Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Pawan yogi]

Super update

 

[Acme]

Excellent writing bhai.. fantastic update.. keep writing

 

[Sanju]

Nice update bhai ae kiya bardan le liya adirishi ki pehle putri is hisab se shree hua

 

[janu2016]

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[King of light]

UPDATE * 100​

Jabki udhar rajnandini abhi bhi meri tasveer liye roye ja rahi thi…kabhi usko chumti to kabhi seene se laga leti to kabhi kuch badbadane lagti.

"Tere Libas Se Mohabbat Ki Hai, Tere Ehsaas Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Tu Mere Paas Nahi Hai Phir Bhi, Maine Teri Yaad Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Kabhi Tune Bhi Mujhe Yaad Kiya Hoga, Maine Unn Lamho Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Jinme Ho Sirf Teri Aur Meri Baate, Maine Unn Alfaaz Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Jo Mahakte Ho Teri Mohabbat Se, Maine Unn Jazbaat Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Tumse Milna To Ab Ek Khwab Sa Lagta Hai, Isliye Maine Tere Intazar Se Mohabbat Ki Hai"

Aur achanak tabhi jor se darwaja khula aur phir………

Ab aage.....

"Pa hi lete tumko Agar, aati hame bhi adaye…Chahte hain tumhe kitna, ye bhi jatana nahi aata
Yaade to bas yaade hain, ye rukti nahi chahne se.....pyar me tumhare deewanapan, chhupana nahi aata
Ab koi kahe hame nadan, to hairat nahi hoti....pyar to bas pyar hai isse bhulana nahi aata.”

Rajnandini achanak chounk kar palat gayi….aur phir uski ankho ne jo dekha to uski dil ki dhadkan bahut tezi chalne lagi….lekin uss par usko yakin nahi hua ki uska rishi darwaje par ghtno ke bal apni dono baahe phailaye baitha hai.. to usne apni ankho ke bahte pani ko pocha aur jab phir se samne dekha to rishi vahi baahe phailaye baitha tha….

Ye ehsaas hote hi apni subh budh kho kar tezi se chillate huye uth kar bhagi uski taraf lekin tabhi uska pir kisi cheez se takraya aur vo chillate huye niche girne lagi.

Rajnandini (chillate huye)—rishiiiiiiiiiiiii

Lekin isse pahle ki vo niche gir pati….rishi turant phisalte huye uske niche aa gaya aur rajnandini sidhe uski baho me ja giri….rajnandini ne jaise hi ankhe khol kar dekha to khud hi rishi ki balistha bhujao me simte dekh kar bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi….dono ki ankho me anshu the…dono ke dil ki dhadkan tez chal rahi thi.

Rajnandini (rote huye)—mujhe chhod kar kaha chalte gaye the….? Mujhe akele apni yaado me tadapti chhod kar jaldi loutne ka vada kar ke bhi nahi aaye aur main tumhare intazar me pal pal tadapti rahi, na jee sakti thi aur na hi marr sakti thi…tumne aane ka vada jo kiya tha….kyo kiya tumne aisa….?

Rishi (rote huye)—main to khud paglo ki tarah bhatak raha tha, tumhare bina…..nujhe kabhi chain nahi mila… hamesha tumhare bagair main adhura hi raha….main tumhara apradhi hu nandini…mujhe maaf kar do

Idhar ye dono ro rahe the to vahi sabhi vaha pahuch kar ek dusre ko aise dekh kar hairan aur chakit the…sadme jaisi unki halat ho gayi thi….vo kabhi rajnandini ko to kabhi shree ko dekh dekh kar hairan the ki ye kaisa chamatkar hai…..?

Vahi shree bhi gahre sadme me thi….aaj usko apna pyar apne se bahut door jata hua dikhayi de raha tha…uska dil kaanch ke shishe ki tarah toot gaya tha ki adii usko nahi balki uske jaisi kisi aur ko bahut pyar karta hai…vahi sabse bada ashcharya to sab ko agni ki iss baat se ho raha tha ki rajnandini aur adii ka pyar sadiyo purana hai ..?

Unko kya koi bhi aisi baato par vishwash nahi karega ki aaj ke science ke aadhunik yug me aisa hona bhi sambhav hai…? Dono ko aise ek dusre se lipat kar vilap karte dekh sabhi ki ankhe chhalak rahi thi.

Vo sabhi dono ke paas jana chahte the magar agni ne sab ko dono ke paas jane se rok diya….vah iss samay sadiyo ke bichhde dono premiyo ke prem milap me kisi ko badhak nahi banne dena chahti thi.

Urmila (sisakte huye)—ye kaisa chamatkar hai….? Main aaj tak apne bete ko samajh hi nahi payi.

Anand—samajh to ham me se koi bhi nahi paya kabhi usko.

Franklin—lekin ye kaise sambhav hai….?

Daniel—haa…koi sadiyo tak kaise intazar kar sakta hai….?

Juliya—dharti ke alawa kisi aur grah me bhi jeevan hai, iss baat ka pata to aaj tak science bhi nahi laga payi… ye kaise possible hai…?

“Ye satya hai….jis tarah se suraj aur chaand ka hona satya hai…vaise hi ye bhi satya hai ki inn dono ka prem sadiyo purana hai.” Piche khade chuttad ne unke prashn ka jawab diya.

Ajit—tum log koun ho…? Aur ye kaise kah sakte ho ki ye satya hai, jaise ki tum khud iske gawah ho…?

Pangu—haa….hum iss baat ke pratyaksh gawah hain…vo dono hamare bhi dost hain, sadiyo se aur hum bhi ussi grah se apne dost ki talash me yaha aaye hain.

Pangu ki iss baat se sabhi chounk gaye….sabse jyada chounkne ki bari saroj aur deepa ki thi….vo dono shocked ho kar charo ko dekhne lagi.

Chuttad—aise mat dekho…ye satya hai.

Megha—hame poori baat batao.

Nangu—theek hai agar aap sab janna hi chahte hain to suno inn dono ki prem kahani…..

Idhar nangu ne rajnandini aur rishi ki prem kahani batane ja raha tha udhar dono janam janmantar ke yugal premi ek dusre ke dil ko samajhne aur samjhane me vyast the…lekin dono hi ek dusre ko samjha pane me asmarth the.

Antatah dono ke tadapte hoth ek dusre se ja mile aur jaise hi dono ke hotho ne ek dusre ko touch kiya vaise hi roshni ke ek vishal ghere ne dono ko apne kabze me le liya….roshni ke phailte hi adi aur rishi ki ruh ek ho gayi aur ek bar phir se janam ho gaya adirishi ka…adi aur rishi ki yaade ek ho gayi…ek hote hi rajnandini aur adirishi apni yaado ke safar me doobne lage…..

Vahi iss roshni ko dekh kar sabhi ki ankhe phati ki phati rah gayi…..ye unn sab ke liye kisi kalpana se pare chamatkar tha…roshni itni tez ho chuki thi ki sab ko apni ankhe band karni pad gayi…

Shree (ankhe band kar ke)—ye kaisa chamatkar…kaisi roshni hai….?

Sab (shocked)—iss roshni ka kya matlab hai….?

Chuttad—ye to hum bhi nahi jante ki iss roshni ka kya matlab hai…?

Agni—aaj rajnandini ke sampark me aane se do ruh aur unki samast yaade ek ho gayi hain…ye roshni uss baat ka hi praman hai.

Sab—hame dono ke vishay me batao..

Pangu—to suniye…

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Brahmand me kayi galaxies hain jinke bare me koi nahi janta….jane kitne hi rahasya chhipe huye hain jinke baare me pata laga pana namumkin jaisa hi hai….aise hi iss brahmand me ek galaxy hai ATLAS…uss galaxy me bhi kayi grah hain…unme se bahut se graho me bhi jeevan hai.

Yaha ki dharti ki tarah hi vaha bhi ek dharti (Earth 2) hai..halanki uss grah ka naam ALPHA hai.…jaha ke rahne walo ka jeevan bilkul iss earth se kafi had tak milta julta hai….lekin vaha ka science aur technology yaha ki tulna me adhik viksit hai.

Uss grah me ek bahut bada gaon hai Tabhka Koeeli…dusre .gaon ke bahar bane ek ashram me vidwan rishi Kakshivaan rahte the..vo patyek prakar ke shastra aur ved me nipun the.

Tabhka Koeeli gaon me unke hi saman aur rishi the jinka naam Priyamedh tha…vo bhi kakshivaan ki tarah hi ved vedangat me pravin the…aas paas ke sabhi gaon me priyamedh ka kafi naam tha.

Har sikke ke do pahlu hote hain….jaha ek taraf achchayi hoti hai, vaha sath me burayi bhi avashya ho ti hai… roshni aur andhere ka aapas me choli daaman ka sath hai.

Jaha ek oor kakshivaan aur priyamedh jaise dharma parayan vidwan the to vahi azgar aur kilwish jaise achchayi ke dushman aur shaitan bhi moujud the….jinka ek matra uddeshya duniya me darr aur khauf phaila kar paap aur andhere ka samrajya sthapit karna tha….dono ke paas shaitani shaktiyo ka prachur bhandar tha.

Iss uddeshya ki purti ke liye azgar ne apne eesta devta ki kathor tapasya prarambh kar di….varsh par varsh gujarte rahe aur uski tapasya gujarte samay ke sath aur bhi kathor hoti chali gayi.

Udhar Jab kakshivaan ne priyamedh ke vishay me suna to unke mann me unse milne ki abhilasha jagi to vah priyamedh se milne unke ashram chale gaye….kakshivaan ke ashram me pahuchte hi rishi priyamedh ne unka khoob aadar satkar kiya…dono kafi samay tak tak vibhinn vishayo par apne vicharo ka adan pradan karte rahe.

Iske pashchat jab kabhi bhi rishi kakshivaan, rishi priyamedh se milne unke ashram me aate to dono ke beech bahut lambi shastrarth chalti….kafi tark vitark hota rahta unn dono ke beech me…ab koi kisi se kam to tha nahi isliye unke tark vitark ka koi natiza nahi nikalta tha.

Ussi tarah uss din bhi rishi kakshivaan aur priyamedh me bahut tark vitark chal raha tha…dono ek dusre se shastra aur ved se jude prashna puchte aur ek dusre prashno ke uttar dete…haar manne ko koi taiyar hi nahi tha…akhir me rishi kakshivaan ne ek aisa paheli puch liya jisne priyamedh ko uljha diya.

Kakshivaan—aisi koun si cheez hai jisko jalane par bilkul bhi matlab jara si bhi roshni paida na ho….?

Priyamedh ne bahut soch vichar kiya parantu vo iss paheli ka uttar de pane me asmarth rahe...jis kisi bhi cheez ke baare me vichar karte, to unhe lagta ki vah thodi si sahi parantu roshni to uttapann karta hai ....paheli ka uttar khojne ke udhedbun me unki zindagi beet gayi....lekin vo iss paheli ka jawab nahi dhoond paye.

Jab priyamedh ka ant samay nazdeek aaya to unhone sandesh bhijwa kar kakshivaan rishi ko bulwaya….kakshivaan sandesh milte hi unke paas milne aa gaye.

Priyamedh—rishi kakshivaan ji main apki paheli ka uttar dhoond pane me samarth nahi ho paya, lekin mujhe poora vishwash hai ki bhavishya me mere vansh me aisa vidwan jarur janam lega jo apke iss prashna ka uttar de payega.

Priyamedh ki mrityu ke pashchat unke putra ne iss prashna ke uttar ka jimma liya parantu vah iss prashna ka uttar dhoond pane me asmarth raha aur ek din uski bhi mrityu ho gayi....iss ke baad kakshivaan ke uss prashna ke uttar ko dhoondne me priyamedh ki kayi pidhiya gujarti gayi.

Iss tarah se priyamedh ki aath pidhiya kakshivaan ke prashna ka uttar nahi pa saki...sabhi uttar khojte khojte swarg ko prapt ho gaye...lekin kakshivan apni paheli ka jawab pane ke liye jinda rahe.

Kakshivaan ke paas ek newle ke chamde se bani thaili thi, jisme kuch chawal bhare the...pratyek varsh me vo usme se ek ek dana chawal ka nikal kar phenk dete the....jab tak uss thaili ke saare chawal khatam na ho jaye, tab tak ka unhe jeevan prapt tha.

Kayi varsho ki kathor tapasya ke parinam swaroop azgar ki tapasya safal huyi….uske eesta devta ne uske samne prakat ho kar vardan mangane ko kaha.

Eesta dev—azgar ankhe kholo...hum tumhari tapasya se bahut khush hain....vardan maango vats.

Azgar—mujhe amar hone ka vardan chahiye...mujhe koi bhi na maar sake.

Eesta dev—main ye vardan nahi de sakta...tum amarta ko chhod kar koi dusra vardan maango.

Azgar—agar aap mujhe amar hone ka vardan nahi de sakte to theek hai....phir mujhe aise kayi kawach dijiye jinke karan main abhedya aur surakshit rahu..mere sharir me ek bhi kawach ke hote huye koi mujhe maar na sake...koi maha parakrami aur satyavadi jisne kabhi koi paap na kiya ho kewal vahi mere kawach ko tod sake, lekin ek bhi kawach todte hi uski mrityu ho jaye....meri mrityu sirf ussi maha parakrami ke hatho se ho jo mera kawach todne ke baad apni hi sagi putri se vivah karne ke baad usse santan paida kiya ho.

Eesta dev (kuch der sochne ke baad)—theek hai....aisa hi hoga.....main tumhe teen kawach pradan karta hu aur vardan deta hu ki jab tak tumhare sharir par ek bhi kawach shesh hai, tab tak koi tumhe nahi maar sakta..jo bhi tumhara kawach todega uski tatkal mrityu ho jayegi....tathastu

Ye vardan milte hi azgar to jaise khushi se pagal ho gaya...usne charo taraf atyachar aur paap ki satta ko badhane laga...kya stri aur kya purush, sab uske julm ke shikar hone lage.

Azgar—hahahaha......ab main amar ho gaya....kyon ki jo satyavadi aur dharma par chalne wala hoga vo apni hi beti se shadi kar ke sambhog nahi karega aur agar usne aisa kiya to paap ka bhagi ho jayega... lekin jab vo kawach todne ke baad jinda hi nahi rahega to apni beti se shadi kaise karega... ? hahahahahaha....eesta dev ko badhiya bewqoof banaya maine....ab mujhe koi nahi maar sakta....hahahahahaha

Vardan ke nashe me chur azgar har kisi par atyachar karne laga...jaha bhi koi pooja path karte dikh jata to unko utha kar ussi agni kund me phenk deta...striyo aur jawan ladkiyo ko uske sainik jabran ghar se sab ke samne nagn kar ke ghasit le jate aur raat din unka shosan karte rahte...unse paida hone wali santane bhi paap ke marg par chalne wali hoti..aise hi azgar ki kali sena badhti chali gayi....logo ne apne apne gharo se bahar nikalna tak band kar diya tha uske darr se.

Vahi dusri taraf priyamedh ki nauvi (9th) pidhi me ek balak ka janam hua...jiske sharir me adbhut tez tha..ussi gaon ke ek vidwan brahman ke hatho naam karan ke pashchat uss balak ka naam rakha gaya..Adiirishi

Uss vidwan brahman ke ghar uss din hi ek bahut hi sundar kanya ne janam liya...jiska naam rakha gaya..Rajnandini

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[Rohan008]

UPDATE * 100​

Jabki udhar rajnandini abhi bhi meri tasveer liye roye ja rahi thi…kabhi usko chumti to kabhi seene se laga leti to kabhi kuch badbadane lagti.

"Tere Libas Se Mohabbat Ki Hai, Tere Ehsaas Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Tu Mere Paas Nahi Hai Phir Bhi, Maine Teri Yaad Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Kabhi Tune Bhi Mujhe Yaad Kiya Hoga, Maine Unn Lamho Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Jinme Ho Sirf Teri Aur Meri Baate, Maine Unn Alfaaz Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Jo Mahakte Ho Teri Mohabbat Se, Maine Unn Jazbaat Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Tumse Milna To Ab Ek Khwab Sa Lagta Hai, Isliye Maine Tere Intazar Se Mohabbat Ki Hai"

Aur achanak tabhi jor se darwaja khula aur phir………

Ab aage.....

"Pa hi lete tumko Agar, aati hame bhi adaye…Chahte hain tumhe kitna, ye bhi jatana nahi aata
Yaade to bas yaade hain, ye rukti nahi chahne se.....pyar me tumhare deewanapan, chhupana nahi aata
Ab koi kahe hame nadan, to hairat nahi hoti....pyar to bas pyar hai isse bhulana nahi aata.”

Rajnandini achanak chounk kar palat gayi….aur phir uski ankho ne jo dekha to uski dil ki dhadkan bahut tezi chalne lagi….lekin uss par usko yakin nahi hua ki uska rishi darwaje par ghtno ke bal apni dono baahe phailaye baitha hai.. to usne apni ankho ke bahte pani ko pocha aur jab phir se samne dekha to rishi vahi baahe phailaye baitha tha….

Ye ehsaas hote hi apni subh budh kho kar tezi se chillate huye uth kar bhagi uski taraf lekin tabhi uska pir kisi cheez se takraya aur vo chillate huye niche girne lagi.

Rajnandini (chillate huye)—rishiiiiiiiiiiiii

Lekin isse pahle ki vo niche gir pati….rishi turant phisalte huye uske niche aa gaya aur rajnandini sidhe uski baho me ja giri….rajnandini ne jaise hi ankhe khol kar dekha to khud hi rishi ki balistha bhujao me simte dekh kar bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi….dono ki ankho me anshu the…dono ke dil ki dhadkan tez chal rahi thi.

Rajnandini (rote huye)—mujhe chhod kar kaha chalte gaye the….? Mujhe akele apni yaado me tadapti chhod kar jaldi loutne ka vada kar ke bhi nahi aaye aur main tumhare intazar me pal pal tadapti rahi, na jee sakti thi aur na hi marr sakti thi…tumne aane ka vada jo kiya tha….kyo kiya tumne aisa….?

Rishi (rote huye)—main to khud paglo ki tarah bhatak raha tha, tumhare bina…..nujhe kabhi chain nahi mila… hamesha tumhare bagair main adhura hi raha….main tumhara apradhi hu nandini…mujhe maaf kar do

Idhar ye dono ro rahe the to vahi sabhi vaha pahuch kar ek dusre ko aise dekh kar hairan aur chakit the…sadme jaisi unki halat ho gayi thi….vo kabhi rajnandini ko to kabhi shree ko dekh dekh kar hairan the ki ye kaisa chamatkar hai…..?

Vahi shree bhi gahre sadme me thi….aaj usko apna pyar apne se bahut door jata hua dikhayi de raha tha…uska dil kaanch ke shishe ki tarah toot gaya tha ki adii usko nahi balki uske jaisi kisi aur ko bahut pyar karta hai…vahi sabse bada ashcharya to sab ko agni ki iss baat se ho raha tha ki rajnandini aur adii ka pyar sadiyo purana hai ..?

Unko kya koi bhi aisi baato par vishwash nahi karega ki aaj ke science ke aadhunik yug me aisa hona bhi sambhav hai…? Dono ko aise ek dusre se lipat kar vilap karte dekh sabhi ki ankhe chhalak rahi thi.

Vo sabhi dono ke paas jana chahte the magar agni ne sab ko dono ke paas jane se rok diya….vah iss samay sadiyo ke bichhde dono premiyo ke prem milap me kisi ko badhak nahi banne dena chahti thi.

Urmila (sisakte huye)—ye kaisa chamatkar hai….? Main aaj tak apne bete ko samajh hi nahi payi.

Anand—samajh to ham me se koi bhi nahi paya kabhi usko.

Franklin—lekin ye kaise sambhav hai….?

Daniel—haa…koi sadiyo tak kaise intazar kar sakta hai….?

Juliya—dharti ke alawa kisi aur grah me bhi jeevan hai, iss baat ka pata to aaj tak science bhi nahi laga payi… ye kaise possible hai…?

“Ye satya hai….jis tarah se suraj aur chaand ka hona satya hai…vaise hi ye bhi satya hai ki inn dono ka prem sadiyo purana hai.” Piche khade chuttad ne unke prashn ka jawab diya.

Ajit—tum log koun ho…? Aur ye kaise kah sakte ho ki ye satya hai, jaise ki tum khud iske gawah ho…?

Pangu—haa….hum iss baat ke pratyaksh gawah hain…vo dono hamare bhi dost hain, sadiyo se aur hum bhi ussi grah se apne dost ki talash me yaha aaye hain.

Pangu ki iss baat se sabhi chounk gaye….sabse jyada chounkne ki bari saroj aur deepa ki thi….vo dono shocked ho kar charo ko dekhne lagi.

Chuttad—aise mat dekho…ye satya hai.

Megha—hame poori baat batao.

Nangu—theek hai agar aap sab janna hi chahte hain to suno inn dono ki prem kahani…..

Idhar nangu ne rajnandini aur rishi ki prem kahani batane ja raha tha udhar dono janam janmantar ke yugal premi ek dusre ke dil ko samajhne aur samjhane me vyast the…lekin dono hi ek dusre ko samjha pane me asmarth the.

Antatah dono ke tadapte hoth ek dusre se ja mile aur jaise hi dono ke hotho ne ek dusre ko touch kiya vaise hi roshni ke ek vishal ghere ne dono ko apne kabze me le liya….roshni ke phailte hi adi aur rishi ki ruh ek ho gayi aur ek bar phir se janam ho gaya adirishi ka…adi aur rishi ki yaade ek ho gayi…ek hote hi rajnandini aur adirishi apni yaado ke safar me doobne lage…..

Vahi iss roshni ko dekh kar sabhi ki ankhe phati ki phati rah gayi…..ye unn sab ke liye kisi kalpana se pare chamatkar tha…roshni itni tez ho chuki thi ki sab ko apni ankhe band karni pad gayi…

Shree (ankhe band kar ke)—ye kaisa chamatkar…kaisi roshni hai….?

Sab (shocked)—iss roshni ka kya matlab hai….?

Chuttad—ye to hum bhi nahi jante ki iss roshni ka kya matlab hai…?

Agni—aaj rajnandini ke sampark me aane se do ruh aur unki samast yaade ek ho gayi hain…ye roshni uss baat ka hi praman hai.

Sab—hame dono ke vishay me batao..

Pangu—to suniye…

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Brahmand me kayi galaxies hain jinke bare me koi nahi janta….jane kitne hi rahasya chhipe huye hain jinke baare me pata laga pana namumkin jaisa hi hai….aise hi iss brahmand me ek galaxy hai ATLAS…uss galaxy me bhi kayi grah hain…unme se bahut se graho me bhi jeevan hai.

Yaha ki dharti ki tarah hi vaha bhi ek dharti (Earth 2) hai..halanki uss grah ka naam ALPHA hai.…jaha ke rahne walo ka jeevan bilkul iss earth se kafi had tak milta julta hai….lekin vaha ka science aur technology yaha ki tulna me adhik viksit hai.

Uss grah me ek bahut bada gaon hai Tabhka Koeeli…dusre .gaon ke bahar bane ek ashram me vidwan rishi Kakshivaan rahte the..vo patyek prakar ke shastra aur ved me nipun the.

Tabhka Koeeli gaon me unke hi saman aur rishi the jinka naam Priyamedh tha…vo bhi kakshivaan ki tarah hi ved vedangat me pravin the…aas paas ke sabhi gaon me priyamedh ka kafi naam tha.

Har sikke ke do pahlu hote hain….jaha ek taraf achchayi hoti hai, vaha sath me burayi bhi avashya ho ti hai… roshni aur andhere ka aapas me choli daaman ka sath hai.

Jaha ek oor kakshivaan aur priyamedh jaise dharma parayan vidwan the to vahi azgar aur kilwish jaise achchayi ke dushman aur shaitan bhi moujud the….jinka ek matra uddeshya duniya me darr aur khauf phaila kar paap aur andhere ka samrajya sthapit karna tha….dono ke paas shaitani shaktiyo ka prachur bhandar tha.

Iss uddeshya ki purti ke liye azgar ne apne eesta devta ki kathor tapasya prarambh kar di….varsh par varsh gujarte rahe aur uski tapasya gujarte samay ke sath aur bhi kathor hoti chali gayi.

Udhar Jab kakshivaan ne priyamedh ke vishay me suna to unke mann me unse milne ki abhilasha jagi to vah priyamedh se milne unke ashram chale gaye….kakshivaan ke ashram me pahuchte hi rishi priyamedh ne unka khoob aadar satkar kiya…dono kafi samay tak tak vibhinn vishayo par apne vicharo ka adan pradan karte rahe.

Iske pashchat jab kabhi bhi rishi kakshivaan, rishi priyamedh se milne unke ashram me aate to dono ke beech bahut lambi shastrarth chalti….kafi tark vitark hota rahta unn dono ke beech me…ab koi kisi se kam to tha nahi isliye unke tark vitark ka koi natiza nahi nikalta tha.

Ussi tarah uss din bhi rishi kakshivaan aur priyamedh me bahut tark vitark chal raha tha…dono ek dusre se shastra aur ved se jude prashna puchte aur ek dusre prashno ke uttar dete…haar manne ko koi taiyar hi nahi tha…akhir me rishi kakshivaan ne ek aisa paheli puch liya jisne priyamedh ko uljha diya.

Kakshivaan—aisi koun si cheez hai jisko jalane par bilkul bhi matlab jara si bhi roshni paida na ho….?

Priyamedh ne bahut soch vichar kiya parantu vo iss paheli ka uttar de pane me asmarth rahe...jis kisi bhi cheez ke baare me vichar karte, to unhe lagta ki vah thodi si sahi parantu roshni to uttapann karta hai ....paheli ka uttar khojne ke udhedbun me unki zindagi beet gayi....lekin vo iss paheli ka jawab nahi dhoond paye.

Jab priyamedh ka ant samay nazdeek aaya to unhone sandesh bhijwa kar kakshivaan rishi ko bulwaya….kakshivaan sandesh milte hi unke paas milne aa gaye.

Priyamedh—rishi kakshivaan ji main apki paheli ka uttar dhoond pane me samarth nahi ho paya, lekin mujhe poora vishwash hai ki bhavishya me mere vansh me aisa vidwan jarur janam lega jo apke iss prashna ka uttar de payega.

Priyamedh ki mrityu ke pashchat unke putra ne iss prashna ke uttar ka jimma liya parantu vah iss prashna ka uttar dhoond pane me asmarth raha aur ek din uski bhi mrityu ho gayi....iss ke baad kakshivaan ke uss prashna ke uttar ko dhoondne me priyamedh ki kayi pidhiya gujarti gayi.

Iss tarah se priyamedh ki aath pidhiya kakshivaan ke prashna ka uttar nahi pa saki...sabhi uttar khojte khojte swarg ko prapt ho gaye...lekin kakshivan apni paheli ka jawab pane ke liye jinda rahe.

Kakshivaan ke paas ek newle ke chamde se bani thaili thi, jisme kuch chawal bhare the...pratyek varsh me vo usme se ek ek dana chawal ka nikal kar phenk dete the....jab tak uss thaili ke saare chawal khatam na ho jaye, tab tak ka unhe jeevan prapt tha.

Kayi varsho ki kathor tapasya ke parinam swaroop azgar ki tapasya safal huyi….uske eesta devta ne uske samne prakat ho kar vardan mangane ko kaha.

Eesta dev—azgar ankhe kholo...hum tumhari tapasya se bahut khush hain....vardan maango vats.

Azgar—mujhe amar hone ka vardan chahiye...mujhe koi bhi na maar sake.

Eesta dev—main ye vardan nahi de sakta...tum amarta ko chhod kar koi dusra vardan maango.

Azgar—agar aap mujhe amar hone ka vardan nahi de sakte to theek hai....phir mujhe aise kayi kawach dijiye jinke karan main abhedya aur surakshit rahu..mere sharir me ek bhi kawach ke hote huye koi mujhe maar na sake...koi maha parakrami aur satyavadi jisne kabhi koi paap na kiya ho kewal vahi mere kawach ko tod sake, lekin ek bhi kawach todte hi uski mrityu ho jaye....meri mrityu sirf ussi maha parakrami ke hatho se ho jo mera kawach todne ke baad apni hi sagi putri se vivah karne ke baad usse santan paida kiya ho.

Eesta dev (kuch der sochne ke baad)—theek hai....aisa hi hoga.....main tumhe teen kawach pradan karta hu aur vardan deta hu ki jab tak tumhare sharir par ek bhi kawach shesh hai, tab tak koi tumhe nahi maar sakta..jo bhi tumhara kawach todega uski tatkal mrityu ho jayegi....tathastu

Ye vardan milte hi azgar to jaise khushi se pagal ho gaya...usne charo taraf atyachar aur paap ki satta ko badhane laga...kya stri aur kya purush, sab uske julm ke shikar hone lage.

Azgar—hahahaha......ab main amar ho gaya....kyon ki jo satyavadi aur dharma par chalne wala hoga vo apni hi beti se shadi kar ke sambhog nahi karega aur agar usne aisa kiya to paap ka bhagi ho jayega... lekin jab vo kawach todne ke baad jinda hi nahi rahega to apni beti se shadi kaise karega... ? hahahahahaha....eesta dev ko badhiya bewqoof banaya maine....ab mujhe koi nahi maar sakta....hahahahahaha

Vardan ke nashe me chur azgar har kisi par atyachar karne laga...jaha bhi koi pooja path karte dikh jata to unko utha kar ussi agni kund me phenk deta...striyo aur jawan ladkiyo ko uske sainik jabran ghar se sab ke samne nagn kar ke ghasit le jate aur raat din unka shosan karte rahte...unse paida hone wali santane bhi paap ke marg par chalne wali hoti..aise hi azgar ki kali sena badhti chali gayi....logo ne apne apne gharo se bahar nikalna tak band kar diya tha uske darr se.

Vahi dusri taraf priyamedh ki nauvi (9th) pidhi me ek balak ka janam hua...jiske sharir me adbhut tez tha..ussi gaon ke ek vidwan brahman ke hatho naam karan ke pashchat uss balak ka naam rakha gaya..Adiirishi

Uss vidwan brahman ke ghar uss din hi ek bahut hi sundar kanya ne janam liya...jiska naam rakha gaya..Rajnandini

Bht hi shandaar update
Kya mast vardaan maanga h kilwish ne
Beshak villan ho lekin samjhdaar bht h
Mazza hi aagya bhai
Superb
Brilliant
Story bht mast chal rhi h flashback ki

Agle update ka intzaar rhega
KEEP rocking

 

[Jitu kumar]

UPDATE * 100​

Jabki udhar rajnandini abhi bhi meri tasveer liye roye ja rahi thi…kabhi usko chumti to kabhi seene se laga leti to kabhi kuch badbadane lagti.

"Tere Libas Se Mohabbat Ki Hai, Tere Ehsaas Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Tu Mere Paas Nahi Hai Phir Bhi, Maine Teri Yaad Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Kabhi Tune Bhi Mujhe Yaad Kiya Hoga, Maine Unn Lamho Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Jinme Ho Sirf Teri Aur Meri Baate, Maine Unn Alfaaz Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Jo Mahakte Ho Teri Mohabbat Se, Maine Unn Jazbaat Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Tumse Milna To Ab Ek Khwab Sa Lagta Hai, Isliye Maine Tere Intazar Se Mohabbat Ki Hai"

Aur achanak tabhi jor se darwaja khula aur phir………

Ab aage.....

"Pa hi lete tumko Agar, aati hame bhi adaye…Chahte hain tumhe kitna, ye bhi jatana nahi aata
Yaade to bas yaade hain, ye rukti nahi chahne se.....pyar me tumhare deewanapan, chhupana nahi aata
Ab koi kahe hame nadan, to hairat nahi hoti....pyar to bas pyar hai isse bhulana nahi aata.”

Rajnandini achanak chounk kar palat gayi….aur phir uski ankho ne jo dekha to uski dil ki dhadkan bahut tezi chalne lagi….lekin uss par usko yakin nahi hua ki uska rishi darwaje par ghtno ke bal apni dono baahe phailaye baitha hai.. to usne apni ankho ke bahte pani ko pocha aur jab phir se samne dekha to rishi vahi baahe phailaye baitha tha….

Ye ehsaas hote hi apni subh budh kho kar tezi se chillate huye uth kar bhagi uski taraf lekin tabhi uska pir kisi cheez se takraya aur vo chillate huye niche girne lagi.

Rajnandini (chillate huye)—rishiiiiiiiiiiiii

Lekin isse pahle ki vo niche gir pati….rishi turant phisalte huye uske niche aa gaya aur rajnandini sidhe uski baho me ja giri….rajnandini ne jaise hi ankhe khol kar dekha to khud hi rishi ki balistha bhujao me simte dekh kar bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi….dono ki ankho me anshu the…dono ke dil ki dhadkan tez chal rahi thi.

Rajnandini (rote huye)—mujhe chhod kar kaha chalte gaye the….? Mujhe akele apni yaado me tadapti chhod kar jaldi loutne ka vada kar ke bhi nahi aaye aur main tumhare intazar me pal pal tadapti rahi, na jee sakti thi aur na hi marr sakti thi…tumne aane ka vada jo kiya tha….kyo kiya tumne aisa….?

Rishi (rote huye)—main to khud paglo ki tarah bhatak raha tha, tumhare bina…..nujhe kabhi chain nahi mila… hamesha tumhare bagair main adhura hi raha….main tumhara apradhi hu nandini…mujhe maaf kar do

Idhar ye dono ro rahe the to vahi sabhi vaha pahuch kar ek dusre ko aise dekh kar hairan aur chakit the…sadme jaisi unki halat ho gayi thi….vo kabhi rajnandini ko to kabhi shree ko dekh dekh kar hairan the ki ye kaisa chamatkar hai…..?

Vahi shree bhi gahre sadme me thi….aaj usko apna pyar apne se bahut door jata hua dikhayi de raha tha…uska dil kaanch ke shishe ki tarah toot gaya tha ki adii usko nahi balki uske jaisi kisi aur ko bahut pyar karta hai…vahi sabse bada ashcharya to sab ko agni ki iss baat se ho raha tha ki rajnandini aur adii ka pyar sadiyo purana hai ..?

Unko kya koi bhi aisi baato par vishwash nahi karega ki aaj ke science ke aadhunik yug me aisa hona bhi sambhav hai…? Dono ko aise ek dusre se lipat kar vilap karte dekh sabhi ki ankhe chhalak rahi thi.

Vo sabhi dono ke paas jana chahte the magar agni ne sab ko dono ke paas jane se rok diya….vah iss samay sadiyo ke bichhde dono premiyo ke prem milap me kisi ko badhak nahi banne dena chahti thi.

Urmila (sisakte huye)—ye kaisa chamatkar hai….? Main aaj tak apne bete ko samajh hi nahi payi.

Anand—samajh to ham me se koi bhi nahi paya kabhi usko.

Franklin—lekin ye kaise sambhav hai….?

Daniel—haa…koi sadiyo tak kaise intazar kar sakta hai….?

Juliya—dharti ke alawa kisi aur grah me bhi jeevan hai, iss baat ka pata to aaj tak science bhi nahi laga payi… ye kaise possible hai…?

“Ye satya hai….jis tarah se suraj aur chaand ka hona satya hai…vaise hi ye bhi satya hai ki inn dono ka prem sadiyo purana hai.” Piche khade chuttad ne unke prashn ka jawab diya.

Ajit—tum log koun ho…? Aur ye kaise kah sakte ho ki ye satya hai, jaise ki tum khud iske gawah ho…?

Pangu—haa….hum iss baat ke pratyaksh gawah hain…vo dono hamare bhi dost hain, sadiyo se aur hum bhi ussi grah se apne dost ki talash me yaha aaye hain.

Pangu ki iss baat se sabhi chounk gaye….sabse jyada chounkne ki bari saroj aur deepa ki thi….vo dono shocked ho kar charo ko dekhne lagi.

Chuttad—aise mat dekho…ye satya hai.

Megha—hame poori baat batao.

Nangu—theek hai agar aap sab janna hi chahte hain to suno inn dono ki prem kahani…..

Idhar nangu ne rajnandini aur rishi ki prem kahani batane ja raha tha udhar dono janam janmantar ke yugal premi ek dusre ke dil ko samajhne aur samjhane me vyast the…lekin dono hi ek dusre ko samjha pane me asmarth the.

Antatah dono ke tadapte hoth ek dusre se ja mile aur jaise hi dono ke hotho ne ek dusre ko touch kiya vaise hi roshni ke ek vishal ghere ne dono ko apne kabze me le liya….roshni ke phailte hi adi aur rishi ki ruh ek ho gayi aur ek bar phir se janam ho gaya adirishi ka…adi aur rishi ki yaade ek ho gayi…ek hote hi rajnandini aur adirishi apni yaado ke safar me doobne lage…..

Vahi iss roshni ko dekh kar sabhi ki ankhe phati ki phati rah gayi…..ye unn sab ke liye kisi kalpana se pare chamatkar tha…roshni itni tez ho chuki thi ki sab ko apni ankhe band karni pad gayi…

Shree (ankhe band kar ke)—ye kaisa chamatkar…kaisi roshni hai….?

Sab (shocked)—iss roshni ka kya matlab hai….?

Chuttad—ye to hum bhi nahi jante ki iss roshni ka kya matlab hai…?

Agni—aaj rajnandini ke sampark me aane se do ruh aur unki samast yaade ek ho gayi hain…ye roshni uss baat ka hi praman hai.

Sab—hame dono ke vishay me batao..

Pangu—to suniye…

Flashback Start

Brahmand me kayi galaxies hain jinke bare me koi nahi janta….jane kitne hi rahasya chhipe huye hain jinke baare me pata laga pana namumkin jaisa hi hai….aise hi iss brahmand me ek galaxy hai ATLAS…uss galaxy me bhi kayi grah hain…unme se bahut se graho me bhi jeevan hai.

Yaha ki dharti ki tarah hi vaha bhi ek dharti (Earth 2) hai..halanki uss grah ka naam ALPHA hai.…jaha ke rahne walo ka jeevan bilkul iss earth se kafi had tak milta julta hai….lekin vaha ka science aur technology yaha ki tulna me adhik viksit hai.

Uss grah me ek bahut bada gaon hai Tabhka Koeeli…dusre .gaon ke bahar bane ek ashram me vidwan rishi Kakshivaan rahte the..vo patyek prakar ke shastra aur ved me nipun the.

Tabhka Koeeli gaon me unke hi saman aur rishi the jinka naam Priyamedh tha…vo bhi kakshivaan ki tarah hi ved vedangat me pravin the…aas paas ke sabhi gaon me priyamedh ka kafi naam tha.

Har sikke ke do pahlu hote hain….jaha ek taraf achchayi hoti hai, vaha sath me burayi bhi avashya ho ti hai… roshni aur andhere ka aapas me choli daaman ka sath hai.

Jaha ek oor kakshivaan aur priyamedh jaise dharma parayan vidwan the to vahi azgar aur kilwish jaise achchayi ke dushman aur shaitan bhi moujud the….jinka ek matra uddeshya duniya me darr aur khauf phaila kar paap aur andhere ka samrajya sthapit karna tha….dono ke paas shaitani shaktiyo ka prachur bhandar tha.

Iss uddeshya ki purti ke liye azgar ne apne eesta devta ki kathor tapasya prarambh kar di….varsh par varsh gujarte rahe aur uski tapasya gujarte samay ke sath aur bhi kathor hoti chali gayi.

Udhar Jab kakshivaan ne priyamedh ke vishay me suna to unke mann me unse milne ki abhilasha jagi to vah priyamedh se milne unke ashram chale gaye….kakshivaan ke ashram me pahuchte hi rishi priyamedh ne unka khoob aadar satkar kiya…dono kafi samay tak tak vibhinn vishayo par apne vicharo ka adan pradan karte rahe.

Iske pashchat jab kabhi bhi rishi kakshivaan, rishi priyamedh se milne unke ashram me aate to dono ke beech bahut lambi shastrarth chalti….kafi tark vitark hota rahta unn dono ke beech me…ab koi kisi se kam to tha nahi isliye unke tark vitark ka koi natiza nahi nikalta tha.

Ussi tarah uss din bhi rishi kakshivaan aur priyamedh me bahut tark vitark chal raha tha…dono ek dusre se shastra aur ved se jude prashna puchte aur ek dusre prashno ke uttar dete…haar manne ko koi taiyar hi nahi tha…akhir me rishi kakshivaan ne ek aisa paheli puch liya jisne priyamedh ko uljha diya.

Kakshivaan—aisi koun si cheez hai jisko jalane par bilkul bhi matlab jara si bhi roshni paida na ho….?

Priyamedh ne bahut soch vichar kiya parantu vo iss paheli ka uttar de pane me asmarth rahe...jis kisi bhi cheez ke baare me vichar karte, to unhe lagta ki vah thodi si sahi parantu roshni to uttapann karta hai ....paheli ka uttar khojne ke udhedbun me unki zindagi beet gayi....lekin vo iss paheli ka jawab nahi dhoond paye.

Jab priyamedh ka ant samay nazdeek aaya to unhone sandesh bhijwa kar kakshivaan rishi ko bulwaya….kakshivaan sandesh milte hi unke paas milne aa gaye.

Priyamedh—rishi kakshivaan ji main apki paheli ka uttar dhoond pane me samarth nahi ho paya, lekin mujhe poora vishwash hai ki bhavishya me mere vansh me aisa vidwan jarur janam lega jo apke iss prashna ka uttar de payega.

Priyamedh ki mrityu ke pashchat unke putra ne iss prashna ke uttar ka jimma liya parantu vah iss prashna ka uttar dhoond pane me asmarth raha aur ek din uski bhi mrityu ho gayi....iss ke baad kakshivaan ke uss prashna ke uttar ko dhoondne me priyamedh ki kayi pidhiya gujarti gayi.

Iss tarah se priyamedh ki aath pidhiya kakshivaan ke prashna ka uttar nahi pa saki...sabhi uttar khojte khojte swarg ko prapt ho gaye...lekin kakshivan apni paheli ka jawab pane ke liye jinda rahe.

Kakshivaan ke paas ek newle ke chamde se bani thaili thi, jisme kuch chawal bhare the...pratyek varsh me vo usme se ek ek dana chawal ka nikal kar phenk dete the....jab tak uss thaili ke saare chawal khatam na ho jaye, tab tak ka unhe jeevan prapt tha.

Kayi varsho ki kathor tapasya ke parinam swaroop azgar ki tapasya safal huyi….uske eesta devta ne uske samne prakat ho kar vardan mangane ko kaha.

Eesta dev—azgar ankhe kholo...hum tumhari tapasya se bahut khush hain....vardan maango vats.

Azgar—mujhe amar hone ka vardan chahiye...mujhe koi bhi na maar sake.

Eesta dev—main ye vardan nahi de sakta...tum amarta ko chhod kar koi dusra vardan maango.

Azgar—agar aap mujhe amar hone ka vardan nahi de sakte to theek hai....phir mujhe aise kayi kawach dijiye jinke karan main abhedya aur surakshit rahu..mere sharir me ek bhi kawach ke hote huye koi mujhe maar na sake...koi maha parakrami aur satyavadi jisne kabhi koi paap na kiya ho kewal vahi mere kawach ko tod sake, lekin ek bhi kawach todte hi uski mrityu ho jaye....meri mrityu sirf ussi maha parakrami ke hatho se ho jo mera kawach todne ke baad apni hi sagi putri se vivah karne ke baad usse santan paida kiya ho.

Eesta dev (kuch der sochne ke baad)—theek hai....aisa hi hoga.....main tumhe teen kawach pradan karta hu aur vardan deta hu ki jab tak tumhare sharir par ek bhi kawach shesh hai, tab tak koi tumhe nahi maar sakta..jo bhi tumhara kawach todega uski tatkal mrityu ho jayegi....tathastu

Ye vardan milte hi azgar to jaise khushi se pagal ho gaya...usne charo taraf atyachar aur paap ki satta ko badhane laga...kya stri aur kya purush, sab uske julm ke shikar hone lage.

Azgar—hahahaha......ab main amar ho gaya....kyon ki jo satyavadi aur dharma par chalne wala hoga vo apni hi beti se shadi kar ke sambhog nahi karega aur agar usne aisa kiya to paap ka bhagi ho jayega... lekin jab vo kawach todne ke baad jinda hi nahi rahega to apni beti se shadi kaise karega... ? hahahahahaha....eesta dev ko badhiya bewqoof banaya maine....ab mujhe koi nahi maar sakta....hahahahahaha

Vardan ke nashe me chur azgar har kisi par atyachar karne laga...jaha bhi koi pooja path karte dikh jata to unko utha kar ussi agni kund me phenk deta...striyo aur jawan ladkiyo ko uske sainik jabran ghar se sab ke samne nagn kar ke ghasit le jate aur raat din unka shosan karte rahte...unse paida hone wali santane bhi paap ke marg par chalne wali hoti..aise hi azgar ki kali sena badhti chali gayi....logo ne apne apne gharo se bahar nikalna tak band kar diya tha uske darr se.

Vahi dusri taraf priyamedh ki nauvi (9th) pidhi me ek balak ka janam hua...jiske sharir me adbhut tez tha..ussi gaon ke ek vidwan brahman ke hatho naam karan ke pashchat uss balak ka naam rakha gaya..Adiirishi

Uss vidwan brahman ke ghar uss din hi ek bahut hi sundar kanya ne janam liya...jiska naam rakha gaya..Rajnandini

Awesome update bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
vah bhai aadi aur rajnandani ke milan ka kya adbhut drishya aapne racha hai,
dono ke milan se aadi aur rishi ki ruhein bhi ek ho gayi hai,
chuttad and co. bhi vaha pahunch gayi hai aur vo unhe rajnandani aur adirishi ki kahani suna rahe hai,
Flashback mein rajnandani aur adirishi ka janm ho gaya hai,
Dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Iron Man]

Kafi shandar or lajwab update tha

Akhirkar aadirishi or rajnandni mil gye sdiyo bad aur ab sara khel bhi smjh me aa rha h shree or rajnandni ke ek jiase hone or dono ka aadi ka premika hona
To us vrdan ka tod tha jiske dum pr ajgar khood ko amar smjhta tha .
Aadirishi or rajnandni ke khani janne ka intzar rhega
Aur phli ke uttar ka bhi jo shayd aadirishi ne de diya ho
Waiting for next update

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Mr.X796]

UPDATE * 100​

Jabki udhar rajnandini abhi bhi meri tasveer liye roye ja rahi thi…kabhi usko chumti to kabhi seene se laga leti to kabhi kuch badbadane lagti.

"Tere Libas Se Mohabbat Ki Hai, Tere Ehsaas Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Tu Mere Paas Nahi Hai Phir Bhi, Maine Teri Yaad Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Kabhi Tune Bhi Mujhe Yaad Kiya Hoga, Maine Unn Lamho Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Jinme Ho Sirf Teri Aur Meri Baate, Maine Unn Alfaaz Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Jo Mahakte Ho Teri Mohabbat Se, Maine Unn Jazbaat Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Tumse Milna To Ab Ek Khwab Sa Lagta Hai, Isliye Maine Tere Intazar Se Mohabbat Ki Hai"

Aur achanak tabhi jor se darwaja khula aur phir………

Ab aage.....

"Pa hi lete tumko Agar, aati hame bhi adaye…Chahte hain tumhe kitna, ye bhi jatana nahi aata
Yaade to bas yaade hain, ye rukti nahi chahne se.....pyar me tumhare deewanapan, chhupana nahi aata
Ab koi kahe hame nadan, to hairat nahi hoti....pyar to bas pyar hai isse bhulana nahi aata.”

Rajnandini achanak chounk kar palat gayi….aur phir uski ankho ne jo dekha to uski dil ki dhadkan bahut tezi chalne lagi….lekin uss par usko yakin nahi hua ki uska rishi darwaje par ghtno ke bal apni dono baahe phailaye baitha hai.. to usne apni ankho ke bahte pani ko pocha aur jab phir se samne dekha to rishi vahi baahe phailaye baitha tha….

Ye ehsaas hote hi apni subh budh kho kar tezi se chillate huye uth kar bhagi uski taraf lekin tabhi uska pir kisi cheez se takraya aur vo chillate huye niche girne lagi.

Rajnandini (chillate huye)—rishiiiiiiiiiiiii

Lekin isse pahle ki vo niche gir pati….rishi turant phisalte huye uske niche aa gaya aur rajnandini sidhe uski baho me ja giri….rajnandini ne jaise hi ankhe khol kar dekha to khud hi rishi ki balistha bhujao me simte dekh kar bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi….dono ki ankho me anshu the…dono ke dil ki dhadkan tez chal rahi thi.

Rajnandini (rote huye)—mujhe chhod kar kaha chalte gaye the….? Mujhe akele apni yaado me tadapti chhod kar jaldi loutne ka vada kar ke bhi nahi aaye aur main tumhare intazar me pal pal tadapti rahi, na jee sakti thi aur na hi marr sakti thi…tumne aane ka vada jo kiya tha….kyo kiya tumne aisa….?

Rishi (rote huye)—main to khud paglo ki tarah bhatak raha tha, tumhare bina…..nujhe kabhi chain nahi mila… hamesha tumhare bagair main adhura hi raha….main tumhara apradhi hu nandini…mujhe maaf kar do

Idhar ye dono ro rahe the to vahi sabhi vaha pahuch kar ek dusre ko aise dekh kar hairan aur chakit the…sadme jaisi unki halat ho gayi thi….vo kabhi rajnandini ko to kabhi shree ko dekh dekh kar hairan the ki ye kaisa chamatkar hai…..?

Vahi shree bhi gahre sadme me thi….aaj usko apna pyar apne se bahut door jata hua dikhayi de raha tha…uska dil kaanch ke shishe ki tarah toot gaya tha ki adii usko nahi balki uske jaisi kisi aur ko bahut pyar karta hai…vahi sabse bada ashcharya to sab ko agni ki iss baat se ho raha tha ki rajnandini aur adii ka pyar sadiyo purana hai ..?

Unko kya koi bhi aisi baato par vishwash nahi karega ki aaj ke science ke aadhunik yug me aisa hona bhi sambhav hai…? Dono ko aise ek dusre se lipat kar vilap karte dekh sabhi ki ankhe chhalak rahi thi.

Vo sabhi dono ke paas jana chahte the magar agni ne sab ko dono ke paas jane se rok diya….vah iss samay sadiyo ke bichhde dono premiyo ke prem milap me kisi ko badhak nahi banne dena chahti thi.

Urmila (sisakte huye)—ye kaisa chamatkar hai….? Main aaj tak apne bete ko samajh hi nahi payi.

Anand—samajh to ham me se koi bhi nahi paya kabhi usko.

Franklin—lekin ye kaise sambhav hai….?

Daniel—haa…koi sadiyo tak kaise intazar kar sakta hai….?

Juliya—dharti ke alawa kisi aur grah me bhi jeevan hai, iss baat ka pata to aaj tak science bhi nahi laga payi… ye kaise possible hai…?

“Ye satya hai….jis tarah se suraj aur chaand ka hona satya hai…vaise hi ye bhi satya hai ki inn dono ka prem sadiyo purana hai.” Piche khade chuttad ne unke prashn ka jawab diya.

Ajit—tum log koun ho…? Aur ye kaise kah sakte ho ki ye satya hai, jaise ki tum khud iske gawah ho…?

Pangu—haa….hum iss baat ke pratyaksh gawah hain…vo dono hamare bhi dost hain, sadiyo se aur hum bhi ussi grah se apne dost ki talash me yaha aaye hain.

Pangu ki iss baat se sabhi chounk gaye….sabse jyada chounkne ki bari saroj aur deepa ki thi….vo dono shocked ho kar charo ko dekhne lagi.

Chuttad—aise mat dekho…ye satya hai.

Megha—hame poori baat batao.

Nangu—theek hai agar aap sab janna hi chahte hain to suno inn dono ki prem kahani…..

Idhar nangu ne rajnandini aur rishi ki prem kahani batane ja raha tha udhar dono janam janmantar ke yugal premi ek dusre ke dil ko samajhne aur samjhane me vyast the…lekin dono hi ek dusre ko samjha pane me asmarth the.

Antatah dono ke tadapte hoth ek dusre se ja mile aur jaise hi dono ke hotho ne ek dusre ko touch kiya vaise hi roshni ke ek vishal ghere ne dono ko apne kabze me le liya….roshni ke phailte hi adi aur rishi ki ruh ek ho gayi aur ek bar phir se janam ho gaya adirishi ka…adi aur rishi ki yaade ek ho gayi…ek hote hi rajnandini aur adirishi apni yaado ke safar me doobne lage…..

Vahi iss roshni ko dekh kar sabhi ki ankhe phati ki phati rah gayi…..ye unn sab ke liye kisi kalpana se pare chamatkar tha…roshni itni tez ho chuki thi ki sab ko apni ankhe band karni pad gayi…

Shree (ankhe band kar ke)—ye kaisa chamatkar…kaisi roshni hai….?

Sab (shocked)—iss roshni ka kya matlab hai….?

Chuttad—ye to hum bhi nahi jante ki iss roshni ka kya matlab hai…?

Agni—aaj rajnandini ke sampark me aane se do ruh aur unki samast yaade ek ho gayi hain…ye roshni uss baat ka hi praman hai.

Sab—hame dono ke vishay me batao..

Pangu—to suniye…

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Brahmand me kayi galaxies hain jinke bare me koi nahi janta….jane kitne hi rahasya chhipe huye hain jinke baare me pata laga pana namumkin jaisa hi hai….aise hi iss brahmand me ek galaxy hai ATLAS…uss galaxy me bhi kayi grah hain…unme se bahut se graho me bhi jeevan hai.

Yaha ki dharti ki tarah hi vaha bhi ek dharti (Earth 2) hai..halanki uss grah ka naam ALPHA hai.…jaha ke rahne walo ka jeevan bilkul iss earth se kafi had tak milta julta hai….lekin vaha ka science aur technology yaha ki tulna me adhik viksit hai.

Uss grah me ek bahut bada gaon hai Tabhka Koeeli…dusre .gaon ke bahar bane ek ashram me vidwan rishi Kakshivaan rahte the..vo patyek prakar ke shastra aur ved me nipun the.

Tabhka Koeeli gaon me unke hi saman aur rishi the jinka naam Priyamedh tha…vo bhi kakshivaan ki tarah hi ved vedangat me pravin the…aas paas ke sabhi gaon me priyamedh ka kafi naam tha.

Har sikke ke do pahlu hote hain….jaha ek taraf achchayi hoti hai, vaha sath me burayi bhi avashya ho ti hai… roshni aur andhere ka aapas me choli daaman ka sath hai.

Jaha ek oor kakshivaan aur priyamedh jaise dharma parayan vidwan the to vahi azgar aur kilwish jaise achchayi ke dushman aur shaitan bhi moujud the….jinka ek matra uddeshya duniya me darr aur khauf phaila kar paap aur andhere ka samrajya sthapit karna tha….dono ke paas shaitani shaktiyo ka prachur bhandar tha.

Iss uddeshya ki purti ke liye azgar ne apne eesta devta ki kathor tapasya prarambh kar di….varsh par varsh gujarte rahe aur uski tapasya gujarte samay ke sath aur bhi kathor hoti chali gayi.

Udhar Jab kakshivaan ne priyamedh ke vishay me suna to unke mann me unse milne ki abhilasha jagi to vah priyamedh se milne unke ashram chale gaye….kakshivaan ke ashram me pahuchte hi rishi priyamedh ne unka khoob aadar satkar kiya…dono kafi samay tak tak vibhinn vishayo par apne vicharo ka adan pradan karte rahe.

Iske pashchat jab kabhi bhi rishi kakshivaan, rishi priyamedh se milne unke ashram me aate to dono ke beech bahut lambi shastrarth chalti….kafi tark vitark hota rahta unn dono ke beech me…ab koi kisi se kam to tha nahi isliye unke tark vitark ka koi natiza nahi nikalta tha.

Ussi tarah uss din bhi rishi kakshivaan aur priyamedh me bahut tark vitark chal raha tha…dono ek dusre se shastra aur ved se jude prashna puchte aur ek dusre prashno ke uttar dete…haar manne ko koi taiyar hi nahi tha…akhir me rishi kakshivaan ne ek aisa paheli puch liya jisne priyamedh ko uljha diya.

Kakshivaan—aisi koun si cheez hai jisko jalane par bilkul bhi matlab jara si bhi roshni paida na ho….?

Priyamedh ne bahut soch vichar kiya parantu vo iss paheli ka uttar de pane me asmarth rahe...jis kisi bhi cheez ke baare me vichar karte, to unhe lagta ki vah thodi si sahi parantu roshni to uttapann karta hai ....paheli ka uttar khojne ke udhedbun me unki zindagi beet gayi....lekin vo iss paheli ka jawab nahi dhoond paye.

Jab priyamedh ka ant samay nazdeek aaya to unhone sandesh bhijwa kar kakshivaan rishi ko bulwaya….kakshivaan sandesh milte hi unke paas milne aa gaye.

Priyamedh—rishi kakshivaan ji main apki paheli ka uttar dhoond pane me samarth nahi ho paya, lekin mujhe poora vishwash hai ki bhavishya me mere vansh me aisa vidwan jarur janam lega jo apke iss prashna ka uttar de payega.

Priyamedh ki mrityu ke pashchat unke putra ne iss prashna ke uttar ka jimma liya parantu vah iss prashna ka uttar dhoond pane me asmarth raha aur ek din uski bhi mrityu ho gayi....iss ke baad kakshivaan ke uss prashna ke uttar ko dhoondne me priyamedh ki kayi pidhiya gujarti gayi.

Iss tarah se priyamedh ki aath pidhiya kakshivaan ke prashna ka uttar nahi pa saki...sabhi uttar khojte khojte swarg ko prapt ho gaye...lekin kakshivan apni paheli ka jawab pane ke liye jinda rahe.

Kakshivaan ke paas ek newle ke chamde se bani thaili thi, jisme kuch chawal bhare the...pratyek varsh me vo usme se ek ek dana chawal ka nikal kar phenk dete the....jab tak uss thaili ke saare chawal khatam na ho jaye, tab tak ka unhe jeevan prapt tha.

Kayi varsho ki kathor tapasya ke parinam swaroop azgar ki tapasya safal huyi….uske eesta devta ne uske samne prakat ho kar vardan mangane ko kaha.

Eesta dev—azgar ankhe kholo...hum tumhari tapasya se bahut khush hain....vardan maango vats.

Azgar—mujhe amar hone ka vardan chahiye...mujhe koi bhi na maar sake.

Eesta dev—main ye vardan nahi de sakta...tum amarta ko chhod kar koi dusra vardan maango.

Azgar—agar aap mujhe amar hone ka vardan nahi de sakte to theek hai....phir mujhe aise kayi kawach dijiye jinke karan main abhedya aur surakshit rahu..mere sharir me ek bhi kawach ke hote huye koi mujhe maar na sake...koi maha parakrami aur satyavadi jisne kabhi koi paap na kiya ho kewal vahi mere kawach ko tod sake, lekin ek bhi kawach todte hi uski mrityu ho jaye....meri mrityu sirf ussi maha parakrami ke hatho se ho jo mera kawach todne ke baad apni hi sagi putri se vivah karne ke baad usse santan paida kiya ho.

Eesta dev (kuch der sochne ke baad)—theek hai....aisa hi hoga.....main tumhe teen kawach pradan karta hu aur vardan deta hu ki jab tak tumhare sharir par ek bhi kawach shesh hai, tab tak koi tumhe nahi maar sakta..jo bhi tumhara kawach todega uski tatkal mrityu ho jayegi....tathastu

Ye vardan milte hi azgar to jaise khushi se pagal ho gaya...usne charo taraf atyachar aur paap ki satta ko badhane laga...kya stri aur kya purush, sab uske julm ke shikar hone lage.

Azgar—hahahaha......ab main amar ho gaya....kyon ki jo satyavadi aur dharma par chalne wala hoga vo apni hi beti se shadi kar ke sambhog nahi karega aur agar usne aisa kiya to paap ka bhagi ho jayega... lekin jab vo kawach todne ke baad jinda hi nahi rahega to apni beti se shadi kaise karega... ? hahahahahaha....eesta dev ko badhiya bewqoof banaya maine....ab mujhe koi nahi maar sakta....hahahahahaha

Vardan ke nashe me chur azgar har kisi par atyachar karne laga...jaha bhi koi pooja path karte dikh jata to unko utha kar ussi agni kund me phenk deta...striyo aur jawan ladkiyo ko uske sainik jabran ghar se sab ke samne nagn kar ke ghasit le jate aur raat din unka shosan karte rahte...unse paida hone wali santane bhi paap ke marg par chalne wali hoti..aise hi azgar ki kali sena badhti chali gayi....logo ne apne apne gharo se bahar nikalna tak band kar diya tha uske darr se.

Vahi dusri taraf priyamedh ki nauvi (9th) pidhi me ek balak ka janam hua...jiske sharir me adbhut tez tha..ussi gaon ke ek vidwan brahman ke hatho naam karan ke pashchat uss balak ka naam rakha gaya..Adiirishi

Uss vidwan brahman ke ghar uss din hi ek bahut hi sundar kanya ne janam liya...jiska naam rakha gaya..Rajnandini

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