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Thanks bhai..Raj bro aap ki ye story poore xfroum par no. 1 hai aap ki ye story waha se aage likhte jaha par aap ne chori thi to aur badiya hota magar aap iss kahani ko dubra se edit karke likh rahe hai to apko ek alag plot bana kar likhna chahiye tha.... Raj bhai baki apki marji....
Edit karke aage bhi likhunga.. Alag plot ka kuch idea hoga aap ke paas to pm me.. We will discuss