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Okay done I'll try them...and one last ques...why are you two so obsessed with Naruto and Sasuke“Great Estate developer” “Regressor instruction manual” and “The return of crazy demon”
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Yup. Exactly.People are confusing every system-based story with Solo Leveling, including yours.
But other than the system aspect, there’s really nothing similar between them.
Like I said, your story is a mix of everything
Every system will have some similarities. It's a given. But you have the liberty to create a unique system of your own as the story progresses.Yeah, it is good and I loved Pari...but Pari is also a system (game mechanics) ...but thanks God it didn't have potions.
My system is unique. Of course you will find other systems having the same stats like strength, intelligence, endurance, etc to be upgraded in order to progress. For example, elements ki baat agar hum kare to basically wo panch tatva hote hai. Agni, jal, vayu, dharti, akash. Right? Toh ab agar koi elemental powers based kuchh likhna chaahega toh obviously use inn elements ko hi rakhna padega. Kyuki, iske baahar kuchh hai hi nahi. Ye paanch tatva pre existing hai. Ab unique banane ke liye writer isme lightning, sky, sand jaise aur elements add on kar sakta hai.
Lekin, baad me koi dusra writer agar elemental powers par kuchh likhne chaahega to use bhi at least unn paanch tatvo ko toh Lena hi hoga. Ab iska matlab ye nahi hai ki dono writers ne ek dusre ko copy kar liya.Wo elements pre existing hai aur wo waise hi rahenge. Same yaha system ke saath bhi hai. Bahut se systems me hume stats me intelligence, strength jaise stats dekhne ko milenge kyuki ye pre defined hai.
System lekin over-all roop me differ karenge. For example, you won't find any system which gives you a card from the quest hunt after investing points. Because, ye mere dimaag ki upaj hai. You see? This is where you can set your system apart from the other systems.
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And I’m not just talking about predictable endings, I mean the next moments too.Right... he'll definitely be victorious in the end but stories should be read for their journey...I think atleast half of the best stories are always struggling.
Hmm... I'll try...let's see if I can get hooked?
Like you said, it’s all about potions and stuff now.
Since there isn’t much left in the plot, they might need to make the main character super OP so he can win in the end.
So, they’re just stretching out the journey to make it feel more nostalgic, and maybe that’s why it’s starting to struggle.
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Your story is good...and I liked how you didn't focus much on leveling and expanded other fragments of the story more...I was talking about my general exp in litrpg and progression novels...even The Primal Hunter got boring and will there be any end to it?Yup. Exactly.
Every system will have some similarities. It's a given. But you have the liberty to create a unique system of your own as the story progresses.
My system is unique. Of course you will find other systems having the same stats like strength, intelligence, endurance, etc to be upgraded in order to progress. For example, elements ki baat agar hum kare to basically wo panch tatva hote hai. Agni, jal, vayu, dharti, dharti. Right? Toh ab agar koi elemental powers based kuchh likhna chaahega toh obviously use inn elements ko hi rakhna padega. Kyuki, iske baahar kuchh hai hi nahi. Ye paanch tatva pre existing hai. Ab unique banane ke liye writer isme lightning, sky, sand jaise aur elements add on kar sakta hai.
I skip a lot of chapters while reading system stories because they are doing nothin but leveling up in some entire chapters...but I swear your story had not a single chapter like that...and I read everyone of them (and will read for second time soon lol).
Exactly. Lekin woh Joker wala card sabse funny thaWo elements pre existing hai aur wo waise hi rahenge. Same yaha system ke saath bhi hai. Bahut se systems me hume stats me intelligence, strength jaise stats dekhne ko milenge kyuki ye pre defined hai.
System lekin over-all roop me differ karenge. For example, you won't find any system which gives you a card from the quest hunt after investing points. Because, ye mere dimaag ki upaj hai. You see? This is where you can set your system apart from the other systems.
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We're not obsessed with themOkay done I'll try them...and one last ques...why are you two so obsessed with Naruto and Sasuke
Werewolf and I just keep changing our AV's
He used Sasuke character. So, I picked Naruto for fun
It won’t be long before we change them again
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That is what I was mentioning above.
I don't like stories which are focused on only one thing.
I like to have a little bit of everything. I focus on family matters, humour, and other side detailings to keep it interesting. Because, it's not just about the system. Yes, system is the main plot in general but not entirely. I wanted to make you guys feel like it's happening in real life. That's why the story is taking place on earth. I always drop the names of building, places, to make it as believable as possible. I don't go overboard with the powers. I stay beneath the op power line. Veer can't fly, he won't grow wings, he can't shoot lasers. He can't clone himself. That's why... It remains interesting because we are not going overboard.
That's just me throwing humour time to time.Exactly. Lekin woh Joker wala card sabse funny tha
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Because they are goats too... That's whyWe're not obsessed with them
Werewolf and I just keep changing our AV's
He used Sasuke character. So, I picked Naruto for fun
It won’t be long before we change them again
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That's why we like themBecause they are goats too... That's why
I'm not obsessed with any of them
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I like sasuke... Teen sasukeThat's why we like them
I'm not obsessed with any of them
Mofo went ham in those arcs.