Fantasy Commando Shakti

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Niymit update de bhai....

 

[Naik]

Main wahi pe baith gaya aur uske salwar ka naada khol diya ek jhatke mein salwar neeche gir gayi ladki ne apni tange chowdi kar li maine apna haath uski choot pe rakh diya
Dilip-[isne toh panty bhi nahi pehni hai]
aur iski choot pe ek bhi baal nahi tha
main apni ek ungli uski choot mein daal diya aur aage peeche karne laga phir main apna munh uski choot pe rakhke chusne laga
ladki- aaah aaj toh bahut achche se chus raha hai aise hi chus meri choot ko
main apni jubaan se uski choot chod raha tha woh aaahe bhar rahi thi ab main uski choot chuste hue apni do ungli uski choot mein daalke chodne laga
ladki- aaah aaur jor se chus aaah haaan aise hi aaah main jhadne wali hoon
main uski choot aur jor se chusne laga
thodi der baad woh jhadne lagi main uska sara pani pee gaya phir main khada ho gaya ab woh neeche baith gayi aur mera pant kholne lagi mera paint neeche gir gaya jaise hi usne mera underwear neeche kiya mera lund uske chehre se takra gaya usne mere lund ko apni mutthi mein pakad liya thodi der baad
ladki- kaun ho tum bolte kyun nahi
dilip- tumhe kya lagta hai
ladki- tum woh nahi ho
phir woh ladki khadi ho gayi aur apni shalwar pahenne lagi main uska hath pakad liya
ladki- chhodo mujhe jane do main aisi waisi ladki nahi hoon. main kisi aur ka intezaar kar rahi thi
woh rone lagi
dilip- ro mat meri baat suno. agar tum kahogi toh main tumhe jane dunga par na toh maine tumhara chehra dekha hai aur na hi tumne mera agar tum mere sath chudai karogi toh main tumhe kabhi pareshan nahi karunga
ladki- nahi tum jhuth bol rahe ho
dilip- sali mere sath game khelti hai tere bolne ke andaaz se pata chal raha hai ki tu natak kar rahi hai chudwana hai toh chudwa warna bhaag yaha se ek toh lund khada karti hai man kar raha hai ki abhi tujhe patak ke chod du aur tu kisi ko kuch nahi bata paegi kyunki tune mera chehra hi nahi dekha hai teen tak ginunga jana hai toh chali jana
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[iske aage main kuch bol hi nahi paya]

Behtareen shaandaar update Anam ji

 

[The_Punisher]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.


To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[KD's ANGEL]

Woh ladki mere lund ko apne munh mein leke chusne lagi aur ek hath se woh mere ando ko sehla rahi thi main uska sar pakda aur apne lund se uske munh ko chodne laga thodi der baad main apna lund uske munh se nikaal liya
ladki- kutte
main phir apna lund uske munh mein pel diya ab woh khud apna munh aage peeche karke mere lund ko chus rahi thi main usko khada karke uski ek taang hawa mein utha diya aur uski choot pe apna lund ragadne laga
ladki- kamine daal na kyun tadpa raha hai
main ek dhakka mara uski cheekh nikal gayi mera aadha lund uski choot mein chala gaya
ladki- maar dala kutte ne
main ek aur dhakka mara ek baar phir uski cheekh nikal gayi main uske hont chusne laga aur dheere dheere dhakke marne laga jab woh apni gaand ghumane lagi toh main apne hont alag kiya
ladki- aaah bass itna hi dum hai, bol toh aise raha tha ki bahut bada mard hai
dilip- soch le agar dum dikha diya toh rone lage gi
ladki- ja ja tere jaise bahut dekhe hain

usne itna hi kaha tha ki main apna lund uski choot ke munh tak nikala aur ek hi baar mein daal diya uski bhayanak cheekh nikal gayi woh rone lagi main ruka nahi tez tez dhakke lagane laga pure ghar mein pach pach ki awaj aa rahi thi
ladki- aise hi chod mujhe phaad de meri choot ko aaah bhosda bana de meri choot ka haaan aise hi aur jor se chod aaaah main jhadne wali hoon
phir woh jhadne lagi ab mera lund uski choot mein aram se ja raha tha thodi der baad woh phir jhad gayi main usko god mein utha liya aur apne lund ko uski choot mein pelne laga woh 3 baar jhad chuki thi ab main bhi jhadne wala tha main puri taqat se dhakke laga raha tha tabhi mujhe yaad aaya
dilip- andar hi daalu ya munh mein
ladki- andar mat dalna
main apna lund uski choot se nikala woh neeche baith gayi aur mere lund ko munh leke chusne lagi thodi der baad main uske munh mein hi jhadne laga woh mera sara cum pee gayi
dilip- bahut maza aaya tujhe chodne mein waise tera naam kya hai
ladki- ritu
dilip- abhi tak kitne le chuki hai
ladki- tum chaothe ho
dilip- itna natak kyu kar rahi thi
ritu- are toh main koi randi thodi hoon
dilip- achchha ab main chalta hoon
ritu- phir kab miloge
dilip- kis liye
ritu- mujhe chodne ke liye
dilip- tumne kabhi gaand marwai hai
ritu- nahi
dilip- agar gaand marne degi toh yahi pe aa jaunga
ritu- pehle apna naam toh bata do
dilip- jis din gaand maarne dogi usi din bata dunga
ritu- tumko bulaungi kaise
dilip- ek kaam karna school mein black board pe khali ghar likh dena main yahi pe aa jaunga
phir main ghar chal diya shaam ke 7 baj rahe the main toh bas yahi dua kar raha tha ki b mama ghar pe na ho thodi der baad main pahuncha ghar sab behne hall mein baithi thi vanya ko chhod ke main jaise hi andar gaya sab mujhe ghurne lage
dilip- aap sab mujhe ghur kyun rahi ho
aruna- apne kapde dekh kitne gande hain kisi se maar peet karke aaya hai kya
dilip- woh khelte waqt gir gaya
itna kaha hi tha ki sab behne mere paas aagayi
vidya- dikha kaha pe chot lagi hai
aruna- chup kyun hai bol na
dilip- koi chot nahi lagi hai aap sab aise hi pareshan hone lagti ho
megha- [muskurake] ja jaake jaldi se nahake aa tere liye ek surprize hai
dilip- kya surprize hai
aruna- Meghaaa
avantika- tere pet mein koi baat pachti kyun nahi hai
vidya- tu khada kya kar raha hai jaldi se nahake aa warna surprize cancel
yeh sunke main bhaag ke apne room mein aaya nahake tayyar hua aur daudke neeche aaya
dilip- ab bataiye konsa surprize hai
vidya- pehle apni ankhein band kar
main apni ankhein band kar liya phir vidya di mera hath pakad ke mujhe apne sath le jaane lagi
aruna- ab tu apni ankh dheere se khol
main apni ankh dheere se khola
dilip- yeh kya hai
vidya- tera cake hai
dilip- par kyun aaj mera birthday thodi hai
aruna- tu bhool gaya aaj mera birthday hai

 

[Naik]

Woh ladki mere lund ko apne munh mein leke chusne lagi aur ek hath se woh mere ando ko sehla rahi thi main uska sar pakda aur apne lund se uske munh ko chodne laga thodi der baad main apna lund uske munh se nikaal liya
ladki- kutte
main phir apna lund uske munh mein pel diya ab woh khud apna munh aage peeche karke mere lund ko chus rahi thi main usko khada karke uski ek taang hawa mein utha diya aur uski choot pe apna lund ragadne laga
ladki- kamine daal na kyun tadpa raha hai
main ek dhakka mara uski cheekh nikal gayi mera aadha lund uski choot mein chala gaya
ladki- maar dala kutte ne
main ek aur dhakka mara ek baar phir uski cheekh nikal gayi main uske hont chusne laga aur dheere dheere dhakke marne laga jab woh apni gaand ghumane lagi toh main apne hont alag kiya
ladki- aaah bass itna hi dum hai, bol toh aise raha tha ki bahut bada mard hai
dilip- soch le agar dum dikha diya toh rone lage gi
ladki- ja ja tere jaise bahut dekhe hain

usne itna hi kaha tha ki main apna lund uski choot ke munh tak nikala aur ek hi baar mein daal diya uski bhayanak cheekh nikal gayi woh rone lagi main ruka nahi tez tez dhakke lagane laga pure ghar mein pach pach ki awaj aa rahi thi
ladki- aise hi chod mujhe phaad de meri choot ko aaah bhosda bana de meri choot ka haaan aise hi aur jor se chod aaaah main jhadne wali hoon
phir woh jhadne lagi ab mera lund uski choot mein aram se ja raha tha thodi der baad woh phir jhad gayi main usko god mein utha liya aur apne lund ko uski choot mein pelne laga woh 3 baar jhad chuki thi ab main bhi jhadne wala tha main puri taqat se dhakke laga raha tha tabhi mujhe yaad aaya
dilip- andar hi daalu ya munh mein
ladki- andar mat dalna
main apna lund uski choot se nikala woh neeche baith gayi aur mere lund ko munh leke chusne lagi thodi der baad main uske munh mein hi jhadne laga woh mera sara cum pee gayi
dilip- bahut maza aaya tujhe chodne mein waise tera naam kya hai
ladki- ritu
dilip- abhi tak kitne le chuki hai
ladki- tum chaothe ho
dilip- itna natak kyu kar rahi thi
ritu- are toh main koi randi thodi hoon
dilip- achchha ab main chalta hoon
ritu- phir kab miloge
dilip- kis liye
ritu- mujhe chodne ke liye
dilip- tumne kabhi gaand marwai hai
ritu- nahi
dilip- agar gaand marne degi toh yahi pe aa jaunga
ritu- pehle apna naam toh bata do
dilip- jis din gaand maarne dogi usi din bata dunga
ritu- tumko bulaungi kaise
dilip- ek kaam karna school mein black board pe khali ghar likh dena main yahi pe aa jaunga
phir main ghar chal diya shaam ke 7 baj rahe the main toh bas yahi dua kar raha tha ki b mama ghar pe na ho thodi der baad main pahuncha ghar sab behne hall mein baithi thi vanya ko chhod ke main jaise hi andar gaya sab mujhe ghurne lage
dilip- aap sab mujhe ghur kyun rahi ho
aruna- apne kapde dekh kitne gande hain kisi se maar peet karke aaya hai kya
dilip- woh khelte waqt gir gaya
itna kaha hi tha ki sab behne mere paas aagayi
vidya- dikha kaha pe chot lagi hai
aruna- chup kyun hai bol na
dilip- koi chot nahi lagi hai aap sab aise hi pareshan hone lagti ho
megha- [muskurake] ja jaake jaldi se nahake aa tere liye ek surprize hai
dilip- kya surprize hai
aruna- Meghaaa
avantika- tere pet mein koi baat pachti kyun nahi hai
vidya- tu khada kya kar raha hai jaldi se nahake aa warna surprize cancel
yeh sunke main bhaag ke apne room mein aaya nahake tayyar hua aur daudke neeche aaya
dilip- ab bataiye konsa surprize hai
vidya- pehle apni ankhein band kar
main apni ankhein band kar liya phir vidya di mera hath pakad ke mujhe apne sath le jaane lagi
aruna- ab tu apni ankh dheere se khol
main apni ankh dheere se khola
dilip- yeh kya hai
vidya- tera cake hai
dilip- par kyun aaj mera birthday thodi hai
aruna- tu bhool gaya aaj mera birthday hai

Badhiya shaandaar update Anam ji

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome update bhai keep posting

 

[Shanu]

Awesome update bhai

 

[KD's ANGEL]

Aruna- tu bhool gaya aaj mera birthday hai
dilip- aaj aapka birthday hai aur mujhe pata hi nahi
aruna- naraz toh mujhe hona chahiye ki tu mera birthday gift mujhe nahi de raha

yaar yeh kya ek toh mujhe bataya nahi
upar se gift maang rahi hain
Dilip- kya chahiye aapko
aruna- main chahti hoon ki tu meri jagah mera birthday mana
dilip- main kuch samjha nahi
vidya- are mere bhole babu aruna chahti hai ki tu uska birthday cake kaat ke pehli bite use khila
dilip- par kyun
aruna- kyun ki main chahti hoon
avantika- soch kya raha hai
dilip- main soch raha hoon kahi main sapna toh nahi dekh raha hoon
aruna- tu mera majak uda raha hai ja main tujhse baat nahi karti
dilip- [arunadi ke gale lagte hue] are meri pyar di aap toh gussa ho gayi achcha aao

phir main arunadi ko apne sath leke gaya cake kaatke pehli bite khilaya sab bolne lage
happy birthday to u
happy birthday to u
happy birthday dear aruna
waise mujhe pata tha ki aaj arunadi ka birthday nahi hai shayad meri behno ka man hua hoga mere hath se cake khaane ka
Dilip- achcha aap sab baith ke baate kijiye
main aata hoon
vidya- mujhe toh khila
avantika- mujhe bhi
megha- hume bhi
phir kya tha sab behno ko cake khilaya
Main- ab jaoon
aruna- pehle humare hath se kha ke jaa
phir sab behno ne mujhe khilaya
Main- b naani kaha hain
vidya- apne room mein
dilip- aur dono mama
vidya- apne room mein
dilip- theek hai
main bhi apne room mein ja raha hoon phir main apne room mein aake bed pe baith gaya
Main- ab toh condom har waqt jeb mein rakhna padega kya pata kaam aa jaye aur kal sudha se bhi mil leta hoon abhi toh bahut neend aarahi hai pehle vanya se baat kar leta hoon.
main master key apni jeb mein rakh ke vanya ke room pe pahuncha room knock kiya vanya ne gate khola
vanya- kya hai
dilip- tumse baat karni hai
vanya side ho gayi main andar jaake bed pe baith gaya
vanya- bolo
dilip- woh main soch raha tha ki kal hum kahi pe ghumne jaaye
vanya muskurane lagi
vanya- theek hai
main vanya ke room se bahar aake b nani ke room pe pahuncha, b nani ne gate khola uske baad hum sab ne milke khana khaya phir main apne room mein aake so gaya...
Subah 6 am main utha nahaya dhoya tayyar hoke neeche gaya aaj toh pura pariwar dt pe baitha hua tha main bhi jaake baith gaya dono mama kundli maar ke baithe hue the hum sab ne nashta kiya
c mama- char din baad hum sab wapas sheher ja rahe hain
yeh sunke mera dimaag sunn ho gaya
aruna- itni jaldi
avantika- haa
c mama- aap sabke exams nazdeek aa rahe hain khaskar avantika megha aur sunita ke liye toh bahut hi jaruri hai
vidya- chachaji theek keh rahe hain

khane ka man hi nahi ho raha tha itne saalo baad behne mili khair padhai bhi toh jaruri hai main bhi nashta kiya aur hall mein hi baith gaya dono mama bahar chale gaye sab behno ka chehra udasi mein dooba hua tha vidyadi chhupane ki koshish kar rahi thi par mujhse nahi chhupa pai vidyadi apne room mein jane lagi main bhi thodi der baad vidyadi ke room pe pahuncha mujhe pata tha vidyadi ro rahi hongi toh gate kholengi hi nahi
main master key se lock kholke andar gaya aur gate lock kiya vidya peeth ke bal letke sisak rahi thi main dheere se vidya ke paas gaya aur vidya ke bagal mein let gaya vidya ka munh dusri taraf tha mujhe toh rone ka vardan mila hai toh takiye mein apna munh chhupa ke laga main rone aur yeh ansu mere ankho se sach mein nikal rahe the koi natak nahi tha vidya ne jab suna toh woh peeche mudi
mujhe dekhke vidya apne sare gum bhool gayi
vidya- dilip tu ro kyun raha hai
vidya ne mujhe uthane ki koshish ki main nahi utha
Vidya di- dilip mera dil bahut ghabra raha hai uthna dilip
main uthke baith gaya aur vidya ko apne gale laga liya vidya mere gale lagte hi phoot-2 ke rone lagi main vidya ki peeth sehlata raha thodi der baad vidya ne rona band kiya
dilip- ab bataiye kyun ro rahi thi
vidya- kyun na roun tujhe ek pal ke liye apni nazro se dur nahi kar sakti aur main itni majboor hoon ki tujhse dur jane ka soch bhi nahi sakti
dilip- achcha toh is liye meri vidu ro rahi hai lekin ismein rone wali konsi baat hai
jab bhi mouka milega main apni vidu se milne aata rahunga
vidya- abhi jo bola phir se bol
dilip- ismein rone wali konsi baat hai
vidya- yeh nahi last mein jo bola
dilip- main aapse roz milne aata rahunga
vidya- please
dilip- main apni vidu se milne aata rahunga
yeh sunke vidya ka chehra poori tarah sharam se laal ho gaya
dilip- haaye mar jaun
vidya ne mere munh pe haath rakh diya
vidya- aisa kabhi mat kehna
dilip- nahi kehta ab rona band karo
vidya- apna chehra dekh mujhse jyada toh teri ankho se ansu nikal rahe hain
main vidu ko kheench ke apni god mein bitha liya aur vidu ke gaal ko sehlane laga
Dilip- meri pyari vidu kitni khoobsurat hai raat mein chand bhi dekhle toh jal jaye
vidu sharmane lagi vidu mujhse kitna pyar karti hai aur ek main hoon jo kisi aur ke sath sex karta hoon
Dilip- ek baat bolta hoon bura mat manna
vidya- main apne dilip ki baat ka bura maan hi nahi sakti
dilip- [sar jhuka ke]mera dusri ladkiyo ke sath bhi sambandh hai aap chaho toh mujhe maarlo par mujhse naraz mat hona
vidya- yeh tu kaisi baat kar raha hai agar tera sambandh agar dusri ladkiyo ke sath hai toh main kya karu
dilip- iska matlab aap mujhse naraz ho??????????????

 

[Shanu]

Nice update dear

 

[KD's ANGEL]

Sorry for delay
Story ke sare updates system se delete ho gaye the isaliye itna delay hua. Aage se dhyan rakhungi..