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Haleema: Us ki family main us k maa baap aur behn hi thi jisey mein janti thi aur koi nai tha.
Aly: Us ka bhai Shoaib jisey tum aaj tuk nai mili na hi Saqib ne tumhey us k barey main bataya yeh sab usi ka kia dhara hai who apney bhai ki mout ka baadla le raha hai.
Aly: Or ek shocking newz doon.
Mueed: Bol.
Aly: Shoaib aur Saqib Judwa hn.
Aly ki baat sun jo Saqib ko jantey they who shocked ho gaey kisi ko bhi yakeen nai ho raha tha Gudiya ko gussa aaney laga tha.
Mueed: (shocked) Kia? Tou tumhara asli dushman Shoaib hai.
Aly: Nai Shoaib mera asli dushman nai hai haan mein janta hn us k bhai ki wajah se mein ne apni Alina ko khoya hai jis ki saja usey de chuka hn lekin ab us ka bhai mujh se badla lena chahta hai lekin who asli dushman nai hai.
Sarfraz: Tou kon hai beta.
Aly: Jisey mujhey marney k liey bnaya ja raha hai mujh main kch un natural si takatein hn not supernatural but mujh main 1 insan se kayee hazar gunah zyada takat hai aur koi hai jo Pakistan main Raaz krna chahta hai lekin merey hotey huey nai kr sakta aur meri takat ka usey andaza hai jis ki wajah se who ek aesa insaan ya Army bana raha hai jis main mujh se bhi zyada takat ho.
Aly ki baat sun k phr se sab shocked ho gaey aur sab ko dar lagney laga k kaheen Aly ko kch ho na jaey Rabia ne tou Aly k pass ja k usey galey se laga lia aur hulka hulka roney lagi Aly ne usey apni gaod main bitha lia aur pyaar se us k chehrey pe hath pheirney laga.
Aly: Na mera bacha rona nai mein hn na mujhey kch nai ho ga aap daro mat who mujhey asal main nai jantey awal tou un ka yeh mansooba success nai ho ga kiun k mein bhi scientist hn janta hn es barey main lekin ager ho bhi gya tou bhi who mera kch nai bigad saktey.
Rabia: (hulki hulki siskian letey huey) Aap merey super baba ho aap ko kch nai ho ga.
Aly: (Rabia k gaal chum k) That my Girl bilkul aap k baba ko kch nai ho ga.
Mueed: Tou es Shoaib ka kia krna hai.
Aly: Filhal kaheen chup gya hai jab bahir nikley ga tou mara jaey ga.
Aly ko Gudiya thodi udaas nazer aayee Aly uth k us k pass gya aur us k pass beith gya Gudiya ko jesay hi Aly apney pass nazer aaya who Aly k galey lag k roney lagi.
Aly: Kia hua meri Gudiya ko.
Gudiya: Mujhey Alina DD ki yaad aa rahi hai bhaiya.
Yeh suntey hi Aly ki aankhon main bhi aansu aaye lekin us ne jaldi hi saaf kiey aur Gudiya ko alag kr k us k chehrey ko pakad lia.
Aly: Mein janta hn Gudiya k Alina k sath teri bonding bht hi gehri thi lekin deikh Ayesha ki traf who bhi tou us ki ham shakal hai na tu aesa kr aaj us k sath sou jana tujhey acha lagey ga.
Gudiya: Bhai mein manti hn k Ayesha DD un ki hum shakal hn lekin un ki kami tou puri nai ho sakti na.
Aly: Bilkul lekin mujhey hi deikh le jab bhi Alina ki yaad aati hai tou us ki awaz merey kanon main gunjti hai k Ayesha k hotey huey bhi mujhey us ki kami kiun ho rahi hai tou mein Ayesha se baat kr leta hn bas tum bhi aesa hi karo acha lagey ga.
Breaking Newz:
Anchor: Naazreen aap ko ek intehayee Aeham khaber detey chalein k Russia k sath sath America bhi Super Soldier ki door main shamil ho chuka hai G Nazreen abhi kuch dinon pehley yeh baat samney aaye thi k Russia Super Soldier bananey pe invest kr raha hai aur us k sath sath ab America bhi es Race main shamil ho gya hai mazeed tafseel k liey hum Senior Analyst Zia se puchein gey g Zia shb aap kia kaheen gey es baarey main.
Zia: 1 saal pehley yeh baat samney aaye thi k Russia Super Soldier bnaney pe invest kr raha hai aur yeh tareekh ka hissa hai k 2nd world war main Hitler ne apni Army pe experiment kiey they unhey super soldier bnaney k liey takeh who War main kamyaabi hasil kr sakein us waqt Hitler tou kamyaab nai ho saka lekin ab Science bht tarakki kr gai hai aur es liey Russia ne research experiment shuru kr diey they jo k abhi tuk kamyaab nai huey.
Ab yeh sunney main aaya hai k America bhi es door main shamil hai us ne bhi research shuru kr di hai aur merey khyaal main yeh baat en tuk hi nai rahey gi China bhi es main shamil ho ga kiun k Duniya main America China aur Russia hi hn jo k aesay experiment berdast kr saktey hn ab es sey kia ho ga es sey jo less economy k countries hn un pe bht asser parey ga.
Yeh baat bhi deny nai ki ja sakti k jab America aur Russia atomic power baney they us k baad takreeban her Country Atomic power ki race main shamil hona chahta tha chahey who under develop hi kiun na ho Iraq ki misal aap jantey hn.
Anchor: G Zia shb yeh btaen k Pakistan pe es ka kia asser parey ga.
Zia: To be honnest mein kch aesa janta hn jis wajah se mujhey lagta hai k Pakistan ko es main ghabraney ki koi baat nai hai ja Pakistan k liey khatrey ki baat koi nai hai who secret yeh nai hai k Pakistan bhi Super Natural So;dier bana raha hai kch aur hai Pakistan k hath main jis wajah se usey ghabraney ki baat nai.
Aly ki family hall main beithey baatein kr rahey they k Breaking Newz sunney lagey aur yeh sab sun k tou who shocked they hi kiun kal Aly ne unhey khud bataya tha k aesa kch ho raha hai Lekin aakhir main Zia ne Pakistan k baarey main jo baat ki us sey bhi sab shocked they.
Sarfraz: Yeh kia baat kr raha hai kia janta hai yeh aesa.
Aly: Maloom nai shaid merey barey main janta ho.
Mueed: Lekin kesay han yeh baat sach hai k tujhey Pakistan ka her bnda janta hai k terey main power hai lekin koi yeh nai keh sakta k tu super Soldier se fight kr sakta hai lekin yeh kesay.
Aly: Mujhey nai maloom.
Mueed: Mein tujhey achi trhah se janta hn jab se Zia secreen pe aaya hai tu kaafi ghour se usey deikh raha tha mujhey maloom hai k tu kch tou janta hai k Zia kis baarey main bat kr raha hai.
Sarfraz: Haan yeh sahi keh raha hai itna ghour se hum nai deikh rahey they jitna k tum ab batao kia jantey ho tum.
Aly: Hein aesi baatein jo Duniya main koi bhi nai samjh sakta jesay yeh koi nai samjh paya k yeh banda jo k Zia ban k yahan interview de raha hai who Zia nai GUJRAL hai.
Haleema: Us ki family main us k maa baap aur behn hi thi jisey mein janti thi aur koi nai tha.
Aly: Us ka bhai Shoaib jisey tum aaj tuk nai mili na hi Saqib ne tumhey us k barey main bataya yeh sab usi ka kia dhara hai who apney bhai ki mout ka baadla le raha hai.
Aly: Or ek shocking newz doon.
Mueed: Bol.
Aly: Shoaib aur Saqib Judwa hn.
Aly ki baat sun jo Saqib ko jantey they who shocked ho gaey kisi ko bhi yakeen nai ho raha tha Gudiya ko gussa aaney laga tha.
Mueed: (shocked) Kia? Tou tumhara asli dushman Shoaib hai.
Aly: Nai Shoaib mera asli dushman nai hai haan mein janta hn us k bhai ki wajah se mein ne apni Alina ko khoya hai jis ki saja usey de chuka hn lekin ab us ka bhai mujh se badla lena chahta hai lekin who asli dushman nai hai.
Sarfraz: Tou kon hai beta.
Aly: Jisey mujhey marney k liey bnaya ja raha hai mujh main kch un natural si takatein hn not supernatural but mujh main 1 insan se kayee hazar gunah zyada takat hai aur koi hai jo Pakistan main Raaz krna chahta hai lekin merey hotey huey nai kr sakta aur meri takat ka usey andaza hai jis ki wajah se who ek aesa insaan ya Army bana raha hai jis main mujh se bhi zyada takat ho.
Aly ki baat sun k phr se sab shocked ho gaey aur sab ko dar lagney laga k kaheen Aly ko kch ho na jaey Rabia ne tou Aly k pass ja k usey galey se laga lia aur hulka hulka roney lagi Aly ne usey apni gaod main bitha lia aur pyaar se us k chehrey pe hath pheirney laga.
Aly: Na mera bacha rona nai mein hn na mujhey kch nai ho ga aap daro mat who mujhey asal main nai jantey awal tou un ka yeh mansooba success nai ho ga kiun k mein bhi scientist hn janta hn es barey main lekin ager ho bhi gya tou bhi who mera kch nai bigad saktey.
Rabia: (hulki hulki siskian letey huey) Aap merey super baba ho aap ko kch nai ho ga.
Aly: (Rabia k gaal chum k) That my Girl bilkul aap k baba ko kch nai ho ga.
Mueed: Tou es Shoaib ka kia krna hai.
Aly: Filhal kaheen chup gya hai jab bahir nikley ga tou mara jaey ga.
Aly ko Gudiya thodi udaas nazer aayee Aly uth k us k pass gya aur us k pass beith gya Gudiya ko jesay hi Aly apney pass nazer aaya who Aly k galey lag k roney lagi.
Aly: Kia hua meri Gudiya ko.
Gudiya: Mujhey Alina DD ki yaad aa rahi hai bhaiya.
Yeh suntey hi Aly ki aankhon main bhi aansu aaye lekin us ne jaldi hi saaf kiey aur Gudiya ko alag kr k us k chehrey ko pakad lia.
Aly: Mein janta hn Gudiya k Alina k sath teri bonding bht hi gehri thi lekin deikh Ayesha ki traf who bhi tou us ki ham shakal hai na tu aesa kr aaj us k sath sou jana tujhey acha lagey ga.
Gudiya: Bhai mein manti hn k Ayesha DD un ki hum shakal hn lekin un ki kami tou puri nai ho sakti na.
Aly: Bilkul lekin mujhey hi deikh le jab bhi Alina ki yaad aati hai tou us ki awaz merey kanon main gunjti hai k Ayesha k hotey huey bhi mujhey us ki kami kiun ho rahi hai tou mein Ayesha se baat kr leta hn bas tum bhi aesa hi karo acha lagey ga.
Breaking Newz:
Anchor: Naazreen aap ko ek intehayee Aeham khaber detey chalein k Russia k sath sath America bhi Super Soldier ki door main shamil ho chuka hai G Nazreen abhi kuch dinon pehley yeh baat samney aaye thi k Russia Super Soldier bananey pe invest kr raha hai aur us k sath sath ab America bhi es Race main shamil ho gya hai mazeed tafseel k liey hum Senior Analyst Zia se puchein gey g Zia shb aap kia kaheen gey es baarey main.
Zia: 1 saal pehley yeh baat samney aaye thi k Russia Super Soldier bnaney pe invest kr raha hai aur yeh tareekh ka hissa hai k 2nd world war main Hitler ne apni Army pe experiment kiey they unhey super soldier bnaney k liey takeh who War main kamyaabi hasil kr sakein us waqt Hitler tou kamyaab nai ho saka lekin ab Science bht tarakki kr gai hai aur es liey Russia ne research experiment shuru kr diey they jo k abhi tuk kamyaab nai huey.
Ab yeh sunney main aaya hai k America bhi es door main shamil hai us ne bhi research shuru kr di hai aur merey khyaal main yeh baat en tuk hi nai rahey gi China bhi es main shamil ho ga kiun k Duniya main America China aur Russia hi hn jo k aesay experiment berdast kr saktey hn ab es sey kia ho ga es sey jo less economy k countries hn un pe bht asser parey ga.
Yeh baat bhi deny nai ki ja sakti k jab America aur Russia atomic power baney they us k baad takreeban her Country Atomic power ki race main shamil hona chahta tha chahey who under develop hi kiun na ho Iraq ki misal aap jantey hn.
Anchor: G Zia shb yeh btaen k Pakistan pe es ka kia asser parey ga.
Zia: To be honnest mein kch aesa janta hn jis wajah se mujhey lagta hai k Pakistan ko es main ghabraney ki koi baat nai hai ja Pakistan k liey khatrey ki baat koi nai hai who secret yeh nai hai k Pakistan bhi Super Natural So;dier bana raha hai kch aur hai Pakistan k hath main jis wajah se usey ghabraney ki baat nai.
Aly ki family hall main beithey baatein kr rahey they k Breaking Newz sunney lagey aur yeh sab sun k tou who shocked they hi kiun kal Aly ne unhey khud bataya tha k aesa kch ho raha hai Lekin aakhir main Zia ne Pakistan k baarey main jo baat ki us sey bhi sab shocked they.
Sarfraz: Yeh kia baat kr raha hai kia janta hai yeh aesa.
Aly: Maloom nai shaid merey barey main janta ho.
Mueed: Lekin kesay han yeh baat sach hai k tujhey Pakistan ka her bnda janta hai k terey main power hai lekin koi yeh nai keh sakta k tu super Soldier se fight kr sakta hai lekin yeh kesay.
Aly: Mujhey nai maloom.
Mueed: Mein tujhey achi trhah se janta hn jab se Zia secreen pe aaya hai tu kaafi ghour se usey deikh raha tha mujhey maloom hai k tu kch tou janta hai k Zia kis baarey main bat kr raha hai.
Sarfraz: Haan yeh sahi keh raha hai itna ghour se hum nai deikh rahey they jitna k tum ab batao kia jantey ho tum.
Aly: Hein aesi baatein jo Duniya main koi bhi nai samjh sakta jesay yeh koi nai samjh paya k yeh banda jo k Zia ban k yahan interview de raha hai who Zia nai GUJRAL hai.
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Thanks to God kay ap sahi salmat a gy and good to see you back again and for the update
Bahi mana apki story bhut bhut fantastic ha pr ap kuch na kuch aesa scene create kr hi dety ho last ma kay poori update ka maza or saza last lines ma milta ha
So finally final dushman kay thoray hints , waja or most important for these updates gujral ka bhi pata chal hi gaya ghar walon ko kay Kyu Aly itna ghor sa dekh raha tha wah wah wah ??? bahi meray kamal ki thi updated and hope ap or apki family kehriat sa raho in dinon..
Bahi mana apki story bhut bhut fantastic ha pr ap kuch na kuch aesa scene create kr hi dety ho last ma kay poori update ka maza or saza last lines ma milta ha
So finally final dushman kay thoray hints , waja or most important for these updates gujral ka bhi pata chal hi gaya ghar walon ko kay Kyu Aly itna ghor sa dekh raha tha wah wah wah ??? bahi meray kamal ki thi updated and hope ap or apki family kehriat sa raho in dinon..
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