vah casi bhai vah!
Aaj samaj mein aya ke kyun aap ko LEGEND, great writer ki title mile hein forums par....
jiss tarah se aap ne iss kahani ko end kiya, jis tarah se aap ne thode words mein itna kuch keh diya iss update mein bahut bahut bahut hi kamaal ke hein.
laajawaab hein, out of the world hein.... chamatkaar jeisa end hai iss kahani ka... bahut jabardast hai.
jiss tarah se aap ne sanjana ki chabi ko /deepti mein dikhaya adbudh hai.
bilkol nahin socha tha iss tarah se aap sanjana ko marne ke baad wapas laoge issi kahani mein wow what an idea bhai.
aur kaun kehta hai ke vivaan ko sanjana nahin mili...jabardast miley sanjana aur vivaan bhi bhai behen ke roop mein nahin baap beti ke roop mein to mil gaye donon.....
kia idea aap ka ke Deepti sawaal karti hai ke wo to chawla hai magar sanjana ki chabi keise uss mein ho sakti hai...aur aap ne chand words mein yeh bhi keh diya ke deepti apne dada aur chacha ke saath bhi ussi incestuous relationship mein hai.....
just fantastic ending bhai...magar... magar kia isska second part nahin ho sakta kia? lag to eia hi raha hai ke isska dusra part bhi jarur hoga......
to kuch sochna iss baare mein bhai
bahut majaedaar aur lajawaab kahani likhi aap ne casi bhai jisske liye hum aap ko tehe dil se dhanyavaad karte hein eise hi hamare liye likhte rehna aap...
aap ki talent kamaal ki hai aap kinarration lajawaab hein aap ek behtareen writer ho...hats off and
THANK YOU VERY VERYR MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFUL EROTIC STORY CASI BHAI.