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Shukriya ki kahani aapko itni pasand aayiSuperb super awesome story, end ka twist awesome tha
I really Really enjoyed this story
It's my all time favourite
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Shukriya aapka waise ye naam mere ek mitr ne Diya tha.. toh asli shukriya unhe hiFirst thing first, sis aap ye ankhone naam kaha se chun chun k laati ho like this
Bur na Maaro.. Holi hai...
Superb introduction n now I m waiting for NXT superb update
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Shandar updateChutmarani Gaon - किस्से कहानियां
( Story #02)
Bur na Maaro.. Holi hai...
Update #02 - Aarambh...
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Introduction ho hi chuka hai.. esliye ab sidha chalte hai es khubsurat kamuk kahani pe..
Aaj subha se hi 'Chutmarani' Gaon main.. tez barish ho rahi hai.. waise ye barish bin Mausam hai.. qki na hi es samay barish ka mahina hai.. na hi aaj barish k aane ka koi dastur...
Qki aaj 'Holi' hai..
Par es barish ne sab kuch bigad diya.. 'Meena Madam'ne pichli raat ko hi soch liya tha ki.. aaj subha subha hi wo sehar chali jayengi.. apni beti aur pati k pass.. par Afsos barish ne unke sapno pe paani fair diya..
Es samay Meena Madam apne kamre ki Khidki pe baithi hu bahar tez barish ko dekh rahi thi.. ye unke jeevan ki pehli aisi Holi thi.. jismain koi rang nahi tha..
Meena ek lambi saans lete hue khud se kehti hai..
"Kitna kuch socha tha.. par es barish ne sab kharab kar diya.. 'Mayuri' bhi mera intizar kar rahi hogi.. bechari ne kitni bar kaha tha..
'Bhabhi kuch bhi ho jaye.. Holi main aapko Ghar aana hi hoga..' "
Meena ko apni Nanad ki kahi hui baat yaad aa jati hai...
Mayuri ki yaad aate hi.. Meena k chehre pe hasi aa jati hai.. aur khud se hi kehti hai...
"Chalo acha hi hai.. ab main waha nahi hu.. toh wo ache se apna kaam kar sakegi..."
Meena wapas kamre main chaihal kadmi karne lagti hai.. wo kabhi diwar pe tangi ghadi ho dekhti.. toh kabhi bahar jhamjham karti hui.. tez baarish ko..
Meena Mayushi se khud ko kosti hai..
"Mujhe mandir se sidha.. wapas aa jana chaiye tha.. par un.... dono ki harkaton ne... Uffff... Par use kiya jarurat thi.. wo sab karne ki.. maa saman aurat.. k sath.. wo sab.. chii..."
Meena khud pe hi ghussa kar rahi thi... Wo phir se aage badbadaati hai..
"Waise saari galti uski thodi thi.. wo aurat bhi toh kitni neech thi.. kaise us masum ko fasa liya tha usne.. par use toh mana Karna chahiye tha na... "
Meena jab chal chal k thak jaati hai.. toh wahi padi kursi pe baith jaati hai... Aur phir khud se baat karna suru kar deti hai...
"Waise wo bhi konsa sidha hai... Kaise us din.. school k bahar un jhadiyon k pass.... Chiiii......"
Meena phir se khadi hoti hai... Aur bahar darwaje pe aake bahar tez barish ko dekhte hue...
kuch dino pehle school se aate hue jo hua.. usmain kho si jaati hai....
Chaliye ab hum bhi dekhte hai... kin khayalon main khoyi hai.. hamari Khubsurat 'Meena Madam'
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Meena subha se bachon ko pada rahi thi.. waise pad toh sirf ladkiya rahi thi.. ladke toh bus Meena k jism ka naap le rahe thay..
Ha hai hi... eske layak...
Meena puri tarah bachon ko padane main vyast thi ki tabhi.. school k chaprasi 'Mishra ji' ne chutti ka Ganta Baja diya...
Saare bache toh bus esi k intizar main hi baithe thay...
Chutti ka Ganta bajte hi sabhi bache shor machate hue.. class se kareeb kareeb bhaag hi nikle thay..
Meena- ye bache bhi na..
Meena bhi apna register utha k staff room main aa jaati hai.. aur apne baki k kaamo main lagi rehti hai...
Jaldi hi uske jane ka samay bhi ho jaata hai... Meena apne sathi.. adhyapak 'Nawab Sir' ko alvida keh k school k bahar nikal aati hai...
Meena abhi school se kuch hi dur aayi thi ki use uske 2 Student nazar aate hai..
Meena- are ye toh Mohan ki behan.. 'Maya' hai.. or ye toh uske sath.. 'Akhtar' hai na...
Waise toh Meena ne koi pehli bar dono ko ek sath nahi dekha tha.. balki use toh hamesha se lagta tha.. ki in dono ki kuch jada hi banti hai..
Par aaj ek khas baat thi.. aaj Akhtar k hath Maya ki kamar pe thay... Aur koi aam baat nahi thi..
Qki ye ek chota sa Gaon 'Chutmarani' hai.. koi Sehar nahi...
Meena ek 30 saal ki padi likhi aurat hai.. pichle 5 saalon se wo pada rahi hai.. esliye use ache se pata tha.. dono k bich kiya hai..
Esliye Meena ko ye kuch khas lag raha tha...
Meena man hi man
'Jise dekho.. use yahi milta hai kiya.. sabko bus Akhtar hi chahiye... Main ye kiya soch Rahi hu.. Ufff.. bhala ek student k liye...
Meena ko samajh nahi aata ki use q bura laga tha.. unhe waha dekh k...
Meena charo taraf dekhti hai.. use koi nahi dikhta.. wo dhire se un dono ki taraf bad jaati hai.. par aise ki wo dono use dekh na paaye.. wo Janna chahti thi... Ki asal main 'Maya' 'Akhtar' k sath kiya kar rahi hai.. yaha...
Jaldi hi Meena unke kaafi pass pahuch gayi thi.. wo badi badi jhadiyon k piche aise chupi hui thi.. ki un dono ko koi bhi andaza nahi tha.. uske waha hone ka...
Akhtar- Maya.. ye sab kiya.. tum kuch khul k q nahi batati.. mere sawal ka koi jawab nahi deti ho.. par main kisi aur se baatein Karu.. tumhe ye bhi pasand nahi...
Maya- (Thode ghuss se) ha toh.. maine ye kab kaha ki.. us Deepa bhabhi k pallu se band jao.. jab dekho.. uske ass pass mandraate rehte ho...
Akhtar- (Muskurate hue) q tumhe q bura lagta hai.. tum toh meri kuch nahi ho na...
Meena ko unki baaten samjha k hasi aa rahi thi.. use apne college k dino ki yaad aane lagi..
Maya- Maine kab kaha ki main...
Akhtar- kiya.. ? khul k kaho.. main ye khel aur nahi khel sakta hu.. kabhi pass aane deti ho.. kabhi dur kar deti ho... tum chahti kiya ho.. kahi tumhe wo Sajid toh..
Maya- pagal ho kiya.. Sajid mere Bhai ka dost hai.. aur kuch nahi.. waise bhi wo mujhse umar main chota..
Akhtar- aur agar wo Tumhari Umar ka hota tab...
Maya- (Jor se chilate hue) tab bhi kuch nahi hota.. samjhe.. kabhi kuch na hota... Qki main tumhe...
Akhtar- Mujhe kiya... Bolo.. Maya.. bolo...
Maya- Samjha karo... Akhtar.. tumhe ache se pata hai.. hamare pariwar k bich.. jo dusmani hai.. uske hote hue...
Maya aage kuch nahi kehti.. bus chup ho jaati hai...
Meena ko ab kaafi kuch samajh aa raha tha..
Akhtar- Dekho Maya.. aakhir kab tak.. tum pariwar k naam ka sahara leti rahogi.. tumhe ache se pata hai.. main tumhein pasand karta hu.. tumhen bahut khus rakhunga.. har tarah se...
Maya- samjho Akhtar.. agar hamare Ghar waalo ko pata chala toh...
Akhtar Maya ki baat bich main hi kaat deta hai.. aur uske hontho pe apna hath rakh deta hai...
Meena ye dekh k muskurane lagti hai...
Akhtar- dekho... Maya.. hume nahi pata... Bhavishya main kiya hoga.. Kismat hume kaha le jayegi... Par tum ache se janti ho.. ki main tumse piyar karta hu.. aur main bhi janta hu... Ki tum bhi mujhse piyar karti ho.. warna us din jo hua.. wo sab tum kabhi hone na deti..
Maya- Samjha karo Akhtar.. agar kahi... Kisi ko pata chala toh...
Akhtar- main bataunga nahi.. tum bataogi nahi... Phir bhala kisi ko kaise pata chalega...
Meena sochti hai ki
'bhale hi Akhtar ko wo sab asan lag raha hai.. par ye hai nahi..'
Edhar Akhtar ki baat sunkar Maya es baar shant ho jaati hai.. uske pass sayad ab aur koi dalil nahi bachi thi...
Maya ko shant dekh k Akhtar ne uska hath pakda aur use apni tarah khich liya.. Maya ab Akhtar ki baahon main thi..
Meena ko ek bar phir se jalan mehsus hoti hai.. jabki wo ache se janti thi.. Akhtar uska student hai.. aur usse bahut chota hai...
Maya bhi Akhtar ko kaske gale laga leti hai..
Akhtar Maya ki peeth ko sehlane lagta hai..
Maya gale Lage Lage kehti hai..
"Hmm.. thik hai.. Akhtar.. main Tumhari hu.. bus yaad rakhna agar hamare pariwar ko pata chala.. toh na jane konsa tufan aa jayega..."
Maya ki baat sunkar.. Akhtar use aur kaske gale se laga leta hai.. jo Meena ko pasand nahi aata...
Akhtar dhire se apna hath niche le Jake Maya ki gol kasi hui gand ko dabouch leta hai...
Maya- aaahhh....... Badmash...
Maya Muskurate hue Akhtar k seene pe mukka marti hai...
Akhtar Maya ko khud se thoda alag karta hai aur ek hath se uski gol sudol doodh ko apne hath se daba deta hai...
Maya- aaahhh... Maaa.... Kiya kar rahe ho.. tum mardo ko bus yahi chahiye hota hai.. piyar viyar kuch nahi...
Akhtar haste hue dusra hath bhi Maya ki dusre sudol doodh pe rakh k.. dono ko thoda kaske daba deta hai...
Maya- haiii... Maaaa... Ufff... Dard ho Raha hai......aaahhhh.... toh ye piyar hai tumhara...
Maya dard se tilmilate hue.. kehti hai...
Akhtar- q piyar ye nahi hota toh kiya hota.. tum bata do... Waise bhi.. esmain meri koi galti nahi.. tum ho hi aisi.. ki man karta hai... Tumhare saare kapde utar k tumhare pure jism se piyar Karu...
Maya sharam se laal ho jaati hai.. aur piyar se Akhtar k seene pe mukka marti hai..
"Badmash..."
Akhtar ne ek hath se Maya ki kameez uthane ki jaise hi koshish ki.. Maya ne uska hath pakad liya..
Maya- Nahi.. nahi.. main tumhein ache se janti hu.. kitne saitaan ho tum.. us din bhi kitna mana kiya.. kitna roka tha.. par tumne jara bhi meri baat nahi maani... Hume ab chalna chahiye.. Holi main bus kuch din hi bache hai.. aaj Maa k sath bazar Jana hai...
Akhtar- bus jara si dair.. aur.. meri jaan...
Akhtar ne ye kehte hue.. Maya ki dono gol.. unnat.. nayi nayi.. khili chuchiyo ko phir se daba diya....
Maya- (Apne honthon ko kaatti hui...) aaaahhh.... Ufffffff..... main tumhara jara sa... ache se janti hu... Tum ungli nahi pakadte ho.. tum toh sidha...
Maya apni hi baat pe sharam se laal ho jaati hai...
Waise kaafi kuch Meena Madam bhi samajh gayi thi.. Maya k kehne ka matlab...
Akhtar- (Dono hathon se Maya ki gol gol unnat chuchiyon ka bharpur mardan karte hue..) maine bhala kaha kuch kiya...
Akhtar Muskurate hue kehta hai...
Maya- (Akhtar ki harkaton se puri tarah garam hone lagi thi.. wo khud ko sambhalte hue) ufff.. maaa... Akhtar.. aaah.. mat dabao.. na... Ahhh... Tum bahut gande ho.. uffff.... Essshhh....... Ufff.. bhool gaye.. us din.. school k piche.. maine kitna roka tha.. par tumne daba daba k laal kar diye thay...
Meena toh Hairan hi reh jaati hai.. ki ye dono toh kaafi aage ja chuke hai..
Meena Madam k pure jism main gudgudi si hone lagti hai...
Ki tabhi Maya ki ek Aaahh sunai padi use.. Meena ne dekha toh hairan reh gayi.. qki ab Akhtar ne kapdon k uper se hi Maya ki ek chuchi ko muthi main dabouch liya tha.. aur dusri chuchi pe apne honthon ko rakh diya tha...
Maya ki halat buri ho chuki thi.. wo kamukta ki aag main tapti hui...
"Aaahhh..... Akhtar na.. karo.. ufff... Maaa..... Akhtar... Choro.. naaaa.... Ahhhh... Maaaa...... Ufff.... Haiiii..... Akhtar kaat q rahe ho... Aahhh.. maaa.... Marrr..... Gayiii... Haiii....... Uff..... Maaaa......."
Meena ye dekhti hai toh uske pure jism main maano aag si lag jaati hai.. ye aag thodi jalan ki thi, toh... thodi kamukta ki...
Meena man hi man...
'Ufff... Ye Akhtar kitna kamina hai... Ufff.. kaise kapdon k uper se hi chus raha hai.. uff.... Par khas es Maya ki jagah.. Main.....'
Meena Madam na jane abhi aur kitni dair us yaad main bita deti.. na jane abhi aur kitni dair yuhi khayalon main khoyi rehti ki tabhi ek aawaz ne use wapas "AAJ" main lauta diya...
Meena ki Nazar samne padi, pehle toh wo Hairan hui.. par phir use hasi aa gayi..
qki uske samne uska wahi student "Akhtar" barish main puri tarah bheega hua.. rang main ranga hua.. hath main rang ki ek potli liye hue khada tha...
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Ab aage.. Meena Madam kiya karne waali hai.. kiya hoga es Holi main..
In saare sawalon k jawab hum agle update main janenge
Milti hu jaldi hi.. kahani k agle hisse k sath
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Happy Holi![]()
Fir v intjar rhegaKuch baaten sabko nahi batayie jaati![]()
Shukriya aur aapko bhi Holi bahut bahut Mubarak hoGood beginning Garam Lekhika madam!!
Btw, Happy Holi