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anandsngh12

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Haha badhiya bhai
Aadi ki to sab maarne pe tulle h
Or dekhte h kitna jan kalyan hoga iska
Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai :)
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शानदार अपडेट भाई
बहुत ही खूबसूरत
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Awesome update bhai,
aaj to dil khush ho gaya bhai,
aadi ne shree didi ko sab kichh sach sach bata diya,
aur didi ko apni powers ka ek chhota sa trailer bhi dikha diya,
aadi ne sapne me megha mausi ko mandir me bhagwaan ke saamane aanshu bahate hue dekha tha lekin tabhi shree ne jug se paani daalkar uske nind ko tod diya,
lagta hai ab aadi ko pata chalne wala hai ki wo megha ka beta rishi hai,
vahi dusri taraf ghar me shree didi ke kaaran sona aur agni apne future ko lekar insecure feel kar rahi hai,
lekin ab unka bhi problem solve ho gaya kyonki aadi ne shree didi ko sab sach bata diya hai,
dekhte hai ab shree didi uske powers ko dekhne ke baad kya reaction deti hai,
Overall dhamakedaar update tha bhai,
Waiting for next update
 
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Aakhir agni ko apna hi liye apne hero ne toh kil milake 4 wife ho gye hai aur sayad hai ekk ghar mai intzaar kr rhi hai dekhte hai kya hota hai keep going bro You Rock's
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Awesome update bhai,
bhai aap to chha gaye,
iss update me dialogues aapne itna mind blowing diya hai ki haste - haste pet me dard ho gaya,
aur ye dialogue to epic tha,
{Mai (mann me)—mc..teri gaand me bade bade kide pade..bhsdk...hath pair dhoke mere piche hi pad gaya ye to...pata nahi kis janam ka badla le raha hai.....sale bahar aake teri gaand me vimal bhar ke kisi mote dande se aisa kutunga ki hamesha bathroom karte samay tere muh se bas ‘’Bolo Juban Kesari’’ hi niklega}

kitna hath pair marne ke baad bhi aakhir kar aadi ko agni ko apnana hi pada,
chitra bechari ko hamesha hi sab bhool jate hai aur isliye use gussa aa jata hai,
aur vo sona aur Margret ko patak deti hai,
ab aadi ke ghar par kaun sa toofan uska intajar kar raha hai,
kahi shree didi india se aa to nhi gayi,
Dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
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Bas bhai TV par Vimal gutkha ka Ajay Devgan ka add dikha rakha to ye idea aa gaya aur maine use tod marod kar apni style me update me shamil kar liya

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UPDATE * 64

Shree—kyaaaa…?

Agni—ji vo hamare gaon ka naam hai

Shree (haste huye)—bada ajib naam hai…..theek hai tum sona ke sath so jana

Agni—magar aaj to meri suhagraat hai..inke sath

Shree (hasi gayab)—kyaaa kahaaaa……?

Sona—vo…kuch nahi…didi…mazak hai

Shree (gusse me)—maine tujhse nahi puchha…ha tum batao agni…sach batana…agar tumne kisi ko pyar kiya hai to tumhe uski kasam

Ab aage…….

Shree ne agni se sach bolne ko kah to diya tha magar uska dil andar hi andar bahut ghabra raha tha…ki kash ye sab jhuth ho jo agni ne abhi abhi kaha hai

Agni—ji..mujhe adi ne swayamvar me jeeta hai

Shree (hairan)—swayamvar....... ? tum kis jamane ki baat kar kar rahi ho... ? aaj ke yug me swayamvar jaisa kuch bhi nahi hota hai…samajh gayi…ab ye mujhe bewqoof banane ki bajaye sach batana chalu karo

Agni—yahi sach hai..

Shree (jhallakar)—sab bakwas hai

Sona—wo…sach bol rahi hai ..didi….aap chaho to margret se bhi puchh sakti hain

Shree—mujhe kisi se nahi puchna…..aur ha..adi ke sath raat me mai rahungi koi udhar disturb mat karna…tum logo ne jarur mere adi ko bahla fusla kar phasaya hoga apne jaal me

Agni—aisa hargij nahi hai

Shree—chup raho…mai sab janti hu…mera adi aisa nahi hai…aaj to sach main adi se hi pata kar lungi

Sona—adi se kyo aap mummy se puchhiye..tab to yakin hoga apko

Shree—kya pata tum logo ne mousi ko bhi pata rakha ho…?..nahi nahi..adi hi sach batayega ab to

Sona—adi pakka aapse bachne ke liye hame hi galat batayega

Shree—jaise tum log use galat bata rahi ho…usse to mujhe ab daal me kala lagne laga hai

Sona—arey nahi didi…koi kali daal nahi hai yaha…aap ko jarur koi galat fahmi ho rahi hai

Shree—vo to mai pata kar hi lungi….mai table lagati hu tum dono khana lagao

Sona (didi ke jate hi)—agni kuch dimag laga….jaldi se didi ko india bhejne ka jugad laga nahi to zindagi bhar khud ki ungali daal kar hi suhagrat manana padega phir

Agni—kyaaaaa…..?

Sona—haan…..agar didi ko adi ne hamare khilaf bhadka diya to vo mummy ji ke kaan bhar dengi phir hum sabka patta cut

Agni—nahi….nahi…aisa kaise ho sakta hai

Sona—pakka aisa hi hoga....agar jaldi se shree didi ko india nahi bheja gaya ya unhe bhi kisi ke pyar me nahi phasaya to

Agni—to ab kya kare hum...meri suhagrat ka kya hoga......didi ko patak du kya.... ?

Sona—aisa kabhi bhul se bhi mat sochna.....jis ladki ko sapne me udas dekhne bhar se pareshan hokar jo ek desh se dusre desh ja sakta hai aur use khoj kar use tang karne walo ki kabra khod sakta hai to socho agar tumne aisa kiya to tumhara kya haal karega adi

Agni—to ab kya kare..... ?

Sona—kuch sochna padega jaldi hi….chalo khana le chalte hain

Khana lagte hi shree didi ne mujhe aur mummy ko bulaya to hum chale gaye...tab tak dad bhi aa gaye the.... maine apne hatho se mummy ko khilane laga aur vo mujhe

Shree—mera to kisi ko koi khyal hi nahi hai

Urmila—ye le tu bhi

Mummy beech beech me didi ko bhi khilane lagi….ye dekh kar agni gahri soch me kho gayi

Agni (mann me)—sona sach hi kahti hai…agar shree didi ka kuch nahi kiya to vo hame adi se door kar dengi…mummy aur adi dono shree didi ki hi baat manenge

Aise hi khana khatam hua to mai kuch der tak dad ke sath baith kar bate karne laga…sanjay bhaiya aur mummy bhi vahi aakar baith gaye

Dad—ye kya…tumhara beta ab ki bar ek aur bahu le aaya lagta hai…..?

Mai—nahi dad…vo to sona ki bahan hai

Shree—sona ki bahan kab paida huyi….india me to nahi thi

Mai—india me nahi…yaha paida huyi didi…england me

Shree—lekin sona aur agni to kuch aur hi bata rahi thi

Mai (shock)—aisa kyaaaa…..?…(mann me)…kutte ke pet me ghee aur aurat ke pet me baat kabhi hazam nahi hoti… ab ye bhi meri tang khichengi

Shree—bol ab bol…jhutha kahi ka

Mai—mai nahi vo sona jhuthi hai

Shree—agni ne mujhe sab bata diya hai

Mai—vo bahut badi cheater hai...

Shree—achcha....aur jo margret bol rahi thi vo... ?

Mai—arey kaha didi…aap bhi in jhuthe logo ki baat sunne lagi

Shree (ghur kar)—tu room me chal…phir batati hu tujhe

Mai—bhaiya chalo hum kahi bahar ghum kar aate hain

Shree—chup chap room me ja…bahar gaya to tang tod dungi teri

Mai—mummy aaj mai apke sath so jau……?

Urmila—mera bachcha…aa ja

Mai (mann me)—hihihi...bach gaya aaj is phulan devi se

Shree (tunak kar)—mousiiii.....

Urmila (has kar)—achcha baba….beta tu thodi der didi ke paas rah ke phir aa jana mere paas

Mai—mujhe bahut joro ki need aa rahi hai…mai to chala apke room me sone mummy

Shree—sona…ek balti pani le ke aa

Agni—ye lo didi

Mai—akal ki dushman

Mai ab kya kar sakta tha...agni ne vahi table me pani se bhara jug shree didi ke hath me thama diya to mai bhi chup chap muh latka ke apne room me aa gaya...bed par letne ke sath jaise hi maine ankhe band ki ki so jata hu tabhi mere kano me kisi aurat ke mandir me ghantiyan bajane ki awaz aane lagi

Mai usi awaz ki disha me aage badhne laga aur badhte huye us mandir tak pahuch gaya par ye kya...ye to megha mousi hain jo bhagwan ke aage rote huye jor jor se ghanti bajaye ja rahi hain....main abhi unhe awaz lagane hi wala tha ki tabhi mujhe barish me bhigne jaisa ehsaas hone laga aur meri ankhe khul gayi

Samne dekha to shree khadi thi jo jug me se patle pani ki dhar mere chehre par giraye ja rahi thi....ye dekh main fauran uth kar baith gaya

Mai—ye kya harkat hai……?

Shree—maine mana kiya tha na sone ko abhi

Mai—ab need ayegi to koi soyega bhi nahi kya……?

Shree—pahle mere sawalo ke sahi sahi jawab de doge tab

Mai—mai jawab de chuka hu

Shree—kya kaha.....phir se bol..jhuttha

Mai—jab apko meri kisi baat ka vishwash hi nahi hai to mere kuch batane ya na batane ka matlab hi kya hai... ?

Shree—mai jo puchhti hu tu sirf unka sach sach jawab de bas....agar tu mujhe kuch bhi manta hai ya tere dil me mere liye koi jagah hai to tu sach batayega....baki teri marzi...mai koun hoti hu tumhari khushiyo ke beech me aane wali

Mai—Ye to sarasar emotional blackmailing hai…..theek hai..puchho...kya janna hai apko..... ?

Shree—sona ke bare me tune mujhse india me jo bola wo sach tha ya uske yaha aane ke baad jo bataya o sach tha….?

Mai—dono hi jhuth

Shree—kyaaaa…? To sach kya hai…?

Mai—sona parilok ki Rajkumari hai

Shree—phir se jhuth

Mai—maine pahle hi kaha tha ki jab meri kisi baat par vishwash hi nahi hai to batane ka kya fayda... ?

Shree—ha to sach bata na....jhuth kyo bolta hai..jhutha kahi ka

Mai—yahi sach hai

Shree—achcha to lage hath ye bhi bata de ki ye pariyo ki rajkumari tujhe kaha mil gayi….? Aur ye pari lok india ke kis state me hai…..?

Mai—parilok dharti me nahi hai…balki ek alag hi lok hai vo…vaha akash me ek grah hai pariyo ka….sona mujhe india me ooty me mili thi

Shree—safed jhuth…..jab parilok dharti me hi nahi hai to sona dharti me kaise mili….?

Mai—lagta hai ab apko shuru se batana padega…

Shree—ha to bata na

Mai—beech me mat tokna

Shree—tu bol

Mai—theek hai…to suno..

Phir maine unhe apne sapne se lekar india jane aur vaha sonalika ke milne se lekar parilok tak ki poori kahani suna dali….Jaise jaise main batata gaya unke chehre ka rang badalta gaya hairani se

Mai—aise mili sonalika mujhe

Shree—mujhe to ab bhi yakin nahi hai….tu raja banne wala hai vo bhi parilok ka….teri saat biwiya hogi…tere paas shaktiya hain…

Main—ha

Shree—to mujhe abhi ke abhi yaha se gayab hoke india le chal…to shayad soch sakti hu teri baat par

Mai—theek hai…darwaja lock kar do pahle

Shree ke lock karte hi maine unhe apne paas me khich liya…agle hi pal vaha tez roshni phail gayi aur mai unhe lekar adrishya ho gaya apne room se

Mai—ab apni ankhe khol lo

Jaise hi shree ne ankhe kholi to unke vishmit hone ki seema hi na rahi….unki ankhe hairat se khuli ki khuli rah gayi.. ashcharya aur sadme se vo kabhi mujhe aur kabhi us jagah ko dekhti baar baar

Nice update
 

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Bahut hi mast update tha,magret ka to pata chalta hai ke vo adi ke itne patni se hairan hai magar sona to janti hai ke adi ka 7 patniyan hogi fir uske asie reaction kyun de rahi hai.
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