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First of all 
for new story .
All 3 updates are very well written and narrated , specially 3rd update , dad and son Ke Milne Ka tarika mujhe bohat Pasand aaya . Let's see mom ,sis ,biwi ne kya plan kiya hai .
for new story .All 3 updates are very well written and narrated , specially 3rd update , dad and son Ke Milne Ka tarika mujhe bohat Pasand aaya . Let's see mom ,sis ,biwi ne kya plan kiya hai .
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Chapter : 1
Page : 4
Brunei : 01:45 IST HOURS
""GO...go...go.....arjun tum mujhe cover karoge....""
Apne commander ka order sun main tezi se andhere ki aad main ek taraf sarakne laga....mere sath jogi backup ki tarah peeche laga hua tha....arjun or commander rohitashv saamne mojud 6 manjeela building ki taraf kisi cheete ki furti se pahunch chuke the...
Main tezi se aage badhta hua Target wali building ke saamn wali building main dakhil ho chuka tha....apni position main aane ke baad maine commander ko transmit kiya or kaha....
"" First floore par teen target mojud hai...jabki third floor pe 6 log wepons ke sath""
Ye sab kuch main apni sniper rifel mai lage tharmal scope ki madad se dekh pa raha tha....tabhi mere kanon main lage ear pice pe commander ki aavaj sunayi di....
"" Rex...signal milne par third floor clear karo""
Commander ki baat sunte hi maine apni sniper ka muh third floor ki taraf ghuma diya....jabki jogi binocular ki madad se commander ke signal ka wait kar raha tha....tabhi jogi ne mere kandhe par haath rakh kar dheere se dabaya or maine trigger daba diya....
Ek halki sattt... Ki aavaj se meri sniper ki nali se kuch nikla jise bullet to kam se kam nahi kah sakte....ye kuch kuch neno bullets jaisa hi kuch tha kisi sui se ek hajar guna mahin jo konkrit ki diwar ko makkhan ki tarah bhedti hui apne 6 targets ke bheje se bahar nikal gayi....wo saare kisi ped ki tarah lahrakar jamin par gir pade...
Commander bhi arjun ke saath milkar apna kaam nipta chuke the or bas ab target computer se kuch jankari nikal ke humara mission pura.....
New delhi : 01:46 HOURS
Papa apni news dekhne main mashgul ho chuke the or main unke room ki khidki se bahar nikal kar phir se main gate ki taraf badh gaya....darwaje pe halka sa dhakka dete hi wo khul jaata hai or main sadhe hue kadmo se hall ki taraf badh jaata hu.....ghar ke andar sari lights on thi iska matlab chhup kar attack nahi hone wala....main kisi ninja ki tarah apna dum saadh hall ke beecho beech pahunch gaya....lekin mujhe aisa kuch bhi nahi dikha jo mujhe khatre ka andesha de....maine aavaj lagayi....
"" Maa....neha.....shubhi..... ""
Lekin kahi se koi jawab nahi aaya....party main pee hui saari daru push ups lagate waqt hi utar chuki thi lekin ab kiya bhi jaaye to kya.....isiliye main waha sofe pe beth gaya.....or saamne rakhi center tabel pe pada tv ka remote utha liye.....
Tv chalu karne se pahle maine ek baar phir idhar udhar dekha lekin na koi aavaj mujhe sunayi di or na hi koi aahat....maine apna maatha jhatka or tv on karne ke liye remote ka button daba diya.....tv on hone ke saath saath ek KHAT ki aavaj mujhe sunayi di or mere muh se anayas hi nikal gaya....
" " O...SHITT......" "
Is waqt main sofe ke saath hi hawa main ulta latak raha tha....ye ek jaal tha jo mere liye meri maa , bivi ,or bahan ne buna tha....main buri tarah fas chuka tha agar main jaal kaatne ki koshish bhi karta hu to mere saath saath wo bhari bharkam sofa bhi girega jo meri jaan ek jhatake main le jaaega....isiliye maine apne haath surrender karne wali mudra mai khole or kahne laga....
"" OK OK....main apni haar maanta hu...ab mujhe yaha se bahar nikalo""
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Brunei : 01:45 IST HOURS
""GO...go...go.....arjun tum mujhe cover karoge....""
Apne commander ka order sun main tezi se andhere ki aad main ek taraf sarakne laga....mere sath jogi backup ki tarah peeche laga hua tha....arjun or commander rohitashv saamne mojud 6 manjeela building ki taraf kisi cheete ki furti se pahunch chuke the...
Main tezi se aage badhta hua Target wali building ke saamn wali building main dakhil ho chuka tha....apni position main aane ke baad maine commander ko transmit kiya or kaha....
"" First floore par teen target mojud hai...jabki third floor pe 6 log wepons ke sath""
Ye sab kuch main apni sniper rifel mai lage tharmal scope ki madad se dekh pa raha tha....tabhi mere kanon main lage ear pice pe commander ki aavaj sunayi di....
"" Rex...signal milne par third floor clear karo""
Commander ki baat sunte hi maine apni sniper ka muh third floor ki taraf ghuma diya....jabki jogi binocular ki madad se commander ke signal ka wait kar raha tha....tabhi jogi ne mere kandhe par haath rakh kar dheere se dabaya or maine trigger daba diya....
Ek halki sattt... Ki aavaj se meri sniper ki nali se kuch nikla jise bullet to kam se kam nahi kah sakte....ye kuch kuch neno bullets jaisa hi kuch tha kisi sui se ek hajar guna mahin jo konkrit ki diwar ko makkhan ki tarah bhedti hui apne 6 targets ke bheje se bahar nikal gayi....wo saare kisi ped ki tarah lahrakar jamin par gir pade...
Commander bhi arjun ke saath milkar apna kaam nipta chuke the or bas ab target computer se kuch jankari nikal ke humara mission pura.....
New delhi : 01:46 HOURS
Papa apni news dekhne main mashgul ho chuke the or main unke room ki khidki se bahar nikal kar phir se main gate ki taraf badh gaya....darwaje pe halka sa dhakka dete hi wo khul jaata hai or main sadhe hue kadmo se hall ki taraf badh jaata hu.....ghar ke andar sari lights on thi iska matlab chhup kar attack nahi hone wala....main kisi ninja ki tarah apna dum saadh hall ke beecho beech pahunch gaya....lekin mujhe aisa kuch bhi nahi dikha jo mujhe khatre ka andesha de....maine aavaj lagayi....
"" Maa....neha.....shubhi..... ""
Lekin kahi se koi jawab nahi aaya....party main pee hui saari daru push ups lagate waqt hi utar chuki thi lekin ab kiya bhi jaaye to kya.....isiliye main waha sofe pe beth gaya.....or saamne rakhi center tabel pe pada tv ka remote utha liye.....
Tv chalu karne se pahle maine ek baar phir idhar udhar dekha lekin na koi aavaj mujhe sunayi di or na hi koi aahat....maine apna maatha jhatka or tv on karne ke liye remote ka button daba diya.....tv on hone ke saath saath ek KHAT ki aavaj mujhe sunayi di or mere muh se anayas hi nikal gaya....
" " O...SHITT......" "
Is waqt main sofe ke saath hi hawa main ulta latak raha tha....ye ek jaal tha jo mere liye meri maa , bivi ,or bahan ne buna tha....main buri tarah fas chuka tha agar main jaal kaatne ki koshish bhi karta hu to mere saath saath wo bhari bharkam sofa bhi girega jo meri jaan ek jhatake main le jaaega....isiliye maine apne haath surrender karne wali mudra mai khole or kahne laga....
"" OK OK....main apni haar maanta hu...ab mujhe yaha se bahar nikalo""
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Thanks bro....abhi to kahani shuru hui hai dheere dheere aapko or maja aane wala haiFirst of all
All 3 updates are very well written and narrated , specially 3rd update , dad and son Ke Milne Ka tarika mujhe bohat Pasand aaya . Let's see mom ,sis ,biwi ne kya plan kya hai .
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