A cheater wife can make him pervert.
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ye kahani aek sidhe sadhe ladke ki hai ...kaise vivah ke baad uski life me toofan ate hai kya wo unse lad payega or haar man ke ghutne tek dega..
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Adultery Broken by Her! (Story of a man) suspense thriller,incest adultery
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ye kahani aek sidhe sadhe ladke ki hai ...kaise vivah ke baad uski life me toofan ate hai kya wo unse lad payega or haar man ke ghutne tek dega..
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Sab badhiya tha lekin thoda fast forward laga mujhe bhai bichh ke thode se scenes abhi baki han shayd age dikha doge detail me ki kya hua tha udhar or sawal bhi bahut sare
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Ise kahte hain character assassination
Jo Saumya bold aur daring hoti thi, Salil ke Rolex roop se pyar karti thi aur Wimpy Salil se nafrat. Kisi se compromise nahin karti thi, lalchi nahin thi
Achanak se jaise hi meine usko logically ek ideal wife bataya Salil ke liye to apko aur Creepy story lekhak mahoday ko laga ab ise down karna chahiye.... Turant hi vo sabkuchh Salil ke hi nahin apne character ke khilaaf bhi karne lagi...
Jo Sona ke mamle me seniors ko bhanak lage bina Salil ke sath plan kar rahi thi vo achanak hi officers ke bete ki god me baith gayi, Salil aur Jhamela ko arrest aur torcher karne lagi, Mahesh aur Arjun ki shagird aur fir randi bhi banne ko taiyar hai...
Bhai Mera koi rishta nahin hai Saumya se, jo mujhe galat sabit karne ke liye uska character khatm kar rahe ho ..
Yahan tak ki apne spoiler bhi diya ki uske Salil se dur hone ki wajah se simply suicide ke liye bhi ek naya kaaran banaya jayega jisse Saumya ka chapter aur bhi down ho
Meri ore se to un teenon randiyon Arohi, Anusuiya aur Sona ko bhi doodh ka dhula dikha do mujhe koi fark nahin padta...
Saalon tak complete hone ke bad bhi lakhon readers saikdon forums par is kahani ko padheinge.. vo mere bare me nahin writer ke bare mein apna view banayeinge....
Copy paste story hoti hain.... Mere aur apke comments nahin..
Aur log padhte bhi story hi hain... Kuchh ko chhodkar
Aur bhai "alias" ka jhaantu khel "single word chitchat" wale chutiyon ko suite karta hai.... Hum aap story section wale to shabdon me duniya bana aur bigaad dete hain pathakon ke liye... Thalua Bakchodi nahi karte karte
Wow, simply mesmerizing. Kya likhte ho Bhai. You're a professional writer. Kesse scene KO develope krte ho. Kesse itna Soch lete ho. Mein toh sala agli KO understand krne K liye pehle last episode KO padna padta hay.
1. Rolax ki wapisi
2. Arohi pregnant hay when did they have sex last time. Kahi ye sali koe game toh nai kr rahi.
3. Wo IPs officer toh gae. Behter hota Woh such batadeti pr jhooot Ka result always bura.
4. Salil mom koe kaand zaroor kare gii.
1. Rolax ki wapisi
2. Arohi pregnant hay when did they have sex last time. Kahi ye sali koe game toh nai kr rahi.
3. Wo IPs officer toh gae. Behter hota Woh such batadeti pr jhooot Ka result always bura.
4. Salil mom koe kaand zaroor kare gii.
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Kahe bokhley hue ho Samuya simple jarur hai par salil ke loyal nahi use takat pasand hai jo rolex ke pass thi phir ab commissioner or uske bhai aj nahi to kal vo bhi ye karti
(sona : tune meri didi ko bulaya....Maine tere baap ko....Sona Gupta ki ankho me dekhte hue boli. )
Ye line movie ki thi par waha bhai bhen ko bachata hai par josh josh me Sona ne apne kal ko bula liya
Ye line movie ki thi par waha bhai bhen ko bachata hai par josh josh me Sona ne apne kal ko bula liya
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Mene padha tha mahesh use bhadka raha tha salil ke khilaf
Bhai me bichh me kab aa gaya mujhe to kuchh pata bhi nahi ha yar ki age kya hoga
Are mene majak me kaha tha bhai serius na lo aap mujhe lagta ha wo aisa nahi karegi use manipulate kara ja raha ha or kuchh nahi ir wo mc arjun ko waise bhi salil se khunas ha arohi ne use ab bhav mahi diya to shayd somya ke jariye wo use or todna chahta ha ye mera manna ha
Are mera konsa rishta ha kisi se
Wo bat ek bar pehle hi ek review ke reply me creepy bro ne boli thi wo to mene aise hi chipka di thi
Or apne padha bhi hoga is update me ki somya ne salil ko torcher kiya ha bachpan me to konsa pyar ha uska bataiye agar pyar hota to aisa to nahi bolti na wo mahesh ke age
Koi dudh ka dhula nahi ha bhai udhar arohi ne salil ka rape kara diya bolo bat wahin khatm ho gayi or Rolex ne somya ko nahi chhoda to kon dudh ka dhula bacha ab
Mere to review bhi gayab ho rehe han is story se pata nahi kaise
Waise mujhe bat samajh to nahi ayi lekin wo mene bas majak me kahi thi bat agar aapko bura lage to sorry mene to arohi ko favour kiya tha somya se jyada to usne kahin ka nahi chhoda fir me kiske pas jaun bhai ye to bas ek update tha uske pichhe ka kya ha abhi hame dikhaya nahi gaya ha yo hame agle update ka intejar karna chahiye
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Bhai baukhlaya kaun hai aur logical kaun hai... Pichhle Comments padhkar samjho....
Mein chamatkari, marvel, sextale nahin realistic legendary stories padhkar reviews deta raha hu... Logical PoV se to mujhe vahi pasand hai....
Na ki comics padhne wale bachchon ki tarah tointing..
Yahan bhi Rolex, inspector, bhishma ya telepathy ke chamatkar nahin Salil aur uski life and family drama ke thrill, suspense aur action ke liye aya hu....
Me superhero, horror, magic me believe nahin karta... Logic ko maanta hu
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Bhai gazab ke update the dono
Pahle hi Salil ko powerful banane ke chakkar me Rolex aur Rolex2.0 uski jindgi nark banaye hue the ab ye naya Mask aur aa gaya
2.0 ne to Sona ka bilkul pakka wala ilaj kar diya use me katai galat nahin maanta.... Anusuiya ki wajah se Sona ne jo Salil, Rolex aur 2.0 ke sath kiya... Uske badle me to ye kuchh bhi nahin hua.... Abhi to Anusuiya aur Sona ka bahut hisab baki hai
Aur Arohi... Wo randi Salil ko gaandu banate banate ab kis yaar ke bachche ka baap banane lagi... Agar ye Salil ka bhi bachcha hai to bhi Arohi ki jindgi nark se kam nahin honi chahiye.... 2.0 ne jo bachche ko lekar socha vo achchha laga
... Bachcha kisi ka bhi ho, use jindgi jine ka haq hai....
Lekin Arohi, Sona aur Anusuiya me se kisi ko marna nahin chahiye... Jinda rahkar apne karmon ka fal bhugatna ho tabhi to insaf hai.... Maut to dard se chhutkara hai
Saumya agar jaldi nahin sambhli to vo bhi isi list me judne ja rahi hai... Kyonki ab vo arjun ke hath ki kathputli si ban gayi hai
Ashna ka character strong hota ja raha hai... Aur Purvi ka bhi...
Ab yahi 2 bharosemand bachi hain.... Lekin Creepy story bhai rahne deinge
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Bhai aapke review se me purntaya sahmat hun khasker badle wali bat perBhai gazab ke update the dono
Pahle hi Salil ko powerful banane ke chakkar me Rolex aur Rolex2.0 uski jindgi nark banaye hue the ab ye naya Mask aur aa gaya
2.0 ne to Sona ka bilkul pakka wala ilaj kar diya use me katai galat nahin maanta.... Anusuiya ki wajah se Sona ne jo Salil, Rolex aur 2.0 ke sath kiya... Uske badle me to ye kuchh bhi nahin hua.... Abhi to Anusuiya aur Sona ka bahut hisab baki hai
Aur Arohi... Wo randi Salil ko gaandu banate banate ab kis yaar ke bachche ka baap banane lagi... Agar ye Salil ka bhi bachcha hai to bhi Arohi ki jindgi nark se kam nahin honi chahiye.... 2.0 ne jo bachche ko lekar socha vo achchha laga
... Bachcha kisi ka bhi ho, use jindgi jine ka haq hai....
Lekin Arohi, Sona aur Anusuiya me se kisi ko marna nahin chahiye... Jinda rahkar apne karmon ka fal bhugatna ho tabhi to insaf hai.... Maut to dard se chhutkara hai
Saumya agar jaldi nahin sambhli to vo bhi isi list me judne ja rahi hai... Kyonki ab vo arjun ke hath ki kathputli si ban gayi hai
Ashna ka character strong hota ja raha hai... Aur Purvi ka bhi...
Ab yahi 2 bharosemand bachi hain.... Lekin Creepy story bhai rahne deinge