Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

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Vahi Dusri Jagah Ek Kabristan me…………..

Lash ne ankhe khol di….aisa laga jaise lal bulb jal uthe ho……ek hafta purani lash thi vah, kabra ke andar aur tabut me dafan….Saare jism par reng rahe gande kide uske jism ko noch noch kar kha rahe the.

Kahi nar kankal wali haddiya nazar aa rahi thi to kahi par un kido dwara adhkhaya gosht latak raha tha….. kuch der tak lash ussi position me leti apne lal bulb jaise netro se tabut ke dhakkan ko ghurti rahi.

Phir kuch der baad sada hua hath tabut me rengne laga…..jaise ki kuch talash kar raha ho…..achanak uske hath me ek khukhari (Knife) pakad me aayi aur phir lete hi lete usne khukhari se dhakkan ke prishtha bhag par jor jor se prahar karne shuru kar diye.


Kabristan me thak….thak….thak ki bhayawah awaz gunjne lagi……andhakar aur sannate ka kaleja dahal utha….aur mushkil se paanch minute baad……

Ek kachchi kabra ki mitti kuch iss tarah hawa me uchhli jaise kisi ne jamin ke andar se jor lagakar mukammal kabra ko ukhad diya ho.

Kabra phat padi aur lash bahar aa gayi…..sharir par kafan tak nahi tha……lash ka chehra charo taraf ghumne laga lekin kewal chehra hi…..gardan se niche ke hisse yaani dhad me jara si bhi halchal nahi huyi. Dhad se upar ka hissa iss tarah se ghum raha tha jaise shesh jism se uska koyi sambandh hi na ho…..charo taraf nirikshan karne ke baad chehra yathawat fix ho gaya.

bahut hi horrible and haunted scene hai y toh

 

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bahut hi horrible and haunted scene hai y toh

horror type

 

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CHAMATKAR
UPDATE-75​

Rajnandini—‘’Bhale hi prem kathin aur dushkar hai kintu jisne bhi iss prem ke khel ko khela vo dono jagat arthat ihlok aur parlok dono me tar gaya…..prem-madhu ko dukh ke bheetar jo rakha gaya hai uske karan jo apman, tiraskar aur maran ko sahan karta hai vahi iss prem madhu ko chakhta hai….dukh tabhi tak rahta hai jab tak priyatam se milan nahi hota hai, vo mil gaya to samjho janmo ka dukh mitt gaya’’

Vahi dusri taraf kuch sadhu nadi kinare snan kar rahe the tabhi unki nazar kisi par gayi……unhone turant jakar use kinare par pani se bahar le aaye….aur use sidha lita diya…..uska chehra dekhte hi sabhi chounk gaye

Ek sadhu—ye kaise sambhav hai…..? ek to hamare ashram me saalo se behosh pada hai to ye dusra koun hai…..?

Dusra sadhu—ise guru ji ke paas le chalo……ye to ghor chamatkar hai….lagta hai iski saanse band hone wali hain jaldi se isko le chalo

Ab aage…..

Sabhi sadhu milkar yatha shigra uss behosh ladke ko lekar ashram me apne Gurudev ke paas pahuch gaye….Unke Guru Acharya Kanak ne jaise hi uss ladke ko dekha to vo bhi chounk gaye.

Ek Shisya :- Gurudev ye kaisa chamatkar hai….? Ek saalo se hamare ashram me jeevan aur mrityu ke beech pada jhul raha hai to dusra uske jaisa hi ussi avastha me mila….iska kya rahasya hai…..?

Kanak :- Isko jaldi hi mere kaksh me le chalo…..abhi iski halat bahut hi nazuk hai…hum swayam bhi ye chamatkar se hairan hain…..ab iska jawab to mere gurudev Bramharshi Vishwamitra hi de sakte hain.

Ussldke ko guru kanak ke kaksh me le jaya gaya….kanak rishi ne sab ko bahar jane ko kaha….unke bahar jate hi vo dhyan mudra me apne guru brahmarshi vishwamitra ka avahan karne lage.

Kanak rishi ke dhyan me leen hote hi unke antar mann me brahmarshi vishwamitra ne unhe darshan diye…kuch samay tak dono ke beech gahan vartalaap hota raha….kuch sujhaav aur paramarsh dene ke baad vishwamitra antardhyan ho gaye.

Vishwamitra ke antardhyan hote hi kanak apne yatharth avastha me vapis lout aaye…unke dhyan se uthate hi shisya kanak rishi ke samip jigyasavash punah pahuch gaye.

Ek Shisya :- Ab iski pran raksha kaise kare gurudev…?

Dusra Shisya :- iske dhadkane rukne ko ho rahi hain…..agar jaldi hi kuch na kiya gaya to iski jeevan raksha kar pana asambhav ho sakta hai gurudev.

Kanak :- hame bhi iska gyan hai shisyo….tum log kuch jadi butiya lekar jungle se aa jao jo main tumhe bata raha hu.

Ek Shisya :- Jo agya gurudev.

Kanak rishi ne unko kuch jadi butiyo ke naam bataye aur sath me unke milne ki jagah bhi jaha par vo mil sakti thi… kuch shisya turant hi van kshetra me un durlabh chamatkarik jadi butiyo ki talash me nikal gaye.

Kahani 5 varsh baad (After Five Years Later)…

India me Nagpur ke ek hospital me Do doctor kisi admi ke piche blade lekar bhag rahe the…vo admi tezi se hospital me se bahar ki oor bhag raha the….doctor bhagte huye gusse me jor jor se chillaye ja raha tha.

Docttor (gusse me bhagte huye) :- Thahar ja, bahan ke loude, teri maa ko chod dunga, ruk ja sale kamine, ek baar hath lag ja mere, to aaj main tujh ko jaan se maar dunga.

Tabhi anand hospital me urmila ke paas jane ke liye andar enter hua to Yeh sunkar anand ne doctor ko pakda aur puchne laga.

Anand :- Doctor Sahab, hua kya hai…kyo iss tarah se gusse me bhag rahe ho…? Aur uss bechare ko maarne par kyo tule huye ho…?

Doctor (gusse me) :- Sir, Ye saala kamina bhosdi ka, harami madar chod, pichhle chaar mahine se aise hi pareshan kar raha hai...sala pichhle chaar mahine se har baar nasbandi karwane aata hai aur saala madarchod Jhaante katwa kar bhag jata hai.

Anand (haste huye) :- hahahaha….vaise hai koun vo….?

Doctor :- sir, aap has rahe hain….jabki iss sale harami ne dimag kharab kar diya hai mera….saale ka naam Chatur Singh hai.

Anand :- Apne naam ki hi tarah vo chatur hai doctor sahab…..khair anyway ab meri wife ki tabiyat kaisi hai…? Kya kuch chances hain uske theek hone ke….?

Doctor :- Dekhiye sir, unke dimag me gahra sadma laga hai….aise cases me kuch bhi nahi kaha ja sakta hai….agar apka beta uske samne aa jaye to shayad uski awaz sunkar koyi chamatkar ho sakta hai otherwise bahut mushkil hai.

Anand (udas hokar) :- Ab jo iss duniya me hi nahi hai to usko kaha se lauu doctor sahab.

Doctor :- Aaiye aap khud hi dekh lijiye Urmila madam ki halat.

Anand uss doctor ke sath andar VIP cabin me chala gaya urmila ko dekhne jaha vo ab bhi adii ki mout ke sadme ki vajah se coma me padi huyi thi.

Udhar vo admi hospital se nikal kar jaise hi bahar aaya to kisi se takra kar gir gaya….vo jaldi se khada hua aur apne aaju baju dekha ki ab to vo doctor uska pichha nahi kar raha hai kahi.

Jab poori tarah aashwast ho gaya to gaya to aram se chalne laga…magar kisi ki awaz sunkar vahi ruk gaya.

“Arey Chuttad Singh kaha bhag raha hai….?” Vahi hospital ke bahar khade teen ladko ne shayad usko bhagte dekh liya tha isliye unme se ek ne usko bola.

Chatur Singh :- Saale kitni baar tujhe kaha hai ki mera naam chuttad singh nahi, chatur singh hai...tum teeno ki vajah se sab mujhe chuttad chuttad kah ke chidate hain.

“Aur jab tune hum teeno ka naam bigada tha tab…saale jab tu hamko Gangu, Nangu, Pangu kahta hai…khud ko mirchi lagti hai.” Unme se Nangu ne kaha.

Chuttad :- to isme meri kya galti hai…? Tu bachpan me hamesha nanga hi rahta tha..tera nangu bilkul sahi naam rakha hai….tum log mujhe kyo dosh dete ho jabki hum sab ke naam bigadne ka kaam to Rishi ne kiya tha.

Nangu :- tu bhi chuttad hai aur hamesha chuttad ka chuttad hi rahega...isliye hi to hum tujhe chuttad singh kahte hain.

Pangu :- vaise tu bhag kyo raha tha... ?

Gangu :- arey tujhe pata nahi...aaj pakka phir se ye nasbandi karwane gaya hoga aur Jhaante katwa kar bhag diya hoga.

Chuttad :- arey yaar doctor se banwane me safety rahti hai.

Ye hain charo dost jo kabhi paanch hua karte the…aur inki paancho ki jodi paandav ke naam se mashahoor thi.. charo baate karte huye aage nigal gaye.

Vahi Dusri Jagah Ek Kabristan me…………..

Lash ne ankhe khol di….aisa laga jaise lal bulb jal uthe ho……ek hafta purani lash thi vah, kabra ke andar aur tabut me dafan….Saare jism par reng rahe gande kide uske jism ko noch noch kar kha rahe the.

Kahi nar kankal wali haddiya nazar aa rahi thi to kahi par un kido dwara adhkhaya gosht latak raha tha….. kuch der tak lash ussi position me leti apne lal bulb jaise netro se tabut ke dhakkan ko ghurti rahi.

Phir kuch der baad sada hua hath tabut me rengne laga…..jaise ki kuch talash kar raha ho…..achanak uske hath me ek khukhari (Knife) pakad me aayi aur phir lete hi lete usne khukhari se dhakkan ke prishtha bhag par jor jor se prahar karne shuru kar diye.


Kabristan me thak….thak….thak ki bhayawah awaz gunjne lagi……andhakar aur sannate ka kaleja dahal utha….aur mushkil se paanch minute baad……

Ek kachchi kabra ki mitti kuch iss tarah hawa me uchhli jaise kisi ne jamin ke andar se jor lagakar mukammal kabra ko ukhad diya ho.

Kabra phat padi aur lash bahar aa gayi…..sharir par kafan tak nahi tha……lash ka chehra charo taraf ghumne laga lekin kewal chehra hi…..gardan se niche ke hisse yaani dhad me jara si bhi halchal nahi huyi. Dhad se upar ka hissa iss tarah se ghum raha tha jaise shesh jism se uska koyi sambandh hi na ho…..charo taraf nirikshan karne ke baad chehra yathawat fix ho gaya.

Kabristan me dur dur tak koyi na tha….hawa tak maano saans roke sadi gali lash ko dekh rahi thi.....lash kabra se nikal kar kabristan paar kar ke sadak par pahuch gayi.

Achanak hawa jor jor se chalne lagi…..maano khauf ke karan sir par pair rakh kar bhag rahi ho aur uske veg se lash ki haddiya aapas me takrakar khadkhadahat ki awaz karne lagi.

Badi hi khaufnak aur rongte khade kar dene wali awaze thi vo, magar unhe sunne ya kabra phad kar sadak par chali ja rahi lash ko dekhne wala vaha dur dur tak koyi na tha….vidhwa ki maang jaisi sooni sadak par lash khatar patar karte huye badhti chali gayi.

Note :- Dosto, abhi Likhne ki condition me nahi hu magar aap sab ka sneh mujhe vapis le aaya....abhi kuch din tak regular aur bade update nahi de sakunga....phir bhi jitna sambhav hoga thoda bahut likhne ka prayas karta rahunga.

awesome writing headsoff to you

 

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Welcome Back Anand Bhai
Apko sahi salamat yaha phir se dekh kar bahut khushi ho rahi hai
Aap abhi jyada update ke karan stress mat lo, pahle poori tarah se theek ho jao phir update dena
Update is reading.....
Review subah dunga bhai.

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update anand bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
bhai aapke update ka koi jawab nhi hota hai,
har tarah se bilkul perfect update hai bhai,
ek ek drishya ka varnan itne baarik tarike se aapne kiya hai ki mai bata nhi sakta hoon,
aadi ko lekar sadhu gan rishi kanak ke aashram me gaye hai, jaha uska hamshakl pahle se hi jindagi aur maut se jujh raha hai, isliye use dekh kar saare rishi gan chaunk gaye hai,
aur iske baad kahani me direct 5 years ka leap liya hai aapne,
Hospital me chuttad singh ka comedy wala scene jabardast tha,
aadi ki maa itne saalo se coma me hai, aur doctors ne ab lagbhag ummid hi chhod di hai,
bhai ab yaha ye charo rishi ke friends hai,
aur pandav ke bajaye filhaal chaar hi hai,
vahi dusri taraf kabrishtan ke drishya ka itna vibhatsh chitran aapne kiya hai ki rongate khade ho gaye bhai,
itna shandaar chitran aapne kabrishtaan wale scene ka prastut kiya hai ki mai bata nhi sakta hoon bhai,
ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Jitu kumar]

Welcome back anand bhai,
itne dino se har din hamne aapke jald se jald swasth hone ki kamna ki hai,
aur aaj jab aapne update diya hai to mai bata nhi sakta mujhe kitni khushi hui hai,
bhai ab bhi aapki tabiyat poori tarah se sahi nhi hui hai,
isliye mai aapke jald se jald poorn roop me swasth hone ki kaamna karta hoon

 

[Gagan]

Fantastic update bro

 

[Acme]

Welcome back Bhai.... get well soon...

 

[Story Collector]

 

[Mahiirathore]

Welcome back anand bhaii

Pahle aap sehat to aacha hone dijiyega Update to aate rahenge

Bagvan se yhii prey h ki aap jaldi aache ho jayee

Aaj ka Update jabardast tha
Five year ka antral liya h
Adii ki mother Hospital m h or jindgi or Mott kbich m h

Kabristan ka horror scene damdaar tha
Ek lash uth k chal padii h

Dekhte h next kya hota h

Update ki chinta na kare Anand Bhaii
Aap pahle Tikk ho jayeee fir regular Update aa jayenge
Apki majburi ko har member samjta h
Get well soon Anand Bhaiii