Fantasy Commando Shakti

[Shanu]

Very nice update dear

 

[gillsharlin]

Nice

 

[rajakiller1234567]

It's 21st Jan miss when will you give update

 

[Prince Arya]

lekin usne magic nhi tha. So thoda different story ho sakti hai. Lekin aapne sahi kaha story copy hai.

copy hai koi baat nhi uss writer ne v kahani adhuri chod di. Aur magic v nhi tha so, aap story complete karna. And congratulations for new story and best of luck ki story sahi jaaye.

Real writer ne magic dala tha jab us ne end wali update main time restart kiya tha

 

[Prince Arya]

Best of luck for your story
Complete lazmi karna

 

[DINNA]

nice update, waiting for more

 

[KD's ANGEL]

Dilip- par aap apne pati ko dhokha de rahi ho
Sarla- kis baat ka dhoka meri sauteli maa ne mujhe bataya ki 21 saal ka gabru jawan se meri shaadi ho rahi hai par suhagraat ke din pata chala ki yeh ek 47 ka randwa hai isliye main itni chidchidi ho gayi kisi se sahi dhang se baat nahi karti lekin meri sauteli maa abhi tak khush hai
sarla ki baat sunke main sochne pe majbur ho gaya
ki maine jo sarla ke sath kiya
kya woh sahi tha aurat chahe kitni bhi badi galti karde
par uske aatmasamman ko thes nahi pahunchana chahiye
main sarla ki taraf dekha sarla mujhe hi dekh rahi thi
Dilip-mujhe maaf kar dijiye main aapke sath galat kiya
Sarla- tujhe maafi maangne ki jarurat nahi hai tu toh pehle hi bol chuka tha ki tu mujhe berehmi se chodega aur mere andar 8 mahine ki khujli thi toh main bhi kuch soch nahi payi
Dilip- abhi tak kitne le chuki ho
Sarla- 12 nahi 13 nahi nahi 14 haa 14
main sarla ko aankhein phaad ke dekhne laga
Dilip- aap ki gaand se khoon kaise nikal gaya
Sarla- itni berehmi se gaand maar raha tha
aur bolta hai khoon kaise nikla
Dilip- aapko apna waada yaad hai na
Sarla- yaad hai ritu ko kabhi koi takleef nahi doongi aur ab sirf tere se chudwaungi
Dilip- par chudwaogi kaha aap toh dusre gaon mein rehti ho
Sarla- dekh tu ravi ka dost hai toh har hafte tu ravi ke sath aajaiyo koi na koi jugaad kar hi lenge
Dilip- aur aapka pati aapki bahu aapka beta
Sarla- mera beta toh kuch din mein sheher chala jayega aur mere pati ka kya hai usko neend ki goli khilake sula dungi
Dilip- ab aapko aram se chodunga
Sarla- na baba na tu mujhe aaj ke jaise hi chodna taaki mere phuddi ek hafte tak tere liye pani baha sake par gaand thodi aram se marna
dekh na baitha bhi nahi ja raha hai
Main muskura diya
Dilip-ab aap jaao 2 baj gaye hain lekin pehle aap yeh batao ki aap ki age matlab umar kitni hai
Sarla- 42 aur mujhe thodi bahut toh english aati hai
phir sarla kapde pehnne lagi jab chal rahi thi toh gaand itni jor se hilte ki mera man karta abhi ek aur baar gaand maar loon phir sarla gate khol ke bahar chali gayi main gate lock kar diya aur apne room ko sahi kiya phir main paint pehen ke bed pe let gaya jaldi hi neend agayi
subah koi gate knock karne laga main uthke gate khola ravi ki maa thi jo mujhe dekhke sharma rahi thi tabhi meri najar apne upar gayi main upar se nanga tha main jaldi se apni shirt pehen liya
rkm- aap taiyyar ho jaiye 2 ghante mein bidai ho gi
rkm mujhe ek jodi kapda deke boli phir rkm chali gayi ghar mein ek hi br tha main usmein jaake naha liya phir sabke sath nashta kiya
rkp- damad ji samdhan ji nahi dikh rahi hain
sarla ka beta- ji woh maa ke pair mein monch agayi hai
Phir hum sab nashta karke time paas karne lage bidai ka samay aagaya saari aurte rone lagi phir ritu apne naye ghar yaani sasuraal chali gayi sarla toh mujhe dikhi hi nahi bheed hi itni thi ek dafa toh main kisi ladki se pura sat gaya shukar hai woh ladki deepa thi
phir main aur ravi baithke baate karne lage
tabhi ravi ke mata pita aagaye unhone mera shukriya ada kiya ki main unki beti ki shaadi mein aake unka maan badhaya main jaise hi ravi ke ghar se nikla kaaliya apni bhains matlab jeep pe baitha tha main lakhan ke paas pahuncha kaaliye ko aaj bhi chain nahi mila mujhe akhade mein le gaya aur buri tarah kasrat karwane laga phir main ghar pahuncha b nani se milke apne room mein gaya kitaab leke vanya ke room pahuncha phir vanya jab tak padhti rahi tab tak main padha aaj vanya ne na mujhe toka bas main kuch puchta toh jawab de deti padhte padhte shaam ho gayi vanya apni kitaab rakhke room se bahar chali gayi main phir bhi padhta raha kyunki b nani ke baad agar mujhe kisi ke sath apnapan mehsus hota tha to vo vanya thi..
Main thodi der aur padhta raha phir apne room mein aagaya tabhi phone bajne laga main phone uthaya
Dilip-hello kaun bol raha hai
Megha- teri didi kaisa hai tu
Dilip- main theek hoon aap kaisi ho
Megha- bas exam ki tayyari kar rahi hoon
Dilip- main bhi. sorry main aapko phone nahi kiya
Megha- sorry mat bol. main badi hoon mujhe phone karna chahiye tha
Sunita- kya kar rahi hai mujhe phone de [sunita di megha di se mobile chheen ke] hello yeh toh tujhe bor karegi hi
Dilip- aap ko kya hua
Sunita- kya hoga teri yaad aa rahi hai
Megha- yeh toh main boli thi
Dilip- achcha matlab aapko meri yaad nahi aati
Sunita- main toh tujhe har waqt yaad karti hoon tu toh mera pyara bhai hai
Megha- ab mujhe phone de
[phir dono jhagadne lagi]
Dilip- achcha main phone rakh raha hoon
Megha- kyun
Dilip- aap dono jhagad jo rahi ho
Sunita- hum dono kabhi nahi jhagadte tu bata kya kar raha hai aaaj kal
Dilip- ghar mein baithke padhai kar raha hoon
Sunita- yeh tune bahut achcha kiya abhi tu apni padhai pe jyada dhyan de
thodi der baat karke main phone cut kar diya socha ki baaki sabse baat kar leta hoon
Aruna di ko phone kiya
thodi der tak baat karta raha phir phone cut kar diya. aruna di hamesha serious rehti hain
pata nahi inko kya ho gaya hai
Avni ko phone kiya avni ka phone busy aaraha tha
phir main apni pyari Vidu ko phone lagaya
Vidya- kaise hain mere pati dev
Dilip- main theek hoon aap kaisi hain
Vidya- agar aap theek hain toh main bhi theek hoon
Dilip- khana khaya aapne
Vidya- naa abhi toh 1 ghanta hai
Dilip- ek baat bataiye us din aapne phone kyun cut kar diya tha
Vidya- pata nahi
Dilip- yeh kaisa jawab hua
aapko meri kasam
Vidya- aaj kal dil bahut ghabrata hai ki aap mujhse door ho gaye toh
Dilip- main aapse kabhi door nahi jaunga agar aapko yahi dar hai toh main kisi ladki se baat nahi karunga
Vidya- main toh kuch bhi bolti hoon aapko yeh sab karne ki jarurat nahi hai
Dilip- jarurat hai
Vidya- aapko meri kasam
Dilip- lekin kyun
Vidya- kyunki main aapse pyar karti hoon aur main aapko woh sab nahi de sakti jo aap chahte hain
Dilip- main kabhi aapse woh sab karne ko nahi kahunga aur agar mujhe is sab ki lat lag gayi toh phir aap kya karengi
Vidya- aisa kuch nahi hoga aur agar hua bhi toh main kabhi mana nahi karungi
yeh kehke vidu ne phone cut kar diya main kaan mein mobile lagake sochta reh gaya ki vidu ka yeh kaisa pyar hai jo haq nahi jatata tabhi mobile pe massege aaya massege vidu ka tha
"jyada sochne ki jarurat nahi hai warna kiss nahi milega"
yeh padhke main jhat se phone lagaya
vidu ne bhi jha tse phone utha liya hum dono ek sath
Ummmmmmhhhhh
phir vidu bye bolke phone cut kar di
main mobile se woh massege delete kar diya
tabhi koi gate knock karne laga main jaake gate khola yeh vanya thi phir main neeche gaya khana khake apne room mein aagaya thodi der tak aur padhai kiya phir bed pe lette hi neend aagayi subah wahi 6 baje utha nashta karke akhade mein gaya aaj kasrat karne mein maza aaraha tha shayad ab aadat pad gai hai kasrat karne ke baad lakhan mere liye wahi gilass leke aaya aaj toh puch ke hi rahunga
dilip- lakhan aapse ek baat puchu
lakhan- kahiye c maalik
dilip- iss gilass mein aap kya milake laate hain jab peeta hoon toh lagta hai ki aag nigal raha hoon
lakhan thodi der tak chup raha
lakhan- aap jab se kasrat kar rahe hain aapko kahi pe dard hua
dilip- kasrat karte waqt hota hai baad mein nahi hota
lakhan- aap ko pata hai jab main kasrat karna shuru kiya tha toh mujhe 6 mahine tak dard hota raha aur yeh kasrat bade bade pehelwan karte hain aapko dard isliye nahi hota hai
kyunki aap jo cheez peete hain usse aapka dard bilkul gayab ho jata hai
lakhan- sirf 1 saal aap agar kasrat karenge
toh aap ki taqat 10 guna badh jayegi
dilip- toh phir tum kyun nahi peete yeh
lakhan- yeh main aapko nahi bata sakta
dilip- [man me] kitna phenk raha hai
main jo pee raha hoon
woh yeh nahi pee sakta
ab ek hi raasta hai
dilip- lakhan yeh hamara hukm hai ki aap hume bataye
ki aap yeh kyun nahi peete
lakhan kuch bol hi nahi raha tha
main seedha bimla ke ghar pahuncha
gate khula hi tha
main seedha andar chala gaya
andar bimla aur shanti khaat pe baithke baate kar rahi thi
shanti mujhe dekhte hi sharmane lagi
aur bimla muskurane lagi
main bimla ke paas pahuncha
shanti khadi hoke ghar se bahar chali gayi
main khaat pe baith gaya
dilip- ise kya hua
bimla- woh maan gayi hai
dilip- kya maan gayi hai
bimla- kabhi kabhi main sochti hoon ki tu bada samajhdar hai
lekin hai tu ek number ka bewakoof
shanti tere bachche ki maa banne ke liye maan gayi hai
bimla ke itna kehte hi main bimla ko kiss karna shuru kar diya
bimla bhi pure josh ke saath mere hont chusne lagi phir main kiss tod diya
hum dono hanfne laga
dilip- yeh chamatkar hua kaise
bimla- pehle tu meri chudai kar
dilip- pehle baat karenge
bimla- pehle chudai karenge
dilip- pehle baat karenge. achchha chhodo main apki chudai karta hoon aap mujhe batati jaana
bimla- theek hai...,.
main aur bimla room mein pahunche phir hum dono apne kapde utarne lage
bimla apni sari kholne lagi
main apni shirt aur baniyan nikaal diya phir bimla apna blouse utaar di
bimla ke boobs aaj mujhe apni taraf bula rahe the
main apna paint aur underwear utaar diya
bimla apni peticoat ka naada kheench di
ek jhatke mein peticoat bimla ke jism se alag ho gaya
mere lund mein sarsarahat hone lagi
bimla dheere se chalte hue mere paas aayi
aur ghutno ke bal baith gayi
mera lund bimla ke gaal ko chhu raha tha
mera lund bimla ke gaal pe jhatke kha raha thi
bimla mere lund ke supade pe apni jubaan pherane lagi
aaj mera lund kuch jyada phool gaya tha
bimla mere lund ke supade ko apne honto mein pakad ke apna munh aage peeche karne lagi
main bimla ke sar pe hath rakh diya
bimla mere aadhe lund ko chus rahi thi
bimla ka ek hath mere ando pe tha aur dusra hath meri jaangh pe
bimla ki choot se ras tapak ke uske ghutno tak pahunch raha tha bimla mere aadhe lund ko thodi der chusti rahi
phir main bimla ke munh mein apna lund aage peeche karne laga
bimla ke thook se mera pura lund bhig chuka tha
main bimla ke munh se apna lund nikaala
aur bimla ko ghodi bana diya
bimla bed pe apna hath rakh di
main ghutno ke bal baith gaya
apna munh bimla ki choot pe rakhke chusne laga
bimla ki choot paani pe paani baha rahi thi
main apne munh mein choot ke dane ko bharke chusne laga
bimla aahe bharne lagi
thodi der tak bimla ki choot chusta raha
phir bimla ke pair kanpne lage aur bimla ki choot paani chhodne lagi
main sara paani pee gaya
ab main khada ho gaya
aur apne lund pe condom lagake bimla ki choot pe apna lund set kiya
dilip- kaki ab shuru karo kahani
bimla- jab tu mere khet ke kagaj mujhe deke gaya
main bimla ki kamar pakad ke ek jhatka maar diya
mera aadha lund bimla ki choot mein chala gaya
bimla- aaah oooh toh main sochne lagi ki shanti ko kaise manau
main ek aur dhakka maar diya mera pura lund bimla ki choot ko phaadta hua andar tak chala gaya
Bimla-aaah maaar daaala ooh uiiimaa
main apna lund bimla ki choot mein aage piche karne laga
Bimla-tabhi main sochi shanti ko sab sach bata deti hoon aaah aur jor se chod phaad de meri choot
main shanti ko apne ghar mein leke aayi
aur shanti ko saari sachchai bata di
kaise tu vinay ko sharab ki dukaan se leke aaya aaah aur jor se dum nahi hai kya
main bimla ko chode ja raha tha
aur bimla baato ko mix karke bole ja rahi thi
Bimla-phir vinay tujhe sab sach bata diya tu vinay ke sath shanti ke ghar gaya
main apna lund bimla ki choot ke munh tak laya aur puri taqat se pel diya
bimla ki cheekh nikal gayi
bimla- uii maa phir tu mujhe apne sath le gaya shanti ko doctor se dikhane doctor se pata chala ki shanti mein koi kami nahi hai
thodi der baad bimla ki choot paani chhod di
main bimla ko bed pe leta diya aur ek hi baar mein apna pura lund bimla ki choot mein pel diya
aur tabad tod dhakke marne laga
pure room mein fach- 2 ki awaj gunj rahi thi
bimla- aur jor se chod kash main tujhe pehle bata deti toh meri jaan toh bach jaati aah aaah
shanti rone lagi phir main shanti ko teri aur meri sachchai bata di
tu meri madad kar raha aur tu sirf vinay ke liya shanti ko maa banana chahta hai
ab aur nahi bola jata baaki chudai ke baad bataungi
dilip- (main bimla ki choot phaadne laga
)badi sherni ban rahi thi ab bol kabhi meri baat kaategi.

 

[Naik]

Dilip- par aap apne pati ko dhokha de rahi ho
Sarla- kis baat ka dhoka meri sauteli maa ne mujhe bataya ki 21 saal ka gabru jawan se meri shaadi ho rahi hai par suhagraat ke din pata chala ki yeh ek 47 ka randwa hai isliye main itni chidchidi ho gayi kisi se sahi dhang se baat nahi karti lekin meri sauteli maa abhi tak khush hai
sarla ki baat sunke main sochne pe majbur ho gaya
ki maine jo sarla ke sath kiya
kya woh sahi tha aurat chahe kitni bhi badi galti karde
par uske aatmasamman ko thes nahi pahunchana chahiye
main sarla ki taraf dekha sarla mujhe hi dekh rahi thi
Dilip-mujhe maaf kar dijiye main aapke sath galat kiya
Sarla- tujhe maafi maangne ki jarurat nahi hai tu toh pehle hi bol chuka tha ki tu mujhe berehmi se chodega aur mere andar 8 mahine ki khujli thi toh main bhi kuch soch nahi payi
Dilip- abhi tak kitne le chuki ho
Sarla- 12 nahi 13 nahi nahi 14 haa 14
main sarla ko aankhein phaad ke dekhne laga
Dilip- aap ki gaand se khoon kaise nikal gaya
Sarla- itni berehmi se gaand maar raha tha
aur bolta hai khoon kaise nikla
Dilip- aapko apna waada yaad hai na
Sarla- yaad hai ritu ko kabhi koi takleef nahi doongi aur ab sirf tere se chudwaungi
Dilip- par chudwaogi kaha aap toh dusre gaon mein rehti ho
Sarla- dekh tu ravi ka dost hai toh har hafte tu ravi ke sath aajaiyo koi na koi jugaad kar hi lenge
Dilip- aur aapka pati aapki bahu aapka beta
Sarla- mera beta toh kuch din mein sheher chala jayega aur mere pati ka kya hai usko neend ki goli khilake sula dungi
Dilip- ab aapko aram se chodunga
Sarla- na baba na tu mujhe aaj ke jaise hi chodna taaki mere phuddi ek hafte tak tere liye pani baha sake par gaand thodi aram se marna
dekh na baitha bhi nahi ja raha hai
Main muskura diya
Dilip-ab aap jaao 2 baj gaye hain lekin pehle aap yeh batao ki aap ki age matlab umar kitni hai
Sarla- 42 aur mujhe thodi bahut toh english aati hai
phir sarla kapde pehnne lagi jab chal rahi thi toh gaand itni jor se hilte ki mera man karta abhi ek aur baar gaand maar loon phir sarla gate khol ke bahar chali gayi main gate lock kar diya aur apne room ko sahi kiya phir main paint pehen ke bed pe let gaya jaldi hi neend agayi
subah koi gate knock karne laga main uthke gate khola ravi ki maa thi jo mujhe dekhke sharma rahi thi tabhi meri najar apne upar gayi main upar se nanga tha main jaldi se apni shirt pehen liya
rkm- aap taiyyar ho jaiye 2 ghante mein bidai ho gi
rkm mujhe ek jodi kapda deke boli phir rkm chali gayi ghar mein ek hi br tha main usmein jaake naha liya phir sabke sath nashta kiya
rkp- damad ji samdhan ji nahi dikh rahi hain
sarla ka beta- ji woh maa ke pair mein monch agayi hai
Phir hum sab nashta karke time paas karne lage bidai ka samay aagaya saari aurte rone lagi phir ritu apne naye ghar yaani sasuraal chali gayi sarla toh mujhe dikhi hi nahi bheed hi itni thi ek dafa toh main kisi ladki se pura sat gaya shukar hai woh ladki deepa thi
phir main aur ravi baithke baate karne lage
tabhi ravi ke mata pita aagaye unhone mera shukriya ada kiya ki main unki beti ki shaadi mein aake unka maan badhaya main jaise hi ravi ke ghar se nikla kaaliya apni bhains matlab jeep pe baitha tha main lakhan ke paas pahuncha kaaliye ko aaj bhi chain nahi mila mujhe akhade mein le gaya aur buri tarah kasrat karwane laga phir main ghar pahuncha b nani se milke apne room mein gaya kitaab leke vanya ke room pahuncha phir vanya jab tak padhti rahi tab tak main padha aaj vanya ne na mujhe toka bas main kuch puchta toh jawab de deti padhte padhte shaam ho gayi vanya apni kitaab rakhke room se bahar chali gayi main phir bhi padhta raha kyunki b nani ke baad agar mujhe kisi ke sath apnapan mehsus hota tha to vo vanya thi..
Main thodi der aur padhta raha phir apne room mein aagaya tabhi phone bajne laga main phone uthaya
Dilip-hello kaun bol raha hai
Megha- teri didi kaisa hai tu
Dilip- main theek hoon aap kaisi ho
Megha- bas exam ki tayyari kar rahi hoon
Dilip- main bhi. sorry main aapko phone nahi kiya
Megha- sorry mat bol. main badi hoon mujhe phone karna chahiye tha
Sunita- kya kar rahi hai mujhe phone de [sunita di megha di se mobile chheen ke] hello yeh toh tujhe bor karegi hi
Dilip- aap ko kya hua
Sunita- kya hoga teri yaad aa rahi hai
Megha- yeh toh main boli thi
Dilip- achcha matlab aapko meri yaad nahi aati
Sunita- main toh tujhe har waqt yaad karti hoon tu toh mera pyara bhai hai
Megha- ab mujhe phone de
[phir dono jhagadne lagi]
Dilip- achcha main phone rakh raha hoon
Megha- kyun
Dilip- aap dono jhagad jo rahi ho
Sunita- hum dono kabhi nahi jhagadte tu bata kya kar raha hai aaaj kal
Dilip- ghar mein baithke padhai kar raha hoon
Sunita- yeh tune bahut achcha kiya abhi tu apni padhai pe jyada dhyan de
thodi der baat karke main phone cut kar diya socha ki baaki sabse baat kar leta hoon
Aruna di ko phone kiya
thodi der tak baat karta raha phir phone cut kar diya. aruna di hamesha serious rehti hain
pata nahi inko kya ho gaya hai
Avni ko phone kiya avni ka phone busy aaraha tha
phir main apni pyari Vidu ko phone lagaya
Vidya- kaise hain mere pati dev
Dilip- main theek hoon aap kaisi hain
Vidya- agar aap theek hain toh main bhi theek hoon
Dilip- khana khaya aapne
Vidya- naa abhi toh 1 ghanta hai
Dilip- ek baat bataiye us din aapne phone kyun cut kar diya tha
Vidya- pata nahi
Dilip- yeh kaisa jawab hua
aapko meri kasam
Vidya- aaj kal dil bahut ghabrata hai ki aap mujhse door ho gaye toh
Dilip- main aapse kabhi door nahi jaunga agar aapko yahi dar hai toh main kisi ladki se baat nahi karunga
Vidya- main toh kuch bhi bolti hoon aapko yeh sab karne ki jarurat nahi hai
Dilip- jarurat hai
Vidya- aapko meri kasam
Dilip- lekin kyun
Vidya- kyunki main aapse pyar karti hoon aur main aapko woh sab nahi de sakti jo aap chahte hain
Dilip- main kabhi aapse woh sab karne ko nahi kahunga aur agar mujhe is sab ki lat lag gayi toh phir aap kya karengi
Vidya- aisa kuch nahi hoga aur agar hua bhi toh main kabhi mana nahi karungi
yeh kehke vidu ne phone cut kar diya main kaan mein mobile lagake sochta reh gaya ki vidu ka yeh kaisa pyar hai jo haq nahi jatata tabhi mobile pe massege aaya massege vidu ka tha
"jyada sochne ki jarurat nahi hai warna kiss nahi milega"
yeh padhke main jhat se phone lagaya
vidu ne bhi jha tse phone utha liya hum dono ek sath
Ummmmmmhhhhh
phir vidu bye bolke phone cut kar di
main mobile se woh massege delete kar diya
tabhi koi gate knock karne laga main jaake gate khola yeh vanya thi phir main neeche gaya khana khake apne room mein aagaya thodi der tak aur padhai kiya phir bed pe lette hi neend aagayi subah wahi 6 baje utha nashta karke akhade mein gaya aaj kasrat karne mein maza aaraha tha shayad ab aadat pad gai hai kasrat karne ke baad lakhan mere liye wahi gilass leke aaya aaj toh puch ke hi rahunga
dilip- lakhan aapse ek baat puchu
lakhan- kahiye c maalik
dilip- iss gilass mein aap kya milake laate hain jab peeta hoon toh lagta hai ki aag nigal raha hoon
lakhan thodi der tak chup raha
lakhan- aap jab se kasrat kar rahe hain aapko kahi pe dard hua
dilip- kasrat karte waqt hota hai baad mein nahi hota
lakhan- aap ko pata hai jab main kasrat karna shuru kiya tha toh mujhe 6 mahine tak dard hota raha aur yeh kasrat bade bade pehelwan karte hain aapko dard isliye nahi hota hai
kyunki aap jo cheez peete hain usse aapka dard bilkul gayab ho jata hai
lakhan- sirf 1 saal aap agar kasrat karenge
toh aap ki taqat 10 guna badh jayegi
dilip- toh phir tum kyun nahi peete yeh
lakhan- yeh main aapko nahi bata sakta
dilip- [man me] kitna phenk raha hai
main jo pee raha hoon
woh yeh nahi pee sakta
ab ek hi raasta hai
dilip- lakhan yeh hamara hukm hai ki aap hume bataye
ki aap yeh kyun nahi peete
lakhan kuch bol hi nahi raha tha
main seedha bimla ke ghar pahuncha
gate khula hi tha
main seedha andar chala gaya
andar bimla aur shanti khaat pe baithke baate kar rahi thi
shanti mujhe dekhte hi sharmane lagi
aur bimla muskurane lagi
main bimla ke paas pahuncha
shanti khadi hoke ghar se bahar chali gayi
main khaat pe baith gaya
dilip- ise kya hua
bimla- woh maan gayi hai
dilip- kya maan gayi hai
bimla- kabhi kabhi main sochti hoon ki tu bada samajhdar hai
lekin hai tu ek number ka bewakoof
shanti tere bachche ki maa banne ke liye maan gayi hai
bimla ke itna kehte hi main bimla ko kiss karna shuru kar diya
bimla bhi pure josh ke saath mere hont chusne lagi phir main kiss tod diya
hum dono hanfne laga
dilip- yeh chamatkar hua kaise
bimla- pehle tu meri chudai kar
dilip- pehle baat karenge
bimla- pehle chudai karenge
dilip- pehle baat karenge. achchha chhodo main apki chudai karta hoon aap mujhe batati jaana
bimla- theek hai...,.
main aur bimla room mein pahunche phir hum dono apne kapde utarne lage
bimla apni sari kholne lagi
main apni shirt aur baniyan nikaal diya phir bimla apna blouse utaar di
bimla ke boobs aaj mujhe apni taraf bula rahe the
main apna paint aur underwear utaar diya
bimla apni peticoat ka naada kheench di
ek jhatke mein peticoat bimla ke jism se alag ho gaya
mere lund mein sarsarahat hone lagi
bimla dheere se chalte hue mere paas aayi
aur ghutno ke bal baith gayi
mera lund bimla ke gaal ko chhu raha tha
mera lund bimla ke gaal pe jhatke kha raha thi
bimla mere lund ke supade pe apni jubaan pherane lagi
aaj mera lund kuch jyada phool gaya tha
bimla mere lund ke supade ko apne honto mein pakad ke apna munh aage peeche karne lagi
main bimla ke sar pe hath rakh diya
bimla mere aadhe lund ko chus rahi thi
bimla ka ek hath mere ando pe tha aur dusra hath meri jaangh pe
bimla ki choot se ras tapak ke uske ghutno tak pahunch raha tha bimla mere aadhe lund ko thodi der chusti rahi
phir main bimla ke munh mein apna lund aage peeche karne laga
bimla ke thook se mera pura lund bhig chuka tha
main bimla ke munh se apna lund nikaala
aur bimla ko ghodi bana diya
bimla bed pe apna hath rakh di
main ghutno ke bal baith gaya
apna munh bimla ki choot pe rakhke chusne laga
bimla ki choot paani pe paani baha rahi thi
main apne munh mein choot ke dane ko bharke chusne laga
bimla aahe bharne lagi
thodi der tak bimla ki choot chusta raha
phir bimla ke pair kanpne lage aur bimla ki choot paani chhodne lagi
main sara paani pee gaya
ab main khada ho gaya
aur apne lund pe condom lagake bimla ki choot pe apna lund set kiya
dilip- kaki ab shuru karo kahani
bimla- jab tu mere khet ke kagaj mujhe deke gaya
main bimla ki kamar pakad ke ek jhatka maar diya
mera aadha lund bimla ki choot mein chala gaya
bimla- aaah oooh toh main sochne lagi ki shanti ko kaise manau
main ek aur dhakka maar diya mera pura lund bimla ki choot ko phaadta hua andar tak chala gaya
Bimla-aaah maaar daaala ooh uiiimaa
main apna lund bimla ki choot mein aage piche karne laga
Bimla-tabhi main sochi shanti ko sab sach bata deti hoon aaah aur jor se chod phaad de meri choot
main shanti ko apne ghar mein leke aayi
aur shanti ko saari sachchai bata di
kaise tu vinay ko sharab ki dukaan se leke aaya aaah aur jor se dum nahi hai kya
main bimla ko chode ja raha tha
aur bimla baato ko mix karke bole ja rahi thi
Bimla-phir vinay tujhe sab sach bata diya tu vinay ke sath shanti ke ghar gaya
main apna lund bimla ki choot ke munh tak laya aur puri taqat se pel diya
bimla ki cheekh nikal gayi
bimla- uii maa phir tu mujhe apne sath le gaya shanti ko doctor se dikhane doctor se pata chala ki shanti mein koi kami nahi hai
thodi der baad bimla ki choot paani chhod di
main bimla ko bed pe leta diya aur ek hi baar mein apna pura lund bimla ki choot mein pel diya
aur tabad tod dhakke marne laga
pure room mein fach- 2 ki awaj gunj rahi thi
bimla- aur jor se chod kash main tujhe pehle bata deti toh meri jaan toh bach jaati aah aaah
shanti rone lagi phir main shanti ko teri aur meri sachchai bata di
tu meri madad kar raha aur tu sirf vinay ke liya shanti ko maa banana chahta hai
ab aur nahi bola jata baaki chudai ke baad bataungi
dilip- (main bimla ki choot phaadne laga
)badi sherni ban rahi thi ab bol kabhi meri baat kaategi.

Badhiya shaandar update

 

[Shanu]

Very nice update dear

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff