Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Alex123]

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[Mahiirathore]

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Sabko sach kab batane vale ho
Kyoki adventure or bhii aayenge

 

[RAAZ]

UPDATE * 61​

Main unki baat nahi taal saka....un logo ne hamare baithne ke liye apne gharo se khatiya le aaye….sharbat aur nasta me phal vagairah aur kuch pakwan jo bhi tha lekar aa gaye

Nasta aur pakwan behad swadishta tha….margret aur sona sab ko poori story un aurato ke beech baith kar suna rahi thi…maine abhi kuch hi pakwan khaye honge ki kisi ne mujhe kisi ne pani pakdaya…mujhe uski awaz kuch jani pahchani lagi to maine uski taraf nazare utha kedekha

Use dekhte hi mere gale ke andar ja raha pakwan beech me hi phans gaya….joro se hichki aane lagi aur main hichki lete huye phir se apni kismat ko kosne laga

Ab aage………

Maine us jani pahchani awaz wale chehre ko dekhte hi bhauchakka rah gaya….kyon ki mujhe pani dene wali aur koi nahi balki vahi ladki agni thi jisse pichha chhudane ke liye bach kar mai jungle se bhag gaya tha

Magar mujhe kya pata tha ki vo mujhe yaha aane par bhi mil jayegi…mai ab apni kismat ko siway kosne ke aur kar bhi kya sakta tha

Mai (mann me)—ye yaha kya kar rahi hai…..? kahi ye iska hi to gaon nahi hai.... ? ya sirf bachcho ki khabar sun kar yaha akasmat aa gayi ho….? Jo bhi ho isne apni nazare niche jhuka rakhi hain…ho sakta hai ki shayad isne abhi mujhe dekha na ho…..mujhe is mouke ka fayda uthana chahiye……mai yaha se fauran gayab ho jata hu….ha..yahi theek rahega…mai gayab ho jata hu

Bas ye khyal mann me aate hi main turant vaha se uth kar doud laga diya aur jakar gadi ke andar ghus gaya....mere aise achanak vaha se uth kar jane se sabhi hairan rah gaye

Sona—ye adi ko kya hua…bhag kyo gaya….?

Margret—chal chalkar dekhte hain….nahi to kahi akele kisi naye mission par na bhag jaye wo hame yaha chhedkar….?

Sona—ha..chal dekhte hain

Ek ladka—ye to vahi hain jinhone aaj agni ko akhade me haraya tha…

Sab—kyaaaa….?

Ye sunte hi agni ne choun kar turant apni nigahe upar kar li…..aur pani ka bartan vahi rakh kar gadi ki taraf bhagne lagi aur uske piche piche baki gaon wale bhi

Main sab ko apni taraf bhagte dekh hairan aur pareshan dono gaya…..samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu to main vaha se adrishya hone laga magar haye re meri buri kismat lakh koshish karne ke bavjud bhimai gayab nahi ho pa raha tha

Mai ab pareshan ho gaya…vo sab mere bilkul najdik aa chuke the….koi aur tarika na sujhte dekh main gadi ki seat ke niche jaldi se ghus gaya

Tab tak sabhi gadi ke paas aa gaye….gate khol kar andar taaka jhaki karne lage….magar main unhe nazar nahi aaya…to agni mayus ho gayi

Margret—lagta hai adi phir se kisi mission par bina bataye chala gaya

Sona—mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai

Mai (ye sun khush hoke mann me)—hihihi....lagta hai in logo ne mujhe nahi dekha....aaj to bach gaya...nahi to is shakti ne to meri aisi taisi kara hi di thi

Vahi ladka—mujhe abhi gadi me seat ke niche kuch dikha......shayad koi chhupa hai vaha

Mai (mann me)—mc..teri gaand me bade bade kide pade..bhsdk...hath pair dhoke mere piche hi pad gaya ye to...pata nahi kis janam ka badla le raha hai.....sale bahar aake teri gaand me vimal bhar ke kisi mote dande se aisa kutunga ki hamesha bathroom karte samay tere muh se bas ‘’Bolo Juban Kesari’’ hi niklega

Us ladke ki baat sun kar sona aur margret turant seat ke niche dekhne lagi jaha main chhupa hua tha.....mujhe vaha ghuse dekh kar dono apni ankhe badi badi karke mujhe ghurne lagi

Sona—adi...yaha kya kar rahe ho….? Chalo bahar aao

Margret—jaldi bahar aao

Mai (mann me)—maine chitra ko in dono ka khoon pine se roka kar khud apne hi pair me kulhadi maar li…. Hamesha bachane ki jagah ulta mujhe musibat me phasa deti hain ye dono

Margret—adi bahar niklo jaldi se

Budhiya—beta kya hua tum aise bhag kar vaha kyo chhup gaye..... ?

Mai (jhuth)—nahi...nahi..mai chhupa nahi tha....achanak mujhe yaad aaya ki maine neela patthar kaha gira diya bas vahi khoj raha tha

Main ab kuch nahi kar sakta tha to bahar nikal aaya chup chap…sab mujhe hi dekhe ja rahe the….magar tabhi agni bhag kar mere pairo me lipat gayi

Agni—aap mujhse bhag rahe hain…akhir kyo….?..meri galti kya hai…agar main apko pasand nahi to mujhe jaan se maar dijiye

Sona (shock)—ye pair chhod adi ka….aur ye kya ulta sidha bakwas kiye ja rahi hai….?

Margret—chhod jaldi se….vo mere pati hain…

Sona—mere bhi

Agni—vo mere bhi pati hain

Sona/margret (shocked)—kyaaaaa…..?

Sona (gusse me)—adiiii….tumne iske sath aate hi apna muh kala kar liya ….?

Mai—aisa kuch nahi hai…ye sab jhuth hai…mai to is ladki ko janta tak nahi

Vahi ladka—ye vahi ladki hai jise aapne aaj swayamvar me jeeta tha

Mai (mann me)—tujhe beech me bolna jaruri hai kya….?

Margret—(hairan) swayamvar…..?

Sona—kaisa swayamvar…..?

Agni ka baap—mai batata hu beti…

Dono—ha..ha batao...sach kya hai... ?

Agni ka baap—mera naam kanchuki hai...mai is ladki (agni) ka pita hu.....vivah ke kayi varsh pashchat bhi jab hamare koi santan nahi huyi to hum bahut nirash ho gaye the...ek baar ek mahatma yaha kuch samay ke liye ruke to maine apni patni ke sath unhe apni dukh bhari kahani sunayi

To unhone meri baat sunne ke baad kuch der tak apni ankhe band kar ke kuch dekhte rahe phir unhone kaha

Mahatma—tum dono ke bhagya me santan sukh nahi hai….kintu tumhe nirash hone ki koi awashyakta nahi hai… mai santan yagya kar ke tumhe santan sukh dilwa sakta hu

Unki baat sun kar hame apaar harsh hua…hamne turant yagya ke liye ha kar di……uske agle din un mahatma ne yagya karna aarambh kiya

Poora din yagya karne ke baad yagya ke agni kund se ek chhoti bachchi nikal ke bahar aayi….jise mahatma ne hamare hatho me dete huye kaha

Mahatma—aaj se yahi tumhari santan hai…kyon ki ye yagya ke agni kund se uttapann huyi hai isliye is kanya ka naam agni hoga….yah param tejashwini aur veerangana hogi….kintu

Kanchuki—kintu kya mahatma ji…?

Mahatma—agni se paida hone ke karan iske andar kroadh atyadhik hoga….kroadh had se jyada ho jane par ye bekabu ho jayegi…us samay kisi ko bhi apni kroadhagni se jala kar raakh kar sakti hai

Kanchuki—kya iska koi upay nahi hai….?

Mahatma—kewal iska pati hi isko kabu me kar sakta hai….lekin iska vivah uske sath hi hona sambhav hai jo isse bhi adhik veer ho

Agni ki maa—ye hame pata kaise chalega ki koun jyada veer hai….?

Mahatma—yumhare gaon ka vivah ka jo rivaz hai uske dwara hi malum chal jayega…..iske vivah ke akhade ke swayamvar me jo isko parajit kar dega vahi iska pati hoga aur isse adhik veer bhi hoga

Agni dhire dhire badi hone lagi….hum hamesha use ladayi jhagde se dur hi rakhte the…lekin jab kabhi bhi usko gussa jyada aa jata to jungle me aag lag jati thi….aadha jungle to iske gusse ki vajah se khakh ho gaya

Aaj agni ke vivah ka swayamvar chal raha tha…..jab un ladko me se koi nahi jeet paya to un logo niyam ka ullanghan kar ke ek sath agni se bhid gaye tabhi aap aa gaye aur ek pal me hi agni ko hara diya aapne.... ab aap hi meri beti agni ke pati hain

Margret—achcha ab samjhi….. tabhi tum dophar me hame akela sote huye chhod kar yaha swayamvar jeetne chup chap bhag aaye the….?

Sona (ghurte huye)—hum dono se mann nahi bharta kya tumhara jo abhi bhi biwi kam pad rahi hain….?

Mai—ye sarasar cheating hai….mai ise shadi nahi maan sakta….

Kanchuki—beta ye koi dagabazi nahi hai....balki yahi satya hai ki agni ab apki patni ban chuki hai

Mai—aise kaise koi bhi meri patni ban jayegi....agar iska swayamvar ho raha tha to vaha koi board me likha hua kyo nahi tha ki agni swayamvar samaroh.....ye cheating nahi to kya hai.... ? hamare yaha shadi hoti hai to barat nikalti hai band baje ke sath...charo taraf sajawat hoti hai...har jagah ladki aur ladke ka naam likha hota hai cards aur banner par...

Margret—ha..ye to sahi baat hai

Mai—mai to bas is jungle me bheesan aag lagi huyi thi usko bujhane aaya tha….lekin loutne time jab maine dekha ki ye ladki ek ladke ki gardan pakde huye hai…to maine us ladke ko bachane ke liye isko dhakka diya tha….ab sab batao ye shadi kaise huyi..kab huyi…..?

Ek buddha—hamare yaha to isi tarah se shadi hoti hai beta…aur ek baar jo kisi ladki ko swayamvar me jeet leta hai vahi uska pati hota hai

Vahi ladka—haan…aur agar us ladke ne ladki ko aswikar kar diya to us ladki ko turant hi atma hatya karni hoti hai…yahi hamare gaon ka niyam hai

Kanchuki—beta meri beti ko apna lo….nahi to usko bhi aaj atma hatya karni padegi

Margret (gusse me)—aise kaise swikar kar le usko apni patni……

Sona—adi sahi bol raha hai....hum dono hain uski patni

Ye sun kar chitra ne ek baar phir se dono ko utha kar vahi patak diya....shayad usko hum dono sun kar gussa aa gaya tha

Dono (karahte huye)—adii...hame is chudail se bachao...

Agni (rote huye)—agar aap mujhe apnana nahi chahte to theek hai...meri chita ko aag to kam se kam jarur de dena

Ye kah kar vo tezi se bhagi vaha se rote huye apne ghar ki taraf...mai to use dekhte hi dang rah gaya...ki kaisa system hai is gaon ka....margret aur sona mujhe ulahna dene me lagi huyi thi jaise maine sab jaan bujh kar ye sab kiya ho

Mai—ab agar ek shabd bhi muh se nikla na to tum dono ko bhi hamesha ke liye chhod dunga...samajh aaya.. tum dono ko bhi mai apni biwi nahi samajhta

Dono—nahi..nahi...hum ab kuch nahi bolenge...aisa mat karna

Abhi usko gaye huye kuch hi der huye honge ki vahi ladka bhagta hua aaya aur kahne laga ki agni ne apne hath ki nas kaat li hai...uski halat bahut najuk hai

Hum turant bhag kar vaha pahuche...jaha agni niche besudh padi huyi thi...uske dono hatho se khoon bah raha tha...maine sab ko vaha se hata kar apni power se khoon ka bahav roka...

Dhire dhire uska jakhma bharne laga....mere paas ab koi aur chara nahi bacha tha......hosh me aate hi jab usne apne apko meri god me dekha to rote huye mujhse lipat gayi

Mai—ab ye rona band karo....lekin ye yaad rakhna ki tum akele meri biwi nahi ho....aur bhi hain meri jindagi me

Agni—mujhe koi aitaraz nahi hai

Mai—theek hai to phir chalne ki taiyari karo

Humne ghar jane ka faisla kar liya...lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki ghar me ek nayi musibat mera intazar pahle se hi kar rahi hai

Wah bhai wah ek chudail 2ri pari 3ri gori mame aur 4th ek pehalwann bole to lady darasingh arey bhai kahin rukna bhi hain ya har jagah kalyan karate rahoge. Abhi to in 4 ko ghar bhi lekar jaana hoga

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

awesome faadu update
kasam bhot aacha chz hi
kuch bhi Karne ko majbur ho jate ho

 

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[RAAZ]

UPDATE * 63​

Mai jaise hi ghar pahucha to hall me hi baithi huyi Shree par nazar chali gayi to mere pair vahi jam gaye….mujhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki mai shree didi ko yaha dekh kar khushi manau ya phir apni badkishmati ka rona rou

Shree didi ki nazar bhi mere upar sabki awaz sun kar gayi to vo bhi kisi but ki tarah khadi hokar ek tak mujhe dekhne lagi…par agle hi pal hosh aane par jor se ‘adiiiii’ chillate huye apni jagah se bhagte huye mere gireban se jhul gayi

Shree ke jor se chillane se papa bhi bahar nikal aaye aur unke sath me sanjay bhaiya bhi the….un teeno ki ankho me se pani kisi jharne ki tarah bah raha tha…lekin mummy nahi dikhi mujhe abhi tak kahi bhi aur na hi unki awaz sunayi di..ye dekh mujhe unki chinta hone lagi mann me

Shree (rote huye)—chaatttaaakkk….chaatttaaakkkk…..kaha gaya tha…bata….kya hua tha tujhe….tera phone kyo band tha…..?

Shree didi ne jaise hi mujhe thappad lagaye to chitra gusse me unki oor aage badhi …ye dekh kar maine use turant hath ke ishare se rok diya

Mai—didi…ab to mai aa gaya hu na....shant ho jao ab

Sanjay—bhai iske sawalo ke jawab to tujhe dene hi honge....yaha aane ke liye isne poora ghar sar par utha liya tha bas teen char din se sirf roye ja rahi hai bas

Mai—dad mummy kaha hain….?

Dad—beta tu to janta hi hai ki jab bhi tum uski ankho se door chale jate ho to kya hota hai….

Maine turant shree didi ko alag kiya aur andar unke room ki oor bhaga lekin vo vaha par nahi thi…to dad ne bataya ki vo mere hi room me hain…main vaha se apne room me gaya jaha ka haal dekhte hi meri ankho se anshoo nikal gaye

Mummy bistar me meri ek tasveer apne sine se lagaye besudh padi thi…maine turant bhag kar unka sar apni god me rakha aur sahlane laga

Dad—urmi…dekh adi aa gaya hai…ankhe kholo

Mai—dad kya hua hai mummy ko…..?

Dad—beta tere jane ke dusre hi din....( phir dad ne mujhe sab baate batayi)

Sanjay—theek aisa hi sapna shree aur teri mousi ko bhi aaya tha….isne to yaha aane par majboor kar diya badi mushkil se address pata kar ke yaha lekar aaya hu…lekin vaha teri mousi ki halat bhi bahut nazuk hai…poori raat vo mandir me..(phir sanjay ne india ki baat batayi)

Mai dad aur sanjay bhaiya ki baate sun kar buri tarah se chounk gaya….kyon ki behoshi ki halat me mujhe bhi to kuch aisa hi ehsaas hua tha

Mai (mann me)—iska matlab vo sab mera vaham nahi tha….balki in sabki prem aur mamta ke balidan swaroop hi mai aaj yaha jinda baitha hu….lekin mousi to kisi rishi ka jikra kar rahi thi…koun hai ye rishi….? Mujhe pata lagana hoga…..? akhir kya gum hai unke andar….?

Meri ankho se bahte huye aanshu tap tap kar mummy ke chehre par girne lage…..jisse unhe hosh aane laga…kuch hi der me unhone mera naam lete huye apni ankhe kholi aur jaise hi mujhe apne paas dekha to ek jor dar cheekh ke ke sath mujhse lipat kar mujhe apni chhati se chipka liya

Urmila (rote huye)—tu aa gaya…mera beta aa gaya…kaha chala gaya tha…apni maa ko chhod kar…tu meri ankho ka noor hai mere bachche

Mai (rote huye)—mai to hamesha apke paas hi hu mummy

Hum dono maa bete ka pyar dekh kar sab ki ankhe nam ho gayi yaha tak ki chitra bhi ro padi….mai mummy ko aur mummy mujhe shant karte rahe

Jab aadhe ek ghante baad hamara milan poora hua tab jakar unka dhyan bakiyo par gaya….vaha ek nayi ladki ko dekh kar mummy meri oor sawaliya nazaro se dekhne lagi

Mai—mummy ye agni hai….sona ki cousin

Sona—ha...mummy ji..ye meri bahan hai.....(mann me)..lagta hai gala daba du to yahi mar jaye..soutan kahi ki

Urmila—aaja beti...

Agni jakar mummy ke pair chhune ke baad unke gale lag gayi....lekin in sab ko dekh kar shree didi kuch pareshan aur dukhi nazar aane lagi

Urmila—kitni pyari bachchi hai

Margret—bachchi nahi hai ...pahalwan hai..kushti ladti hai..ek baar me 8-10 hatte katte ladko ko patak deti hai ye bachchi....pata nahi kitna khana khati hogi

Urmila—aisa nahi kahte beti

Margret—ek aur bhi hai usse bhi mil lo

Urmila—koun hai aur.... ?

Margret—chudail..hai...vo dikhti nahi hai...uuuuiimummyy....adii samjha na isko har baar mujhe hi kyo patakti hai..meri to kamar aise hi toot jayegi

Urmila—yaha to koi bhi nahi hai

Mai—is pagal ki baato me dhyan mat do mummy...aap aram karo abhi

Urmila—ab tu aa gaya hai to mai bilkul theek hu

Shree—mousi ab adi aa gaya hai to mai aur bhaiya india lout jayenge....mummy ki tabiyat bhi theek nahi hai

Urmila—megha ko phone kar ke bata de ki adi aa gaya hai...to vo bi theek ho jayegi

Shree—mera ab yaha kya kaam mousi

Shree didi vaha se chup chap chali gayi…mai bas unhe jate huye dekhta raha….na jane kyo mai unse nazare milane se katra raha tha…unke paas aate hi ek ajib si khumari chhane lagti hai mere andar

Urmila—ja beta shree ko mana le….bahut pyari beti hai shree

Mai—ji mummy

Mai apne room se nikal kar shree didi ko khojne laga…har jagah dekhne ke baad bhi jab vo nahi mili to mai chhat par chaala gaya jaha mujhe pani ki tanki ke pichhe se kisi ke sisakne ki awaz sunayi di…mai samajh gaya vo yahi chhip kar ro rahi hain magar kyo….?

Mai—maine sara ghar chhan mara aur aap yaha ganga jamuna baha rahi ho chhup kar

Shree—tujhe isse kya...mai kuch bhi karu..chahe jiyu ya maru.. ? kya farak padta hai.... ?

Mai—aap ro kyo rahi ho... ?

Shree—kuch nahi...hame airport chhod dena thodi der me

Mai—mujhe chhod kar chali jaogi aap….?

Shree—tere paas bahut hain... ? meri jarurat hi nahi hai….?

Mai—ye kisne kaha ki mujhe apki jarurat nahi hai….?

Shree—mousi ne mujhe sab bata diya hai...ki kaisi dost hain ye teri

Mai—ohhh..to ye baat hai...lekin jaisa aap samajh rahi hain vaisa kuch bhi nahi hai

Shree—mai sab samajh gayi hu

Mai—aap kuch nahi samjhi aur na hi mummy kuch janti hain

Shree—mujhe bahlane ki koshish bekar hai…mujhe to tabhi samajh jana chahiye tha jab maine dono ko tere sath hotel me nangi pungi sote dekha tha

Mai—vo to purani baat ho gayi

Shree—mujhe kuch nahi sunna….do kam thi jo ek aur le aaya……ja jakar dukan khol le biwiyo ki

Mai—pls didi…kam se kam aap to mujhe galat mat samjho

Shree—mai teri lagti hi kya hu.... ?

Mai—agar aapse mera koi rishta nahi hota to mai kyo sirf ek sapne ke piche vaha tak bhagta chala aata... aap meri sab kuch ho

Shree—sab jhuth......sab kuch ka matlab janta hai...mujhse jhuth bol ke tujhe kya milta hai….? Tera dil to roshan ho gaya na.....

Mai—"Ek Phool Ka Dard Usaki Jhuki Daali Samajhate Hai,
Baag Ki Baat Baag Ka Maali Hi Samajhate Hai,
Ye Kis Tarah Ki Raat Banayi He Duniya wale Ne,
Diye Ka Dil Jalata hai Aur Log Roshani Samajhte Hai"

Shree didi chup chap mere sine se lag gayi aur kafi der tak sisakti rahi....unke sine se lagte hi mujhe aisa lagne laga jaise sare jahan ki khushiyan mere daman me simat aayi ho

Ek ajib tarah ka sukun mil raha tha mujhe...mai us sukh ke anand sagar me dubta gaya....dubta gaya....aur meri ankhe swatah hi band hoti chali gayi

Aise shwarnim anand ki anubhuti mere dil ko kafi samay pashchat mil rahi thi…mera dil mujhse bagawat karne par utaru hone laga tha

Jane kitni der tak hum dono aise hi amarbel ki lata ki tarah ek dusre se lipte rahe....hame hosh tab aaya jab tomy ( paltu doggy) mere pairo me apni jibh phirane laga

Maine use apni god me utha kar hall me aa gaya....sab vahi mummy ke paas baithe huye the....mere pahuchte hi sabhi khamosh ho gaye

Dad—mai to thoda ghum kar aata hu…jab se tu gaya hai mera to jina haram ho gaya

Urmila—mai khana banati hu

Shree—mousi aap baitho…mai banati hu

Sona—didi..mai bhi aapki help karti hu

Shree—vaise adi tera phone kyo nahi lag raha tha.... ?

Margret—hum earth me the hi nahi aur dusra adi ko to us tantrik ne pakad liya tha

Shree/mummy—kyaaaaaa…..?

Mai—arey kuch nahi mummy….ye mazak kar rahi hai…..margret tumhari mummy ka phone aaya tha vo tumhe bula rahi hain…ab tum jao ghar

Shree—tu chup kar….ha tu bata..kya bata rahi thi…

Mai—vo jhuth bol rahi thi....hai na margret

Margret—jhuth......ha..haan...vo sab jhuth tha....mai ab chalti hu

Mummy aur didi margret ko awaz deti rahi aur vo nau do gyarah ho gayi.....didi mujhe ghurte huye kitchen me jane lagi

Shree—khana bana lu phir tujhe batati hu main...room lock mat karna..nahi to theek nahi hoga samajh gaya

Didi mujhe warning dekar khana banane chali gayi sona ke sath aur main mummy ke paas baith kar sanjay bhaiya se idhar udhar ki baate karne laga...agni bhi sona ke paas chali gayi

Shree—tum kaha ki rahne wali ho.... ?

Agni—utha patak gaon ki…

Shree—kyaaaa…?

Agni—ji vo hamare gaon ka naam hai

Shree (haste huye)—bada ajib naam hai…..theek hai tum sona ke sath so jana

Agni—magar aaj to meri suhagraat hai..inke sath

Shree (hasi gayab)—kyaaa kahaaaa……?

Sona—vo…kuch nahi…didi…mazak hai

Shree (gusse me)—maine tujhse nahi puchha…ha tum batao agni…sach batana…agar tumne kisi ko pyar kiya hai to tumhe uski kasam

Le bhai lag gaye lodey adi ke ab shree ne kasam di hain to agni ab sab kuch swaha kar degi until n unless adi shree ko sab kuch na bata de. Dkhtay hain kia hota hain phir?

 

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mann ko ati bhave saiyaan mann gaye re haye haye re,....
gum aur khushi ka mila jula update tha...

Agni ne bhi suhagraat wala bomb fod diya

 

[Amit rox]

Lagata hai shree ajj sab raaj janke hi rahegi ,badhiya update mast.

 

[Shahrukh]

Waiting for update bhai

 

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Marvelous update...
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