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anandsngh12

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UPDATE*36

Subah hone me abhi kuch deri thi to tab yak maine sona ka haal chal puchne ka soch kar uske mind me contact kiya

Mai—hello sona

Sonalika—ha adi….

Mai—koi khatra to nahi hai na

Sonalika—nahi abhi tak to tumhare kawach ne mujhe bacha rakha hai us papi se...lekin kal kya hoga.. ?

Mai—kal kuch nahi hoga....mai tab tak pahuch jaunga tumhare paas

Sonalika—lekin tum to khud hi uski kaid me ho

Mai—nahi…mai uski kaid se nikal chuka hu…

Sonalika—kyaaaaaa... ? par kaise... ? aur mere maa pita ji ka kuch pata chala... ?

Mai—haa....unko bhi nikal laya hu vaha se

Sonalika (khush)—sach me....

Mai—mai jhuth nahi bolta

Sonalika—ohhh...adi mai bata nahi sakti kitni khush hu ye jankar....kash tum mere paas hote to tumhare hotho me kaat leti

Mai—chup kar besharm Rajkumari

Sonalika—adi..kya mai maa pita ji se baat kar sakti hu

Mai—nahi...kal tak intazar karo

Sonalika—tum mujhe bacha loge na

Mai—koshish karna mera kaam hai...parinam mere hath me nahi hai

Sonalika—vo bahut si mayavi vidhya janta hai

Mai—kal dekhenge uski vidhya ko

Sonalika—phir bhi savdhan rahna….ab vo aur bhi khatarnak jaal bichhayega

Mai—ye to hona hi hai…bas tum apna khyal rakhna..aur koi jarurat ya dikkat aaye to mujhe contact kar lena

Sonalika—theek hai.....mai subah tumhe bata dungi agar kuch hua to…lekin tum time par jaldi pahuch jana nahi to mai....

Mai—ok..bye

Mujhse contact khatam hote hi kapali..tam tamate huye sonalika ke kamre me aa gaya aur ek phir uske sath badatzmizi karne ki koshish ki lekin uske hath nakami hi lagi jisse vo aur jhunjhla gaya

Kapali (gusse me)—achcha to us adamjat ko tu layi hai apni madad karne.....lekin tu ye bhul gayi ki mai kapali hu...mahan jadugar kapali...usne talwar kya hasil kar li tujhe itna bharosa ho gaya ek manav par...

Sonalika—mat bhul kapali ki ussi manav ne tere abhedya kawach ko tod kar mere mata pita ko teri jaduyi kaid se nikal le gaya...ab tera number hai

Kapali—vo adamjat mujhe marega....kapali ko...hahahaha.....ek kawach tod lene se mera jadu khatam nahi ho gaya..pagal ladki

Sonalika—hihihi...tu agar itna hi bada jadugar hai to le tod le tu bhi uska kawach jo usne meri suraksha ke liye banaya hai....tu uske aage kuch bhi nahi hai...kapali

Kapali (jor se)—rajkumariiiiii.....

Sonalika—kyo...apni haar bardast nahi ho rahi na...gussa aa raha hai...uulllluuu

Kapali (gusse me)—kal tujhse jabran shadi karte hi tera ye kawach toot kar chakna chur ho jayega.. phir dekhta hu kaise bachata hai vo tujhe

Sonalika—vo lamha kabhi ayega hi nahi kapali

Kapali vaha se pair patakte huye bahar chala gaya aur ek kaksh me jakar apni chhadi utha kuch mantra padhne laga

Kapali—shaitani khopdi mujhe us ladke ke bare me sab kuch batao…batao mujhe

Lekin uske mantro se koi fayda nahi hua….usne mera dimag padhne ki koshish ki lekin usme bhi safal nahi hua

Idhar subah hote hi mai fresh hokar taiyar ho gaya…..maharaj bhi mere sath jana chahte the lekin maine unhe mana kar diya

Mai—nahi maharaj….aap logo ke jane se mai apna kaam sahi dhang se nahi kar paunga…

Maharaj—lekin adi...vaha par bahut se vampires sena hogi

Mai—unki chinta nahi hai mujhe

Senapati—maharaj sahi kah rahe hain

Mai—bilkul bhi nahi....aap sab logo ke vaha hone par kapali ko meri taqat karne ka avsar mil jayega..kyo ki vo aap logo par hamla kar ke mera dhyan apne aur rajkumari ke upar se hatane ka prayas karega....jo mai nahi chahta

Maharaj—magar akele jane me tumhari jaan ko khatra bhi ho sakta hai

Mai—aap nishchint rahe...mujhe agya de ab

Mai vaha se adrishya hokar sidhe mahal me aa gaya....jaha mahal ke har kone me visible aur kuch invisible vampires pahra de rahe the

Main samay na gawate huye kapali ke paas ja pahucha jaha vo jabran sonalika se shadi karne wala tha...thodi hi der me sona ko vaha sainik le aaye

Kapali—hahaha....ab dekhta hu kaise bachayega vo tujhe....yaha aana bhi uske bas me nahi hai

"Mai to kab ka aa chuka hu kapali".......

Mai turant ab uske samne visible ho gaya...mujhe dekhte hi vo chakit hokar do kadam piche ho gaya

Mai—darr gaya kya..mahan jadugar kapali... ?

Kapali—teri itni himmat ki tu yaha tak aa pahucha...khair achcha hi hua tu khud aa gaya...ab mai tujhe asani se marunga

Mai—lekin mai tujhe asani se nahi balki douda douda kar marunga

Kapali—gustakh ladke....sainikoooo.....khatam kar do is namakul ko

Uske sab sainik meri oor tezi se badhe…maine apni talwar ko pranam kar unki taraf fek diya…kuch pal me hi vaha kewal cheekho ki awaz goonjane lagi

Talwar sabhi sainiko ko chherti huyi vapis mere hatho me aa gayi….sab ke sab aag ki tez lapto me jalne lage

Ye dekh kapali chakra gaya….usne unke upar apne jadu se aag bujhane ki koshish ki lekin vo nahi bujhi…sab raakh ban gaye

Kapali—ye kaise ho sakta hai….mera vaar khali kyo ho gaya…?

Mai—murkh kapali…ye talwar mamuli nahi hai….ye bhagwan shiv ka chandrahas khadag hai..iske upar sansar ka koi jadu kaam nahi karega phir teri to aukat hi kya hai

Kapali—ladkeeeeeee…..ab mai tujhe nahi chhodunga….ab bacha apne apko mere shaitani shakti se..

Kapali ne aag ke gole meri oor fekna shuru kar diya….ye dekh maine pani ke gole chhodne laga..pani se takrate hi uski aag thandi ho gayi

Kapali—ab tujhe koi nahi bacha sakta…bahut khel chuka tu…ab dekh…meri taqat

Apni haar hote dekh kapali ek bahut bade bhediya manav me badal gaya…..uske is roop ko dekh kar sona darr se chillane lagi

Usne mujhe uthakar dur fek diya…mai phir uth kar khada ho gaya…usne phir utha ke patak diya

Kapali—hahaha…dekhi meri taqat…ab tu kya banega meri is taqat ke jawab me

Mai—mujhe kuch nahi banna kapali…tune apne hi pair me kulhadi maar li

Kapali—hahaha...vo kaise

Mai—murkh janta hai is srasti me sabse taqatwar koun hai... ?

Kapali—mai...hahhaa...mai hu sabse taqatwar.....shaitan jindabad

Mai—nahi kapali...sabse taqatwar hai insan....jo apne karmo se bhagwan ko bhi apne vash me kar leta hai...sabse anmol sharir manav ka hai....janwar chahe koi bhi ho vo sabko marne me saksham hai lekin baki sharir wale sabko nahi maar sakte balki kisi na kisi ka shikar ban jate hain...manav bhediya banne se beshak tujhme bahut taqat aa gayi ho lekin dimag kewal insan ke paas hi hota hai aur dimag taqat par bhari hai,,,kapali

Kapali—darr gaya mujhse..hahaha

Mai—bilkul nahi...chal aa ja

Kapali meri oor badha to is baar mai alert tha uske vaar ke liye...maine turant vaha hawa ka tez bawandar bana diya.....bawandar ko apni oor aate dekh kapali piche hatne laga

Usne turant apni chhadi ki oor lapka ye dekh maine talwar udhar fek di...kapali ke hatho me aane ke pahle hi meri talwar ne uski jaduyi chhadi ke anginat tukde kar diye...ab vo bina chhadi ke koi jadu nahi kar sakta tha

Bawandar aur bhi vikral ho gaya....kapali ye dekh ghabra gaya....vo vaha se bhagne laga...lekin tabhi uske saamne se jamin ke andar se anginat jahrile saamp bahar nikal kar uski oor badhne lage

Piche bawandar....aage saamp hi saamp....kapali beech me phans gaya....vo apni hi galti me ulajh gaya...kapali na aage na piche kahi nahi bhag paya...tab tak bawandar ne use lapet liya

Kapali (cheekhte huye)—ahhhhhhhhh....mai loutunga....ek din...apna badla jarur lunga ..aaaaaaaa

Aur vo bawandar shant ho gaya...aur sath hi kaid kar ke le gaya kapali ko....kapali ke kaid hote hi Parilok se uska jadu bhi khatam ho gaya...vaha ki khubsurti pahle jaisi phir se ho gayi

Sona khushi s jhumti huyi doud kar mere gale se jhul gayi aur chumne chatne lagi...

Mai—chhod mujhe...besharm rajkumari..jab dekho kachra bhara rahta hai dimag me

Sona—ab to kabhi na chhodungi tumhe

Mai—chal tere mata pita intazar kar rahe honge

Sona—mai to bhul hi gayi…chalo

Mai use lekar maharaj ke paas aa gaya….sona ko dekhte hi maharani ne use apne gale se laga liya aur phir unka rona dhona shuru ho gaya

Mai (mann me)—mai to samajhta tha ki hamari earth me hi kewal aurato ki ye nautanki chalti hogi magar yaha bhi ye apne anshu se kuch bhi kara sakti hain..aurat teri maya….aaj tak koi na jaan paya

Maharaj bhi apni beti se milkar bahut khush huye…usne mirch masala lagakar kahani unhe suna di jo bhi abhi kuch hua tha

Parilok ab azad hai..ye jaankar sabhi ke chehro me khushi lout aayi…sab meri jaykar karne lage jo mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi aaya

Mai—shant ho jao sab….agar aap logo ko jay kar hi karni hai to jaykar karo parilok ki…unke maharaj aur maharani ki….jay bolo sanatan dharm ki….jay bolo satya ki…jay bolo devadhidev mahadev ki.. ab agar kisi ne bhi meri jay ke naare lagaye to mai kapali ko phir se azad kar dunga

Senapati—hum to apne hone wale naye maharaj ki hi jay bol rahe hain

Mai (mann me)—ab ye bhi sathiya gaya lagta hai

Mai—maharaj ab mujhe agya de....aap apna rajya sambhale....mujhe bhi apni maa se milna hai

Maharaj—aise kaise ja sakte ho....abhi to hamari shart baki hai

Mai—ufff…..theek hai chaliye mahal chaliye ab

Sab log parilok vapis lout aaye…mujhe bhi ek kaksh me aram karne ko kaha gaya…mai letkar so gaya….meri need sona ke uthane se khuli…vo mujhe khane ke liye lene aayi thi

Mai bhi koi natak kiye bina sath me chal diya….ab bhala khane me kya natak karna...bhukhe to rah nahi sakta na..

Khana bahut hi swadisht bana tha …mann bhar ke khaya…sona mujhe dekhte huye dhire dhire kha rahi thi….maharani shayad uske dil ki baat samajh chuki thi

Khane ke baad mujhe bhi sona raj sabha me le aayi….

Maharaj—adi abhi hamara ek mahatvapurna kaam to baki hai

Mai—kya maharaj…?

Maharaj—gurudev ko azad karana

Mai—maharaj kapali ke kaid hote hi uska jadu yaha se khatam ho gaya hai…gurudev bhi azad ho chuke hain …

Tabhi vaha gurudev bhi aa gaye…sabne khade hokar unhe pranam kiya…maine bhi unhe pranam kiya

Guruji—sada kalyan ho

Mai (mann me)—vo to aap sab karne me lage hi ho

Maharaj—adi aap yaha is singhasan par baitho…aur ye mukut dharan karo

Mai—jo agya maharaj..agar isne mujhe swikar nahi kiya to aap dubara mujhe kisi baat ke liye majbur nahi karenge

Maharaj—theek hai….

Mai us raj singhasan ki oor badh gaya
 

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Awesome update bhai, kapali ka chapter sayed abhi baki hey usey bass bandi banaya, ab dekhtey hey Adi k sath kya hota hey
Keep it up and as always waiting for
 
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Mahiirathore

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Jabardast action bhaiii
Jadugar kapali ajam takk pahuvha hi diya or vapas aane ki bat kar rha tha
Kya vapas aa payega
Adi ki lagi padi h
Sona uske piche padii
Bechara aakir kre bhii to kya
Parilok aajad ho gya
Guruji bhaii aazad ho gye
Ab dekhte h ki mukut adii ko svikar karta h nhiii
Kahani m damake ho rhe h
 
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