Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Loveshuda111]

Get well soon bhai

 

[aka3829]

Kya ho gya bhai. Get Well Soon

 

[Acme]

Get well soon... waiting for next update bhai

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

ok bro get well soon. pr update zyada gap mat lana aap ki dono stories bohat hi zabardast hai aur daily update b aarahe te islye ma na ye kaha bhai. aur hum dua krenge k aap jaldi tek hojaye.

 

[Faizan_okerlund]

Mast update
Hero ki to bhai watt lagi padi hai
Chudail wala scene bhot awla tha
Sahi me
Ab dekhte hain agni hero ke pichwade me agg kab lagati hai
Ab ghar mein kya musibat hai
Lets see
Waiting for next

 

[Sudipkr]

Waiting bhaiii for next update

 

[Rudra6124]

My Dear Friends,
Abhi mai kal evening se hospital me admitt hu jiski vajah se update de sakne me asmarth hu
Kal shayad doctor discharge kar dega to shaam tak koshish karunga ek chhota update dene ki

Kya hua bhai aise achanak se sb thik hai na bhagwan se yahi dua h ki aap jaldi se thik ho jaye update to aata hi rahega health first

 

[anandsngh12]

UPDATE * 62
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Raat me hum sab usi gaon me ruke...logo ke bahut aagrah karne par...raat me vaha utsav jaisa mahaul ban gaya tha...sona aur margret ko bhi maine agni ke liye samjha diya tha...lekin kutte ki puchh kabhi sidhi huyi hai kya... theek vaisa hi inka tha ek aurat apni soutan ko asani se accept nahi karti

Mai—ye gaon ka naam utha patak kyo hai.... ?

Ek admi—kyon ki yaha har baat ka faisla utha patak se hi hota hai...chahe vo vivah ka ho ya phir koi aur masla

Sona—ajib niyam hain yaha ke aur bade vichitra naam vale gaon dekhne ko mil rahe hain

Agni ka baap—beta hum tumhare bahut abhari hain...tumne is gaon ke logo ko ek naya jeevan diya hai..ye upkar hum kabhi nahi bhula sakte

Mai—ye koi upkar nahi hai...ye mera farz tha jo maine poora kiya hai

Agni ki maa—beta meri beti ka khyal rakhna....uska gussa ab tum hi kabu kar sakte ho....bade nazo se pala hai maine agni ko

Mai—aap nishchint rahe....

Margret—ha...aap chinta na kare....ab inki teen biwi ho gayi.....aaaaaaaahhhhh...adiiiii

Hua ye ki margret ne jaise hi teen biwi kaha to chitra ne use utha ke jamin me patak diya....maine use uthaya jakar aur chitra ko piche kiya

Margret—adi is chudail....nahi nahi....chudail nahi...kya pata chudail kahne par phir patak de....main to aise hi mar jaungi iske baar baar patakne se hi....adi tum chitra ko samjhao na...aisa na kare

Raat me kafi der tak jagne ke baad hum sabhi so gaye....sone se pahle maine chitra ko kah diya tha ki hamare sone ke baad kisi ko nipta mat dena

Subah meri need jaldi khul gayi to main jungle ke andar jakar dhyan me baith gaya...aur dhyan me hi gurudev ka ahvahan karne laga….thodi der me jaise hi mai dhyan me magn hua to gurudev ne mujhe dhyan mudra me darshan diye

Gurudev—mujhe kaise yaad kiya aaj putra

Mai—pranam gurudev

Gurudev—sada kalyan ho

Mai—vo to jab se shaktiya mili hain tab se ho hi raha hai

Gurudev—inse nirash mat ho putra

Mai—to kya karu gurudev…pahle to jinda log meri patni banne ke liye piche aati thi ab to murde bhi khwab dekhne lage hain…kuch din baad kutte billi bhi na line me lag jaye….ab bhi isko kalyan hona kahenge aap….?

Gurudev—hahaha….tum nirash na ho…sab theek ho jayega…..vaise tumne mujhe kyo yaad kiya tha putra

Mai—gurudev mai chitra ko chudail yoni se mukti dilana chahta hu….usi sandarbh me puchhne ke liye apko yaad kiya hai maine

Gurudev—ye to bahut hi achchha socha hai tumne…..kintu kisi bhi kaam ko karne se pahle uska itihas janna avashyak hota hai putra

Mai—mujhe uska itihas kaha se milega gurudev….?

Gurudev—usi gaon se…jaha se chitra tumhe mili hai….kintu uski mukti me abhi samay hai

Mai—mai samjha nahi gurudev….kaise hogi uski mukti

Gurudev—uski mukti ke liye tumhare rakta ki kuch boonde kafi hain....tumhe uski ashthiyo par apna khoon girana hoga usse hi chitra ki mukti hogi

Mai—iska matlab mujhe pahle vo jagah khojni hogi jaha usko dafnaya gaya hai

Gurudev—ha...kintu ye kaam itna asan nahi hai....ye kafi jiddi aur bigdi huyi ruh hai.....itni shighrata se tumhara pichha nahi chhodegi khas kar jabki uske dil me tumhari biwi banne ki khwahish janam le chuki hai

Mai—to ab aap hi mujhe sahi rasta dikhaye gurudev ki mai kya karu..... ?

Gurudev—agle mahine ki amavashya ko usi gaon me jakar uski ashthiya talash karna aur phir unke upar apne khoon ki kuch boonde gira dena...isse vo chahe ya na chahe use mukta hona hi padega tatpashchat uska daah sanskar kar dena

Mai—theek hai gurudev

Gurudev—kintu is baat ka khyal rakhna putra...ki ye sab bahut hi mushkil aur jokhim bhara kaam bhi ho sakta hai tumhare marg me bahut si rukawate ayengi..tumhe un par vijay pana hoga aur sabse pahle vaha ka itihas janna hoga vo bhi usi din madhya ratri tak

Mai—jaisi apki agya gurudev

Gurudev—tumhara kalyan ho

Gurudev ke antardhyan hote hi mai bhi dhyan se bahar aa gaya....aur sab ke pass lout aaya...jaha sabhi mujhe hi talash karne nikalne wale the

Sona—kaha chale gaye the....pata hai hum kitna pareshan ho gaye the.... ?

Mai—kahi nahi tahalne gaya tha

Khatra—hame kab nikalna hai yaha se malik

Mai—arey yaar ek to tum mujhe ye malik na kaha karo..samjhe

Khatra—jaisa aap kahe

Hum sab fresh hone aur nasta karne ke baad chalne ke liye ready ho gaye....poore gaon wale vahi jamghat lagakar hame ghere khade the…maine sabhi se ijajat li aur vaha se adrishya hokar sidhe apni jagah par aa gaya jaha maine car ko chhupa rakha tha

Mai—sona....tum agni ka parichay ghar me mummy se apni bahan ke roop me karwana

Sona—mai kyu karwau…..mai to mummy ji se sab bata dungi ki ye apki nayi bahu hai

Mai—chal utar car se niche…bhag tu bhi

Sona—kyu.... ?

Mai—mummy mujhe ghar me ghusne bhi nahi dengi samjhi....vo teri baat manti hain..aaya kuch samajh me ki nahi..

Sona—theek hai...bol dungi...

Margret—aur iska khatra ke liye kya bologe….ise bhi isi poonchh ka bhai bana do..hihihihi

Sona—utha ke niche phek dungi tujhe…

Mai—shant….vo mera dost ban ke rahega

Khatra—ye aap kya kah rahe hain malik…? Mai to apka gulam hu

Mai—mujhe gulam nahi chahiye…dost ban ke rahna hai to theek warna tum bhi jao yaha se

Khatra—lekin akele me mai apko malik hi kahunga

Mai—ok

Sona—raj tilak ka bhi samay aa gaya hai...

Mai—chalenge...pahle ghar ka haal to dekh lu

Agni—kiska raj tilak hona hai….?

Sona—hamare patidev ka….ab ye pari lok ke maharaj hain

Agni—kyaaa…? Sach me…?

Margret—nahi to kya jhuth me

Agni—kya mai bhi jaungi vaha….?

Mai--haan

Aise hi baate karte huye hum ghar pahuch gaye….jaise hi darwaje par pahuche to mere pair vahi par jam ke rah gaye kisi ko dekhte hi

Mai (shocked)—shree didi....? yahan kaise…..?....ab mera kya hoga bhagwan ‼ ?

 

[Vickey1211]

Mast update h bhai Maza aa gya

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update bhai,
aakhir kar adi ko chitra ke mukti ka marg mil hi gaya,
lekin isme khatra bhi bahot hai,
aadi ne agni ko sona ki behan bana diya hai,
ab ghar par shree didi pahle se hi pahuchi hui hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update