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[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Isse accha to update hi Nahi dete
Ya fir ek sath 5-6 update de dete

Otherwise
Starting acchi hai but size bad

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

bhai maine same aisi hi story kahi toh padi hai... but jane do ise complete karana bich main mat chodana.. aur ha start acha hai

Brother iis base per ek story is site per start hui thi and sayad us per 50-60 update bhi Aaye the
Otherwise
Dekhte hai aage Kaya hota hai

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

UPDATE 1 the end and the beginning
kale badal chaa rahe the mosam bahut kharab tha kisi tufaan ke aane ki ashanka thi wahi ek khaai ki choti pe ek car aake ruki jisme se ek ladka aur ek aadmi jiske hath me kuch papers aur ek gun thi
AADMI - jaldi se in papers par sign krdo warna ham tumhari bhen ko mardenge ram agr apni bhen ki jaan bachana cahte he to in papers par sign kr
RAM- nahi me en paper par sign jabtak nahi Karunga chacha jabtak aap Didi ko chod nahi dete
ram ki bast sun kr use chacha ne ek phone kiya kuch baat krne ke baad rakhdiya aur kuch der baad ek car aake ruki jisme se ek ladki aur do aadmi nikle ek aadmi ne us ladki ko gun point par rakha hua the to dusre aadmi ne ek laathi utha rakhi thi dusre aadmi ne ladki ko Kass ke pakda hua tha ladki ba
RAM- chod do meri Didi ko me sign krne ko taiyaar hu
chacha ne papers par sign krwae aur Jese hi sign hue uski Didi ko chod Dita jaata he ran apni Didi ko gale laga leta he
RAM-neha Didi aap thik to Hona aaahhhhhh ek cikh gunji
ram ke pith ke piche ek khanjar maara
ram ko bahut tej dard hua ye dare keval sarir ka nahi Ballu dil ka bhi tha ask use saber Jyada pyar krne wali Neha Didi ne jo jakhm use site the wo sayad hi bhar paaye ram ki awaaj bhi nahi nikal pa rahi thi
RAM- (rote hue)kyo akhir kyo ye Saab to parae the par aap to meri apni bhen thi aapne bhi mujhe dhoka Diya kyo?
NEHA- issliye kyoki me Teri bhen nahi hu

Congratulations ? for new story.,Nice start

 

[Punnu]

UPDATE 1 the end and the beginning
kale badal chaa rahe the mosam bahut kharab tha kisi tufaan ke aane ki ashanka thi wahi ek khaai ki choti pe ek car aake ruki jisme se ek ladka aur ek aadmi jiske hath me kuch papers aur ek gun thi
AADMI - jaldi se in papers par sign krdo warna ham tumhari bhen ko mardenge ram agr apni bhen ki jaan bachana cahte he to in papers par sign kr
RAM- nahi me en paper par sign jabtak nahi Karunga chacha jabtak aap Didi ko chod nahi dete
ram ki bast sun kr use chacha ne ek phone kiya kuch baat krne ke baad rakhdiya aur kuch der baad ek car aake ruki jisme se ek ladki aur do aadmi nikle ek aadmi ne us ladki ko gun point par rakha hua the to dusre aadmi ne ek laathi utha rakhi thi dusre aadmi ne ladki ko Kass ke pakda hua tha ladki ba
RAM- chod do meri Didi ko me sign krne ko taiyaar hu
chacha ne papers par sign krwae aur Jese hi sign hue uski Didi ko chod Dita jaata he ran apni Didi ko gale laga leta he
RAM-neha Didi aap thik to Hona aaahhhhhh ek cikh gunji
ram ke pith ke piche ek khanjar maara
ram ko bahut tej dard hua ye dare keval sarir ka nahi Ballu dil ka bhi tha ask use saber Jyada pyar krne wali Neha Didi ne jo jakhm use site the wo sayad hi bhar paaye ram ki awaaj bhi nahi nikal pa rahi thi
RAM- (rote hue)kyo akhir kyo ye Saab to parae the par aap to meri apni bhen thi aapne bhi mujhe dhoka Diya kyo?
NEHA- issliye kyoki me Teri bhen nahi hu

for new story....
And nice start brother..

 

[Pintupaul]

 

[Shurya dev]

Superb starting brother

 

[Black water]

Congratulations for new story
nice start

 

[tpk]

zabardast

 

[VILLAN]

UPDATE 1 THE END AND THE BEGINNING PART 2
abhi ye log baat hi kr rhe the ki teen cars aur aake ruki jisme se ek badi hi raubdar aurat nikli aur bhut sare aadmi kuch ladkiya aur kuch aurate bhi
raubdar aurat Neha ke pass Jake bolti he ki
aurat - sabash meri bachhi akhir tu mera hi khun he Maardo isse aur ha jab ye Mar jaaye to isski lash ko khaai me phek do

aurat ka itna Kehna tha ki aadmiyo ne apni laathi uthai aur shuru ho gaye ram ko tab tak marte rahe jabtak wo behosh nahi hua khun se lathpath ram ki lash ko khai me phekne se pahle ram ke chacha ne uske sinne me do goliya daag di uska itne me bhi man nahi bhara to us khanjar ko uski pith me se nikal ke uske pet me ghop Diya aur ram ki lash ko khai me phek Diya gaya are ye ram kya budbuda raha he
RAM-dhoka dhoka mila he mujhe is parivar ki ek ek aurat ko apni randi banauga aur in sab ko esi dardnak jindgi dunga ki ye mout ki bhik mangege lekin inhe mout itni aasani se milegi nahi ye mera waada he kassame tut sakti he par mera waada nahi
mossam ab aur khatarnak ho gaya Tha bijli kadak rahi thi ghor sannata chaya hua tha aur ram ki lash us khaai me girti ja rahi aur ussi khai ke niche bane ek jungle me jo ki kohree se dhaake hone ke karan bahar se najar nahi aaraha tha jungle ke andar ek gufa me are ise gufa Kehna thik nahi hoga kyu ki bahar se gufa dikh rahi he andar se ek allishan ghar jaisi he usi ghar ke basement me ek lab thi jisme ek aurat kuch chemical ko test kr rhi lab bhi kafi hightech thi har tarah ki machine equipments the usme
aurat-yes it is complete mera formula akhir taiyaar ho hi gaya ab bas ek body chaiye isse test krne ke liye aurat us formule aur ek file ko safe me rakh deti he aur lab se bahar aakr jungle ki nadi ki taraf chal deti he abhi wo nadi ke pass phouchi hi thi ke dhaamm kuch aakar nadi me gira ek body us aurat ne furti se nadi me chalang lagai aur body ko nikal kr lai usne ram ke sene me se khanjar nikala aur usski sanse check ki
aurat - ye to jinda he ese jald hi meri lab me lejana hoga
in lab
aurat ne an tak ram ke sarir se goliya nikal li thi aur Patti bhi kr di thi abhi wo ye Saab kr rhi thi ki usse ek khayal aya
aurat - ha ha body us aurat ke face pe ek devil smile aagai
aurat ram ki body ko ek container type machine me rakh deti he aur safe me se apne formule aur file ko nikal leti he machine me ek transparent glass bana hua tha jisse ram ki body dikh rahi thi aur usne apna formula machine me inject krdiya aur wo file machine ke pass rakh deti he power supply ko on kr ke wo ek button ko dabati he aur samne wali led screen pr kuch dikhne lagta he aurat abhi screen dekh rahi thi ki tabhi booom ek tez dhamaka aur har taraf dhua hi dhua machine ka transparent glass phat chuka tha pass me rakhi file bhi rakh ho chuki thi lekin ye kya ram ke saare jakhm bhar chuke the aurat abhi hue dhamake se abhi sambhli thi ke ram ko hosh aagaya
ram-me kha hu me kon hu aur container se bahar aajata he aap kooon how aaahh ek tez dard aur ram apne ghutno par
aurat-tum mere bete RAJA ho aur me tumhari maa Jyoti hu
abhi Jyoti ne bas itna hi kha tha ki ram behosh ho gaya Jyoti ram/raja ko lab se bahar le kr ek room me sula deti he
JYOTI -ab hoga mera badla pura INFERNO ab tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

UPDATE 1 THE END AND THE BEGINNING PART 2
abhi ye log baat hi kr rhe the ki teen cars aur aake ruki jisme se ek badi hi raubdar aurat nikli aur bhut sare aadmi kuch ladkiya aur kuch aurate bhi
raubdar aurat Neha ke pass Jake bolti he ki
aurat - sabash meri bachhi akhir tu mera hi khun he Maardo isse aur ha jab ye Mar jaaye to isski lash ko khaai me phek do

aurat ka itna Kehna tha ki aadmiyo ne apni laathi uthai aur shuru ho gaye ram ko tab tak marte rahe jabtak wo behosh nahi hua khun se lathpath ram ki lash ko khai me phekne se pahle ram ke chacha ne uske sinne me do goliya daag di uska itne me bhi man nahi bhara to us khanjar ko uski pith me se nikal ke uske pet me ghop Diya aur ram ki lash ko khai me phek Diya gaya are ye ram kya budbuda raha he
RAM-dhoka dhoka mila he mujhe is parivar ki ek ek aurat ko apni randi banauga aur in sab ko esi dardnak jindgi dunga ki ye mout ki bhik mangege lekin inhe mout itni aasani se milegi nahi ye mera waada he kassame tut sakti he par mera waada nahi
mossam ab aur khatarnak ho gaya Tha bijli kadak rahi thi ghor sannata chaya hua tha aur ram ki lash us khaai me girti ja rahi aur ussi khai ke niche bane ek jungle me jo ki kohree se dhaake hone ke karan bahar se najar nahi aaraha tha jungle ke andar ek gufa me are ise gufa Kehna thik nahi hoga kyu ki bahar se gufa dikh rahi he andar se ek allishan ghar jaisi he usi ghar ke basement me ek lab thi jisme ek aurat kuch chemical ko test kr rhi lab bhi kafi hightech thi har tarah ki machine equipments the usme
aurat-yes it is complete mera formula akhir taiyaar ho hi gaya ab bas ek body chaiye isse test krne ke liye aurat us formule aur ek file ko safe me rakh deti he aur lab se bahar aakr jungle ki nadi ki taraf chal deti he abhi wo nadi ke pass phouchi hi thi ke dhaamm kuch aakar nadi me gira ek body us aurat ne furti se nadi me chalang lagai aur body ko nikal kr lai usne ram ke sene me se khanjar nikala aur usski sanse check ki
aurat - ye to jinda he ese jald hi meri lab me lejana hoga
in lab
aurat ne an tak ram ke sarir se goliya nikal li thi aur Patti bhi kr di thi abhi wo ye Saab kr rhi thi ki usse ek khayal aya
aurat - ha ha body us aurat ke face pe ek devil smile aagai
aurat ram ki body ko ek container type machine me rakh deti he aur safe me se apne formule aur file ko nikal leti he machine me ek transparent glass bana hua tha jisse ram ki body dikh rahi thi aur usne apna formula machine me inject krdiya aur wo file machine ke pass rakh deti he power supply ko on kr ke wo ek button ko dabati he aur samne wali led screen pr kuch dikhne lagta he aurat abhi screen dekh rahi thi ki tabhi booom ek tez dhamaka aur har taraf dhua hi dhua machine ka transparent glass phat chuka tha pass me rakhi file bhi rakh ho chuki thi lekin ye kya ram ke saare jakhm bhar chuke the aurat abhi hue dhamake se abhi sambhli thi ke ram ko hosh aagaya
ram-me kha hu me kon hu aur container se bahar aajata he aap kooon how aaahh ek tez dard aur ram apne ghutno par
aurat-tum mere bete RAJA ho aur me tumhari maa Jyoti hu
abhi Jyoti ne bas itna hi kha tha ki ram behosh ho gaya Jyoti ram/raja ko lab se bahar le kr ek room me sula deti he
JYOTI -ab hoga mera badla pura INFERNO ab tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta

Nice start brother
Pahle Jyoti Ke dushman Inferno se badla lega Ram
Aur uske bad Neha yah aur uska parivar ke har sadasya se
Otherwise
dekhte hain aage kya hota hai