Bhai kahani bahut hi aachi hai par bhai apne font bahut hi chote hai enhe thoda bold aur bada karo bhai eye pe pressure aata hai bhai.
Nice start................
Nice start................
Erotica buri bala hai ye ishq
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I am not bhai, btw thankyou for suggestion, main font next time se thoda bada rakhungi.
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'mashalh kalima, parde me tum kitni khusurat lagati ho'
'achcha, itni achci lag rahi hun main'
'haan kalima tumhe dekh to jannat e hur jal jaye'
'hai salman tum kitne wo ho'
'wo kya kalima'
'wahi, samjho na'
salman hansane lagata hai, aur sath me kalima bhi, kalima salman ka diya hua kala jilbab daal rakha tha, kalima salman ke sath kafi dino se thi, salman uske pehale chakkaron ki tarah nahi tha, aur kalima ke bade me janate hue bhi, khaskar us bhure ke sath chhakar ko mita salman kalima ko ek pakeeza khatun banane ki kosis kar raha tha, usne itne dino me kalima ko ek baar hath tak nahi lagaya tha aur kalima se ishq ho gaya tha,
lekin iske ulat kalima ka haal kharab ho raha tha, 10-10 inch ke lund ki sawari kar chuki kalima pichale baar bhura se chudi thi, jab usne daaru ke nashe me pakad kar use choda tha, uske baad se salman ke sath sab kuch sukha sukha tha,
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kalima apne bistar pe leti hui thi ki uske hostel ka darwaze pe dastak hui, kalima darwaza kholati hai, aur uske samane aur koi nahi uski gayab roomie zaynab thi, jo pichale 6 mahine se gayab thi, kalima zaynab ko gale laga leti hai,
'hai roomie itne dinon baad, kahan chipi hui thi'
'kya bataun kalima, main pichale 6 mahine se paise kama rahi thi'
'aine main samjhi nahi,
'are pehale mujhe aaram se baithane to de batati hun main sab, ha ha ha'
zaynab kamare me apna chota sa bag phek nahane chali jaati hai, kalima bhi apne bistar pe baith jaati hai, aur uski nazar zaynab ke bag pe jaati hai,
'hai alh, birkin ka bag, ye to 50 lakh ki hoti hai, ye zaynab ke paas kaise aa gaya'
tabhi zaynab bahar nikal jaati hai,
'ha ha ha, aise kyun chaunk rahi ho kalima, chori ke nahi hain, mehnat ke hain ye'
'hai zaynab kaise, ye to maine dekha tha 50lakh ka'
'are baby maine us dollar me kamaya na'
'hai zaynab kya kar rahi thi tu, tu to apne wale ke sath dubai gayi thi na'
'haan yaar lekin main wahan kuch aur kar rahi thi, hi hi hi'
zaynab ne phir kalima ko bataya ki kaise usne dubai me ek highprofile randi ka kaam kiya aur in 6 mahine me kadodo rupayee apne khata me dala,
kalima se sun impress ho jaati hai, aur iski do wajah thi, ek to kalima chudai ko tarasi hui thi, aur dusara paise ka naam sun uske dil khil gaya,
'achcha zaynab'
'mashalh kalima, parde me tum kitni khusurat lagati ho'
'achcha, itni achci lag rahi hun main'
'haan kalima tumhe dekh to jannat e hur jal jaye'
'hai salman tum kitne wo ho'
'wo kya kalima'
'wahi, samjho na'
salman hansane lagata hai, aur sath me kalima bhi, kalima salman ka diya hua kala jilbab daal rakha tha, kalima salman ke sath kafi dino se thi, salman uske pehale chakkaron ki tarah nahi tha, aur kalima ke bade me janate hue bhi, khaskar us bhure ke sath chhakar ko mita salman kalima ko ek pakeeza khatun banane ki kosis kar raha tha, usne itne dino me kalima ko ek baar hath tak nahi lagaya tha aur kalima se ishq ho gaya tha,
lekin iske ulat kalima ka haal kharab ho raha tha, 10-10 inch ke lund ki sawari kar chuki kalima pichale baar bhura se chudi thi, jab usne daaru ke nashe me pakad kar use choda tha, uske baad se salman ke sath sab kuch sukha sukha tha,
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kalima apne bistar pe leti hui thi ki uske hostel ka darwaze pe dastak hui, kalima darwaza kholati hai, aur uske samane aur koi nahi uski gayab roomie zaynab thi, jo pichale 6 mahine se gayab thi, kalima zaynab ko gale laga leti hai,
'hai roomie itne dinon baad, kahan chipi hui thi'
'kya bataun kalima, main pichale 6 mahine se paise kama rahi thi'
'aine main samjhi nahi,
'are pehale mujhe aaram se baithane to de batati hun main sab, ha ha ha'
zaynab kamare me apna chota sa bag phek nahane chali jaati hai, kalima bhi apne bistar pe baith jaati hai, aur uski nazar zaynab ke bag pe jaati hai,
'hai alh, birkin ka bag, ye to 50 lakh ki hoti hai, ye zaynab ke paas kaise aa gaya'
tabhi zaynab bahar nikal jaati hai,
'ha ha ha, aise kyun chaunk rahi ho kalima, chori ke nahi hain, mehnat ke hain ye'
'hai zaynab kaise, ye to maine dekha tha 50lakh ka'
'are baby maine us dollar me kamaya na'
'hai zaynab kya kar rahi thi tu, tu to apne wale ke sath dubai gayi thi na'
'haan yaar lekin main wahan kuch aur kar rahi thi, hi hi hi'
zaynab ne phir kalima ko bataya ki kaise usne dubai me ek highprofile randi ka kaam kiya aur in 6 mahine me kadodo rupayee apne khata me dala,
kalima se sun impress ho jaati hai, aur iski do wajah thi, ek to kalima chudai ko tarasi hui thi, aur dusara paise ka naam sun uske dil khil gaya,
'achcha zaynab'
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update - 15
kalima bistar be baith apne chut se mani nikal rahi thi,
jaldibaazi me usne condom nahi lagaya tha, aur use abhi salman se bhi milane jana tha, uske sath hook karane wala uske chodate hi chala gaya tha, aur kalima kamare me akele baithi hui thi,
Kuch pal ke baad toliye se chut saaf kar kalima hijab chadha leti hai, aur phir salman se milane nikal jaati hai...
kalima bistar be baith apne chut se mani nikal rahi thi,
jaldibaazi me usne condom nahi lagaya tha, aur use abhi salman se bhi milane jana tha, uske sath hook karane wala uske chodate hi chala gaya tha, aur kalima kamare me akele baithi hui thi,
Kuch pal ke baad toliye se chut saaf kar kalima hijab chadha leti hai, aur phir salman se milane nikal jaati hai...
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