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Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

Opinion Of the Story...

  • Good

    Votes: 229 96.6%
  • Bad

    Votes: 8 3.4%

  • Total voters
    237
  • Poll closed .

anandsngh12

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Bhai
Shi hua sona margeret k saath
Agar unhe aadi pe bharosa nhi to unhe aadi nhi milna chaiye
Magar urmila k saath galat ho rha h
THk karo bhai isko
Apna hero kis haalat mein h

Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai :)
Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us
Thanks bhai for such a precious review
Agar urmila ko theek kar diya to kya vo adi ke bina rah payegi...?, mar jayegi
Isse behtar hai ki abhi coma me hi rahe kam se kam jinda to rahegi bhai

Today's update is on page......616
 

anandsngh12

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Bohat hi zabardast update bro.
Congrats to completing 600 pages.
pari lok se to mukt ghayab hogaya lagta hai Adi k lotne tak hi ayega .
aur Adi KO kon legaya .
ab gaon walo ka kya hoga dekte hai aage kya hota hai.
Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us
Shukriya bhai

Today's update is on page......616
 

anandsngh12

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Zabardast anand bhai maza aa gaya aaj apne treadmark style me is story ko likha hain warna abhi tak to masti chal rahi thee magar aaj ki update me SAAJAN wala anand nazar aaya hain bhai. Kia zabardast gaon ke terror ka naksha khicha hain waqai qabeel e tareef hai.
Lekin bhai is story me sath sath comedy ke tarke ko bhi rakhiyega. Ab dekhna hoga ki sona and Margaret kab adi ko samjh pati hain magar kia tab tak kahi dair to nahi ho gayo hogi coz ab Adi ka character to khatam ho raha hain.
Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us
Shukriya bhai is khubsurat prati kriya ke liye
Apki baat ko dhyan me rakhte huye comedy ka tadka aage bhi kar diya hai lekin alag andaz me.....ab kahani me badlav jaruri hai....kahani ka origional character jo hai Rishi uske aane ka waqt hai kahani me

Today's update is on page......616
 

anandsngh12

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Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar aur amazing update hai bhai,
aadi ke jaane ke baad ab sab ko uski kami ka ahasas ho raha hai,
aadi ke mobile location se itna to pata chal gaya hai ki vo india me gangotri ki ghati tak aaya tha lekin iss se aage kya hua ye baat ab bhi rahasya bani hui hai,
Urmila coma me jaa chuki hai,
agni khatra ke sath ghar chhod kar jaa chuki hai,
chitra ka kuchh pata nhi hai,
aur Margret ka man bechain hai,
vahi parilok me sonalika ko lagta hai ki aadi uske laayak hi nhi tha,
pari lok se raj mukut aur rajshinghasan adrishya ho chuka hai aur charo or andhakar fail gaya hai,
vahi dusri taraf kisi naye gao ka jikr aaya hai jaha khauf aur manhushiyat ka samrajya hai,
vivah aur naamkaran jaise pavitra avashar par bhi charo or shanti chhaayi hui hai,
aakhir kaun hai vo jiske bhay se shara gao trasht hai,
aur ye rajnandani kaun hai jiske ghar ye surakshit rah sakte hai,
kahi ye lead heroine to nahi,
bhai aapne shabdo ka aisa shama bhandha ki hum usme dubte chale gaye aur update kab khatm ho gaya pata hi nhi chala,
ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us
Thanks for this excellent encouraging review
Aapne bilkul sahi anuman lagaya hai
Urmila ka abhi coma me rahna hi theek hai bhai
Baki sab ka dekhte hain kab kya hota hai
Comedy aage bhi jari rahegi kintu alag andaz me
Shukriya apko meri koshish pasand aayi

Today's update is on page......616
 
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