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Adultery Broken by Her! (Story of a man) suspense thriller,incest adultery

Kya salil pervert ban payega/story other characters ke perspective se bhi chale

  • Nahi banega

    Votes: 28 13.6%
  • Ban jayega

    Votes: 33 16.0%
  • Sirf hero ke perspective se

    Votes: 30 14.6%
  • Yes other characters ke perspective se bhi

    Votes: 10 4.9%
  • Hero and writer ke perspective se

    Votes: 12 5.8%
  • Hero ko power milni chahiye

    Votes: 62 30.1%
  • Power nhi milni chahiye kahani reality world me chale

    Votes: 17 8.3%
  • Which type sex do you want

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Hard

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Hardcore +

    Votes: 3 1.5%
  • Bdsm

    Votes: 6 2.9%
  • Humiliation

    Votes: 4 1.9%
  • I don't want sex

    Votes: 1 0.5%

  • Total voters
    206
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ye kahani aek sidhe sadhe ladke ki hai ...kaise vivah ke baad uski life me toofan ate hai kya wo unse lad payega or haar man ke ghutne tek dega..
 
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Episode 37
samantha ne mujhe hosh me na dekh sab bata diya ...

mujhe hosh nhi fir tumhare papa ke sath kya hua....shayad wo zalim unki body bhi le gaye they...



samantha tumne ye kya kar Diya....maa foot foot rone lagi....




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maa: wo Samantha thi jisne tumhare papa ko zaher diya tha..



Apne papa ke bare me jankar Mai ghutno me sar lekar baith Gaya...fir sisak sisak kar rone laga.
Apne pariwar ki bedardi se hatya kand par jo mere nana ne mere papa ki dushmani me ki..Mai apne baap ki tarah ek percent bhi nhi tha..is bat ka gham bhi mujhe chhalni kar raha tha ..


mai : maa kya mera ek aur bhai bhi tha...maa ne naa me sar hila Diya...


maa ko chhor kar Mai gate khol ke khada ho gaya fir sigrat nikal kar jala li...


mujhe sabhi se badla Lena tha bhairav pandit Krishna naryan murti..wo sab politicians jinka hath mere pariwar ko Marne me tha...apni kamzori ka sonch kar Maine bhang ka gola nikala aur nigal liya...fir sigrat fek maa ke pass akar pani piya...


maa: mere pass aao...pass akar Mai maa ke pass baith Gaya...ek side me aashna baithi thi...jo mujhe ab dekh bhi nhi Rahi thi...


maa : apne papa ki tarah soncho...mai gayi to bhairav tumhe pareshan karega...shayad nuqsan bhi pahuchaye...


mai : haa maa...kehkar Maine khidki se bahar dekha...bahar roshni fail Rahi thi ham pahuchne wale they...


Gate par akar Maine purvi ko call laga di...


mai : hello purvi..


purvi : ha salil itni subah...

mai : abhi station par aao 15 minute me..

purvi : koi zaruri kam hai..

mai : ha bhut zaruri..


kehkar Maine call cut kar di..

aur fir maa ke pass agaya..

mai : maa hamare pariwar ke kuch log Zinda hai..Ayan..jo mujhe bachpan me hi mil gaya...ham sath bade hue...pta hi nhi tha wo Mera bhai hai...aur Mai foot foot kar rone laga...

maa : kaha hai wo...

mai : maa wo door hai surakshit...

maa : Maine use bachpan me dekha tha...

mai : do behne aur bhi hai...wo bhi uske sath hai...


ssssshhhhhhh...ki awaz ke sath train ruki...

mumbai se ane wali Mumbai banglore express apne nirdharit samay par platform number 6 par agayi hai...


aur ham dono bhi bahar nikle...

mai najre duadate hue purvi ko dekhne laga...

na dikhne par Maine use call ki...aur apni location batai...kuch der baad wo hamare samne thi...

mai : Maine to kaha tha andar ane ke liye...

purvi : mujhe laga tha bahar miloge acha kaha se aa rahe.

mai : Mumbai se...


purvi : aao car layi hon...


chalte hue ham station se bahar aye ..


purvi : ye aunty kon hai..

mai : meri maa hai...


purvi: what....

maine sar hilaya...


purvi : ashirwad do maa..wo jhukkar maa ke pair chhune lagi.

mai : maa ye meri dost hai...isne hi apke Ayan ki help ki ..

maa : khush raho beta.


car ke pass akar usne maa ko bithaya...fir Mai aur wo age baith Gaye..


purvi : kaise...


fir Mai use batane laga kaise Mai aashna se Mila fir apni maa se...ye bhi bata diya jhamela mera hi bhai hai..


mai : ab maa ko tum apne sath rakhna mere sath rahegi to unki Jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai...


purvi : tumhari hi soceity ke barabar wali society me rehti hon...pass hoge to mil bhi loge..


mai : ek aur ahsan..

purvi : hisab rakh Rahi hon..


society se guzarte hue maa bahar dekhne lagi...


car se ham utre to maa kyari aur unme lage pedo ko dekhne lagi...


maa : yahan Mai aur Samar ji baithte they...us samay itni abadi nhi thi..ek ped bhi hamne lagaya kya wo sookh Gaya..

mai : maa wo bada ho Gaya aur apke bhatije ne ukad diya...

maa : koi baat nahi...



dhadkte dil ke sath maa ne door khola...wo girne lagi to Maine sambhal liya.... mai unke Dil ki halat bahut ache se samajh raha tha..

maa Jamin me baith ke rone lagi...


purvi : maa ji sambhale khud ko...apko ab apne bacho ke liye jina hai...



aashna : maa dekhiye na hame hamare apne mil Gaye ..

maa : meri bachi...maa ne sar hilate hue use gale laga liya...


maa : sabse bahadur...18 saal tak Mera khyal rakhne wali..


mai : aao maa andar chale...


maa ko utha kar Mai bedroom me laya.


maa ko lita kar Mai unke pass hi let gaya...


purvi : Mai breakfast ki tayari karti hon..


aashana: mai bhi chalti hon..

maa : anusuiya , Sona aaah..kya wo sach me aisi hai salil...

mai : haa maa...bhul jao unhe sonch Lena aap unse kbhi mili nhi...Mai maa ke Dil ki halat samjh Raha tha..lekin didi se Milne ke bad unka haal bhi meri hi tarah ho jata....


raat bhar ke jage they ham..kuch der me hi so Gaye...

maa ke anchal tale sone se Mai sare gham bhul Gaya...



tik tik tik... phone ki awaj se meri aankh khuli..

maa so Rahi thi...

mai : hello victor sir... Maine call receive karke kaha.

victor : ha yar kaha ho...

mai : sir Ghar par hon.

victor : yaar Aaj nikalna hai hamne yaad hai..

mai : ji sir...Mai kuch der me AA Raha hon..

victor: koi jaldi nhi hai bas 4 baje ready rehna... Mai lene aaunga..

mai : haa sir..aur Maine call cut kar di..




nahane ke liye Mai washroom me ghusa ...ki ek dam se Maine apni ankhe band kar li...


mai : door lock nahi kar Mila tujhe...


andar aashna naha rahi thi maine bas uska chahera hi dekha tha..


aashna : purvi...towel dena...

Maine bed se utha kar use towel pakdai..

mai : koi jaldi nahi hai naha le..

usne towel le liya lekin kuch kaha nahi..


wo towel bandh kar bahar ayi...


mai : pagal ho gayi hai tu...parso jo hua bhul Jaa use..Aisa dubara ki to maar khayegi...

washroom me akar Mai nahane laga..aashna sisakti hui chali gayi..


Tayar hokar Mai bahar aya to dekha purvi kitchen me parathe bana Rahi hai..

mai : tum kyo kar Rahi ho ye sab...aashna...

meri awaz par wo aayi...pass se guzarte hue mujhe uski hichkiyan sunai di..



aur Maine apna sar pakad liya..

purvi aayi to Mai use lekar baith Gaya..


kuch der baad aashna ne ham dono ke samne chahe pratha rakh diye..

purvi : kya karoge ab...

mai : kya karun Mai hon bhi kisi layak..

purvi : badla chhod do...tum iski kimat de chuke ho apne papa ko kho kar..ab tumhare sath ek bahan aur maa bhi hai..

mai : hmmm...Mai kuch dino ke liye america jaa raha hon..dono ka khayal rakhna...chaho to rat me maa ko lekar yahi so Jaya karna...

purvi: ha ye thik rahega..

nashta karke Mai utha aur aashna ko lekar room me aya..


mai : kyo ro Rahi hai...chahti hai un dono ki tarah tujhe bhi chhod dun..

aashna : mujhe guilt ho Raha hai...kehkar usne sar niche kar liya aur Maine use hug kar liya..

mai : pehle ham anjan they apne rishte ke bare me na jankar lekin ab nahi..bhul Jaa use...

usne sar hilaya...

mai : jaa mera bag pack kar...mujhe nikalna hai..sun koi khatra dikhe to anusuiya didi ko call karna...




kuch der baad purvi ko maa aur aashna ke pass chhod Mai nikal Gaya...



Kuch der baad Mai taxi se apne office ke bahar utra.pay karke Mai andar chal diya...


andar jate hue mujhe ek jana pehchana chahera kursi par baitha dikhai diya...


unhe dekh Mai ruk gaya...

pass akar Mai use dekhne laga...meri ahat par usne mujhe dekha...use dekhte hue Maine hath jod liye...


kaise ho salil...usne mujhse khus mijaj swar me pucha..

maine jhukkar pair pakadne chahe to usne mujhe sine se laga liya...


kyo shadminda kar rahe ho yaar..


mai : kya bolu jiju...

abhi: kuch nhi baitho akar..

pass Mai bhi baith Gaya...


mai: aap yahan...

abhi : ha victor se Milne aya tha..dost hai Mera...kuch dino me nikal jaunga abroad ke liye soncha isse mil aaun..


mai : acha kiya....jiju...Maine dhime se kaha..

abhi : mat kaho yar..ab ham alag ho Gaye hai..


mai: aaj apko bolta dekh raha hon...warna to ha thik hai..ha thik hai hi kehte the...

abhi : tumhari bahan ne kisi layak chhoda hi kaha...gand me kheera kabhi brush dalne par majboor kar diya..maja bhi ata lekin sirf uske sath hi...ab Aisa kuch nahi karta...kehkar unhone apna sar jhuka liya..ankhe nam ho gayi thi..

mere pas shabd nahi they kehne ke liye..isliye satbhavna Dene ke liye Maine unki peeth par hath rakh diya..

agar abhi mere jiju na hote to Mai hasta majak udata lekin..ye torture tha...

abhi : tumhe bata bhi isiliye raha hon..kyoki wo sari yaden kisi bure sapne ki tarah mere andar bas gayi hai..jo mujhe jine nahi deti..Sharm ati hai khud ko mard kehte hue..


mai : ap kahenge to didi ko mar peet kar apke pass le aunga..

abhi : yar Maine use badi muskilo se chhoda hai...adhi property dekar..


mai : what...

abhi : haa..kuch dino pehle mujhse Milne ayi thi..pta nhi kaise use pta chal Gaya Mai India aya hua hon...

mai : kyo..

abhi : mafi mangne..Maine kaha maaf Kiya bas dubara apni shakal na dikhana..bahut natak kiya usne...bad me boli wo bhi ab ghar basa legi..

mai : apki wife kaisi hai..suna tha apne kisi angrejan se vivah kar liya tha..

abhi : wo bhi tumhari bahan ki tarah hai Yun kahu usse bhi age...ghar ka kam nahi karti Maine Toka to rone lagi..jis wjah se mujhe 5k dollar par maid rakhni padi ...use Maine samjha Diya us par najar rakhna..ek din Mai uk Gaya tha tab mad ne uski 30 logo ke sath video bheji..Mai to aya hi hon chudne...ab randiyan chodta hon jamkar..


mai : 2 hi baar galtia hui hai apse ek try aur kar lo jiju...acha bataye married ladki se shadi krenge..2 bache hai uske prantu hai bhut achi..apka bhut khayal rakhegi..

abhi : randio ke sath khus hon har roz ek nayi randi fasa kar chodta hon..bharosa Karo rone lagti hai..ab Maine dusri wife ko jeb kharch dena band kar diya hai...jo bhi Kamata sab randio par udata.



mai : jab bhi man ho mere ghar ajana .. kehta hua Mai uth Gaya...


office me aya to dekha...victor sir baithe reserch documents pad rahe they..


mai : coming sir..

victor : andar akar puch rahe..fir wo muskura diye..aur Mai bhi..


tinggg...mere ate hi unhone Bell bajai aur ek peon andar aya..

victor : inspector ko bhejo andar..
peon sar hilate hue chala gaya..



victor ; Maine to kaha tha receive karunga akar..

mai ; koi bat nahi sir.....free tha




apne bulaya ...wo andar aya to Maine use dekha...
bahut hi sakht face dikhne me ek dam gora..uske sharir ka kasao dekh ke lag raha tha uske six pack to hoge hi..


victor : inspector ye hai salil..salil inspector ye
Hamhare guard ke roop me hmhare sath rahenge...

Maine hath milaya....

victor : thik hai Mai apne dost se milkar ata hon..tab tak tum ye waki ke research notes padho wha kam ayenge..

sir chale gaye..Mai baithe padhne laga..


Inspector: Maya civilization..

mai : ha jante ho..

inspector : mera bhi favorite subject yahi hai.archelogy.

mai : ohh to inspector ban gaye..

inspector : ye mera name nahi hai..logo ko sahi naam nahi pta isliye inspector bulate intead of....ispe

sir ne kaha saman de do car me rakhne ke liye..

itne me peon andar ate hue bola..

Maine hath se bag ki taraf ishara Kiya jise lekar wo chala gaya...



kuch der baad ham dono bhi bahar nikle...bahar victor sir baithe abhi se baten kar rahe they...


mujhe dekh kar wo uth Gaye..

victor : thik hai week se pehle ane ki kosish krunga..

abhi : jaldi ana nahi chala jaunga...

victor : don't worry tere badle me Mai tere sath hon...

abhi jiju ne sir hilaya aur wo chale gaye..


car me akar ham charo bhi chal diye Mai inspector,victor sir aur unki secretary..dazy..



airport se ham apni flight me aye...


11 ghante ke safar ke bad ham north america ke airport par utre...


bahar ate hue hame ek angrej hamare name ka board liye khada Mila...


victor : ye hai Danny... company ki taraf se...

kuch baten karke usne hame sath liya aur ban me aya ...

Danny : hotel chalenge sir or site par..


victor : sara saman laye ho worker baghairah..

Danny : sab hai sir saman aur worker pehle hi site par chhod aya hon....

victor: good aur khana..


Danny : wo bhi sir...

victor : great...ek salil hamare yahan ke worker hai...

mai : janta hon sir....aur ham dono muskura diye....


inspector : jahan jaa rahe hai ye jagah darawni hai...hoshiyar rahna...ye apne me hi bahut sare Rahasyo ko chhupaye baithi hai...kehte hai akashiye afat se ye basti tabah ho gayi thi....haa mummy...

hamse kehkar achanak se usne phone nikal ke Kano par laga liya...Mai aur victor sir use dekhne Lage..



Inspector: mummy mai thik hon...abhi dosto ke sath picnic par Jaa Raha hon... inspector ka sharir bilkul dheela pad Gaya tha jahan wo abhi sakht dikai de raha tha ab bilkul dheela tha uski awaj me bhi inoncence aagayi thi..kisi bache ki tarah bol raha tha wo.


victor sir mujhe dekh kar sar ke pass ungli lakar ghumane lage...isharo se bata rahe they iski khisak gayi hai..jise dekh Mai muskura Diya....


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kaise baithi ho didi..yahan itni akeli..didi..harshi aarohi ko hilate hue boli..

aarohi apne hotel ki balkani me baithi pedo aur highway par chal rahi gadio ka view dekh apni yado me khoyi thi..


aarohi : tu kab ayi..


harshi : ghar gayi thi pta chala aap hotel aayi Hui ho..


aarohi : haa dosto ke sath meeting hai..

harshi : didi...mujhe apke sath rehna hai..

aarohi : mere sath nahi reh sakti samjha kar..mere sath rahegi to tujhe problem hogi mere kamo se.



harshi : Mai yahan hotel me reh lungi..yahi se college ke liye up down karungi.. bas Ghar nahi rehna..


aarohi : tu waha surakshit hai...anusuiya mujhse badla lene ke liye tujhe nuksan pahucha sakti hai..


harshi : ghar me bhi to bhediye hai didi..

aarohi : kuch hua hai...

rote hue harshi sir hila deti hai..


harshi : us rat Mai leti thi ki Harsha mere pass akar let gaya..Maine rishte ki wjah se mana nahi Kiya.. fir......


harshi : Harsha bhai itni tighly hug kyo kar rahe hai...didi wo underwear me they wo apna penis mere andar dalne ki kosish kar rahe they..


harsh : kuch nahi hota harshi..ab ham hi to hai ek dusre ke...Teri jawani koi aur lootne wala hai usse pehle Mai kyo nahi... aur unhone meri lower niche ki fir chaddi..aur apna penis meri back me daal Diya...Mai chikhti rahi lekin didi wo nahi ruke...


harshi : chhod do mujhe bhai...chhod do...Mai apki bahan hon...ye sab kyo kar rahe hai..Mai lamp markar unhe dhakka dekar khadi ho gayi...


sar thame wo mere pass aye..


harsh : harshi...pita ji ka badla lene ke liye jise bulaya hai tujhe use khush karna hai.. aarohi karti prantu wo tayar nahi wo bimar hai..


harshi : to aap kyo kar rahe ho..chii..

harsh : Mai...Mai unse pehle tere sath Sona chahta hon..tu unhe chut dena mujhe ass de de..ghar ka mal bhi ghar me rahega...


harshi : aarohi didi ko pata chala to...tumhe Zinda nahi chhodengi..mujhe samjh nahi araha tha Mai kaise react Karu didi..


harsh : Mai uske sath bhi so chuka hon..tu bhi to chhup kar dekhti thi mujhe...Mai sab janta hon...harshi samajh na ab ham dono hi ek dusre ke hai...

harshi : mujhe samay do sonchne ka...
didi Maine us rat to khud ko bacha liye prantu age nahi bacha paungi..kehkar harshi subakne lagi...

aarohi : kya Karu harshi wo akela bhai hai hamara..use mara to kon bachega hamara...sab to khatm ho gaya hai...tu bachna chahti hai to maar de use..kehte hue aarohi apni gun purse se nikal kar harshi ko de deti hai...


Harshi: Mai nahi mar sakti didi...kehkar harshi rone lagti hai...

aarohi : Mai Harsha ko samjhaungi...nahi mana to bhul jana Tera koi Bhai hai..


harshi : kash jiju hote didi...wo uska CBI cheif hona bhi nahi dekhte...Mai unse in apno ke liye ladi thi...

aarohi harshi ki bat sunkar us par se nigahe hata kar hotel ke bahar ka view dekhne lagti hai...
Soona-Soona Lamha-Lamha
Meri Rahein Tanha-Tanha
Aa Kar Muje Tum Thaam Lo
Manzil Teri Dekhe Rasta


aarohi: fir kya chahati hai.
harshi : Mai marna nahi chahti..bas chahti hon wo sudhar jaye...
aarohi : thik hai tu Jaa Mai baat karungi..


harshi : Mai saman layi hon yahi koi khali room dekh leti hon..


aarohi sar hila deti hai jise dekh harshi chali jati hai...


harshi ke jate hi aarohi phone me salil ki aur apni photo dekhne lagti hai..


Mud Ke Zaraa Ab Dekh Lo
Aisa Milan Phir Ho Naa Ho
Sab Kuch Mera Tum Hi To Ho

Bepanah Pyar Hai, Aaja
Tera Intazar Hai, Aaja
Ho, Bepanah Pyar Hai, Aaja
Tera Intazar Hai, Aaja

Soona-Soona Lamaha-Lamaha
Meri Raahen Tanhaa-Tanhaa

Bichade Bhi Hum Jo Kabhi Raston Mein
To Sang-Sang Rahongi Sada
Qadamon Ki Aavaaz Sun Ke Chalungi
Tumhein Dhondh Loongi Sada

Bhuli Mohabbat Ki Ye Khushbuien Hain
Hawaon Mein Faili Hui
Chhukar Muje Aaj Mahsus Kar Lo
Vo Yaaden Meri Anchhui

Aisa Milan Phir Ho Na Ho
Sab Kuchh Mera Tum Hi To Ho

Bepanah Pyar Hai, Aaja
Tera Intazar Hai, Aaja
Ho, Bepanah Pyar Hai, Aaja
Tera Intazar Hai, Aaja

Soona-Soona Lamaha-Lamaha
Meri Rahein Tanha-Tanha

aarohi sab agaye hai...Rohit ke kandhe par hath rakhne se aarohi ko hosh ata hai..wo Rohit se chupte hue apne rumal se apni ankhe poch leti hai...jise Rohit notice kar leta hai..


Rohit : tumhari khusi ke liye chhod bhi sakta hon lekin ab mere paas kuch nhi siwaye tumhe khone ke..mardangi bhi kho di bi sexual ban gaya...apni bahan ki najro me bhi gir Gaya ab wo mujhe bhai nahi mujhse kisi Dalal ki tarah milti hai...kya zindagi ho gayi hai bc..pyar ne gandu bana diya...sab kuch khokar bhi har jaunga...hahahahaha...


aarohi : sssahhhhh..hontho par ungli rakhte hue aarohi rohiti ke hontho par apne honth rakh deti hai...


Rohit : Mai pagal hokar suicide kar lunga..

aarohi : Mai sambhulugi tumhe.


Rohit : fir tum itni kamzor kyo padh Rahi ho...

aarohi : nahi...fir wo Rohit ko dikhate hue apni aur salil ki sari photos delete kar deti hai...


aarohi : chale...Rohit sar hila deta hai..


dono chalte hue meeting room me ate hai..


jahan pehle se hi..cara ,Priyanka, dhiraj aur do log hote hai...


aarohi : hamara hukum ka ikka bhisma kaha hai..aarohi ne ate hi pucha


Cara : uska koi ata pta nhi...varsha bhi gyab hai aur purvi ne sir ko hi chhod diya...to batao kyo bulaya hai..


aarohi : guys meri personal revenge hai..tum log chaho to Jaa sakte ho agar mera sath doge to mooh mangi kimat milegi...

dhiraj : ham tumhare sath hai aarohi..tum aur Rohit hamari family hai..


Cara : sahi kaha...ab batao kya karna hai..


aarohi bolne lagi wo sab sunne lagi..


aarohi : hamari pehli priority hogi varsha ko chhudana..aur anusuiya Sona ko road par Lana..third fool party me ab hamari team ki ek sadasya ghus kar unke secret ham tak layegi jise ham public me reveal karenge... ye kam karne wali hai Priyanka...

Cara : sab sahi lekin sir ne mana Kiya hai fool party me ghus kar spying se uska kya..unhone nataij bhi bataye..agar pakdi gayi to wo panja party se badla lenge...ham bas kuch hi rajyo tak simit hai aur phool party Kendra me hai..

aarohi :janti hon lekin ham ye sabse chup kar karenge..gys in sabhi partys ke apne benefits hai..Inka kam ho jane ke bad ye hame chaye me se makhi ki tarah nikal kar fek denge...Mai tumhe Paisa de Rahi hon...kam hone ke bad ham ye desh chhod denge..

kehkar aarohi sabke chahere dekhne lagi...

Rohit : aarohi sahi keh Rahi hai guys..hamse behtar in politicians ko kon janta hoga...


Cara : thik hai Mai sath hon...


cara ke sath waki sab bhi hami bharte hai...



aarohi : priya pehle tum anusuiya tak pahucho uske bad jo bhi kuch pta chale wo tum mujhe bataogi...riky aur Suresh tum dono us par twenty four hours najar rakhoge..wo kya karti kaha jati sab..Cara tum uske phone kisi tarah se hack Karo...waki Mai apna Kam karungi..dheeraj tum Sona ko dekho..


sab hami bharkar chale jate hai...apne apne Kam par....



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anusuiya mohini ke sath subah me ghar ati hai...us samay Sona shower lekar bahar aayi thi...


Sona : agayi... didi...ap baitho mai bas abhi breakfast lekar ayi...

anusuiya : Sona ...

sona : han didi... towel me lipti sona anusuiya ke pass akar khadi ho jati hai...
hath pakad kar anusuya Sona ko pass hi bitha leti hai..

anusuiya: tu gayi thi salil ke pass..

Sona : kaha didi time hi nahi Mila...but meri parso bat Hui thi...


anusuiya : kya bat Hui thi...


Sona : batata bhi kaha hai wo didi...bol rahe they Mumbai hai..ab shayad agaye ho..Maine mafi mangi to gussa karne lage...


anusuiya : wo Aisa hi hai...tu Aaj Jana aur thik se mafi mangna..

sona : han didi jyada hi emotional drama karungi hihihi..


mohini : jaldi se breakfast laa bhuk lagi hai..


thapp ...

anusuiya : kamini...tu to mujse bhi 2 kadam age hai..anusuiya ass par marte hue boli.

Sona : hahaha..akhir bahan kiski hon..


haste hue Sona chali jati hai..


mohini : us din to ise galian de rahi thi tune ise maf kar diya..

ansuiya : ek din aarohi ayi thi to Mai bol di isse aarohi ko jalane ke liye...uske bad ..


sona : didi ab to maf kar do..aarohi ke bahane aap mujhse boli yahi bhut hai..

mai : sona tune mere bhai ko pitwaya hai.wo to Mai use nahi dikhana chahti thi...hamare bich kya chal Raha hai.


sona : didi apne nhi pitwaya vishnu se bhai ko...ham dono hi ek se hain.ab maaf bhi kar do..vaise bhi Mai kuch dino ke bad chali jaungi...


uske jane ka sonch kar Maine maaf kar Diya... kuch din hi hai mere sath fir shadi karke chali jayegi...


mohini : sahi Kiya...Maharaj chahte hai ise bhi jod le apne sath..

anusuiya : wo tayar hai bas vivah ke bad ana chahti hai...

mohini : ha din hi kitne reh Gaye...

anusuiya : tu ruk Mai abhi ati hon..Sona mohini ke sath breakfast kar Lena...mera wait nahi karna..


uth kar anusuiya ghar se bahar ayi...fir barabar wale Ghar me jo vishnu ka tha..



vishnu : ajao anusuiya
Radha : anusuiya didi come..


vishnu ke Ghar me sab breakfast kar rahe they....

muskurate hue anusuiya unke sath baith kar breakfast karne lagti hai..

anusuiya : Sona ne banaya nahi breakfast soncha yahan kar lon..

vishnu : bilkul sahi Kiya...

anusuiya : hai na ye bhi to mera hi ghar hai...matlab ho jayega.

anusuiya ki bat par jahan vishnu khush hone laga wahi uski wife gusse me dekhne lagi...

anusuiya : Ghana dikhai nahi de Raha kaha hai Mera hero..

Radha: apka hero so Raha hai...


breakfast karke anusuiya vishnu ke sath uske bedroom me agai..ate hi usne room lock kar liya...

kaise ho mere raja..kehte hue anusuiya vishnu ko bad par dhakka de deti hai..


Vishnu : dono naraz hai...rat me ane ka bolkar gayi thi ab aa rahi ho .

anusuiya : umm ise to Mai mana lungi but ye mera Shona kyo udas hai..vishnu par lette hue anusuiya uske land ko masalte hue ek hath se galo ko pakad kar puchne lagti hai..


Vishnu : haye meri Jaan...jab aise bolti ho to sab kuch nyochavar krne ka Dil karta hai..

anusuiya : sachi...han..

vishnu : han..

dono ki sanse ek dusre ke mooh par padh rahi thi..anusuiya vishnu ki bahon me jhuki kisi bachi ki tarah lag rahi thi....

anusuiya : kase belive Karu..

Vishnu : haye meri Jaan tum bolo to Dil cheer kar dikha ...aahhh..du..anusuiya vishnu se baten bhi kar rahi thi aur apna ek hath uske land par bhi chala rahi thi...


anusuiya : ssshh...bhut marungi jo asa kaha to...pehle hi mujh par itne favor kiye hai...


Vishnu : ohh Mai to puchna bhul hi Gaya kya bana un 8 mla ka..

anusuiya : wo hamari party me agaye hai..filahal 16 mla aur chahiye fool party ki government ke liye..but mere dimag me kuch aur chal Raha hai...


Vishnu : kya...


anusuiya : umm.chhota vishnu to man gaya..ye wala kab manega..
anusuiya vishnu ka land pakad kar dabate hue boli...fir pant khol kar vishnu ke 10 inch lambe land par akar us par jeebh bherne lagti hai...


Vishnu : batao na janeman kya chal Raha tumhare dimag me..


anusuiya : Mai chahti hon agle c.m tum bano yahan ke..

vishnu : what...vishnu jhatke se uth kar baith Gaya..


anusuiya : ha Shona..apko mere liye Banna hoga...

apne skirt upar karke anusuiya panty ko side me kar vishnu ke land par baith jati hai....


Vishnu : aaaahhh...janeman isme janti ho kitna paisa lagega...ek minute kya tum Maharaj se gaddari karne ka sonch rahi ho..


anusuiya : aaaahh...ummm... nahi..uddesya wahi rahega Mera...prantu Mai bhairav ko kisi surat c.m nahi dekh sakti..aur paiso....aahhh ki chinta na Karo...


Vishnu : kam se kam 100 carore..


anusuiya : 500 dungi....aur anusuiya vishnu ke land par tej tej uchalne lagti hai..


Vishnu : aaahhh...itna Paisa...kaha se laogi...janeman...


anusuiya : karz lungi...


Vishnu : mere pass hajar corore to honge hi...wo bhi to tumhare hi hai..


anusuiya : ohhh mere Shona...jhukkar anusuiya apne lips vishnu ke hontho par rakh deti hai kiss karte hue vishnu anusuiya ke gol matol aam dabane lagta hai...


anusuiya : aaaaahhhhh...aaahhhhhh..aur tej mere heroo...aaaaahhhhh....


1 ghante ke bad dono apna karyakram karke thak kar ek dusre par let jate hai..


Vishnu : kab ki date rakhi sona ki shadi ki...


anusuiya : 26 December...sari tayari apko karni hai Shona..


Vishnu : Mai dekh lunga...

ummmm...anusuiya uske nippale ko chum leti hai...


anusuiya : kya sonch rahe...

vishnu : hamara viavh kab hoga...


anusuiya : sona ki shadi ke ek mahine bad...apne bat ki aunti se..


vishnu : wo to man gayi...lekin..wo kaise manega...tumhara bigdel bhai...


anusuiya : use mujh par chhod do...


vishnu : wo nahi manega..mujhe marne ki kosish ki usne to kya karogi...


anusuiya : bhul jaungi wo mera Bhai hai...mere hone wale pati hi mere liye sabse badkar hai..


Vishnu : us din uske samne tumhe chodte hue maja bahut aya tha...


anusuiya : mujhe bhi ek thrill vibe ayi..pata nahi kyo..

Vishnu : ek bar aur uske samne..


anusuiya : marungi...soncha bhi to..

Vishnu : vivah ke bad to kar sakte hai na...

anusuiya: tab dekha jayega...anusuiya ne uthte hue kaha...


fir kapde pahan kar Baal sanwarne lagi...



anusuiya : thik hai Shona take care..kiss karke anusuiya room khol kar bahar ayi ki use vishnu ki patni khadi mil gayi...


jisne anusuiya ko dekhte hue hath jod liye...


anusuiya ne sar hilaya fir kuch kahe Bina age badh gayi...


thode age ane par use khada ghana mil gaya...


step mom..ghana pass akar bola..


anusuiya : badmash...gale me bahein dalkar anusuiya use jhuka deti hai...


ghana : pyar Mai karta hon maje mere bap ko mil rahe...


anusuiya : janti hon teri nigahe mujhme kya dekhti...kehte hue anusuiya khada karke ghana ko chum leti hai..


ghana : chicks par nahi step mom...mujhe hontho par chahiye...

anusuiya : tum bhi na bhut shararti ho gaye ho..


ummmmmm....kuch second ka kiss karke anusuiya alag ho jati hai...


ghana : mujhe wo hak chahiye jo daddy ko hai aap par..

ghana ki awaz par anusuiya mudkar use dekhti hai...

anusuiya : apne baap ki tarah jab dam ho tab ana mere pass..


Kehte hue anusuiya age badh jati hai....


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hame 2 ghante ho Gaye they travel karte hue Saher se ham bahut door agaye they...


Maine ban ka mirror niche karke bahar dekha to ab jungle tha charo taraf jiska Kona dikhai nahi de Raha tha....



danny : ye Sara rasta saaf karaya tha american team ne jab wo research karne ayi thi...nahi to jahan ham chal rahe hai ye sab jungle hi tha..

victor : kya hua unki khoj ka...


danny : kuch nahi pta sir us team se fir kabhi mera milna nahi hua..



samne hi mujhe tant lage aur Michino ke sath worker dikhai dene lage...jo ghumte hue kam kar rahe they..



jeep ruki aur ham sab utre...


utarte hi mujhe inspector ne niche isara kiya...


hamare pairo ke niche ki mitti bilkul Kali thi...Mai utha kar hath se dekhne laga...


mai : victor sir...iske kad kad bilkul alag hai...pani lekar aao koi...


victor : han ajeeb hai ye jagah aur utni hi veeran udas hai...


water..ek worker ne pani diya...jise lekar Maine Matti par dala...

inspector : nahi banega...

mai gola banana chahta tha mitti gili karke lekin nahi bana..

mitti fek Maine hath dho liye...


inspector : khudai ka kam kaha ho raha hai...


danny : Jimmie..kaha hai..


jimmie ko bulane bheja hai...ek worker ne kaha..

victor : aao tab Tak kuch khaye piye fir site dekhne chalenge...



ham apne tant me akar baith Gaye ..

victor: baithne ke liye sahi hai lekin letne ke liye chhota hai...


inspector : Mai pehra dunga ap dono sona..


khana aya aur ham sab khane lage....


aaaaaaaaaaaaa...ek chikh par ham sab log bhage...bahar ke liye...


bahar ek worker dard me karaha raha tha...


mai : kya hua ise...inspector ne jaldi se use uthaya...aur tant me lekar aya...


victor : doctor ko bulao..itne me hamare sath hi doctor uski nabz pakad kar check karne laga...


worker : wo khana mat khana...usne kisi tarah dard me kaha...


doctor : koi pani lekar aao..pass rakha pani Maine worker ke mooh se lagaya...fir doctor ne use goli de di...




kuch der bad worker ko relief Mila...


victor : kya hua tha tumhe..

worker : sir Maine Pani ki bachat karne ke liye pass ek chote se talab se pani liya khane me dalne ke liye...dikhne me bilkul saaf tha Maine Piya to pine me bhi acha lekin fir pet me dard suru ho gaya...ab bhi ho raha hai lekin halka..


victor : tum aram Karo...

worker ko chhod ham sab bahar aye..

victor : doctor pani ko microscope se check Karo dekho usme kya hai pine layak hai ya nhi...aur koi bhi yahan ki kisi chiz ko na hath lagayega na kuch khayega...


ham wapas apne tant me aye aur apna readymade khana khaya...

uske bad site ke liye chal diye....


door se hi hame pyramid najar ane Lage...


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pass akar ham use hairat se dekhne Lage...

Worker aur genrator ki awaz aa Rahi thi...


itne me ek ladki ke sath ek admi hamari taraf ane laga...


jimmie... American team ka incharge.

Professor  helena..

bari bari se ham sabne unse hath milaya..

victor : kuch Mila..


helena : ek grave bas..aao mere sath...


ham uske sath chal diye jo name lekar pyramid ke andar ghus gayi...pyramid ko cut kar andar jane ka rasta banaya gaya tha...


mai : ise apne kata professor..

helena : nahi saal pehle American team ayi thi yahan khoj karne un logo ne hi banaya tha..andar jane ke liye rasta...


jhukkar wo grave ko saaf karne lagi...


helena : ye ancient times ki hai...


grave ki sides se dhul hata kar wo padhne lagi...


rajkumar khemou..800 bc..me iski death Hui thi...

mai use imagine karne laga...wo log teer kaman se ladte hoge mard aur aurte chhode khalo se bane kapde pahanti hogi ..

helena : ise puja jata tha kyoki ye Rajkumar tha ..wo grave par likhi lines ka translation karke bata rahi thi...

inspector : aaj khud ye mara pada hai..


kehta hua wo age bad gaya...


victor : iske upar ka pathar hata kar dekha...


lights dikhao.. inspector ki awaz par worker use light dikhane lage...


helena : nahi lekin mujhe yakin hai ham se pehle aye ise hata chuke honge...

victor : dekhne me kya jaa raha hai...


mai aur victor sir dam lagakar grave ke upar ka pathar hatane lage...


wo hata...ki ek kali makhio ka jhund upar ke liye uda...jo body par lipta tha...


victor : aaaaaaaa....


mai : sab niche jhuko.....


mai lettte hue chikha.....


bhinnn bhinn karti hui wo makhiyan roshni ki taraf jane lagi....



Ham log jameen me mooh chupaye pade they ki kuch der baad bahar se chikho ki awaz ayi...


uthkar mai bahar aya...


mai : sab jhuk jao....jaldiii.....


meri awaz par sabhi worker equipment chhod apni jagah par letne lage...



makhiyan fir bhi apna kaam kar gayi thi...

jin logo ke makhio ne kata wo buri tarah se chikh rahe they dekhte hi dekhte unke mooh sooj gaye they kisi peeth kisi ka hath....


mai : shant ho jao...

wo chikh rahe they...


ye jagah shapit hai ..hame yahan nahi ana chahiye tha..

mai : asa kuch nahi hai...jakhmio ko jaldi se tent me le jao...doctor ke pass...

mere kehne par sahi worker jakhmio ko le jane lage..



salil...victor sir ki awaz par Mai andar aya...


Ab utni roshni nahi thi...khodne ka kaam ruk chuka tha..pedo ki katai bhi ruk gayi thi workers ke jane ke baad .


Mere andar ane par victor sir mujhe body dikhane lage...

Body dekh Mai jo kehne aya tha wo bat mere dimag se nikal gayi...

Helena Jimmie ki help se grave ke upar ka pathar hatane lagi...fir wo grave ke andar ka saman khol kar nikalne lagi...


Ek taraf se victor sir bhi nikal rahe they...


Itne me inspector apne sath bartan aur kapde le aya...


Mai : un makhio ne kai workers ko jahkmi kar diya hai...

Victor : Jimmie Danny ko unke pass bhejo...

Mai : apko unke zakhm dekhne chahiye...wo kisi fode ki tarah hai..


Victor : ruko chalte hai...


Helena ko sikke mile ek ajeeb si itom ke andar ek ajeeb se mug jo sone ka tha..

Helena :suna tha yahan asmani afat ayi fir ye grave kaise Bach gayi...


Inspector; ye wo nahi hai Jo ham dhund rahe hai...mayavi civilization ke bad ki grave hai.. 2000 saal baad ki...wo bartan aur kapde rakhte hue bola...jinhe utha kar mai dekhne laga..


inspector : inki maut Bawa se hui...


victor sir ko bhi Sona Mila..

Helena : in logo ka vishwash tha swarg nark me jane ke liye ache karm ki jagah sona inhe marne ke bad ki life me aram dega isliye ise inhi chizo ke sath dafan kiya gaya..wo victor sir ke saman ko dekhte boli...


inspector : ab ye Sona to yahan ki government ka ho gya iska kya hoga..wo majak banate hue bol Raha tha jis par hame bhi hasi agayi.




victor : ek bat samajh me nahi ayi...jo hamse pehle yahan aye unhone is grave ko kyo nahi khola..


Helena : pta nahi...

inspector : ho sakta hai..wo yahan aye hi na ho..kisi aur ne ise khola..wo helena ko dekhte hue bola..

mai : kab se ho yahan.

Helena : aaj 4th din hai...

itne me Jimmie Sara Mila hua saman apne bag me rakhne laga...


Helena : andar aur bhi hogi but khodna padega..

Jimmie : ruko Mai machine se is sari jagah ka 3d scan leta hon..sahi jagah khodne ke liye..


saman samet kar wo apne Kam par lag gya...victor sir ko lekar Mai bahar aya..


mai : ab bataye ye hamara project hai ya in Americans ka..

victor : kya bataun yaar...inhi ka hai ...kafi samay pehle ek team ne yahan reserch ki ..uske bad kuch din pehle iska contract mere pas aya.americans ki taraf se...Milne Wale saman par 5% hame 95% inhe waki kharcha hamara sab kuch inke jimme..

mai : ye to hamse ache hai knowledge me fir in logo ne itni door se team kyo bulai..

victor : koi dar ki wjah se ye project le hi nhi Raha tha...acha offer tha to Maine haa kar di...


mai : matlab kuch gadbad hai..wo makhiyan mere kaat leti fir..

victor : kuch nahi hoga yaar...bas ek baat ki mujhe khaye jaa rahi hai...

Maine question bhari ankho se unhe dekha..


victor : sara sona in logo ko mil jayega..bc...


mai : ha ye baat to mujhe bhi khatak rahi hai...double cross kare...kuch nahi to apne Desh ke gareebo ko daan hi kar denge..

victor : ha lekin ye kam bhut safai se karna hoga...


wo Mai keh Raha tha mayawi civilization ke pyramid age hai chalkar dekhe.. inspector hamare pas akar bola.


victor : thik hai Helena se bat karte hai...


andar danny machine se chhed kar raha tha...acha ye hua Jimmie ke pas map banane wali machine thi jisse Pyramid ki labai chudai ki vishual ham dekh paa rahe they...


Helena : age ke pyramid door hai ..jungle katna padega..rasta banana padega..genrator aur gadio ke guzarne ke liye..helena victor sir ke age jane par puchne par boli...


andar ek ek bande ke ghusne ki jagah hui aur ham sab letkar andar ghusne lage...


kafi der baad ham andar aye...


victor : padho..

mai us grave ko code karne laga...

inspector : ye slaves ki grave hai jinhe Zinda hi dafnaya gaya Rajkumar ke sath..mai code hi kar raha tha ki inspector bol utha...mai sonchne laga meri jagah par is sale ko hona chahiye tha..


helena : ha sahi kaha..ek pyramid me sirf ek hi king ya prince ki grave ho sakti hai...

victor : kholkar dekhte hai shayad kuch mile.

aur ham sab lag gaye...ek ghante ki mehnat ke bad hamare hath lagi sirf haddiyan...aur teer kaman.

jinhe lekar ham bahar aye..





inspector : ab kuch hath nhi lagega khazana sirf king ke sath dafn kiya jata hai...


victor : Helena chale fir...


Danny: kaha sir yahan sab taraf to jungle hi jungle hai pyramid bhi najar nhi AA rahe..

Helena : map hai mere pass lekin in pedo ki wajah se dhundna muskil hai..vaise bhi abhi dhin dhal gya hai ...age jane ka rasta bhi nhi hai...kal rasta bnayenge....


ham sab wapas tant ke pass agaye...


victor sir ko liye Mai workers ke tant me aya jahan kali makhiyon ke katne se ghayal worker they...


victor : kya hua Dr...ye thik to ho jayenge.

doctor : dawa to de di hai..

ohh...worker ki halat dekh victor sir ulti karte bahar ko bhage...

unke piche Mai bhi agaya...


victor : kya ho gayi inki halat...


itne me sabhi worker hamare pass akar ikattha ho gaye..


worker : ye shapit jagah hai..ham jaa rahe hai...hame nahi marna yahan..

helena : ham tumhe double majduri denge...wo apne tant se nikalte hue akar boli..

victor sir bhi samjhane lage..lekin worker they ki manne ko tayar nahi..


mai : dekho dosto ham bhi tumhare sath yahan hai...khatra jitna tumhe hai utna hi hame hai..

worker : tum logo ne kiya kya ghayalo ke liye..

mai : victor sir ghayalo ko abhi hospital ke liye bhejna hoga....


Helena aur victor sir ne hami bhari..

mai : thik hai ghayalo ko abhi ham hospital ke liye rawana kar rahe hai..

Aur fir ek gadi par 3 ghayal worker ke sath 2 logo ko Maine bhej Diya...tab jakar worker mane...


mai : sab log jakar apne tant me jakar let jao..

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itne me inspector ne lakdiyan kaat kar aag laga di..


victor : ye kitna chill hai yaar..

mai : ha sir..

firecamp.ke pass baith ham log box ka khana khane lage...


mai : helena 6 worker kam ho gaye...kam ruk jayega...kya karna hai..


Helena : ek hafte ke kam me 2 hafte lag jayenge..Maine jane wale workers se keh Diya ate samay apne sath kuch worker le aye..but pareshani ye hai yahan koi ana nahi chahta...


ab din Puri tarah dhal Gaya tha...sab taraf andhera chha gaya tha...pass Lage camp bhi dikhai nahi de rahe they...aag ki roshni me ham sab ek dusre ko dekh paa rahe they...


inspector : jungle katenge to 2 hafte ki jagah 2 mahine 2 saal bhi lag jayenge..na to itna rashan hai aur na pani...na hame thik se ye pata hai pyramids hai kaha..siwaye iske jise aaj hamne dhunda...


victor : baat to sahi hai..tumhare pass koi idea hai...


inspector : doctor aur saman ko lekar ham age badhte hai...jungle me pyramid dhudenge..

Jimmie : correct uske liye hame chahiye torch aur pathar todne ke liye worker..genrator ki zarort hi khatm..

mai : haa sahi hai...

Helena : thik hai kal milte hai...jimmie ko liye wo chali gayi...victor sir bhi chale gaye..ab sirf Mai aur inspector aur ek worker baitha tha...


mai : indian lag rahe ho aap..

worker : yes Indian...

mai : hamare sath to aye nahi...yahi se ho.

worker : maxico se sabhi worker ke sath..pehle Mai bhi archeologist tha..ek galti Hui aur Meri job chali gayi..uncle ka kehna tha maxican worker ke sath unhe bhi yahan kaam par laya gaya..na ki wo maxican hai..

mai : acha nice...to kuch jante ho yahan ke bare me..

worker : bhut kuch..ye jamin apne andar hazaro raz dafan kiye hue hai..aaj America jitna technology me duniya se age hai..ye jagah hazaro vars pehle kabhi america se hajaro Guna jyada age thi...

mai : ye sab to Maine bhi pata hai...

meri bat sunkar uncle chup ho Gaye..

mai : Indians hi yahan ke pharoh they..

worker : nahi unki prajati alag thi...kuch had tak wo dikhte they Indians ki tarah.....



hooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnn...ohhhnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn....

jungle se darawni chinghado ki awaz sun kar ham teeno ek dusre ka face dekhne Lage..
mai : ye kya hai...
worker : subah Tak aisi hi awaje ati hai..aur wo uthkar chale Gaye...
mai : uncle helena ko bhej Dena..
inspector : kyo pasand agayi..
mai : kya yaar ..Mai to tujhe dekh ke hairan hon..in awazo ko sunkar bhi tu chill kar Raha hai...kehkar mainse sigrat aag se jala li..
mai : tum pioge..uski haa par Maine ek use de di...
Inspector: shadi ho gayi...
mai : haa tumhari..
inspector : bache bhi hai..
mai : tumhare hai..
same jawab sunne par inspector chup ho gaya...
ounnnnnnnnnnnn...
mai : chalo andar chalte hai...
inspector : nahi tum jao...Mai pehra dunga..
mai : tumhari samjh me nahi aa Raha ye awaze kaisi hai...
inspector : janwaro ki hai...
mai : thik hai...khatra dikhe to chikhna...helena ke na ane par mai tent me agaya...

Gram kapde utar kar Mai victor sir ke pass let gaya...






agli subah Mai utha aur bahar aya...bahar inspector chair par baithe so Raha tha...aag ab bujh gayi thi..bas shole jal rahe they...


mooh dhokar maine inspector ko uthaya...mujhse pani lekar wo mooh dhone laga...helena ko dekha to wo golio ke pauch se ek goli nikal kar masalne lagi dekhte hi dekhte usme se jhag nikalne Lage..


mai : sabun chahiye...


inspector : han hai to do...


mai chalta hua helena ke pass aya..

Mai : ye kya tha jisse tum mooh dho Rahi ho...

helena : Maine hi sabun ghis kar uski golian banai..chahiye..

mai : yeah two...


usne golian di aur Mai thanks kehta hua inspector ke pass aya...


worker se saman lekar inspector Sholo par coffee banane laga...helena aur Jimmy ko bhi hamne apne sath breakfast par bula liya...


mai : sare worker tayar ho jao...jalane ke liye lights..ek hafte ka rashan...khodne ke liye hathiyar..sab sath rakh lo...hame ek week ke liye jana hai..to usi hisab se tayari karo..

mere kehne par sab tayari karne lage....

itne me raat nikli car wapas agai...


mujhse pehle jimmy un tak pahucha..bhagkar Mai bhi aya...


jimmy : kya hua kaise Laut aye...

jimmy ke puchne par worker rone lage...

worker : raste me hi unhone dam tod diya..

jimmy : unhe muawza mil jayega..tum shor karke workers ko darao mat...tum dono ko bhi 20 .20 hazar dollar dunga..


paise ke age dono worker man gaye..lekin ab mujhe dar lagne laga tha...


mai : age khatra hai to fir ham age nahi jayenge..rat bhi mujhe darawne sapne aa rahe they...so bhi nahi paya..

jimmy : kya kar rahe ho pagal ho Gaye ho...

inspector : Mai age rahunga..agar hamne ye khoj ki to soncho ham kya discover karenge..salil risk to Lena padega..aur jo tumne victor sir se kaha hai..usme bhi tumhara sath dunga.. ham apne Desh ke logo ka bhala karenge..aur tumhe bhi to paiso ki zarurat hogi..

meri samjh me ye nahi aa raha tha is sale ko kaise pata chal gaya...mera aur victor sir ka plan.

mai : thik hai tere piche hi rahunga...

mujhe ghar banwana tha aashna ki shadi karni thi apna badla Lena tha...bhut kuch tha meri zindagi me jise karne ke liye paise ki zarurat thi...
mai har to gaya hi tha isliye ek chance lene ka faisla kiya.



inspector : tum dono yahi ruk kar saman aur tant ki rakh wali karna..sabhi workers ko ham apne sath le jaa rahe hai..tumhare hisse ka khana chhod jayenge.


jimmy ne bhi uski bat ki hami bhari...





11 baje ham log paidal hi jungle ki taraf chal diye...helena map me rasta dekh bata rahi thi...uske sath inspetor tha uske piche Mai victor sir aur Jimmy...ham kul 18 log they sabse piche workers ke sath danny tha...workers hi sara saman dho rahe they.. personal bags ham sabke kandho par they.



jungle me jhadiya hi jhadiyan thi ped bhi bhut bade bade aur lambe they jin par sanp latak rahe they... inspector talwar se jhadiyan katte hue age badh raha tha...





chalte chalte hame raat ho gayi lekin ek bhi pyramid dikhai nahi Diya....



ek jagah ko saaf karke inspector ne rukne ka kaha....


inspector : age ka safar ham subah karenge...

sabhi log jagahe saaf karke apne apne pack hone wale tant nikal kar letne lage...ye tant letne wale they..charo taraf se band andhar hi blanket hota hai inke...

inspector : salil tum yahan bicha lo..wo ek jagah saaf karke bola...


jimmy : jaldi jaldi khana Khao aur lights ko band kar do...


inspector fir lakdiyan todkar jalane laga...


aag ke samne baith kar hamne khana khaya..

victor : thik hai salil Mai sone chala tum bhi jaldi ajana...


oouuunnnnmmmmm....

helena darkar mujhse chipat gayi...


inspector : daro nahi jungli janwar hai...



Worker : hamne yahan chidiyan bhi nahi dekhi..ye jagah itni shapit hai yahan koi jeev jantu nahi hai .

ye wahi uncle they jinse meri kal raat bat Hui...uncle ki bat sunkar mujhe bhi dhyan aya ...Maine bhi siwaye ham logo aur sanpo makhio ke kisi ko nahi dekha tha...


inspector : uncle sanp to apne dekho hoge...unki khurak ke liye jeev jantu bhi hai jahir si bat hai..


inspector ko dekh samjh hi nahi aa raha tha wo kaisa Banda hai...itna hajir jawab ..


worker : ham kahi galat raste par to nahi Jaa rahe..wo awaze ab aur tej ho gayi hai...


helena : ham sahi raste par hai...


worker : bura na mane to mujhe dikha sakti hai map...

jimmy : shut up..kam se kam rakho..

mai : danto nahi yaar uncle bhi kabhi archeologist hua karte they..

helena : kya naam hai tumhara..


worker : kewal..

helena: map ki bhasa pata nahi kaisi hai...Mai Puri tarah se samajh nahi paa Rahi hon.wo map nikal kar dete hue boli...

aag ki roshni me uncle map dekhne Lage...


kewal : thik se dikhai nahi de Raha hai..subah dikhana...

maine phone ki light map par dal di..jab se yahan aya tab se na to call ho Rahi thi naa aa rahi thi...mobile ka ab use ho raha tha...


Kewal : ye kadeem lipi ki copy hai...tumhare pas kaise ayi...


ham sab helena ko dekhne Lage..


helena : record me thi...

kewal : copy ke liye bhi original ki to zarurat padegi...original record me kaise aya...


Helena : wo Mai...Mai nahi janti..mujhe mere office me Mila..

mai : helena hamare char logo ka sacrifice ho gaya hai mere pass right hai is khoj ko yahi band karne ka..sidhi tarah batao tum kya chupa Rahi ho..

helena: jo pehle aye archeologist unhone yahi ise print kiya tha unke saman me Mila tha...


mai : kya hua unke sath...

helena : wo kisi virus ka shikar ho gaye they...

uski bat sunkar Maine apna sar pakad liya...Mai fas gaya tha buri tarah...


ya fir ham sabhi...


kewal : hame North me Jana hoga...uncle hath se left ki taraf ishara karte hue bole...


kuch kahe Bina Mai sabke pass se uthkar victor sir ke pass akar let gaya...


mai : sir jaag rahe ho..


victor : han...

mai : sir ye Helena sali hamari bali dene ke liye layi hai...aur Maine sab bata diya..

victor: dekh lete hai ek do din..aur nahi to wapas chalenge..bas dhyan rakhna kisi bhi chiz ko pehle hath nahi lagana..

mai : chipko nahi sir... unhone apni tang mere upar rakh di thi...


victor : sorry yaar adat hai wife ke upar rakhne ki..


mai : bache hai apke...

victor : han 2 hai chhote hi hai abhi..tum btao ..


mai : alag ho gaya hon sir..ab dusri shadi karunga...aur Maine ankhe band kar li....



agle din map kewal worker ke hatho me tha aur ham sab unhe follow kar rahe they....


dophar me hame ek pedo se dhaka pyramid najar aya..


Kewal : ye king ka hai..konse king ka ye to nahi pata...lekin sab hoshiyar ho jao...king ki grave ke pass grava bachane ke liye traps lagaye jate hai..


chrrr...ek purani pani ki bottle par mera pair laga..


mai : yahan log aye they...bottle utha kar Maine pyramid ki taraf feki....


kuch na hone par inspector age badh gaya jiske sath uncle they...

kewal : jahan mai kadam rakhun wahi kadam rakhna...


dono ko follow karte hue ham sab piche piche chalne Lage....


pyramid ke andar ka rasta band Kiya hua tha...


helena ke kehne par worker fir kholne lage...

machine na hone ki wajah se time lag raha tha...


rasta pehle khula hone ke Karan jaldi khul Gaya lekin ab din dhal Raha tha...


ham sab andar aye...


andar ate hi hamari awaze gunjne lagi..



jimmy : helena grave ka pta kro...kal ka din jo waste hua wo Aaj rat kam karke pura karenge..

kewal : age hai..lekin age bhi trap ho sakte hai...


helena ne map liya aur udhar hi Jane ko kaha jidhar uncle ne bataya tha..


jimmy : Dany kam ke workers ko hamare sath bhejo waki ke yahi ruko...



ham log bhul bhulaiyo se hote hue age badhne lage ham jagaho ko mark karte hue jaa rahe they ...sabse age worker they...jo light dikha rahe they...


age hame ek bada room dikha...jis par lakdi ka door tha...


jimmy ke kehne par worker todne lage...


dhammmmm...door Tuta aur andar dekh kar ham sabke rongte khade ho gaye dar se...

andar kuch tha jo baitha hua tha..jisse roshni fut Rahi thi...jimmy ne worker se light lekar us par dali to wo mujhe dikhai diya...wo koi koyle se bhi kala tha diwar se tek lagaye..gale me uske Sona heere jwaharat pade they naak me uski bali thi...uski ankhe khuli thi lekin veeran aisa lag raha tha jaise wo hame dekh raha ho...


darkar sare worker piche ko bhage...mai bhi bhagta lekin inspector kamine ne mera hath pakad liya...


jimmy : ruk jao sab ye murda hai...wapas ajao...


helena torch lekar andar badhi...usne ek lakdi se us baithe hue ko hilaya...


mera dil dhak dhak kar raha tha buri tarah se...aisa lag raha tha jaise wo uthkar ham sabko kha jayega...


helena ke sath inspector tha jisne abhushan us par se utarne shuru kar diye...kewal uncle bhi kaha piche rehte wo bhi maal batorne lage...
mai grave dekhne laga...


Us par ajeeb hi bhasa likhi thi...Mai saf kar raha tha unhe jod Raha tha...


tutenkhu.ka salve...

mai : ye gulam ki grave hai Jo king ka khas tha...

victor : gulam wo hai jo baitha hua hai bhediye jaisa...

victor sir ko dekh Mai hat gaya .


victor: tutenkhu king ..ye slave nhi balki aero aur bhediye ka Nishan bana hai jiska matlab hai ye is king ki raksha karne wala slave hai..sir us abhushano se jadit ki taraf ishara karte hue bole...jis par se ab utar liya gaya tha..

mai : sir Naya hon..na..

victor : 9 hajar saal purani hai ye grave..

mai : sir us gulam ki ankhe kharab kyo nahi Hui..jism bhi...dekhe...


dalo isme...Maine kaha buddhe daal isme...jimmy ki awaz par Maine use dekha jo uncle par bhadak raha tha..uncle ke hatho me behsumar heere aur Sona tha jise Jimmy bag me dalne ke liye keh Raha tha..


kewal : ye hamara hai...mujhe Mila..

inspector: dal do uncle...

jimmy : buddhe dalta hai ya Maru tujhe...wo gun nikal kar bola...jis par helena uncle se Sona chhin kar bag me dalne lagi...

victor sir mujhe ishara karne lage...


inspector : sona hamare man me lalach paida kar Raha hai Jimmy gun andar rakh...

helena : ha Jimmy ye sahi keh Raha hai..


victor : aaj rat hi ise par karna hai...wo dhire se fusfusaye hindi me...Maine ankho se hami bhar di...


sara sona lekar Jimmy nikal gaya...aur Helena hamare pass agayi...

victor : ise kal kholen...bhut rat ho gayi hai...

sir ki bat par helena ne hami bhari aur ham sab bhi wapas ho liye...


pyramid ke usi hall me ham sabne padao kiya tha...wahi agaye they ham..


uncle sabhi workers ke kano me sone ka lalach daal rahe they...aisi bat thi nhi ki ye khabar udti na...

inspector bahar se lakdiyan lakar jalane laga...jiske pass baithkar ham khane lage...


kha kar sab bari bari se letne wale tant bicha kar usme ghus Gaye...siwaye mere aur inspector ke...

inspector : tum nahi Jaa rahe sone...

mai : nahi yaar victor sir mujhse chipat kar lette wo bhi underwear me...


inspector : thik hai tum pehra do kai dino se jaag Raha hon...aur wo uth Gaya...fir apna tent laga kar aag ke pass hi let gaya...usi ke pass Mai baitha tha...


Mai: pata hai Jimmy ne sona kaha rakha hai ..na abhi tak aya wo..


inspector: wo tent me rakhne Gaya hai...

mai : waha pahuchega kaise Bina map ke..


inspector : ham pedo ko mark karke aye hai...vaise bhi wo helena ka senior hai.. bodyguard to danny hai Jo gayab hai.. matlab uske sath...


mai : ha sahi kaha...pedo par mark wali baat mere dimag se hi nikal gayi thi...


inspector : aaoge mere pass... lekin sota Mai bhi hon underwear me...


mai : nahi vro tum so jao...

inspector : nind lage to ajana Mai bhi jaag Raha hon...


maine hami bhari aur tapne laga....

baithe... baithe hi jab nind ane lagi to maine ankhe band kar li....



kai vars gujre din hue kai vars gujre raat hue...kyo pal thaherta hai ye..
kyo wakt badalta nahi hai..
ye raah sooni hai kyo..
kyo koi nikalta nahi hai...


mai halki nind me hi tha ki gane ki awaj se meri aankh khuli...Maine charo taraf dekha sab so rahe they...


gane ki awaz ko sunta hua Mai age badhne laga...mujhe koi hosh nahi tha..us gane me jaise magnet tha jo mujhe apni taraf khinch raha tha...




salil...kuch door ane par mujhe inspector ki awaz ayi...


Kai baras guzre din hue..

kai baras guzre raat hue...


us gungunahat ki awaz par mujhe koi hosh nahi tha Mai bas chalta jaa raha tha...



chalte hue Mai usi kamre me agaya jahan sona mila tha king ki grave ke pass..

ab mujhe wahan 2 lal ankhe jalti hui dikhai de rahi thi....


wahan mat jaoo..mujhe wahi awaz sunai di jo abhi gaa Rahi thi...

ab mujhe hosh agaya tha lekin der ho gayi thi...


wo ankhe chalte hue mere samne akar khadi ho gayi thi...


Maine bhagna chaha lekin mere kadam jaise fas Gaye ho...


mere abhushan kaha hai...bolo...wo mujh par garja andhere me wo dikhai nahi de Raha tha itna kala hone ki wajah se lekin uske dar se meri fatt ke hath me agayi thi...


bata mere abhusan kaha hai....


bhago ...wo awaz fir mujhe sunai di..aur Maine daud laga di...


pata nahi Mai kis taraf jaa raha tha...mai bas bhag raha tha....


dhammm dhammm...uske bhari bhari kadamo ki ahat mujhe sunai de Rahi thi...


bhagte hue mujhe Aisa lag raha tha jaisa mera kaleja mooh ko aayega...



bhagte Mai ek dariya me akar gira...mai andha dhund bhag raha tha.




dariya ke bich me mujhe charo taraf nili roshni padti dikhai de rahi thi jiske bich hawa me kuch tha...


pehno use...warna wo tumhe maar dega...wahi awaj fir mujhe sunai di...


mai tairte hue us roshni ke pas aya...aur Maine us roshni ke andar hath daal Diya..


kya tum iske yogya ho...awaz par Maine darkar piche dekha...

Mere piche ane wala..freeze ho gaya tha....

agar tum iske yogya nahi hue to jaan se jaoge ..jawab do teen sawalo ka.

sawal ..wo nazuk kya hai jab bole to tut jaye..

mai : wo najuk kya hai jab bole tut jaye...tut jaye...khamoshi...khamoshi bolne se Tut jati hai..
sahi jawab...
dusra sawal...wo kya hai Jo insan ki apni hai lekin istemal duniya karti hai..


Mai: wo kya hai Jo insan ki apni hai lekin istemal duniya karti hai..kya istemal karti hai...sonchte hue Maine ankhe band kar li...mai kya ho sakti hai...salil...salil...
mai : naam...wo naam hai jise duniya istemal karti hai...
darkar Maine piche dekha wo darinda pani me agaya tha...
ab akhiri sawal...Maine agar apna naam liya to Mai gayab ho jaunga..
mai : ye .. kya...ho sakta hai..iska jwab...Maine darkar piche mudkar dekha to wo bilkul mere pass akar khada ho gaya tha...
mai : naam lene se gyab...khamoshi... khamoshi hi hai jiska naam lene se wo gayab ho jati hai...roshni hati aur mere hath me ek mask agaya...Maine piche mudkar dekha to wo darinda mujhe khuni nigaho se dekh raha tha..
pehno ise...mujhe us anjan awaz ka khyal aya aur Maine darinde ka hath chalne se pehle us mask ko pahan liya..
mai : aaaaaaaaahhh...aaahhhhhhhh....mujhe Aisa lag raha tha wo mask meri khaal cheelkar mere andar ghus Raha hai...
usne meri gardan pakad kar mujhe uthana chaha hairat ki baat Mai usse hila bhi nhi...
dhammmm.. mera hath chala aur us darinde ke pet par pada....aur wo udte hue door jakar gira...fir gyab ho gaya..

Agar mere abhushan wapas nahi aye to Mai tujhse jud jaunga...mujhe uski awaz ayi....


uska picha Karo wo wahi milega..mujhe wahi komal awaz sunai di...

mai : ap kon ho...aur yahan kaise...


awaz : Mai 9 hazar saal se yahan hon.kaid me...mai apne maa baap ki iklouti beti thi aur sabse khubsurat mujhe log door door se dekhne ate they...jab thodi badi hui to is pharoh ki mujh par najar padi aur isne mujhe mere husband se chhin liya...yahan ke logo ko kudrat ne bahut kuch Diya tha...yahan ke log asman me ud sakte they...na dikhne wali chizo ko dekh sakte they..jo duniya aaj hai ham isse hazaro saal age they..sab Milne ke baad yahan ke logo me ghamand agaya tha ..jis wajah se ham par asmani afat ayi aur ye jagah tabah ho gayi...aur yahan ke rehne Wale bhi.

mai : jab raja ne apko apke husband se chhin liya fir kya hua...


awaz: isne mujhe ganda karna chaha lekin mere inkar par isne mujhe jadugaro se kaid kara diya..ki mujhe aisi saza dega jo kabhi kisi ko na mili ho.un jadugaro ne mujh par vinashkal tak jivit rehne ka jadoo kiya...tab se Mai yahi kaid hon..

mai: aap Zinda ho..


awaz : ha jaise tum..


mai : mujhe batao Mai kya kar sakta hon apke liye...kaise apko Azad karu...


awaz : tum nahi kar sakte jakar apne logo ko bachao...


Aawaz ke kehne par Mai chal diya apne logo ke pass...



bahar aya to mujhe ek jagah ek safed kapdo me admi dikhai Diya jiske sharir par pattiya bandhi thi...chehre par mask tha..


mere abhushan kaha hai...us darinde ne wahi sawal usse dohraya...


mai : unhe to Jimmy le Gaya...


maroge dono......gusse me lal ankhe liye wo ham dono ki taraf badha...aur ham dono bhi uski taraf kude....






















































































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Creepy story

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Don't underestimate the brain of Creepy story naam ek dum sahi rakh rakha ha bhai ne aise update ka hi to intezar tha creepy wala

Isko bolte han nind uda dene wala update me sone ja raha tha or ab excitement me nind nahi aa rahi
Vro character ke according kahani age badh rahi mai bas likh Raha hon :idk1:
 

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1) bilkul sach na ansuya badli
2) na badli arohi
3) Ye inspector kon hai
4) ab kya ye mask salil ki takat banega
5) mama se pahle vishnu or uske bete ko uda do

Vro kyo badle ? Sonchne wali bat hai ek ladki aish ki life ke liye kya nahi karti..
Aarohi ab apni insult ka badla le Rahi hai fir galti karte hue.
3 inspector dusri story ka hero hai.
Let's see vro
Bhai sach bolu maza agaya
Thnx man
 

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Bhai koshish krna Kahani mein koe zyada Jadoo ya supernatural things na hon. Dual personality is very close to realy but things develping inside sea looks bit more unrealistic. I think Rolax is enough for all super stuff that require action in this story. Baki ye sirf suggesion hay aap jo bhe likho gay muje kabool hoga. Waiting for next plz JALDI Bhai
 

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Ek dum badhiya bole to jhakas update diya ha bhai majo agyo bole to new year dhamaka
Thnx vro..
Phase 3 ki starting hi bhai dhamakedar ki ha agaj aisa ha to pata nahi age kya hoga
Ab upcoming update phase three ki starting hai
Shole wapas dahak gaye bhai jab jab me kisi character ko sochta hun maf karne ke liye lekin fir wahi ho jata ha creepy bro be like na abhi na akhir tak sochna bhi mat
Hahaha
1. Salil ne bilkul thik kiya un dono behnon ke pas apni maa ko nahi keke gaya abhi to unhe inse milana chahiye bhi nahi unko kadra hi nahi ha rishton ki bhai to rahne ho do abhi to warna maa hi dukhi hogi situation ke anusar milna chahiye unhe
Le bhi kis mooh se jata..vro apni bhn ko kisi aur ke sath aisi abasthao me dekhne ke bad usme himmat hi kaha bachi..
Idhar chali ashna age na badhi na salil mene to socha kahin ye ashna hi jid na pakad le apne pyar ki lekin chalo badhiya ha idhar dono ne sab saf kar liya
Incest ko lekar readers se pucho vro meri taraf se to nahi hai waki reader jaisa bole
2. Idhar bhai abhi mila salil se bechare ke sath anu ne bhi dhoka diya udhar dusri to usse bhi age jindagi barbad kar di ha iski lekin victor iska dist nikla or victor abhi ko uska badla me sath dene ki kah raha tha lagta ha salil ko nishane pe lena chahta ha ye tabhi to salil ko itni asani se job de di dal me kuchh kala ha ye victor doglapan kar sakta ha
Vro abhi salil se badla nahi lega agar Aisa hota to abhi apni life ki baten use na batata
Ho sakta hai anusuiya ke liye kaha ho.
Or ye inspector kon aa gaya yar pehle to laga kahin surya hi to nahi kyonki abhi iska naam nahi bataya ha dekhte han kon nikalta ha ye nayi entry

new story ka hero hai.
3. Idhar bhai arohi to na jane kitna dil todegi harsh ke sath bhi so chuki ha bolo or harshi ko bhi pata thi ye bat harshi ne heart kar diya yar aisa bhi konsa sex addiction ha bolo bc kahi iske pichhe bhi to koi karan nahi sex addiction ke pichhe jisse ise control na hota ho or bad me ise hi apna hatiyar bana liya ha isne ki dono kam hote rahe
Harsh ke sath wo salil ke samne soyi thi
Fir anusuiya ke flashback me ye bhi clear hua ki harsh man hi man sneha ko chahta tha
Club me fight bhi Hui dono ki.
4. Idhar lo harsh bolo bc khud ki sagi behen ko bhi nahi chhoda isne harshi ki bhi ijjat lene chala tha kya le liya hi ha idhar arohi bolo aise time per bhi apne bhai ko maf kar rahi idhar harshi bhi bas sudharna chahti ha bolo aise insan ko tapka dena chahiye lagta ha iska bhi kalyan hoga age jakar
Sneha ko nahi chhoda fir sonch sakte ho
Idhar harshi ne bhai apne jiju salil ki tarif ki ki agar salil hota to wo uska cbi chief hona bhi nahi dekhta imagine agar salil hota us jagah to ye hota
Harsh ko ek do bar mara hai salil ne..
salil be like bhad me gaya gaya tera cbi chief tu pehle khopche me aa
Hahaha
salil aisa ha kuchh bhi ho harshi ke dil me apne jiju ke liye respect to ha kyonki in bhuke bhediyon ke jhund me wo akela tha jisne uske badan ko kapdon se dhaka tha jab us party wali rat to manti ha wo apne jiju ko me to kahta hun apne jija ke pas hi chali jati udhar ashna bhi sath thi to dono ki pat jati ashna ko bhi dist mil jati
Kaise jati vro usne ashna ka mazak udaya tha..aarohi dwara admission dilane par fir dono alag ho gayi.
5. Idhar fir arohi yadon me chali gayi salil ke haye itni yaden gumsum si ho gayi ha ye to maja aa raha ha iski aisi halat dekhkar
Vro Maine pehle hi explain Kiya is bat ko.
Aurat ki man pasand chiz chali Jaye wo dukh manati hai.
Idhar rohit bolo apne pyar ka wala hawala dekar arohi ka mana liya ek bat ha arohi ke dil me rohit ke liye pyar nahi ha usse sirf sympathy ha lekin pyar sirf salil se ha ye mane chahe na mane jo dikh raha ha wo bol raha hun dekhte han kab tak chipa oati ha apne emotion bhale hi sab kuch delete kar diya ho lekin feeling to develop kar gaya na salil wo nahi jayegi ir ab jab wapas lotkar iske samne ayega to fir to katai nahi jayegi kyunki prem rog bade bade tis markhaon ko bura se achha to achhe se bura bana gaya ha dekhte han ki iske sath age kya hota ha
Rohit ka dekho kya ho..
Idhar bhai pehli bar me arohi ke badle or uske mission me support kar rah hun kyonki sahi ha bhai kuchh had tak to bhale hi tarika galat hi apnayegi ye lekin iski kuchh baton se sahmat hun me
Yaar jinse aarohi panga le Rahi hai wo kitne shaktishali hai khud soncho..
Ab ye kisi party ke liye kam nahi karegi jo ki badhiya ise bhi samajh aa gaya ha ki sab parties inhe sirf istemal hi kar rahe han or isne anu or sona ko kangal karne ka than liya ha jo ki ab to me bhi chahta hun sala jyada hi ghamand aa gaya ha dono ko akla thikane lag jani chahiye khaskar us sona ki lekin fir wahi bat ayegi ye galat tarika apnayegi or salil bichh me aa jayega dekhte han ki kya hota ha age
Ha ye to hai
Ek bat bhai ye bhishma urf moko ko kaise janti ha baton se to lag raha ha sab wakif ha usse iska turp ka ikka ha wo lekin shayd ye wo wali timeline ha jab moko ki yaddasht ja chuki thi or wo sanvi ke pas tha to kisi ko uska ata pata nahi tha to ye wahi wala time ha shayd dekhte han ki kya bat ha
Vro episode 7 to 9 ke bich bhisma ka hint Diya tha bhishma bhi banglore se hai aarohi bhi ..
6. Idhar bhai in dono behnon ki baten sunker bhai mera puri tarah se vishwas uth chuka ha in dono se bolo inhone bolo ab tak emotional hone ka natak kiya ha salil ke samne apne yaron se pitwane ka bhi koi gum nahi ulta maje or le rahe han bolo kabhi kabhi sochta hun ye sagi behne hi ha ya koi or ha bhai agar ye sach ha to me bas itna hi kahna chahta hun Rolex in dono ko bhai nightmares dikha de aisa rulaye ki bas maja aa jaye kyunki sabse jyada in dono ne hi dil toda ha baki to paraye the lekin ye dono to sagi thi .
Women psychology padho vro
Bro is scene ne sabse jyada hurt kiya ha ab tak pure humilation ke time per bhi me itna hurt nahi hua jitna ab hua hun bechare salil ne nahi suna ye sab warna to bechare ka sachmuch rishton se bharosa uth jata mujhe to is scene ko hi pachane ke liye ise do bar refresh karke padhna pada ki kahin nind me kuchh ulta to nahi padh liya lekin sachmuch yahi hua to or dukh hua
Vro kya bolu kirdaro ke according
7. Idhar bhai vishnu ka puri tarah se kat rakha ha anu ne ye bhai puri tarah se iska gulam ban rakha ha or ye ghana bhi bolo shadi ka jhansa de rakha ha or ye pagal sab kuchh us per luta raha ha anu iska istemal kar rahi ha bhairav ke khilaf bole to sweet revenge joki badhiya ha lekin agar wo bhai ke samne sex wali bat sahi nikli to apun ko fir isse nafrat ba kyonki ye kabhi nahi sudharne wali kabhi nahi aisa lagta ha
Dono ki baton se nahi lagta anusuiya game khel Rahi uske sath vishnu bhi pahucha hua hai vro..abhi ne bhi bataya anusuiya ne kaha Ghar basane ke bare me
Ab in dono behnon se ek hi bat kahna chahunga itna fake emotions dikhaye han na apne bhai ke age jab sach ke asun niklenge to wo vishwas nahi karega ek ko to jhatka de hi diya ha or aisa diya ha ki uski akla thikane aa gayi thodi bahut tum dono ka kya hoga kahin usse buri durgati na ho jaye tumhari aisa girenge ki fir sambhalne wala bhi nahi milega
Yahi hoga..
8. Ab ye ye wo wala scene jiska sabko intejar tha salil ko power up me dekhna pure 36 ep bad 10 se 11 mahine bad jakar ab hua ha ye bolo ki ab apne dum per wo kad sakta ha kahan Rolex ke gun ga rahe the kahan salil babu hi power up me aa gaya pata nahi Rolex ayega to lata nahi kya hoga
Let's see
sala sone ko aag me jalaker kundan bante dekha ha yahan to sidha bhai jwalamukhi me dalkar bahar nikala ha salil ko
Hahaha
9. Idhar bhai jungle me bhai in sab ler hi shak ha salil ke siwa koi dudh ka dhula nahi kaga mujhe na victor na inspector or wo helena to katai nahi in sab per doubt ha mujhe ye log lagta ha kam lillegali kar rahe han khajane ke lalach me
Vro samajhne me mistake kar gaye...jo bhi baten thi sab clear ho gayi...
1 victor ke pass yahan khoj karne ka offer aya..koi is project ko le nahi Raha tha victor ko Mila usne le liya..usne bhi shapit hone wali bat sabse chupai..
Dusri bat jab salil ne pucha to usne sari baten batai..
Jimmie Helena hi sahi rights rakhte 5 percent victor ka 95 percent victor ka.isliye kisi ne kuch nahi kaha ..na inspector ne roka na victor ne
Idhar bhai sidha pyramid ke guardian se fight ho gayi bolo wo darinda jaisa shaks jinda ho gaya uska sona nikalte hi bilkul kisi movie ke scene ki tarah tah ye to or sidha takkar hui apne salil babu se or fir udhar jungle me mila wo mask or yogya apne salil jaisa hi yo hoga na itna dard sahne ke bad to ye inam ha uske liye he deserve this power or fir kand ho gaya lekin ye mask kiska tha or kyon rakha tha udhar ye janna ha or salil ko hi kyon mila ye bhi
Vro salil jaan bachaje ke liye bhag raha tha tab use ye Mila..
Ek bat bolun bhai wo mask jab roshni ke andar tha to us awaj ne puchha tha na ki tum iske yogya ho ki nahi or fir sawalon ke jawab bhi de diye salil ne to iska matlab to ye hi ha ki ab tak is mask ko salil ka hi intejar tha to kahin koi reincarniation wala chakkar to nahi ha na kyonki kya pata itna humilate hona bhi is safar ka ek hissa ho
Nahi vro Aisa kuch nahi coincidence hai bas

Idhar bhai ye darinda bhi salil se judne ki soch raha ha bolo bc ek sharir me kitne log rahenge pehle ek me do ha nahi tin chotha ye mask jud gaya ab panchwa ye darinda or ghusne ki soch raha ha bolo bc sharir na hoker godam ho jo aye ghusta chala ja raha ha .

yahan isse matlab uska use marne se hai.
Kher ab bat kar lete han is scene ki to bhai aisa laga tha ki bhai sala nayi story hi chalu ho gayi jaise waise jab shuru ke ep me salil ke archeologist wali bat ayi thi to mujhe laga tha ki bas aise hi ha fir bad me jab uske sath torcher hua or power up ki bat ayi thi tab mujhe kahin na kahin laga tha ki ye archeologist wala hi kuchh scene hoga jub salil power up me ayega shayd use khoj bin ke doran kuchh aisa mil jaye jisse thodi power mil jaye use or ab wahi hua jo ki bas ek soch thi or idhar ab hakikat me aa gaya dekhte han ki bhai ye ye mask jo salil ko mila ha kya kya kar sakta ha
Let's see
Waise ek bat khun idhar salil ki mentality ka bhi pata pada ki kis had tak tod diya ha use apnon ne kyonki bhai ek tarah se mout ke muh me hi tha wo is time do or die situation thi agar jawab galat to bhi mout or pichhe uske darinde ke roop me mout thi bolo kaisi halat rahi hogi uski ek dam perfect scene power up ke liye jo ki ek dam dil ko chhu gaya koi tona totka nahi hua ye achha ha
Haha thnx vro ek chiz miss kar di wo bhi ab clear ho jayegi.
10. Idhar bhai sabse badhiya scene heroine mil gayi lagta ha sidha ancient beauty waise salil deserve bhi karta ha itna sahne ke bad to bolo hum udhar purvi somya arohi lekar bethe the idhar to bhai swapna sundari leke aa gaye sidha ancient beauty le aye han salil ke liye bhai isko rakh lo salil ke liye duniya jal jayegi khaskar sari ladkiyan or ladke bhi fir me hasunga unki sunderta per waise iske liye koi achha sa naam bhi rakh lena bilkul pyara sa or dangerous sa bhi
Nhi vro wo heroine nahi hai ..wo koi thi uski apni kahani hai..
Pehle ye pure america wale scene ke liye to ye lo like ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Thnx vro
Ab marunga me wo quote jo mene is wale scene ke liye bacha rakha tha salil ke liye

He doesn't forget your prayers
"He answers them when the time is right"

thnx vro..
Ek ek ka hisab hoga har ek dushman ka hisab hoga jinhone pith me chhura ghopa ha unka bhi hoga har ek asuon har jillat ka hisab hoga wo bhi sut samet destiny bhi chahti ha salil badla le wo bhi apne haton se apne hosho awaj me

Ab jane do salil ko wapas ghar bc gaya normal tha ayega wo kuchh or hi bankar ab ayega maja sala bolo me rolex ko bhul gaya is scene ko dekhkar
Hahaha
Creepy bro apun ne ab popcorn ke sath sath mountain dew 🍾🍾 🍾🍾 bhi nikal li ha chalo ab kuchh tufani ho jaye


Waiting for next dhamakedar update bhai ab to intejar nahi ho raha
 

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Bhai koshish krna Kahani mein koe zyada Jadoo ya supernatural things na hon. Dual personality is very close to realy but things develping inside sea looks bit more unrealistic. I think Rolax is enough for all super stuff that require action in this story. Baki ye sirf suggesion hay aap jo bhe likho gay muje kabool hoga. Waiting for next plz JALDI Bhai
Bhai update to achchha tha lekin real story ko peechhe chhodkar magic fantasy me ghus gaya pura update..
me magic, supernatural aur aci-fi me jyada interested nahin sirf real life se related hi pasand karta hu

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Arohi aur Anusuiya ke karnamon me koi badlav nahin aya... Dono usi gandgi me aur gehre ghusne ka competition kar rahi hain, naye paintre ajmakar

Baki agle update me agar chamatkar se alag koi kahani badhi to...

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Vro don't worry story reality ke kareeb hi rahegi Jo scene aya hai ye bhi reality ke kareeb hi hai .waki har person ki life me kuch aisi ghatnaye hoti hai Jo exlain nahi ki jaa sakti.. archeologist ki life me bahut hi .
kamdev99008

Vro bat kare to Mera irada to Puri story ko hi reality par likhne ka tha but yahan ke votes dekhe mostly reader fantasy dekhna chahte hai .
Filahal ye scene ek hi hai...
 
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