Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Pawan yogi]

Super update bhai

 

[Raguhalkal]

Uhhhhhh rom rom tak jhan jhana uta update padke yaar

 

[Zas23]

UPDATE- 98 (A)​

Jabki ek anya sthan par ek ladki har kisi se azgar ka pata thikana puchte huye ghum rahi thi…..behad kroadh me thi vo…jaise ki aaj sab ko jala kar bhasm kar degi….uski kamar me ek bada sa chaku latak raha tha.

Tabhi uss ladki ke muh se azgar ka naam sun kar ek admi chounk gaya aur vaha se jane laga jaldi se..lekin uss ladki ne usko bhagte dekh liya aur turant uska picha kar ke uske samne pahuch gayi.

“Azgar kaha milega.” Uss ladki ne sakht lahze me pucha.

“Mujhe kya pata…..jungle me talash karo na ja kar…..aaaaahhhhhhhh” uss admi ne berukhi se jawab diya.

Lekin agle hi pal uss admi ke gale se ek dardnak cheekh goonj kar rah gayi…..uss ladki ne apni kamar me latke tez chaku se uski gardan ko kaat diya tha.

Aur iske baad vo aage badh gayi phir se azgar ka pata puchte huye.

Ab Aage……

Vo ladki chalte huye har raste me milne wale se azgar ke bare me puchti ja rahi thi…..tabhi kisi ki nazar uske upar gayi to vo dekhte hi chounk gaya……uss ladki ko dekh kar chounkne wala ye shakhs aur koi nahi balki damdami mayi thi.

Damdami (chounk kar)—Rajnandiniii…..!

Ji haan, ye har kisi se azgar ka pata puchne wali ye ladki aur koi nahi balki shree thi jisko ki damdami mayi ne rajnandini samajh kar dekh ke chounk gayi thi.

Damdami (mann me)—lekin ye yaha hamare malik azgar ko kyo talash kar rahi hai…..? mujhe turant jaykal ko suchna deni hogi.

Damdami ne turant ankhe band kar ke jaykal se sampark karne ki koshish ki….kuch hi der me doctor jaykal usko samne se uski taraf aata hua dikhayi diya.

Jaykal—kya hua…yaha kyo bulaya mujhe…..?

Damdami (hath se ishara karte huye)—vo dekho….tumhara shikar..

Jaykal (ishare ki taraf dekh kar chounkte huye)—rajnandiniiiii…

Damdami—haaa….iski talash karne ke liye hi to tamraj kilwish ne hame yaha bheja tha….ab main isse apne mayajaal me fasa kar kilwish ke paas le jaungi…..hahahaha

Jaykal—tum jitna asan samajh rahi ho….ye kaam utna saral nahi hai…..uske paas tumse kahi adhik shaktiya hain.. kintu ye malik ko yaha kyo khoj rahi hai…..? kisi bhi tarah se isko kuch der tak rok kar rakho….kahi jane na paye ye main abhi tamraj kilwish aur malik se se baat karta hu.

Damdami—theek hai….main abhi roop badal kar isko apne jaal me uljhati hu.

Damdami turant ek jhadi ke piche ja kar apna roop ek sundar ladki ka badal ke aa gayi aur shree ke paas jane lagi jabki jaykal ankhe band kar ke kilwish aur azgar se sampark karne me lag gaya.

Damdami (nazdik pahuch kar)—suniye….aap ko shayad maine kahi dekha hai..lekin yaad nahi aa raha hai…

Shree—to main kya karu….?

Damdami—aap bahut pareshan lag rahi hain….kya baat hai….?

Shree—tumhe isse kya matlab…..tum ho koun…..?

Damdami—main ek anath ladki hu….bas ek dushta se apni izzat bachane ki khatir yaha se vaha bhagte phir rahi hu.

Shree—to police me report kyo nahi karti ja kar uske khilaf…..?

Damdami (dukhi chehra bana ke)—police aur sarkar uska kuch nahi bigad sakti……sab usse darte hain……bahut khatarnak hai vo.

Shree—koun hai vo….?

Damdami—A..z..g..a..r……naam hai uska.

Shree (chounk kar)—kkkk…kyaaaaaa….naam bataya tumne…..?

Damdami—maine kab bataya apna naam apko…..?

Shree (usko kandhe se hilate huye)—tera nahi…..uss admi ka kya naam bataya tumne…..?

Damdami—achcha ….uska naam…‼ uska naam azgar hai……

Shree (aatur ho kar)—kkkk…kaha milega vo……? Mujhe uska kuch pata aur uska huliya batao…

Damdami—lekin aap aise khatarnak admi se kyo milna chahti hain…..?

Shree (gale me chaku lagate huye)—ye janna tumhara kaam nahi hai……bas usse ek purana hisab kitab chukta karna hai.

Damdami (darne ka natak karte huye)—ye chakuuu …….dekhiye aise admi ka koi pata thikana to nishchit hota nahi hai….kintu ek jagah avashya hai jaha maine usko kuch dino se roj aate jate dekha hai.

Shree—chal bata jaldi mujhe ki kaha hai vo jagah….?

Damdami (mann me khush hote huye)—yahi jungle ke beecho beech hai vo jagah.

Shree (hath pakad kar)—chal mere sath dikha mujhe vo jagah..

Damdami—nahii…agar usne mujhe dekh liya to meri izzat phir se khatre me pad jayegi….main nahi jaungi vaha.

Shree (shakhti se)—agar nahi jayegi to main tujhe yahi khatam kar dungi..soch le ek minute ka time hai teri zindagi aur mout ke beech me.

Damdami—theek hai..chaliye

Damdami mann hi mann me behad khush hote huye shree ko himalaya ke unn ghane junglo ke andar le jane lagi… kafi der chalne ke baad unhe ek khandhar jaisi gufa dikhayi dene lagi.

Damdami—vo jo gufa dikh rahi hai na…..yahi hai vo jagah jaha maine usko aksar aate jate dekha hai….ab mujhe jane do….maine apka kahna maan kar yaha tak aa gayi….mujhe chhod do ab.

Shree—chupchap mere sath chalti rah warna yahi kaat dungi tujhe.

Damdami—mere malik ye kaha fas gayi main……(lambi saans khich kar)….theek haiiiii chaliye

Dono chalte huye uss gufa me andar ghus gayi….jaha andhere ke siwa kuch nahi tha….phir bhi shree, damdami ka hath pakde huye aage badhti gayi.

Andar Jhingalala apna bhesh badal ke poora jaal bichha kar taiyyar tha….kyon ki yaha aane se pahle hi damdami ne apni jaduyi shakti se usko sab samjha diya tha.

Lagatar andar andhere me chalte huye unhe thodi si roshni nazar aayi to dono uss taraf hi nikal gayi …..shree vaha kisi ko dekh kar chounk gayi. …..vaha ek admi khatiya bichha kar leta hua tha

Shree (dhire se)—kya yahi hai azgar……?

Damdami—nahi….ye azgar nahi hai…..main isko nahi janti.

Shree turant chaku nikal kar Jhingalala ki gardan par laga deti hai….jhingalala hadbada kar uthne ka natak karne lagta hai.

Jhingalala—kkk….koun ho tum…..?

Shree (shakht awaz me)—teri mout…..jitna puchu utne ka bina koi hoshiyari dikhaye jawab de warna cheer ke rakh dungi.

Jhingalala—dddd…dekho tum ye theek nahi kar rahi ho……?

Shree—chupppp…..sidhi tarah se bata de ki azgar yaha kab aata hai aur kyo…..?

Jhingalala—kkkk..kyaaaa azgar.....main nahi janta.....main to khud yaha qaid hu.

Damdami—jhuth mat bol....agar tu qaid hota to tere hath pair bandhe hone chahiye the.....yaha koi nahi hai, agar tu chahta to kabhi bhi yaha se bhag sakta tha.....ab sach sach bata de.

Shree—tum sahi kahti ho.....ye kamina jhuth bol raha hai....lagta hai ki ye mere hatho se ab jarur marega.

Jhingalala—mujhe mat maro…main sab batata hu……yaha vo kisi cheez ki talash karne aata hai har roj….main nahi janta ki vo kya cheez hai…….

Damdami—to tum yaha kya ghaas chheel rahe ho….? Mujhe nahi lagta ki ye sach bol raha hai abhi bhi.

Jhingalala—main to bas ek din yaha apni biwi aur beti ke sath lakdiya kaat raha tha…tabhi joro se barish hone lagi to hum yaha chhup gaye..tabhi na jane vo kaha se aa gaya aur mujhe yaha qaid kar ke meri biwi aur beti ko na jane kaha le gaya….usne mujhe dhamki di hai ki jab tak uski cheez nahi mil jati agar maine yaha se bhagne ki koshish ki to vo unko jaan se maar dega.

Shree—ohhhh….bahut hi kamina hai ye azgar…..aane do usko…..aaj mere hatho se jinda nahi bachega.

Damdami—vo bahut khatarnak hai

Shree—kya kar lega vo….? Cheer phad dalungi usko…..?

Tabhi vaha ek dil dahla dene wali bhari khatarnak awaz goonj uthi jisko sunte hi sab thar thar kaamp uthe.

“Azgar Kab, Kis Ko Aur Kaha Nigal Jayega, Ye Koi Nahi Janta.”
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Vahi dusri taraf guru vishwamitra ye jaan chuke the ki ab shayad adirishi ko apne ghar vapis jane ka sahi samay aa gaya hai…isliye unhone usko apne paas bulaya.

Vishwamitra—vats….vaise to tumhare andar sabhi yuddh koushal ki viddhye pahle se hi viddyman hain jo ki shighra hi ab tumhe smaran ho jayengi…Tathapi kuch aadhunik viddhye jo baad me viksit huyi unki shiksha maine tumhe de di hai…..Jaise jaise tum dhyan sadhna me gahrayi tak utarte jaoge vaise vaise tumhare hriday me pada ye maya ka parda ksheen hota jayega aur tumhare gyan chakshu khulte jayenge.

Adirishi—jaisi apki agya guruvar….main apki sabhi baato ka poorntah palan karunga.

Vishwamitra—main ye janta hu vats…ab tum dharti lok par prasthan karo….koi tumhari sadiyo se pratiksha kar rahi hai….jao vats uske sachche prem aur vishwash ki aaj laaz rakh lo.

Adirishi—kintu gurudev….bina guru dakshina arpan kiye bina main kaise ja sakta hu…..?

Vishwamitra—iski koi avashyakta nahi hai putra…..phir bhi agar tum mujhe guru dakshina me kuch dena hi chahte ho to mujhe ye vachan do ki kisi bhi shakti ka galat prayog nahi karoge….ye shaktiya jan kalyan karne ke nimitt hain…..Jaha tak sambhav ho sake atyachari ke badle uske atyachar ko khatam karne ka prayas karna….kintu iska ye matlab bilkul nahi hai ki tum anyay ko bardast karo….jaha bhi adharm aur anyay dikhe uska virodh karna.

Adirishi—main apko vachan deta hu guru dev…aisa hi hoga…..ab mujhe jane ki agya pradan kare….pranam

Vishwamitra—tumhara kalyan ho vats…aur ek baat putra…..jate samay radha se bhi milte jana, uske prem me koi khot nahi hai.

Adirishi—ji gurudev

Adirishi ashram se nikalte samay sabhi shisyo se gale mila…..damnak rishi bhi usse aa kar rundhe kanth se mile aur apne dwara kiye gaye kunthit vyavhar ke liye adii se kshama mangi kyon ki guruev ne unko sach se avgat kara diya tha…..adii ne unhe kshama kar diya.

Jate samay raste me use radha apni ashru poorit ankhe liye khadi mili…. radha ko dekhte hi adii ne apni dono baanhe phaila di….radha kisi pagal hirni ki bhanti doudte huye adii ki chhati se simat gayi.

Radha (rote huye)—mujhe chhod kar mat jao…..jab vapis hi jana tha to mere mann mandir me prem ka deepak jalaya hi kyo tha…? ab main apke bina nahi jee paungi…mujhe bhi apne sath le chalo.

Adirishi—pagli main kaha ja raha hu tujhe chhod kar….? Main to ja hi raha hu vapis aane ke liye….jaldi hi main apni iss dulhan ko lene vapis loutunga.

Badi mushkil se adii ne radha ko samjha bujha kar shant kiya…..jane se pahle usne radha ke komal adhro par apne prem ki mohar laga di aur usse jaldi loutne ka vada kar ke dharti lok ke liye nikal pada.

Next Update :- Tomorrow.

Nice update

 

[Riyansh]

Superb update he bhai fantastic

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update anand bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
shree ko damdami ne apni jaal me fansane ki poori tarah se taiyari kar li hai,
aur vo use azagar ke paas gufa me le gayi hai,
vahi dusri taraf adi ki premika me ek aur naam jud gaya hai radha,
aur adi ne use wada kiya hai ki vo jald hi vapas aayega,
ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

bohat hi zabardast update bhai.
and waiting for next update

 

[Pawan yogi]

Aagla update kab aayega

 

[Johnboy11]

Baat ye nahi hai dost
Asal me kisi story me do jagah ke update likhna kitna mushkil hota hai ye maine ab jana hai
First to story ka pahla update aur dusra climax update.
Kahani apne climax zone par hai isliye thoda time lag raha hai
Aage Flashback hai isliye aaj post nahi kiya hai usko...kal se start karunga

Excellent update bhai.
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Ghar pe kuch ko pta h k shree nhi rajnandini par gufa mai to koi nhi janta k rajnandini ki jagah shree h.
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Adi aahi gya apne karm path pr apna wapas band bajwane.
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Keep posting.
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[Iron Man]

Waiting for next update

 

[KOHINOOR]

wonderfull update...to ye ladki shree thi jo azgar ko khoj rhi h....lekin damdami ke jal me fas gyi...ab kya hoga shree ka...bcoz azgar bhi a gya h waha par....margret ka halat dekh ab uspar daya a rhi h....chlo ye thik huwa ki adi ghar lot rha h...ek ladki aur jud gyi uski list m radha waiting next update