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Shree—kyaaaa…?
Agni—ji vo hamare gaon ka naam hai
Shree (haste huye)—bada ajib naam hai…..theek hai tum sona ke sath so jana
Agni—magar aaj to meri suhagraat hai..inke sath
Shree (hasi gayab)—kyaaa kahaaaa……?
Sona—vo…kuch nahi…didi…mazak hai
Shree (gusse me)—maine tujhse nahi puchha…ha tum batao agni…sach batana…agar tumne kisi ko pyar kiya hai to tumhe uski kasam
Ab aage…….
Shree ne agni se sach bolne ko kah to diya tha magar uska dil andar hi andar bahut ghabra raha tha…ki kash ye sab jhuth ho jo agni ne abhi abhi kaha hai
Agni—ji..mujhe adi ne swayamvar me jeeta hai
Shree (hairan)—swayamvar....... ? tum kis jamane ki baat kar kar rahi ho... ? aaj ke yug me swayamvar jaisa kuch bhi nahi hota hai…samajh gayi…ab ye mujhe bewqoof banane ki bajaye sach batana chalu karo
Agni—yahi sach hai..
Shree (jhallakar)—sab bakwas hai
Sona—wo…sach bol rahi hai ..didi….aap chaho to margret se bhi puchh sakti hain
Shree—mujhe kisi se nahi puchna…..aur ha..adi ke sath raat me mai rahungi koi udhar disturb mat karna…tum logo ne jarur mere adi ko bahla fusla kar phasaya hoga apne jaal me
Agni—aisa hargij nahi hai
Shree—chup raho…mai sab janti hu…mera adi aisa nahi hai…aaj to sach main adi se hi pata kar lungi
Sona—adi se kyo aap mummy se puchhiye..tab to yakin hoga apko
Shree—kya pata tum logo ne mousi ko bhi pata rakha ho…?..nahi nahi..adi hi sach batayega ab to
Sona—adi pakka aapse bachne ke liye hame hi galat batayega
Shree—jaise tum log use galat bata rahi ho…usse to mujhe ab daal me kala lagne laga hai
Sona—arey nahi didi…koi kali daal nahi hai yaha…aap ko jarur koi galat fahmi ho rahi hai
Shree—vo to mai pata kar hi lungi….mai table lagati hu tum dono khana lagao
Sona (didi ke jate hi)—agni kuch dimag laga….jaldi se didi ko india bhejne ka jugad laga nahi to zindagi bhar khud ki ungali daal kar hi suhagrat manana padega phir
Agni—kyaaaaa…..?
Sona—haan…..agar didi ko adi ne hamare khilaf bhadka diya to vo mummy ji ke kaan bhar dengi phir hum sabka patta cut
Agni—nahi….nahi…aisa kaise ho sakta hai
Sona—pakka aisa hi hoga....agar jaldi se shree didi ko india nahi bheja gaya ya unhe bhi kisi ke pyar me nahi phasaya to
Agni—to ab kya kare hum...meri suhagrat ka kya hoga......didi ko patak du kya.... ?
Sona—aisa kabhi bhul se bhi mat sochna.....jis ladki ko sapne me udas dekhne bhar se pareshan hokar jo ek desh se dusre desh ja sakta hai aur use khoj kar use tang karne walo ki kabra khod sakta hai to socho agar tumne aisa kiya to tumhara kya haal karega adi
Agni—to ab kya kare..... ?
Sona—kuch sochna padega jaldi hi….chalo khana le chalte hain
Khana lagte hi shree didi ne mujhe aur mummy ko bulaya to hum chale gaye...tab tak dad bhi aa gaye the.... maine apne hatho se mummy ko khilane laga aur vo mujhe
Shree—mera to kisi ko koi khyal hi nahi hai
Urmila—ye le tu bhi
Mummy beech beech me didi ko bhi khilane lagi….ye dekh kar agni gahri soch me kho gayi
Agni (mann me)—sona sach hi kahti hai…agar shree didi ka kuch nahi kiya to vo hame adi se door kar dengi…mummy aur adi dono shree didi ki hi baat manenge
Aise hi khana khatam hua to mai kuch der tak dad ke sath baith kar bate karne laga…sanjay bhaiya aur mummy bhi vahi aakar baith gaye
Dad—ye kya…tumhara beta ab ki bar ek aur bahu le aaya lagta hai…..?
Mai—nahi dad…vo to sona ki bahan hai
Shree—sona ki bahan kab paida huyi….india me to nahi thi
Mai—india me nahi…yaha paida huyi didi…england me
Shree—lekin sona aur agni to kuch aur hi bata rahi thi
Mai (shock)—aisa kyaaaa…..?…(mann me)…kutte ke pet me ghee aur aurat ke pet me baat kabhi hazam nahi hoti… ab ye bhi meri tang khichengi
Shree—bol ab bol…jhutha kahi ka
Mai—mai nahi vo sona jhuthi hai
Shree—agni ne mujhe sab bata diya hai
Mai—vo bahut badi cheater hai...
Shree—achcha....aur jo margret bol rahi thi vo... ?
Mai—arey kaha didi…aap bhi in jhuthe logo ki baat sunne lagi
Shree (ghur kar)—tu room me chal…phir batati hu tujhe
Mai—bhaiya chalo hum kahi bahar ghum kar aate hain
Shree—chup chap room me ja…bahar gaya to tang tod dungi teri
Mai—mummy aaj mai apke sath so jau……?
Urmila—mera bachcha…aa ja
Mai (mann me)—hihihi...bach gaya aaj is phulan devi se
Shree (tunak kar)—mousiiii.....
Urmila (has kar)—achcha baba….beta tu thodi der didi ke paas rah ke phir aa jana mere paas
Mai—mujhe bahut joro ki need aa rahi hai…mai to chala apke room me sone mummy
Shree—sona…ek balti pani le ke aa
Agni—ye lo didi
Mai—akal ki dushman
Mai ab kya kar sakta tha...agni ne vahi table me pani se bhara jug shree didi ke hath me thama diya to mai bhi chup chap muh latka ke apne room me aa gaya...bed par letne ke sath jaise hi maine ankhe band ki ki so jata hu tabhi mere kano me kisi aurat ke mandir me ghantiyan bajane ki awaz aane lagi
Mai usi awaz ki disha me aage badhne laga aur badhte huye us mandir tak pahuch gaya par ye kya...ye to megha mousi hain jo bhagwan ke aage rote huye jor jor se ghanti bajaye ja rahi hain....main abhi unhe awaz lagane hi wala tha ki tabhi mujhe barish me bhigne jaisa ehsaas hone laga aur meri ankhe khul gayi
Samne dekha to shree khadi thi jo jug me se patle pani ki dhar mere chehre par giraye ja rahi thi....ye dekh main fauran uth kar baith gaya
Mai—ye kya harkat hai……?
Shree—maine mana kiya tha na sone ko abhi
Mai—ab need ayegi to koi soyega bhi nahi kya……?
Shree—pahle mere sawalo ke sahi sahi jawab de doge tab
Mai—mai jawab de chuka hu
Shree—kya kaha.....phir se bol..jhuttha
Mai—jab apko meri kisi baat ka vishwash hi nahi hai to mere kuch batane ya na batane ka matlab hi kya hai... ?
Shree—mai jo puchhti hu tu sirf unka sach sach jawab de bas....agar tu mujhe kuch bhi manta hai ya tere dil me mere liye koi jagah hai to tu sach batayega....baki teri marzi...mai koun hoti hu tumhari khushiyo ke beech me aane wali
Mai—Ye to sarasar emotional blackmailing hai…..theek hai..puchho...kya janna hai apko..... ?
Shree—sona ke bare me tune mujhse india me jo bola wo sach tha ya uske yaha aane ke baad jo bataya o sach tha….?
Mai—dono hi jhuth
Shree—kyaaaa…? To sach kya hai…?
Mai—sona parilok ki Rajkumari hai
Shree—phir se jhuth
Mai—maine pahle hi kaha tha ki jab meri kisi baat par vishwash hi nahi hai to batane ka kya fayda... ?
Shree—ha to sach bata na....jhuth kyo bolta hai..jhutha kahi ka
Mai—yahi sach hai
Shree—achcha to lage hath ye bhi bata de ki ye pariyo ki rajkumari tujhe kaha mil gayi….? Aur ye pari lok india ke kis state me hai…..?
Mai—parilok dharti me nahi hai…balki ek alag hi lok hai vo…vaha akash me ek grah hai pariyo ka….sona mujhe india me ooty me mili thi
Shree—safed jhuth…..jab parilok dharti me hi nahi hai to sona dharti me kaise mili….?
Mai—lagta hai ab apko shuru se batana padega…
Shree—ha to bata na
Mai—beech me mat tokna
Shree—tu bol
Mai—theek hai…to suno..
Phir maine unhe apne sapne se lekar india jane aur vaha sonalika ke milne se lekar parilok tak ki poori kahani suna dali….Jaise jaise main batata gaya unke chehre ka rang badalta gaya hairani se
Mai—aise mili sonalika mujhe
Shree—mujhe to ab bhi yakin nahi hai….tu raja banne wala hai vo bhi parilok ka….teri saat biwiya hogi…tere paas shaktiya hain…
Main—ha
Shree—to mujhe abhi ke abhi yaha se gayab hoke india le chal…to shayad soch sakti hu teri baat par
Mai—theek hai…darwaja lock kar do pahle
Shree ke lock karte hi maine unhe apne paas me khich liya…agle hi pal vaha tez roshni phail gayi aur mai unhe lekar adrishya ho gaya apne room se
Mai—ab apni ankhe khol lo
Jaise hi shree ne ankhe kholi to unke vishmit hone ki seema hi na rahi….unki ankhe hairat se khuli ki khuli rah gayi.. ashcharya aur sadme se vo kabhi mujhe aur kabhi us jagah ko dekhti baar baar
Agni—ji vo hamare gaon ka naam hai
Shree (haste huye)—bada ajib naam hai…..theek hai tum sona ke sath so jana
Agni—magar aaj to meri suhagraat hai..inke sath
Shree (hasi gayab)—kyaaa kahaaaa……?
Sona—vo…kuch nahi…didi…mazak hai
Shree (gusse me)—maine tujhse nahi puchha…ha tum batao agni…sach batana…agar tumne kisi ko pyar kiya hai to tumhe uski kasam
Ab aage…….
Shree ne agni se sach bolne ko kah to diya tha magar uska dil andar hi andar bahut ghabra raha tha…ki kash ye sab jhuth ho jo agni ne abhi abhi kaha hai
Agni—ji..mujhe adi ne swayamvar me jeeta hai
Shree (hairan)—swayamvar....... ? tum kis jamane ki baat kar kar rahi ho... ? aaj ke yug me swayamvar jaisa kuch bhi nahi hota hai…samajh gayi…ab ye mujhe bewqoof banane ki bajaye sach batana chalu karo
Agni—yahi sach hai..
Shree (jhallakar)—sab bakwas hai
Sona—wo…sach bol rahi hai ..didi….aap chaho to margret se bhi puchh sakti hain
Shree—mujhe kisi se nahi puchna…..aur ha..adi ke sath raat me mai rahungi koi udhar disturb mat karna…tum logo ne jarur mere adi ko bahla fusla kar phasaya hoga apne jaal me
Agni—aisa hargij nahi hai
Shree—chup raho…mai sab janti hu…mera adi aisa nahi hai…aaj to sach main adi se hi pata kar lungi
Sona—adi se kyo aap mummy se puchhiye..tab to yakin hoga apko
Shree—kya pata tum logo ne mousi ko bhi pata rakha ho…?..nahi nahi..adi hi sach batayega ab to
Sona—adi pakka aapse bachne ke liye hame hi galat batayega
Shree—jaise tum log use galat bata rahi ho…usse to mujhe ab daal me kala lagne laga hai
Sona—arey nahi didi…koi kali daal nahi hai yaha…aap ko jarur koi galat fahmi ho rahi hai
Shree—vo to mai pata kar hi lungi….mai table lagati hu tum dono khana lagao
Sona (didi ke jate hi)—agni kuch dimag laga….jaldi se didi ko india bhejne ka jugad laga nahi to zindagi bhar khud ki ungali daal kar hi suhagrat manana padega phir
Agni—kyaaaaa…..?
Sona—haan…..agar didi ko adi ne hamare khilaf bhadka diya to vo mummy ji ke kaan bhar dengi phir hum sabka patta cut
Agni—nahi….nahi…aisa kaise ho sakta hai
Sona—pakka aisa hi hoga....agar jaldi se shree didi ko india nahi bheja gaya ya unhe bhi kisi ke pyar me nahi phasaya to
Agni—to ab kya kare hum...meri suhagrat ka kya hoga......didi ko patak du kya.... ?
Sona—aisa kabhi bhul se bhi mat sochna.....jis ladki ko sapne me udas dekhne bhar se pareshan hokar jo ek desh se dusre desh ja sakta hai aur use khoj kar use tang karne walo ki kabra khod sakta hai to socho agar tumne aisa kiya to tumhara kya haal karega adi
Agni—to ab kya kare..... ?
Sona—kuch sochna padega jaldi hi….chalo khana le chalte hain
Khana lagte hi shree didi ne mujhe aur mummy ko bulaya to hum chale gaye...tab tak dad bhi aa gaye the.... maine apne hatho se mummy ko khilane laga aur vo mujhe
Shree—mera to kisi ko koi khyal hi nahi hai
Urmila—ye le tu bhi
Mummy beech beech me didi ko bhi khilane lagi….ye dekh kar agni gahri soch me kho gayi
Agni (mann me)—sona sach hi kahti hai…agar shree didi ka kuch nahi kiya to vo hame adi se door kar dengi…mummy aur adi dono shree didi ki hi baat manenge
Aise hi khana khatam hua to mai kuch der tak dad ke sath baith kar bate karne laga…sanjay bhaiya aur mummy bhi vahi aakar baith gaye
Dad—ye kya…tumhara beta ab ki bar ek aur bahu le aaya lagta hai…..?
Mai—nahi dad…vo to sona ki bahan hai
Shree—sona ki bahan kab paida huyi….india me to nahi thi
Mai—india me nahi…yaha paida huyi didi…england me
Shree—lekin sona aur agni to kuch aur hi bata rahi thi
Mai (shock)—aisa kyaaaa…..?…(mann me)…kutte ke pet me ghee aur aurat ke pet me baat kabhi hazam nahi hoti… ab ye bhi meri tang khichengi
Shree—bol ab bol…jhutha kahi ka
Mai—mai nahi vo sona jhuthi hai
Shree—agni ne mujhe sab bata diya hai
Mai—vo bahut badi cheater hai...
Shree—achcha....aur jo margret bol rahi thi vo... ?
Mai—arey kaha didi…aap bhi in jhuthe logo ki baat sunne lagi
Shree (ghur kar)—tu room me chal…phir batati hu tujhe
Mai—bhaiya chalo hum kahi bahar ghum kar aate hain
Shree—chup chap room me ja…bahar gaya to tang tod dungi teri
Mai—mummy aaj mai apke sath so jau……?
Urmila—mera bachcha…aa ja
Mai (mann me)—hihihi...bach gaya aaj is phulan devi se
Shree (tunak kar)—mousiiii.....
Urmila (has kar)—achcha baba….beta tu thodi der didi ke paas rah ke phir aa jana mere paas
Mai—mujhe bahut joro ki need aa rahi hai…mai to chala apke room me sone mummy
Shree—sona…ek balti pani le ke aa
Agni—ye lo didi
Mai—akal ki dushman
Mai ab kya kar sakta tha...agni ne vahi table me pani se bhara jug shree didi ke hath me thama diya to mai bhi chup chap muh latka ke apne room me aa gaya...bed par letne ke sath jaise hi maine ankhe band ki ki so jata hu tabhi mere kano me kisi aurat ke mandir me ghantiyan bajane ki awaz aane lagi
Mai usi awaz ki disha me aage badhne laga aur badhte huye us mandir tak pahuch gaya par ye kya...ye to megha mousi hain jo bhagwan ke aage rote huye jor jor se ghanti bajaye ja rahi hain....main abhi unhe awaz lagane hi wala tha ki tabhi mujhe barish me bhigne jaisa ehsaas hone laga aur meri ankhe khul gayi
Samne dekha to shree khadi thi jo jug me se patle pani ki dhar mere chehre par giraye ja rahi thi....ye dekh main fauran uth kar baith gaya
Mai—ye kya harkat hai……?
Shree—maine mana kiya tha na sone ko abhi
Mai—ab need ayegi to koi soyega bhi nahi kya……?
Shree—pahle mere sawalo ke sahi sahi jawab de doge tab
Mai—mai jawab de chuka hu
Shree—kya kaha.....phir se bol..jhuttha
Mai—jab apko meri kisi baat ka vishwash hi nahi hai to mere kuch batane ya na batane ka matlab hi kya hai... ?
Shree—mai jo puchhti hu tu sirf unka sach sach jawab de bas....agar tu mujhe kuch bhi manta hai ya tere dil me mere liye koi jagah hai to tu sach batayega....baki teri marzi...mai koun hoti hu tumhari khushiyo ke beech me aane wali
Mai—Ye to sarasar emotional blackmailing hai…..theek hai..puchho...kya janna hai apko..... ?
Shree—sona ke bare me tune mujhse india me jo bola wo sach tha ya uske yaha aane ke baad jo bataya o sach tha….?
Mai—dono hi jhuth
Shree—kyaaaa…? To sach kya hai…?
Mai—sona parilok ki Rajkumari hai
Shree—phir se jhuth
Mai—maine pahle hi kaha tha ki jab meri kisi baat par vishwash hi nahi hai to batane ka kya fayda... ?
Shree—ha to sach bata na....jhuth kyo bolta hai..jhutha kahi ka
Mai—yahi sach hai
Shree—achcha to lage hath ye bhi bata de ki ye pariyo ki rajkumari tujhe kaha mil gayi….? Aur ye pari lok india ke kis state me hai…..?
Mai—parilok dharti me nahi hai…balki ek alag hi lok hai vo…vaha akash me ek grah hai pariyo ka….sona mujhe india me ooty me mili thi
Shree—safed jhuth…..jab parilok dharti me hi nahi hai to sona dharti me kaise mili….?
Mai—lagta hai ab apko shuru se batana padega…
Shree—ha to bata na
Mai—beech me mat tokna
Shree—tu bol
Mai—theek hai…to suno..
Phir maine unhe apne sapne se lekar india jane aur vaha sonalika ke milne se lekar parilok tak ki poori kahani suna dali….Jaise jaise main batata gaya unke chehre ka rang badalta gaya hairani se
Mai—aise mili sonalika mujhe
Shree—mujhe to ab bhi yakin nahi hai….tu raja banne wala hai vo bhi parilok ka….teri saat biwiya hogi…tere paas shaktiya hain…
Main—ha
Shree—to mujhe abhi ke abhi yaha se gayab hoke india le chal…to shayad soch sakti hu teri baat par
Mai—theek hai…darwaja lock kar do pahle
Shree ke lock karte hi maine unhe apne paas me khich liya…agle hi pal vaha tez roshni phail gayi aur mai unhe lekar adrishya ho gaya apne room se
Mai—ab apni ankhe khol lo
Jaise hi shree ne ankhe kholi to unke vishmit hone ki seema hi na rahi….unki ankhe hairat se khuli ki khuli rah gayi.. ashcharya aur sadme se vo kabhi mujhe aur kabhi us jagah ko dekhti baar baar
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