Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[ULTRA]

superb update

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update bhai,
lagta hai ki aadi ka kismat likhate samay bhagwan ko comedy karne ki sujhi hogi,
isliye bechara kisi ka bhi bhala karne jata hai to ulta usi ka kalyan ho jata hai,
gaon me gaya to tha bachcho ko unke mata pita se milane,
lekin yaha aane ke baad ek pahalwaan gale pad gayi,
jisne pani diya hai vo avasya agni hi hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Acme]

Nice update bhai

 

[aka3829]

Bahut hi umda update tha bhai. Maza aa gya. Mao ko unake bachhe mil gaye bahut hi mamtamayi drisya dikhaya he . Last me paani kisane diya kahi agni wapas to nahi aa gayi.
Waiting 4 next update

 

[sonukale]

Nice update

 

[Nkmahakal]

Superb update

Lagta hai ki ye agni hai

Jise dekha kar adi ki phat gayi

 

[Mahiirathore]

Nice Update Bhaii

Bacho ko apne gar pahucha diya

Sabne sukriya kha

Vha se gayab hokar aa gye
Par lagta h agni yha bhii aa gyii

Fass gye munna ab kha jayega
Bakii Dono teri halat karab kar degii

Dekhte h next Update m kya hota h

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

awesome faadu update
isko kajte hi kismat karab hona

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत और जबरदस्त अपडेट भाई
और आप बीच बीच में जो शायरी का तड़का लगातें है वो अपडेट में चार चांद लगा देता है

 

[Prince sarkash]

Awesome update bro

4 phir sar per AA gayi Kiya

Keep going

Will wait for next update