Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Ng_TheViper]

Nice update..
Ye azgar new villain aagya kahi s aur ye log kon h , ye jagah konsi h ?

Ye rajnandni n new entry h , ye b main heroine h to phir Baki sabka Kya hoga. Well agar hero k point of view s dekhe to ab usne savko piche chod dia h .

But filahal to hero means adi hi lapata h. Agar update k end m pani m milne Wala shaks hi adi h to wahan k rishi usko kisse compare Kar rahe the ??

Aisa lag Raha h ki jo shaks rajnandni ka premi tha , jisne shayad apne pyar ko bachane k liye apni jaan dedi thi wahi shaks is ashram m b aur adi ki body ko dekh Kar ashram k rishi log shocked h bcoz dono ek jaise dikhte h..


Well , it's good turn of events.
Abtk story m kafi hasi mazak hua h . Seems like ab kuch serious issue hone wale h.


Hoping for new update very soon ...

 

[Ankit Agarwal]

GET WELL SOON BHAI,AAPKA INTEZAAR RAHEGA
Phele toh itna late reply ke liye maafi bhai,exams chal rage the aur mein maafi busy rehtha hu
Mein aapke updates toh roj Partha hu Lekin phele ki tarah detail review nahi de paunga mein
SAARE UPDATES JABARDAST HAE BHAI KEHENE KE LIYE SHABDH NAHI HAE,bas itna kahunga ki updates mein todha adi kya chahta hae aur uske emotions ki thodi kadar ho aur Margret aur Sona ka role mujhe Sabse beekar lagta hae aur adi ki mummy Ko bhi pata hae ki adi sahi hae fir bhi vo uska saath nahi deti ye mujhe bohat beekar Laga
Pls aage aane wale updates mein thoda change karne Dena bhai
See you and again get well soon

 

[Story Collector]

 

[King Aryan]

Waiting For Next Update

 

[Alex123]

Fantastic update bro can't wait far another one

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Bade hi Kamal se dikhaya h aapne sari baton ko.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Nye character ki entry.
Main heroine Rajnandini ki dhansu entry laajwab.
Villain bhi khatarnaak
Or ant me fir se wahi suspense
Kon h wahan pahle se aashram me .

Bhai hame purn wishwas h aap dubara lautoge.
Or vo bhi ekdam fit-fat ho kar.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar

 

[kumarrajnish]

Nice work bro

 

[Prince Charles]

great work dear...

 

[Govindsonic]

Sandarrrr update bhai

 

[sonukale]

Waiting for next update