Incest Curse

[Cosimo]

Ch 1 me around kitne updates hoge Approximately . ( Casually )

Approximately 10.
Par is se Jyada bhi ho sakte hai kyuki filahal Mein Kuch aur details add karne ki soch raha hu so scenes badhege aur accordingly updates bhi.

 

[Cosimo]

Cosimo original se hi likh lete saheb
Ye I'd kyu bnai

Jab koi apni pahchan chhupata hai to chhupane dijiye.

 

[Cosimo]

Writing skill mughe bhi jana pahchana lag raha tha. Kaun hai ye bhai sahab ?

 

[Cosimo]

Jabardast update diya hai apne. Ahan ka secrets ab malum halega lagta hai

Thank You.
Ahan ke Secrets to dhire dhire samne aayege story me.

Aisa kia kia tha Ahan n jise use sab manhoos samakh rehe h lekin 2 log nahi samajhte lekin uski sagi bahen yeh zaroor bol ki woh yeh deserve kerta h
Filhal dekhte h aage kia hota h

Thank You.
Ji Haan, Vaise Uska wo bolne ka reason to aap dekh hi chuke hoge Update 3 me.

Poore gher wale nafrat kerte h sirf Bua ko chhod ker apni bahen k saath galat harmat kerta h isliye woh aisa boli juhi se ki woh deserve kerta h or ager achchai yahi tow fir deserve tow kerta hi h
Baherhal yeh ladki maira kich ziada hi intrest le rahi h lekin Ahan use bhaw nahi deta isliye usko isa baat ka dukh h
Dekhte h monika kia information dene wali h karishma ko ahan ki
Badhiya update

Thank You.
Update 5 me Ye dono baate dekhne ko milegi.

Jhkas story waiting for next update ​

Thank You.

Bhai story bahut badiya hai love humiliation aur bhi bahut kuch dekhne ko milega but Bhai uski sauteli maa Naina ki shadi toh Vikram se Hero ki real maa ke marne ke baad shaadi huyi hogi na but Naina ki badi beti hero se kaise badi ho jayegi jabki aapne ye kahin nahi likha ki Naina pehle se shadi shuda ho hero ki Chachi ki behen hai Naina toh please explain

Thank You.

Btw Probably kuch Update ke baad ye sab clear ho jayega. Filahal Mein kuch yaha Batana nahi chahta. Wo story me hi pata chale to better hai.

Dono billi mese ek Ahan ki maa hai aur ek uski behen I think

Hehe... Jab Maine Story Sochi thi tab hi Guess kiya tha ke kuch logo ko to ye lagega hi. Vaise ye bhi aage pata chal hi jayega.

 

[Cosimo]

Waiting

Waiting for next update

Cosimo bhai next update kab tak aayega?

Next update please

WAITING FOR UPDATE

Waiting bro

waiting Cosimo bhai

Next update ka intazar

Intezaar rahega....

Kal ke update ka intezar rahega bhai

waiting bhai

Intezaar rahega....

Waiting for coming update.....

Waiting bro

Waiting

Waiting bhai

Cosimo bhai update nahi diya

waiting

Agar updates aate regular to ye story wakayi shaandar ho sakti thi .
.

I already posted update 4.
Actually, I planned to post update 4 on Friday, but thanks to my colleague.
She is so talkative.
Likhne hi na deti Update. Concentrate hi na kar pata Likhne pe so.
Bas isi ke chalte Friday ka Sunday Ho gya.

 

[Cosimo]

Bhai sach bolu to update accha hai, lekin hero chutiya bna rkha hai. Jisse story thoda boring lg rha hai shuru se.


Ye surf mera najriye hai, baki pta nhi.

If Kisi ko bhi Story Boring lag rahi hai to I will definitely ask for Suggestions/Advices so I can Improve and Story ko intersting bana saku.

Par Aapke Story Boring kyun lag rahi hai uska Reason bataya hai.

lekin hero chutiya bna rkha hai.

Do You Really think that?
Don't You think that Ahan's Character is Shady?

Vaise to Story ke sabhi character abhi to filhal developing stage me hi hain par Ahan se related Kaafi Sari Chije Maine in Updates me darshayi hai. You have to Notice those things. Agar Notice nahi karoge to Fir Character ko galat way me hi samjhne lagoge.

For Example, XAbhi ne jese notice Kiya, Ke Ahan ko Kese pata chal jata hai ke Koi Aane wala hai, Billiya kese Ahan ki baat samjhti hai aur baate manti bhi hai, Ahan ka Different behaviour with Different Persons kyun, etc.

Ek bahut Imp Chij Kisi ne abhi tak to notice nahi ki hai. Dekhta hu Update 5 se pahele koi Notice karta hai ya nahi Review me.

Tbh Mujhe Ese Khud comment karke Notice karwana achha bhi nahi lagta. Kyuki I personally think ke Agar Readers Notice nahi kar rahe to iska Reason ye bhi hai ke Story definitely kam Interesting hai jo Reader yun hi update padh lete hai aur Chije notice hi nahi karte.

So Agar Iske Regarding Aap koi suggestion ho to beshaq de sakte hai ke is me Mein kese Improve kar sakta hu. Baki rahi baat Ahan ke character ki to update me kuch kuch Details aapko catch karte rahena hoga if You Really want to Understand Ahan. Baki To Aap ko Ahan aage ke Updates se aur bhi chutiya lagega.

 

[Gokb]

Jabardast update diya hai apne

 

[Cosimo]

So nice

Thanks

Awesome update

Thank You

Nice update...keep it up...

Thank You.

Avni n charo dosto narak ka rasta dikha dia dinesh ko tow asan maut mili leki baki teeno ko kaisi maut mili dekhte woh aage
Maira khushi khushi Ahan k liye birthday gift leker gayi h dekhte kia woh milta h use ya nahi
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai

Thank You.

Nice update

Thanks.

Keep Going
Waiting For Next Update

Thanks.

Awesome,

Thanks.

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Cosimo bhai...
Nice and beautiful update....

Thank You.

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई

Thanks.

Interesting.. Keep it Up

Thank You.

Ahaan ko akhirkar komal naam ki is ladki ne apna friend bna hi liya kafi jaddo jahat se... Vahi maira ne ahaan ke liye B-Day gift ke rup me uski hi photo Bnai hai or ek letter bhi sath me bnaya hai usne, Dekhte hai kya hota hai college me,
Ye komal akhir pta Kis chij ka dhundh rhi thi jb ahaan se excident hua kahi ye maria ki MA ki bheji hui koi jasus to nhi...
Avni us rajya highway me akhir Kon thi vo ya kahe kya thi vo use dard nhi hua khoon to nikla pr un 4 lafange bigadi hui aulade jinme se ek ko Thodi Bahut dharm ka gyan tha, kya Khatarnak drisya tha Bhai superb narration Jabardast update sandar bhai Lajvab

Thank You. Avni aur Komal ka character imp hai Story me. Unke bare me aage Story me sab clear hota jayega.

Bahot achchha likh rhe ho aap.. keep it up and high

Thank You.

Mast majedar update bhai

Thank You.

Awesome, fabulous

Thank You.

Jabardast update diya hai apne

Thank You.

 

[Gang007]

Jabardast update bro
Wating for next update

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

I already posted update 4.
Actually, I planned to post update 4 on Friday, but thanks to my colleague.
She is so talkative.
Likhne hi na deti Update. Concentrate hi na kar pata Likhne pe so.
Bas isi ke chalte Friday ka Sunday Ho gya.

Koi baat nahi Bhai aapke pass jab time ho tab update de diya karo