Incest Chawla Family Ki Kahani - Adultery, Romance,Eroticism, Incest. EXCLUSIVELY FOR XFORUM (COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

Once again superb, bhavanaon ko pardarshit karne ki kala me aapka koi sani nahi
Please keep it up

bahot bahot shukriya passand karne ke liye amita dear

 

[Casinar]

Welcome and it's really pleasure for me to read the story of such a talented writer.

happy to have you as reader my dear

 

[Casinar]

Superb update

thanks very much James bro

 

[Casinar]

again wonderful update casi bro.
in fact you did very well by pointing the mental disturbance of Sanjana as i was thinking that this should have been shown and you did did, as i said you do not miss anything in your tales, you are so perfect.
fantastic writing my dear.
lovely update with feelings shown in all the ways... very good going
i have something in my mind hope you will show it in coming updates.
however this one is very well written and so well managed. too good. appreciated very much.

thanks again for the appreciative comment dear rowdy bro

 

[Casinar]

ordinary story

really? anyhow thank you.

 

[Casinar]

Ye ordinary story hai ??!

yeh usski nazarya hai bhai jaane do

 

[Casinar]

Bahut hi pyari update hai bhai. Kia likha hai aap ne.
Bahut acha laga ek baar firse chawla aur sanjana ke pyar ki gehraayi ko padhkar. Mujhe dar tha ke kahin ye jaan kar ke chawla usska baap hai to Sanjana ke dil mein wo vala pyar badal jaaye. Magar nahin wo barabar raha. Bahut khub darshaya hai aap ne sab kuch bhai.
To ab sanjana apni maa k bare mein puch rahi hai chawla saab se.
Dekhte hein age kia hota hai.

bahot shukriya Nayan bhai

 

[Casinar]

Maja agaya cadi bhai. Kia likha hai yaar. Sab kuch enkhon k saamne beet rahe hein eisa feel hota hai. Iss kahani k saath hum bhi doob jaate hein tamaam updates k dauraan unn updates mein. Aap ki lekh hi eisi hai ke aap hamare dil k andar utar jaate ho har ek update k saath.
Wonderful update.
To ab Sanjana ki keise guzregi Aarav k saath bhala? Badi mushkil daur hai yeh to...
Dekhte hein aap kiss tarah issko suljhate ho.

shukriya mere dost

 

[Casinar]

Oh flashback nahin hua? Chalo behtar ha8, main ne socha tha k ab flashback mein unn dinon ko dikgaya jaega jab savitri aur Chaula k beech sambandh hue the magar ek maahir writer ko pata hota hai k kiss tarah se live hote hue thodi si baat mein sab samjha diya jaaye.
Bahut badhya likha hai casi dear.
Mujhe issi ka darr tha k ab Sanjana nahin nibha paegi apni rishte ko. Casi bhai please ussko Aarav se juda mat karo nah. Please keise bhi karke Sanjana ko wapas aur normal ki tarah Arav k sath love se rehne do please.
Baaki update bahut mast hai. Bahut passand aya mujhe. Ye Anand ki karega sb. Ussne to sanjana ko wo mesg send karke darra hi diya.
Agle update ka intejar rahega casi dear.

thanks very much savi dear.
main soch hi raha tha ke kyun ap nazar nahin arahi ho aaj kal
bahot shukriya wapas join karne ke liye

 

[Casinar]

Bahut hi acha update hai miyan. Bahut hi khub likha hai.
Anand to hadse bhi jiada age badh raha. Jo mesg ussne likha sanjana aur usski maa ko gali dete hue khoon khaulne wali baat hai aur phir bhi chaula saab bade araam se deal kar raha sanjana ko sambhalte hue.
Aap ne sanjana ki mental stithi ko baakhubi bayaan kiya hai last part mein. Magar ab keise sab sahi hoga usske aur Aarav k beech ye sawaal paida hota hai. Psychological problem nazar ane lage ab to
Vah bhai kahan se kahan laa diya aap ne iss kahani ko vah. Yeh sirf aap jeise tajurbekar writerbhi kar sakta hai. Shabaash casi bhai. Kamaal ki writer ho aap. Maja agaya.
Itni behtareen kahani aur itne ache mast updates ke liye bahut shukriya bhai.

thanks very very much Husein bhai, eise hi padhte aur comment karte chalna bhai