Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[sonukale]

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[Zas23]

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[Rahul]

Huum mujhe lagta ki story hero apni ma ko puri baat samjha nahi paya theek se kyunki jab uski ma ne puncha ki jo dono ladkiyan bol rahi kya wo sach hai to usne bol diya sach hai fir bacha hi kya bolne ki khud hi sare jurm kubul kar liye uske baad jo bhi hua sahi hua uske sath..usko sabke samne apni baat rakhni thi kya hua kaise hua uska koi irada rape ka nahi tha na usne kisi ka rape kiya ab chahe to aap bura maan lo meri baat log gussa ho jate ye update meri samjh me nahi aaya aur dusri baat story ko aur lambi khinchne ke liye ganpat ko ghusa diya fir uske malik ki teen betiyan ye sab milkar 100 update chaat sakti aaraam se filhaal mai to padhunga ab jaise bhi likho

 

[luv4sale696969]

Still waiting...

 

[Jerry]

Waitingggg

 

[Ng_TheViper]

This story is going far beyond what I was expecting..

Hero ka Jo haal dikh Raha h usse wo kisi bewkuf insan s Kam b ni lag Raha I mean koi itna sensless kaise ho sakta h . Ye baat isliye ni kaha ki wo hero h but generally koi b itna bewkuf ni hota is position p jab kisi k andar powers ho.
Powers to chalo phir b baad m mili but yahi aadii h Jo England m rehtah aur intelligence level b acha h phir b ganpat bankr wo bilkul kisi aam ganpat hi tarah react Kar Raha h na ki adii ki tarah.

Ab is baat ka jawab b mujhe pata h Kya hoga to aage likhne ka mtlb ni..


But above all this I really liking this..
Jab story ko as a whole dekhte h to hero fool hi lagta h but agar current moment ka dekhe to maza b aaraha h . It's like reading totally different story or different version .. so hum filahal k bhul jate h ki Adii kitna genius Raha hoga aur uski abhi ki pagalpanti enjoy karte h..

I guess it's all we can do right now..

 

[Story Collector]

 

[sonukale]

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[Fighter]

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[mentalbhai]