Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[anandsngh12]

bhai logo anand bhai ne bataya tha ki iss month ke first week me unke brain ka operation hone wala hai,
hum sab ko unke liye dua karni chahiye ki vo jaldi se thik ho jaye,

Ar

Are shubh shubh bol bhai kya anap shanap bake ja raha hai are koi to isko samjavo yaar kuch bi nahi hua anand bhai ko agar tujse sabar nahi ho raha hai to ye sab mat bolakar kuch bi bolta hai nonsence

Aisa mat bolo bhai
Badi mushkil se to Saajan story ko talash karte huye yaha tak pahucha hu
Anand bhai ki umar 100 saal se bhi jyada ho aur story complete ho
Yahi kamna hai

May Anand Bhai Get well soon

Get well soon bhai

Get well soon bhai

Get well soon bhai....

Waiting for next...

Aapke thik hone ki dua Krte h aanand bhai

Get well soon bhai. ...

Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us
Shukriya friends, main phir lout kar jarur aunga
Din mahine ka samay to nahi bata sakta
Anyway ye sab to hota rahta hai life me
Par abhi do din tak update jitna ho sakega dene ki koshish karunga

Today's update is on page......616

 

[anandsngh12]

wtng next

Waiting

Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us

Today's update is on page......616

 

[anandsngh12]

waiting next one anand sir

Waiting

Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us

Today's update is on page......616

 

[anandsngh12]

It's True sir ji
Jab last month kuch din tak anand sir ka update nahi aaya tha tab maine voice call kiya tha to unki elder sister ne call recd. kiya tha tab unki sister ne bataya tha mujhe bhi

Get well soon

Aapke thik hone ki dua Krte h bhai
Aap jald hi th

Unse sampark bnaye rakhiyega
Aur hmlogo ko ummid h jald hi unki sehat ko lekar good news aap dengi

Bhai Faltu ki baate na bnao
Anand bhai ki dusri story me comment kia h aanand bhai n

Get Well Soon Anand Bhai

Get well soon bhai

Hey Bhagwan ,
Aap jaldi se achhe ho jao bhai , humari duayen aapke sath h.
Aap shatayu ho bhai .

Shahnaz jii ,
Aap sampark banaye rakhiyega unse.
Or jald hi achhi khabar sunaiyega.

BHAI HUM SAB KI YAHI DUA HAI AAP JALD SE JALD THEEK HO JAO.HUM BHAGWAAN SE YAHI PRARTHANA KARTE HAIN

Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us
Shukriya Friends, Aap sab ki dua rahi to jarur vapis loutunga
Philhal update de diya hai

Today's update is on page......616

 

[anandsngh12]

Are ye kya hogaya bhai bhagwaan kare aisa kuch naa ho pata nahi kaise me anand bhai se dil se jud gaya hu aisa lagta hai bhagwaan unko har vyadi se mukt kare

Agree

Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us
Shukriya bhai

Today's update is on page......616

 

[anandsngh12]

Jabardast anand bhaii
New jagah ko aache se sajaya h
Main heroine ki entry ki h
Heroine ka gavv bahut musibat m h
Dekhte h Hero ki entry kab hogi
New villain ko aache se dikhya h

Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us
Shukriya bhai is khubsurat prati kriya ke liye
Hero ki Entry bhi ho jayegi bhai

Today's update is on page......616

 

[Jitu kumar]

Bhai Faltu ki baate na bnao
Anand bhai ki dusri story me comment kia h aanand bhai n

bhai health problem hote hue bhi anand bhai jald se jald jitna ho sake story ko aage ki taraf badhana chahte hai,
isliye unhone update diya hai,

 

[King Aryan]

UPDATE * 74​

Sab apni saans roke kisi na kisi makan me chhupe huye darr aur khauf se thar thar kaamp rahe the….sabne apne muh aur naak ko kapde se baandh rakha tha taaki kahi chheenk ya khansi na aa jaye aur use hamare chhupe hone ka pata lag jaye

Vo idhar se udhar gusse me ghum raha tha….shayad use aaj koi shikar nahi mila hoga kahi bhi….gusse me uski saans lene ki awaz aur bhi tez ho gayi thi

Aise hi vo gusse me ghum raha tha ki tabhi use kisi bachche ke rone ki awaz sunayi di aur.phir…

‘’thak…thakkk…….khatttt…khatttttttt’’ jor jor se darwaja khat khatane laga….

Ab Aage………

Darwaja thokne ki awaz sunte hi sab ki ruh kaamp gayi…..uss aurat ne apne bhukhe nav-jaat bachche ka muh daba rakha tha jisse vo rone na paye…..darr se sab ke hath pair phool gaye is awaz ko sunte hi

Yahi haal baki sab logo ka bhi jo anya gharo me andar the….sab ne apne naak aur muh ko kapdo se baandh rakha tha jisse chheenk ya khansi na aa sake aur is musibat se kisi tarah se bacha ja sake

Vo bahar jo koi bhi tha lagatar darwaja khat khatate huye har ghar ko tatol raha tha ki kis ghar se rone ki awaz aayi thi….uske pairo ke chalne ki thap thap ki awaz uss shant vatavaran me saf saf suni ja sakti thi

Uss aurat ne jab jana ki ab shayad vo dur ja chuka hai to usko apne bachche ki chinta huyi jiska muh usne itni der se band kar rakha hai….usne turant bachche ke muh se hath hatakar bachche ko bilkul shant dekh rone lagi

Jaise hi uss aurat ke anshu bachche ke chehre par gire to Tabhi bachche ne achanak punah rudan karna shuru kar diya…..bachche ke rote hi aurat ne turant usko stan paan karane lagi

Kintu jaise hi ye rone ki awaz bahar uss shakhs ke kano me gayi vo turant bhag kar ussi darwaje par aa gaya aur jor jor se saanse khinchte huye darwaja peetne laga

Ab to sab ke jism me ratti bhar bhi khoon nahi rah gaya tha…..unki ankho me mout ka khauf buri tarah se havi ho chuka tha…..akhir vo purana jeern darwaja kab tak usko rok sakta tha

Agle hi pal uski jordar thokar se vo toot kar jamin me gir gaya aur iske sath hi samne dekh kar uss shakhs ki ankho me chamak aa gayi jabki bakiyo ke dil dahal gaye uss shakhs ka chehra dekh kar

Bada hi bhayanak chehra tha uska…agar koi kamjor dil ka admi uska bhayanak chehra dekh le to vaise hi mar jaye….vo sabhi rote huye bachaoo bachaooo chillane lagi

Vo shakhsjor jor se attahas karte huye aage badhne laga aur phir ek hi jhatke me uss aurat ki god se bachche ko aise jhapat kar khich liya jaise sher hiran par jhapatta marta hai

Bachche ko ek hath se pakad kar uss ladki jiski abhi shadi huyi thi uske baal pakad kar ghasitne laga……dulha to ek kone me darr se dubak gaya lekin ladki ka baap aur sarju ne vinti ki unhe chhodne ki to usne apne bade bade nakhuno se unka kaleja bahar nikal liya aur kha gaya dono nispran hokar vahi ludhak gaye sath me us ladke ko bhi maar diya usne

Bachche ki maa jor jor se rote huye apne bachche ko bachane ki pukar karne lagi lekin koi bahar nahi aaya sab ko apni jaan pyari thi…..uss shakhs ne vo ladki aur aurat dono ko khich kar bahar laya aur hasne laga jor jor se

Shakhs—hahahahahahaha…….hahahahahaha……b.u..l..a………….shadi…aur……bachcha…….hahahahahaha…..azgar se dushmani…….hahahahaha……sab ko…saza…….milegi……tum dono ko bhi…..

Aurat (rote huye)—mere bachche ko chhod do…….chahe to mere pran le lo……mai tumhari gulam ban ke rahungi mere bachche ko chhod do

Shakhs—chhod du……..hahahahahaha…….le tu kahti hai to….chhod deta hu….

Usne bachche ko aas maan me upar chhal diya………upar uchhalte hi do giddh udte huye vaha aa gaye aur unhone bachche ko aadha aadha noch liya aur aas maan me ud gaye

Aurat apne bachche ki aisi buri durdasha dekh kar vahi gir gayi ….uski cheekh nikal gayi……jabki vo use cheekhte huye dekh kar khushi se garjana karne laga

Shakhs—hahahahahaha……..ab tum dono ki saza ki bari hai…….hahahahahaha

Ladki (rote huye)—mujhe chhod do……..maine tumhara kya bigada hai…

Shakhs—hahahahaha…….mera tum to kya….koi kuch nahi bigad sakta…….hahahahaha…..aur tujhe chhod du….. tune shadi karne ki galti ki hai…….saza to milegi……..aur isne bachcha paida karne ki galti ki hai……hahahahaha

Shakhs ne idhar udhar nazar ghuma kar dekha …use ek jagah bail gadi khadi nazar aayi to usne gadi ko apni saanso se khich kar paas me kar liya aur dono ko usme bail ki jagah par jot diya aur khud gadi me chabuk lekar baith gaya

Shakhs—hahahahaha…….chalo…..dono……gadi chalao………..chattttaaakkkkkk……chatttaaakkkkkk

Usne dono par chabuk barsana chalu kar diya jor jor se………jisse unki cheekhe vaha par goonjne lag gayi…..rote huye vo dono bhari bharkam gadi ko khinchne lagi

Lekin kaha vo vajandar gadi aur uske upar baitha ye pishach…….dono ek kadam me hi lad khada kara niche gir gayi…..ye dekh kar usne dono par phir se chabuk barsana shuru kar diya…..

Shakhs—hahahahahaha………..shadi karegi………bachcha paida karegi……..hahahahahaha……chalo jaldi se…. nahi to ab yahi teri suhagrat bhi ho jayegi…….hahahahahaha

Dono badi mushkil se khadi huyi aur gadi khinchne lagi……..vo unke upar chabuk marta raha….vo girti rahi……akhir vo dono ko aise hi chabuk se marte huye vaha se le gaya……dono ke jism ke kapde bhi chabuk ki itni maar se phat chuke the…..sharir se khoon ki nadi bah rahi thi

Unke jate hi sabhi gharo se bahar nikal aaye…..sab ki ankho me dahshat aur anshu the…..koi kuch bhi kahne layak khud ko nahi pa raha tha…par tabhi ek aurat ne is khamoshi ko toda

Aurat—akhir vohi hua jiska darr tha……bechari dono ke sath bahut anyay ho gaya…..kab tak ye silsila chalta rahega……?

Mukhiya—hum kuch kar bhi to nahi sakte….kaki……

Ek admi—pata nahi kaha se ye azgar phir se aa gaya aur sath me uska beta akaal aur bakaal bhi

Mukhiya—azgar azad ho gaya hai……usne hi akaal aur bakaal ko dubara jinda kiya hai

Dusra admi—hum dono ko bacha bhi nahi sake…..na to hum shadi kar sakte hain aur na hi bachche paida karne deta hai vo hum ko…….kab tak ye zulm sahna padega hame……?

Ek ladka—ye azgar koun hai….? Maine bahut suna hai uske bare me lekin koi batata nahi hai aur vo aisa kyo nahi karne deta hai……?

Mukhiya—azgar ek shaitan hai.......use ek sadhu ne shrap diya tha ki iss gaon ke paida huye insan ke hatho se hi uska ant hoga tab se vo na to kisi ko shadi karne deta hai aur na hi bachcha paida karne deta hai

2ri aurat—lekin vo aaye din hamari bahu betiyo ko bhi to utha le jata hai.....uska kya..... ?

Mukhiya—vo aur uske log hamari bahu betiyo se sambhog kar ke bachche paida kar rahe hain jo ki shaitan ki hi chhaya hain ...isse uski shaitani sena majbut ho rahi hai....vaise bhi brahma ji ki tapasya se use vardan mila hai ki usko sirf vahi mar sakta hai jo dwet ho

Admi—iska kya matlab hai..... ?

Mukhiya—pata nahi….?

2nd ladka—kya hum yaha se kahi aur nahi ja sakte...... ?

Mukhiya—nahi.....gaon se bahar nikalte hi pakde jayenge......uske log charo taraf raat din ghumte rahte hain naye naye shikar ki talash me......isliye hame chhup kar rahna pad raha hai

Admi—ye Rajnandini bhi kaha chali gayi hai.....kahi usko kuch na ho jaye....... ?

Mukhiya—Rajnandini sherni hai.....itna asaan nahi hai usko pakadna........bas bechari ko aaj bhi uska hi intazar hai....100 saal ho gaye usko gaye huye magar vo pagli ye manne ko taiyyar hi nahi hai ki vo mar chuka hai.... azgar ne usko nigal liya......uss pagal ko ab bhi yahi lagta hai vo ek din jarur ayega

Ek aurat—bechari sab ke samne hasti bolti rahti hai.....lekin akele me uski yaad me roti rahti hai.......pata nahi uske nasib me kya likha hai...... ?

Introduction of New Character’s :

Pratap Bhanu—Mukhiya

Raj Nandini—Main Heroine

Azgar—Ek Shaitan Rakshas

Akaal—azgar ka bada beta

Bakaal—azgar ka chhota beta

Shakuntala—Rajnandini ki maa

Char dost :

Gangu (Gagan), Nangu (Nagendra), Pangu (Padmesh), Chuttad Singh (Chatur Singh)

Ek jagah par jungle me kuch teen log ek ladki ke sath jabardasti karne ki koshish kar rahe the…vo ladki jor jor se chillate huye unke changul se bachne ka prayas kar rahi thi

Ek—bahut din baad koyi naya maal pakad me aaya hai

2nd—ha bhai…..azgar ke darr se to ab maal dikhte hi nahi kahi par

3rd—dikhenge tab na..jab koi ghar se bahar niklega

1st—aaj mil gaya hai……jee bhar ke maza karenge

2nd—ha bhai……dekho to kitna chikna hai….haay….

Ladki (rote huye)—mujhe jane do…..ab kabhi idhar nahi aungi…..tum logo ke hath jodti hu

3rd—hath kyo jodti hai……..pair phaila….pair….hahahahaha

2nd—suna nahi….bhai ne kya kaha......chal apne pair phaila jaldi se......hahahaha…….nahi to ham to phailayenge hi

Ladki—nahiiiiii……bachaaaoooooo…….chhodddd dooooo…….aaaaaaaaa……nahiiiii

Do logo ne uske hath pair kas ke pakad liye janki teesra uss ladki ke kapde utarne laga tabhi uske sar me ek patthar jor se laga jisse uska hath ruk gaya aur vo apna sar sahlane laga

3rd—aaaaaaaa……..kis ne mara……ye patthar kisne mara…..?

1st (jor se)—koun hai..... ? jaldi se samne aa ja nahi to bahut buri halat karunga teri

Tabhi ek patthar aakar pahle wale ke sar me abki bar laga……dono turant apni jagah se uth kar charo taraf dekhne lage….lekin koi nazar nahi aaya

1st (chillate huye)—koun hai...... ? lagta hai tujhe apni jaan pyari nahi hai

Abki bar patthar dusre wale ke sidhe muh me laga jo ladki ko pakad rakha tha.....muh me jor se patthar lagte hi vo tilmila gaya aur apna muh sahlane laga

2nd (jor se)—aaaaaahhhhhh......sala ye koun hai jo chhup ke patthar mar raha hai.... ? samne kyo nahi aata.... ?

Iss beech ladki par se uski pakad dheeli ho gayi jiska fayda utha kar vo vaha se bhag nikli....ladki ko bhagte dekh kar teeno usko pakadne ke liye doud pade aur pakadte hi use niche gira diya

1st (chillate huye)—chattttaaakkkkk......chattttaakkkk......bhagti hai......ab bhag....chal re phad de iske kapde

Jaise hi ek ne ladki ke kapdo me hath lagaya ki phir se ek patthar uske kaan me ja laga jisse vo apna kaan pakad ke chillane laga

2nd (chillate huye)—aaaaaaa----maar dala sale ne...kaan phod diya.....koun hai...... ?

‘’Ladki ko chhod do......warna marne ke liye taiyyar ho jaoo’’ kisi ladki ki awaz vaha goonji

1st—hahahahaha.......arey ye to koi ladki hai........ab tak hum ek ke liye tadap rahe the....yaha do do mil gayi...hahahahaha

2nd—ab samne bhi aa ja rani……bachna tera namumkin hai ab hamare hatho se…

‘’Achcha to ye le…..aa jati hu tere samne’’ ussi patthar marne wali ladki ne kaha

Tabhi ek ped ke upar se koi niche dhadam se kuda……jise dekhte hi teeno chounk gaye…..jabki vo ladki chillane lagi jise in logo ne pakad rakha tha

Ladki (chillate huye)—Rajnandini…….mujhe bacha lo….in bhediyo se….

1st—Rajnandiniiiii………?

Teeno Rajnandini ko dekhte hi rah gaye…..uske chaand jaisa gora anupam sundar chehra,…aisa lagta hai jaise dwitiya (dooj) ka chandrama ho…uske nayan aise ki samudra me lahre upar uth rahi ho aur rakta kamal me bhramar bhraman kar rahe ho…..bhounhe aisi ki jaise baan ko dhanush par lagaye do senaye ho aur unke beech me dono netra samudra ho gaye ho…..nasika aisi ki jaise til ke pushp ki bani ho bilkul komal aur sudoul……uske hoth sundar aur amrit ras se bhare hain, ve aise rakta varn ke hain jaise koi lal gulab ho……jab baate karte huye uske hoth hilte hain to aisa lagta hai mano phool jhad rahe ho……vah aise prem madhu purit bol bolti hai ki jo bhi uski madhur awaz sun leta hai vo usme hi khokar jhumne lagta hai…..gaal aise jaise narangi ke do tukde kiye gaye ho….uske gaal par ek til hai….jisne bhi iss sundar kapol til ko dekha vah til til kar ke jal gaya…..uske stan aise hain ki jaise hriday ki thali me sone ke katore me do laddu rakhe ho jo apne premi ke swagat ke liye uth kar khade ho gaye hain

2nd—wahhhh…….kya baat hai…..akhir tu nikal hi aayi bill me se……bhai is ladki ko chhodo pahle isko pakadte hain

3rd—ha……isko dekh kar azgar bahut khush hoga……aur hame bahut si ladkiya bhi dega maza karne ko

Rajnandini—tere jaise kutte….rajnandini ko pakad sake..itna dum nahi hai…..aa ja…pakad mujhe

1st—jao dono pakad lo isko…..main tab tak iss ladki ka maza leta hu

Dono rajnandini ko pakadne ke liye jaise hi uske paas gaye to usne apne dupatte me baandh rakhe bahut se pattharo ko dono ke muh me jor se de mara jisse dono vahi niche baith kar dard se tadapne lage

Rajnandini ne furti dikhate huye turant kud kar uss ladki ke paas aa gayi aur jisne use pakad rakha tha uske sar me pattharo se marne lagi

Usne bari bari se teeno ko maar maar kar lahu luhan kar diya……unhe rajnandini par vaar karne ka mouka hi nahi mil saka…..teeno ko tab tak marti rahi jab tak ki vo behosh nahi ho gaye

Rajnandini—ab chalo jaldi se yaha se deepa….iske pahle ki koi aur bhi yaha aa jaye

Deepa—tumhara bahut bahut shukriya…..agar tum aaj nahi aati to main bhi inki hawas ka shikar hokar rah jati

Rajnandini—ab chal jaldi

Deepa (tezi se chalte huye)—tum nirash mat hona…..mujhe poori ummid hai ki tumhara pyar ek din jarur jeetega tumhara vishwash dekh kar bhagwan ko bhi use tumhare paas bhejna hi hoga

Achanak deepa ki baat sunte hi Rajnandini ke pair vahi tham gaye aur ab tak jis chehre me alhadpan jhalak raha tha uski jagah par udasi aur ankho me anshuo ne le li

Deepa—kya prem karna itna kathin hota hai…..?

Rajnandini (sisakte huye)—‘’Prem itna kathin hai ki uske nirvah me koi apne pran de to shobha pata hai……Prem pash me jo pad gaya vo chhuta nahi, usne pran bhi de diye tab bhi ye prem ka fanda nahi chhuta…..Girgit jo chhadm vesh dharan karta hai vah utne hi pran dene ke hi dukh ke karan dharan karta hai….aur kshan, prati kshan vah lal,peela aur shwet hota hai….punah uss dukh ko morini janti hai jo vanvasini ho gayi, kyon ki uske rom rom me prem ke nag pashik fande pad gaye….uske pankho me punah punah vahi fanda padta raha hai jiske karan vah ud nahi sakti hai aur qaid ho gayi hai’’

Rajnandini—‘’Bhale hi prem kathin aur dushkar hai kintu jisne bhi iss prem ke khel ko khela vo dono jagat arthat ihlok aur parlok dono me tar gaya…..prem-madhu ko dukh ke bheetar jo rakha gaya hai uske karan jo apman, tiraskar aur maran ko sahan karta hai vahi iss prem madhu ko chakhta hai….dukh tabhi tak rahta hai jab tak priyatam se milan nahi hota hai, vo mil gaya to samjho janmo ka dukh mitt gaya’’

Deepa-Aap chinta mat karo ...vo shayad abhi ruth gaya hai aapse.. jaldi hi bhagwan apke paas use jarur bhejega

Rajnandini-agar mujh se vahi ruth jayega tu mera to sab kuch hi khatam ho jayega deepa

झूठ का दौर है झूठा हर ठौर है
मेरे सच को ठिकाना मिलेगा कहां
जब तलक तेरे दिल मे हूँ महफूज़ हूँ
तुम जो रूठे किनारा मिलेगा कहां

धूप जलती रही छांव ढलती रही
मेरा सावन क्यों मुझसे रूठा रहा
पांव छाले पड़े विष के प्याले बड़े
प्यास बुझती नही दरिया सूखा रहा

तुम जो बरसे नही प्यार बनके पिया
जिंदगी को सहारा मिलेगा कहां ।

मेरे घर से गायब उजाला किये
वो सरे आम कीचड़ उछाला किये
तेरी बातों पे जब से अमल कर लिया
मैंने कीचड़ में लाखों कमल कर लिया

गर उम्मीद का सिलसिला थम गया
हौसलों को इशारा मिलेगा कहाँ।​

Vahi dusri taraf kuch sadhu nadi kinare snan kar rahe the tabhi unki nazar kisi par gayi……unhone turant jakar use kinare par pani se bahar le aaye….aur use sidha lita diya…..uska chehra dekhte hi sabhi chounk gaye

Ek sadhu—ye kaise sambhav hai…..? ek to hamare ashram me saalo se behosh pada hai to ye dusra koun hai…..?

Dusra sadhu—ise guru ji ke paas le chalo……ye to ghor chamatkar hai….lagta hai iski saanse band hone wali hain jaldi se isko le chalo

(Update Size : 3008 Words)

Awesome Superb Excellent Update Bhai

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
bhai aapke update ki jitni tariff karoo utna hi kam hai,
aapke update ki sabse khaash baat ye hai ki har chij perfect hota hai, chahe vo shayari ho, kavita ho ya dialogue ho,
aaj ke update me jo kavita aapne dala hai,
usne dil ko chhu liya hai bhai,
raj nandani ke shaundarya ka aapne itna adbhut varnan prashtut kiya hai ki mai bata nhi sakta,
bhai prakriti varnan aur saundarya varnan me aapka koi jawab nhi hai,
aapki lekhani me chhayavaad ka spasht prabhav drishtigochar hota hai,
aapne gaav me azgar ki jis darindagi ko dikhaya hai, use dekh kar to kisi ki bhi rooh kaanp jayegi, aurato aur bachcho ke sath itna bura salook karne ka jald hi use dand milne wala hai,
kyonki jab dushtata apne charam par pahuch jati hai tab uska sanhaar avashya hota hai,
new characters ka entry dhamakedaar hai,
raj nandani ne deepa ko un gundo se bacha liya hai,
vahi dusri taraf aadi jin rishiyo ko nadi ke kinare mila hai, unke paas pahle se hi uska humshakl saalo se murchhit pada hai,
behad hi shandaar suspence aapne create kiya hai bhai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Raja thakur]

Nice update