karenge sab khush rahenge na kisi ka dar kisi ko pyar ki kami mahsus nahi hongi or jaisi hamari kismat ha mujhe lagta ha koi special banda hi banakar rakha hoga humare liye jiska naam me rakhungi jaanu or usko apne aghosh me chhupa lungi is duniya ki burayi se us per kabhi anch nahi ane dungi
Shreya :- or agar wo kisi or ko pyar karta hoga to
Uski aisi baten sunker ek bar ko maya ka dil tut gaya lekin aisa bolker shreya ko bhi achha nahi laga uske dil me bhi halka dard hua or usne bola
Shreya :- I am sorry maya mujhe aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha
Maya :- its ok didi agar wo kisi or ko bhi pyar karta hoga to tab ki tab dekhi jayegi lekin mujhe pura vishwas ha wo hame milega jarur jo is husna ko bahut pyar dega or apni chap lagayega
Shreya :- or fir mera kya hoga
Maya :- are didi tumhare sath to threesome karenge full to dhamaal bole to rapchik ek me ek hamara pati or tum akeli bhut maja ayega lekin sala pehle mile to sahi na jane konse kone me chhipkar betha ha kab milega wo or kab use apna banungi me or kab humari suhagrat hogi
Shreya :- are bap re itni lambi planing karke rakhi ha tumne
Maya :- or nahi to kya didi sab set ha jis din suhagrat ka decide hoga usko leke nikal lungi akele or ek island book karungi jis per hamare siwa koi nahi hoga bas fir kya ha room se bahar nikalne nahi dungi use
Shreya :- are us bechare ki jan legi kya kamini
Maya :- jan nahi wo to meri lega hay didi kab milega wo jiski ankhon me dekhkar me kho jaungi uske chehre me kho jaungi jo ki sirf hamare liye bana hoga sirf hamare liye kisi or ke nahi
Uski aisi bat sunker
Shreya :- Maya jaise hamare dushman ha agar use kisi ne kuchh kar diya to ye sochkar hi mujhe dar lagta ha
Uski aisi bat sunker Maya ko gussa aa jata ha uski ankhen gusse se lal ho jati ha or wo bahut gusse bhari awaj me kahti ha
Maya:- " AGAR KISI NE USE CHHUNE TO DUR USKI OR AANKH UTHANE KI BHI KOSHISH KI TO YE MAYA USKA NAMO NISHAN IS DHARTI SE MITA DEGI "
Uski aisi gusse bhari awaj sunker ek pal ko to shreya bhi ghabra jati ha fir Maya ko gale lagakar shant karwa ke bolti ha
Shreya :- shant gaddhari bheem shant koi use nahi hath lagayega meri maa na jane konsi mata aa jati ha iske andar chal ab jaldi se tayaar hoja or fir hum dono chalte han aaj office waise bhi me aaj free hi hun chalo udhhar office me hi time pass kar lenge sath me
Uski asisi bate sunker maya khilkhilakar hansti hui bathroom me fresh hone chali jati ha or fresh hoker akar tayaar hoker shreya ke sath chal deti ha office apni car me
Aaj ke liye itna hi agar ye chapter pasand aya ho to like kar dena milte han jald hi
Supper fantastic story janab
Thanks bhaiSupper fantastic update janab
Thanks broBahut hi sandar story he bro
Jal hi deta hun jara busy ho gaya thaWaiting for next update
Aaj likhne bethunga broUpdate ????
Thanks broShaandar Emotional update
Jald hi
Chapter 7
Thanks bhaiShaandar Update
Sab pata pad jayega age broMaine aaj hi kahani padna shuru ki. Par ab kai sawal hai, heroin hero se 2 saal badi hai, incest angal abhi explore hoga. Sapno ke raaz khulenge. Jaha tak hero weak or heroin strong hai.
Kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta ha ye story hi pointless ha mene to bas maje ke liye story start kardi its Only fantasy world real world nahi ha ye to yahan kuchh bhi ho sakta ha
Kuch baate point less hai.
Shayd age bhi hoDialogue repeat ho rahe hai.
Thanks you so much bro bas maje ke liye padho me bhi maje ke liye hi likh raha hun itna jyada bhi serious na ho jao by the way thanks hope age bhi sath bane rahoge
I'm waiting and excited for next updates.
Good luck
Agar aisa hua to kahani ki theme hi badal jayegi bhai or kahani ka naam bhi sahi nahi bethega to jo mene socha ha wo to me change nahi karne wala kyonki plot wahi ha or physically strong ha wo lekin mentally wo ek innocent ha or aisa hi wo bana rahega kyonki baki chije agar bata di to spoiler ho jayega baki to thanksMake hero strong, physically and mentally.
Brother story puri karna. Would like to know climax of this storySab pata pad jayega age bro
Kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta ha ye story hi pointless ha mene to bas maje ke liye story start kardi its Only fantasy world real world nahi ha ye to yahan kuchh bhi ho sakta ha
Shayd age bhi ho
Thanks you so much bro bas maje ke liye padho me bhi maje ke liye hi likh raha hun itna jyada bhi serious na ho jao by the way thanks hope age bhi sath bane rahoge